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Posted: 17 years ago
another great part bhoomi. pls cont soon. waiting for more
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

another great part bhoomi. pls cont soon. waiting for more

Hi Golu.. u r enjoyign reading this ff... feels nice..😃 will continue it soon.dear.. no logn waits for my ff parts u see😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 19

After a week Parikrama went to meet Etansh and Vyom…

Parikrama: I am really sorry the way my jijaji spoke. He feels really humbled by the help Vyom had given...but just that..

Vyom: No its alright… (Not understanding why they behaved that way)

Vaani: Parikrama, Ur jiaji's health is better now? Waise Ur jijaji and Didi look good together..

Parikrama: Jijaji is feeling better now… and didi and jijaji they r made for each other… its just that I keep on talkgin so much abt you all ..and not a line about my fiance they r just taken aback.. and they r actually upset with me not with anyone else.

Vyom smiled with the news that she is engaged… Vaani wasn't much pleased and she asked,

Vaani: You r engaged… fianc..?

Parikrama: Ya, after my education completed, my parents were on look out for a descent proposal, they brought this proposal, I said yes as I always went with their decision in life... so I got engaged and later they went to Pune thats where my fiancee 'Inder'stays… to fix the marriage date with his parents and I came back to Mumbai.. got to know abt jijaji's health and so I came here in Jalandhar .

Vaani was not happy to hear this but Vyom was glad with the news.. he smiled and congratulated her..

she smiled back.. and they shook hands… Still she felt somewhere in her heart, she expected some more reactions..... she wanted him to be surprised or shocked with the news.. but he wasn't.. she kept wondergin what more she wanted him to say or feel… she was just confusedand and kept looking at him.

Kyun Safar ke rastoo pe kadam dagmaga rahein hai,

'Inder' ki banejarahi hun soch ankhey nahi chamak rahein hai,

Dil Sochta hai Vyom ke bare mey subha shaam,

Dimaag pareshan hojata hai, kiss baat sey hun main anjaan?

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 20

Next week Vaani was gogin back to Mumbai and she had an emotional send off, she did not understand how Vyom would take care of everything alone. She asked him not to drop her at the station she will go on her own. As she left for the station, she called up Parikrama to meet her.

Parikrama: Aap Mumbai wapas jaa rahi hain..

Vaani: Haan.. mera ghar mera parivaar, mere pati bacchey sab wahan hai, saas sasaur ki zimedari.. ab kitne din tak durr rehkar yehan Etansh aur Vyom ka khayaal rakhti..

Parikrama: Etansh will miss u a lot…

Vaani: Haan woh miss karega.. lekin ussbhi jyada main jaa nahi paa rahi.. dard badhta hi jaaraha hai.. yeh sochtey ki maine apni Maa ko wachan diya ki main Etansh ka khayaal kakhungi.. kuch bhi kar Vyom ka dusra byah rachaungi.. lekin. (She looked staright into Parikrama eyes and then looked down)… Umeed to jaggi thi lekin woh bhi tutt si gayi… Rishteydaar aise nahi jinhe kuch keh saku… Tum sirf itna kardo.. ki etansh ko phone karkey uska mannn udasi sey bahar laado jab tak tum yehan ho.. mujhe yehan se jaatey bahut chintaa horahi hai..

Parikrama: Vaani dii, aap chinta matt karoo , waise aap keh rahi hain isliye nahi balki mujhe khud bahot achaa lagta hai etansh se milne key liye ussey baat karne keliye.. aur jab uska dukh uskey chehre pe dekh ti hun, uski baato mey; tab uske liye aur bhi dil pighalta hai… Etansh is close to my heart ..main hamesha koshish karungi jitna mujhse ho sakey main uska khayaal rakhun.. haan Vyom.. woh to hamesha Etansh ki chinta mey dube hotey hain.. pata nahi unka apna dard woh kab kissey baant payengey?

Vaani: Bas tumney itna kaha yehi kafi hai…

Vaani went and Parikrama felt how women have to fulfill their duties towards their parents their brother, sister and also after marriage the new family, their own family… she knew Vaani must be still tensed and would be thinking abt Vyom n Etansh all through the journey.. she just smiled with the fact the bond the love brother n sister share…

After that day Parikrama would get more close to Etansh , she would pick him from school and take him to parks & play with him. Etansh would now wait for Parikrama's call and get excited as she called him. He would tell her what happen in the school while Vyom was in office.

At the clinic as she went with her didi for her didi'd checkups she saw Vyom their coming with Etansh and Etansh would give roses to the staff and the patients and their relatives. Dr. Anand told Vyom sings with his orchestra band for social events and charity events. Dr. Anands Aids care centre's silver jubilee celebrations had to take place and he informed Vyom would be singing with the band. Parikrama was very happy to know that. Etansh would tell her how his Papa today burnt his fingers making partha… how he forgot to wear socks and went like that to office and ran back realsing it after a while.. Parikrama would smile at the incidents and slowly her feelings for Vyom developed…

Her didi and jijai were very upset with her as she wanted her marriage date to be postponed she didn't talk with her finacee from the day she had come to jalandhar, they were realsing how close Parikrama is gettign to Vyom and Etansh.

