'Zindagi – Ek Safar'Ep:34(Above18yrs plz) - Page 15

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 👏 Mindblowing and mindblowing bhoomi.

Hi Monika.. great to know u liked the part dear... 😃

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

wow ..ab aayega asli maza.....jaldi post karna bhoomi warna mein toh suspense ke maare mar jaongi..i really applaud parikarma for takin such a bold decision..as no one is takin her side n now she has to prove herself dat she is right...all da best to u n parikarma...dekhte hain aage bhoomi kya dikhati hai story mein;)

Hi Himani.... am glad now u feel the story will get interestign.. hope u like the story as it proceeds.. Yup parikrama is alone.. hope she doesnt repent on her decison if she deos to kya hoyega na... yaa next part will try n post fast...ok...luv u n ur lassi did wonders.. enegery takaat jamkey ayii hai...😆

Episode: 26

Parikrama: Hi Vyom.. can we meet today?

Vyom: I don't have time, say what u want to say. I have few minutes…

Parikrama: Ya, u must have understood that is why u have started to keep distance from me and trying hard to keep Etansh away from me.

Vyom was silent he didn't speak much.

Parikrama: Etansh and I share a lovely bond and no one can try and distance me fom him. I am going to take him today also with me, he will enjoy. Yesterday u took him to watch the cartoon flick and he told me u didn't enjoy and were playing games on ur mobile.. he was excited to see the film and share the same with u but as he saw u playing on the mobile he kept quite…

Vyom: I know… I will try my best to give evrything my child needs… After all at the end of the day I am his father and He is my family none else.

Parikrama: I know.. what u want to tell me… That is I am not ur family part.

Vyom was just silent.. but he could sense the pain Parikrama was gogin through while she was talking…

Parikrama: Vyom I am not going to change what I feel for u for any reason. Vyom .. (she had tears in her eyes as she knew she is tellgin her heart out )

Parikrama: Vyom, I wanted to meet u and talk standing in front of u.. but may be u still don't want me to take that space close enough. Still let me just tell u what my heart wants… I have never taken my own decisions in life, my parents use to always decisde later my didi and recently my jijaj. They all love me but I never had the courage to take up life important decision on my own. Be it which hobby to persure or which course which stream to take up. Even whether I should travel or not everything others have decided and I have just followed. Remember when I challenged u that Etansh will eat and read.. that was the first time I felt confident about myself, when u hit that man who teased me.. and explained me to have given back myself.. I felt u wanted me to become strong.. my family always protected me and never ever did I feel I should take up my decisions and stand by them.. Meeting u and sharing with u about Jijaji's disease, I was so nervous shivering and was cursing myself how could I take a decision on my own..

Vyom heard her voice and her emotions that were unknown to him. He was feelgin proud of her that atleast she tried to take that decision and it surely helped her and her family ..her jijaji , her didi…

Parikrama: Vyom the strength to take up the decision came after meeting u, I started becoming more confident, and more strong as u and Etansh came into my life.

Parikrama had a choked voice: Vyom .. I know I like u and I … I.. (her eyes had tears..) I love u.. I really love you… none agree with my decision, my family everyone is aganst it..and all r coming here to try and make me understand.. btu I know I love u so much… I can just live like this all my life ..but cant get married to anyone else..

Vyom was emotional listening to her…. He just tried to compose himself and took the time..

Parikrama: Don't worry about Etansh.. u know I would have never committed and expressed this love if etansh had not asked me… He is happy if we r together.. I love him and I really will feel on top of this world.. the day I can hear him calling me Maa..

Vyom just smiled as he visualized Etansh running calling Parikrama Maa and jumping to get into her lap and she holding him tightly and kissng.. the happiness his child will get..

Parikrama was shy: I never thought I will be talkgin like this.. I mean proposaing someone on the phone myself.. but I feel my love for u has given me so much strgnth that I don't think about who should open up first now. I just want to tell .. I realy really… (her smile was increasing and her eyes which had tears were shining as a glow of happiness came as she expressed her love for him…)

Immediately Vyom said in a sharp tone : Ur parents, ur jiajaji and didi surely make the right decision. Ur decision is wrong even I feel. Don't love me… I don't love u …

Parikrama suddenly felt like someone had piereced an arrow into her heart… the tone was so rude and sharp that she felt like she was thrown far away by the pain.. his first line that her decision is wrong and her parents decision is right.made her loosse the confidence in her… (she tried to stop herself from cryin and let her say something.. but she found that really difficult still managing to get words..)

