'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 13

omg this was something i did not expect the childs thought was very well expressed but ema waws way too much lovely part amazing writing cont soon

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Oh God.. this is disgusting..how can a female go to this extnt? Extra marrtl affr toh phirbhi samjah mey aati hai ..that's her poersonal life [thought i hate this ] but i cant imagine that she is bng so rude n heartless with her kid .. peyeryon se dhakka marna , den asking for money of taking care of him ..gosh..this is rdcls...whn i was reading that part..felt ke usko dhakka marke bulidng se neeche giradoon..

now Waiting for Vyom n parikrama's convo abt all these, Vyom 's take on it ..uff, what he must have gone thro na..

Hi Sara....yaa its so weird how women can be so heartless... I have alwasy projected a woman sufferign and the man to be blamed... i wanted to once also show whats the sitaution when a woman looses her hcarcter and how a man can take that... society never belive him...

Ya .. Vyom how an why he wanted divorce has to come up.. i hope u liked the fact achild sayign the whole..thing.. i didnt want tit to look dirty.. but feel the situation...luv u dear..for always encouraign me..and ithelps to write when i have wonderufl cheerign friends like u... 😃

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

Hey bhoomi..
I m so touched by ur story...i hope no kid in today's world has this kinda childhood with so much pain n fear.But this is kalyug n anythin can happen...its so unpredictable in today's world....These days people only think abt money n relations hve come on 2nd place..no one is bothered abt others ..their feelings.No body cares abt other's emotions...only thing in their mind is money...

Hi HImani dear.... feels nice to know my storu tocuhed u... ya I hope no child goes throguh all this.. but if it certianly is a reality where u just cant turst ... sometiems the ugliest truth coems in front... children r too way beyound suffering in this Kalyug as u call.. but u know God is always there...and someone coems in to heal their heart... 😃

hey yaar.. i agre money is workgin not emotions these days.. but on a postive note.. emotions make huamns humans. and am sure there r many nice people around..and hope goodness stays ... 😊 kaun sa bhi yug ho....😃

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

omg this was something i did not expect the childs thought was very well expressed but ema waws way too much lovely part amazing writing cont soon

Hi Jyothi... feels so good that u felt the way i tried to disclsoe this throguht eh child..was well written.. i tried my best no to let it lok or sound cheap but just plain as a child can understnad...adn its up to us to realise what feelgins n confusion a child goes through...ur appreication amke me feel glad abt my effort.. really .. feels god that u felt teh part was well written.. 😃

Oh god its amazing bhoomi mindblowing you writen very well i am raely touched with this Ff love it thx dear 👏

Wow! That's really something. I can't believe that his mother was that kind of person...and poor kid, he doesn't even understand what he saw (though I'm very thankful he didn't walk in at a worse time 😕). Hope Vyom doesn't get angry at Parikrama for finding out about all this. Can't wait for the next epi!

I am shocked bhoomi wat Etansh saw and he didnt even understand wat he saw poor etansh feel bad for him. But in todays world this is true abt certain women. This is nothing i know a woman who refused to keep the child and above that if the child meets her he cant call he mom she says call me didi. One may ask r there such people but its true there are.

Lets see wat does vyom does now ??????

Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Oh god its amazing bhoomi mindblowing you writen very well i am raely touched with this Ff love it thx dear 👏

Hi Monika... come on yaar.. dont thank me.. dosti mey no thank u haan.. i can write that in intro.. sirf..😉.. so happy that u liked the part.. hope u feel touched with the reamining parts as well..

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Wow! That's really something. I can't believe that his mother was that kind of person...and poor kid, he doesn't even understand what he saw (though I'm very thankful he didn't walk in at a worse time 😕). Hope Vyom doesn't get angry at Parikrama for finding out about all this. Can't wait for the next epi!

Hi Rabia... yup sometiems strange truth comes in frotn when we least expect it to and worst when we can make a child udnderstnad why n what has happen after he told the truth...Vyom and Parikrama ..yup dekhey aye aye kya hoga...😉

Originally posted by: golu_1677

I am shocked bhoomi wat Etansh saw and he didnt even understand wat he saw poor etansh feel bad for him. But in todays world this is true abt certain women. This is nothing i know a woman who refused to keep the child and above that if the child meets her he cant call he mom she says call me didi. One may ask r there such people but its true there are.

Lets see wat does vyom does now ??????

Waiting for the next part.

Hi Golu...ya we feel for Etansh and poor kid has to face this...ya todays world is so veyr full of such realities which people hide within theri homes... and ya this situation and incident is taken froma real life..and th fact of the stay of a kid... the incident u have spoken abt a woman not wanting her child and he to call her maa.. btu call didi... how such woman think i dotn kow... the mere word of mom..maa when a child calls we can feel so much love and teh pure heart from which the love comes....but such woman really dont have emotions like these...

yup will post next part soon ...

Episode:23

Around 9:30pm she heard some noise and she went into the drawing room, she saw Vyom had come inside with the help of his key. He had bandage on his arms and his face was dull with pain. Immediately Parikrama went close to him..