Parikrama once went to meet Etansh and as she entered the floor she heard couple of girls lookign at the balcony where Vyom was reading newspaper, sitting and thinking and he was shirt less but wearing the banyan…

they smiled and whispered something… Parikrama got very angry and as she entered and Vyom had opened the door with a towel covering his shirtless arms and only banyan over.. he called Etansh that his Pariaunty has come… Parikrama held Etansh's hand and later turned back to him…saying..

Parikrama: Towel odhey newspaper padhletey…. Aur yeh balcony ke yehan kyun beth kar padhna hai.. Zamana waise hi achaa nahi hai…

She went away while Vyom laughed, as he did not understand a bit, of what she wanted to say…

Parikrama walked down the stairs she bit her lips with her teeth and was blushing recollecting what she just now said to him… she felt shy why she felt so jealous at such a small thing… suddenly her face got tensed as she realised that she is indeed engaged and why she is starting to have feelings for Vyom… Is she in love with him?

Parikrama was not afraid to love , she was just wanting to be a better person and not take away the right of someone else… She was knew she has started to love Vyom but she didn't want to take away the position the right which is of Vyom's wife… Etansh's mother. She didn't knew anything about her , and didn't want to disclose her love for him without knowing the facts… but still she was happy that she loves him.. she was happy as she felt the magi c of love had made her more happy about the world around.

Socha na tha Zindagi – Safar ban aisa rukh lega,

Socha na tha Unhe dekh Mera Dil muskura uthega,

Vyom ke nazdeek janeki; unka dard khushi baatnegi tamanna hai,

Pyaar jab hojata hai to ab chahey kuch bhi soche zamana hai...

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Posted: 17 years ago
So two wonderful parts together again. Parikarma is in love with vyom and she has realised it also. As for vyom i think even if he has any feeling he wont express them.

Good to see Etansh having fun with Pari. Ab vyom ka past reveal karo soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago

bhoomi i love Etansh he is sooo sweet & cute👏 great mindblowing last 4 parts. 👏 👏 👏

bhoomi i love it dear its awesome.👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Just awesome bhoomi, have no words yaar...luking frwd to reading the next parts...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww how cute! Too bad Parikrama is engaged...but who can predict when true love will find us? It's nice the Parikrama is spending time with Etansh and helping him become a kid again. And oooh! Feeling a little jealous? Oh, it's love for sure! Hope her sister and jijaji will understand. Continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

So two wonderful parts together again. Parikarma is in love with vyom and she has realised it also. As for vyom i think even if he has any feeling he wont express them.

Good to see Etansh having fun with Pari. Ab vyom ka past reveal karo soon.

Hi Golu... u liked the two parts... hmm ya Parikrama is in love.. about Vyom ya may be u r right... lets see whetehr n what he thinks abt love...

Pari & Etansh have become so close and abt Vyom past.. this close bond will later on go to that past thoda thoda..karke..😉.. dont worry..watch out for the next two parts..😉

Originally posted by: monikaseth

bhoomi i love Etansh he is sooo sweet & cute👏 great mindblowing last 4 parts. 👏 👏 👏

bhoomi i love it dear its awesome.👏

Hi Monika dear.... am so happy that u foudn Etansh sweet and cute...heheh so happy u enjoyed readign the 4 parts..kahin bore to nahi ho rahe ho na.. i keep feeling.. 😉.. u love it.. and love to know it..so swwwwwwwweet of u.. luv u dear..tc

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Just awesome bhoomi, have no words yaar...luking frwd to reading the next parts...

Hi Bini.... awesome..heheh am use to reading some otehr word whenever u reply to my work...but i love to know u r enjoyign this and u find the effort good enough... yup will be postign the next parts soon.. and waitign for what u feel...😊

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Awww how cute! Too bad Parikrama is engaged...but who can predict when true love will find us? It's nice the Parikrama is spending time with Etansh and helping him become a kid again. And oooh! Feeling a little jealous? Oh, it's love for sure! Hope her sister and jijaji will understand. Continue soon!

Hi Rabia..... yaaa when i read ur line who can predict when true love will find us? i felt like u really r urself a wonderful writer.. the line said it all 👏... Ya Parikrama and Etansh r getting close and the bond is gettign stronger...feeling jealous.. ehhehe even women wantto protect theri men u see.. aajkal 6abs ka zamana hai.. 😆😆... yup lets see how can PArikrama go throguh all these and does Vyom stands besides her...?

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