Parikrama: U have every right to tell what u feel… but u can't tell me not to love u … that's my freedom.. I will still love u … (she couldn't talk more and she kept the receiver)

Vyom was very sad. He knew he had hurt her .. not only her but the confidence she had built in her… but there was no other way he felt.. he was very depressed and didn't knew how to come out of it…

Zindagi k ek chotey safar mey kyun milee tum mujhse,

Kahan main galat huaa, khata kya hogayi mujhsey,

Main nahi jaanta mujhe pyaar kyun itna karti ho,

Kissi aur ko apnaa lo yehi dil kehta hai tumko…

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haye....yeh ishq nahi asaan..ik aag ka dariya hai aur kud ke jana hai...aalia mein toh shayar ban gayi...bhoomi ki story ka asar ho gaya mujpe..hehe...dekho dekho aage bhoomi humein kya dikhati hai ..achchi endin hogi toh mango lassi milegi aur sad ending hui toh namkeen..choice is with u bhoomi dear:p chak de phaatte..nap de kili ..savere jalandhar shaami delhi....is bahane track delhi mein le aao;)

i knew only this wud happn ..this Vyom na ..pata tha mujhe ..yeh toh yehi kahega.... yaar..usko amne samne propose karneka mauka diya hota....i wanted him to luk into her eyes n he cud see na ke how much love she is having for him though he already knws n can feel it .... lolz... I loved it whn parikrama said that ur love gave me the strnth to say all these to u n i didnt even think ke who shud prope first.... Yeh hui na baat.... awesome ... me too feel the same..jo dil mein hai hamesha kehdena chahiye .... yhe nahi sochna ke koi kya sochega aur kya reply milne wala hai ....


Luv u dear .... next part post kardo jaldi....

Originally posted by: mad_lovee

haye....yeh ishq nahi asaan..ik aag ka dariya hai aur kud ke jana hai...aalia mein toh shayar ban gayi...bhoomi ki story ka asar ho gaya mujpe..hehe...dekho dekho aage bhoomi humein kya dikhati hai ..achchi endin hogi toh mango lassi milegi aur sad ending hui toh namkeen..choice is with u bhoomi dear:p chak de phaatte..nap de kili ..savere jalandhar shaami delhi....is bahane track delhi mein le aao;)

Hi HImani... wah wah.. meri HImani shayarii kar rahi hai.. oyee mujhe yeh meri story ka asar nahi lag raha kcuh aur maanjara hai lagta hai...😆😆😆 Tum to endign tak pahunch rahi ho...pata kya ab mere naseeb mey mango lassi ya namkeen ....Ab u to mujhe bribe kar rahi ho.. nahi nahi yeh to tumhara pyaar hai.. aur main kya karuu ab.. theek hai... chak de phatte..delhi pahunchauu.aree yaar main hi ajati hun cheti cheti. phri to lassi kya sara dhabba milega na..😳.. hope u enjoy the next parts..

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

i knew only this wud happn ..this Vyom na ..pata tha mujhe ..yeh toh yehi kahega.... yaar..usko amne samne propose karneka mauka diya hota....i wanted him to luk into her eyes n he cud see na ke how much love she is having for him though he already knws n can feel it .... lolz... I loved it whn parikrama said that ur love gave me the strnth to say all these to u n i didnt even think ke who shud prope first.... Yeh hui na baat.... awesome ... me too feel the same..jo dil mein hai hamesha kehdena chahiye .... yhe nahi sochna ke koi kya sochega aur kya reply milne wala hai ....

Luv u dear .... next part post kardo jaldi....

HI Meri pyaari pyaari Sara... areey wah.. jo tum soch rahi thi kcuh kuch waisa hi huaa but ab tak Vyom ke dil ka haal pura bayaan nahi hua hai.. lets see kya hota hai.. behcari PArikrama she is now alone.. so will she giveup.. her confidence is also affected...Ya Parikrama ne hi kaha.. aww evry girl usually feels the guy shoudl propose but these r mature individuals so ....

ab agey kya hota hai dekhna hoga... pyaar badhega ya yunhi sanse lega... ya phri dam todega.... chalo will post next part.. btu it will take some time.. luv u Sara .. ur comments i always look forward to.. tv.. 😃

two great parts bhoomi. I knew vyom will say no. waiting for the next part. post it soon. detail comments later.

Originally posted by: golu_1677

two great parts bhoomi. I knew vyom will say no. waiting for the next part. post it soon. detail comments later.

Hi Golu... glad u liked the parts... Lookslike eevryone wanted Vyom to say No..or shoudl I say expected him to say no... hope u like the next parts..😃

Episode: 27

Emotionally shattered Parikrama was crying bitterly and her jijaji Vaibhav had heard the conversation and felt very sad for her. He had understood that Vyom has not encouraged her to take up such a step. He did feel bad what Parikrama will do next, she has called off the wedding, she loves Vyom and Vyom has refused her proposal. He felt terrible to see Parikrama alone battling it out. Tryign to convince every member of her family that she will not change her decision.