Parikrama: Oh god.. Vyom yehan ayi bethiye.. (She tried to be close and and give him help... her touch and her concerned eyes made Vyom feel nice but he knew that's not correct on his part)

Vyom trygin to keep her at a distance moved aside: Am fine…

Parikrama: Kitna dard horaha hai.. I can get to know from ur face.. I think u should have some water and milk to drink, u will feel better.

Vyom said, ' No No..' but Parikrama was not going to listen to him. Vyom went in to see Etansh and saw him sleeping on the bed…Vyom came and stood outside, wondering, did he do the correct thing to call Parikrama at night to his house. What will others think abt them.. Parikrama came and gave him the glass of milk with saffron in it.

Vyom: Thanks…

Parikrama: U r not welcome..

Vyom looked at her and tried to hear it again…

Vyom: What did u say…

Parikrama: I said.. u r not welcome.. Evrytime u have to say Thanks to me in such a formal way.. and if u feel I have done something for u or Etansh buy a gift and give me. I will happily take it.. (she gave a cute smile).

Vyom smiled and his smile increased as she smiled brightly. Later he realised it's very late and she should go home. Before anyone thinks wrong about them.

Vyom: I think ur jijai and didi will be waiting. I will call them and inform.. Shoud I drop u home or.. Vaibhav will be coming..

Parikrama: They don't know I am here… I didn't inform them …or else they wont let me come .. at ur place..

Vyom was very tensed and felt really angry at himself for trying to take her help.. He immediately went near Etansh trying to take him in arms. Parikrama took Etansh in arms as she knew Vyom has hurt his arm, She was understanding why he has anger on his face, but she just smiled and kept looking at him… whenevr little also their shoulders would be close with Etansh in her arms, Vyom would look the other side. Vyom asked her to move out while he locked the door… Parikrama just looked at him with an expression of… U came to know I am in love with u? Vyom felt scared to look at her face… so much confidence and so much love for him.. her eyes were bright and wanting to say so much to him. Vyom along with Parikrama and Etansh went down stairs and Etansh had just woken from sleep and realised they were in a cab and Vyom dropped Parikrama at her home..

Parikrama smiled as she got down from the cab…

Vyom: I am so sorry I don't know I should have relaised the way society can look at this.. Ur jijaji must be really angry to know I called u to be here.. really sorry.. I will surely not make the mistake again. At the same time I am really thankful to u for taking care of Etansh and for understanding my position.. He really likes to be with u… so I just thought and didn't realize about ur family may be unhappy with this…

Parikrama: Oh… don't worry about my family, I will handle them… and I love Etansh.. and I really like u as well.. I have no problem to know what society thinks? what jijaji thinks?.. and actually what Jijaji & didi think, I gues that's right… but I am happy u called me (she looked with love into his eyes)..

I am happy to have got close to Etansh (she looked at Etansh with love and care for him) and I am ready to wait...the day u want me to get close to u as well..(she looked at him , and was shy as well as blushed with her own words)

I wanted to tell u… ..

Vyom looked at her with eyes wide and blank, he realised Parikrama may say something more.. may be about her love for him.. he wanted not to hear it..and he immediately rushed into the cab.. while Parikrama said while he was leaving.…

Parikrama: Come soon.. to meet me.. hmmm or else.. I will come soon to meet u… (she blushed and felt shy after saying this..)

Vyom just didn't look at her..and went away…While Parikrama entered her home and Vaibhav and Anurma were waitng and wanting to hear where she was.. she smiled and said..

Parikrama: I went to be with Etnash, Vyom had an accident..Vyom is fine and he dropped me back here.. I am so happy.. today Etansh has made me to take my decision .. I am in love with Vyom.. and I feel happy I can say to the whole world this.. I am in love. Dii…. I love him… she danced the way through and feelgin very shy she went into her room.. she was so happy that Vaibhav smiled when he saw her smile and herhapppiness and couldn't say a word.. Even Anurama was happy to see her blush dance and be so happy.. both realize what she just said.. she is in love with VYom.. and they said together at the same time.. looking at each other.. "Now what?"Vaibhav and Anurama stood there shocked…

Parikrama went into her room and started looking into the mirror and feeling funny how Vyom was trygin to escape from her… and whenever she looked into his eyes how he tried to avoid it… she knew he would fall in love with her and that scared him.. She smiled and wondered…

'Zindagi – Ek Safar hai aur main tumhari Humsafar banungi..

Aaj rastee par sath nahi to kya, kal rastoope tumsang chalungi..

Main Zindagi bhar tumse pyaar karungi..

Mere Dil ki baat jarur tumhare dil tak pahunchaungi…."

She blushed and felt how happy Etansh will be when she will tell him that she will not go to Pune and be with him…

Parikrama janti thi Vyom se woh pyaar kar bethi hai,

Etansh ki Maa kaise banti , Vyom ki bhyati patni woh nahi hai,

Ghabrahat thi kahin kissika ghar to nahi ujaadrahi,

Ab Etansh ne mano sare haq dedaaley Pyaar ko udaan milrahi hai…

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great part. vyom is so sweet trying to avoid the truth. he knows pari loves him and etansh is happy being with her still avoiding it. wat wl happen wen etansh tells him that u marry pari.

waiting for more