Soon Parikrama's parents arrived and they were on their angry best. Vaibhav didn't calm them down, as he himself wasn't sure what is right. Inder and his family came and they apologized for the childish behaviour of Parikrama. Inder came alogn and wanted to meet Parikrama. In his heart he felt he will see Parikrama walking out and he will fall in love with her again as he did last time when he saw her…

Parikrama was called by Anurama and Parikrama came out, she saw at them, and felt Inders parents had some pity on her while her own parents were embarrsed and upset with her. Inder looked at her and saw the change in her. Last time he saw she was nervous and confused… but now she loked tired ,but strong. She had tears in her eyes as Anurama went and sat alogn with her parents… Vaibhav saw Parikrama and her eyes understanding what she is feeling…

Vaibhav: Parikrama.. idhar betho.

Parikrama wiped her tears and said: Nahi.. main aise theek hun..(she could sense a concern in the voice of her jijaji)

Her parents started yelling that what she has done to her life and its just an attraction and she is thinking it is love… Inder was listening to the conversation and was feeling very sad to see Parikrama standing and takgin it all..but even he was confused ..

Parikrama after listening to them said in a low voice: I love him.. and I don't want to marry Inder… Its not attraction.. plzz understand me.. give me time… not to forget this love but to make Vyom accept this love… (She said with a lot of plead and requesting them)

Parikrama's parents were now more angry knowing that Vyom hasn't accepted her love and yet she wants to to call off this marriage.. they stood and screamed at her…

Parikrama's Dad: Yeh bachkani harkat band karoo.. woh tumse pyaar nahi karta usney kaha hai.. kaha hai ke nahi?

Parikrama: Haan.. kaha He doesnt love me, but I know he deos have feelings for me..

Inder felt emotional knowing she was hurt by vyom's words and they r repeating again n again. Hurting her more..

Parikrama's mom: Parikrama.. kyun beta.. Inder ko humney damaad manliya hai.. Vyom ke baarey mey matt soch.. teri inn harkatoo ke baad bhi tujhe apna saktey hain.. kitne acchey log hai.. beta yeh bekaar ki zidd jhodd.. humey aur sharminda matt kar..

(Parikrama's mother started crying nd Anurama tried to make her calm)

Inder' parents understood how much hurt Parikrama's parent's r with Parikrama.

Parikrama now was extremely broken and she said looking into everyone's eyes: Main koi zidd nahi kar rahi.. main koi bhi bekaar ki baat nahi kar rahi.. main bachkaani harkat nahi kar rahi hun..main aap sab ko kaise samjhaun.. kaisee.. (she cried loudly) Mamma I love him.. I really love him..(looking into her mother eyes) Papa its not attraction..(she said looking at her father) When I first saw VYom I never felt anything about him, his eyes or his voice nothing.. it was after I got attached to Etansh, later saw the bond the father n the child share, the bond between him and his sister … slowly as I got close to Etansh I came to know Vyom as well.. and I don't know when I felt I want to spend my life with this person.. I love him.. it wasn't attraction.. the attachment , the affection.. grew.. later now after I am in love I feel the attraction now… now I want to be with him, I feel his eyes make me go close to him, when I see him smile I feel I should be in his arms .. (suddenly Parikrama's dad came and slapped her)

Parikrama was shocked.. and Vaibhav was taken aback.. Inder stood up ..Parikrama went crying inside her room… while Vaibhav asked his father in law to cool down n sit..

Vaibhav: Aap ne yeh kya kiya.. Parikrama .... Pehle hi sadmey mey hai .. jissey ussey pyaar hai woh ussey nahi chahta, humsab se pehli bar nazar milakey woh takkrar kar rahi hai.. Woh sacch mey bacchi nahi rahi.. Humey ussey thoda samay dena chahiye… Main nahi chahta tha aap aakey ussey aur tood dey…magar samjhaye socha tha…

Vaibhav asked Anurama to see if Parikrama was alright.. his sweet little saali has just turned into a mature girl talking just straight and though he doestn agreed to her decision; he knew she has not said anything wrong…Innder asked them not to force Parikrama in taking a decision but to think over her decision one more time..

Cryign in the room Parikrama felt so lonely.. She loved Vyom .and she didn't care if anyone supported her..but now Vyom too doestn want her to come close to him or Etansh… as sshe cried bitterly the telephone beell rang..

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wwo a lovely part who called her vyom ???????????? an amazing concept and i am happy its a long story

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wwo a lovely part who called her vyom ???????????? an amazing concept and i am happy its a long story

Hmmm who called her up.. i will post the next part soon.. so u will get to kknow..😉 btu u r really very close... hehehe.. It feels ncie that u liekd the concept and the story.. lonnnnng one na.. just I have promised teh nex one will be a short story... not sucha long one.. hope u guys dont get bored..