~*KyA dIl NaI kAhA*~ NEW PART! July 11th! - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: happe

continue soon guys
I am bored and sick so can't continue my fan-fics but I can read though 😳😆

lol happe sry it is kinds my fault i am supposed to write a part and then give it to nisha so she can add some but i haven't done that i have been busy!!😕

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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
we will soon....natasha gots to write a part then give it to nisha whos gonna give it to me....so i dont kno if she wrote something yet
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
ok u guys have waited long enough...so i will be posting the next part in 2 min!!!!
luv ya shereen 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

ok u guys have waited long enough...so i will be posting the next part in 2 min!!!!
luv ya shereen 😃

lol yeah guys sry i had written about half and then had hw so finished the other half of the part i was supposed to write!!! i am sooooo sry for the wait!!! i apologize millions!!! but i have fall break after tommorow so you guys will be getting a lot of of updates!!!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
#55

Ok guys heres the nxt part...hope u all like it!!! 😃


PART 2

Kripa goes home and her whole family congratulates her on her success! They all sit up and talk for a while. Kripa's family spends a lot of quality time together. Angad's family does too but Angad is almost never part of it! While Kripa's family is sitting and laughing about their day the phone rings and Gayatri goes to pick it up.

Gayatri: hello?

Naina: It is me Naina!

Gayatri: Namaste!

Naina: Namaste! I was just calling and wondering if it will be okay if we have Mishty's and Karthik's engagement tomorrow?

Gayatri: So soon?

Naina: Yes Karthik is waiting anxiously, and everyone is free tomorrow. A day when everyone is free wont come so soon! 😃

Gayatri: Okay then we will have it tomorrow!

Naina: Ok I will go now. Bye!

Gayatri: Bye Naina!


When Gayatri comes back in the room she tells everyone the good news and Mishty is just blushing like crazy 😳 😳 . Kripa teases Mishty until Sulebhan tells her to stop it! After a while Kripa leaves all the enjoyment saying she is tired. Kripa goes to her room and just lays down staring up at her ceiling. After a while some tears fall down from her chocolate brown eyes and Kripa gets up angry.

Kripa: (to herself) 😡 I promised I would stop thinking about all these things! Why does this happen to me! (Kripa punches her fist into the pillow and then just lays down and goes to sleep.)


The next day everyone is ecstatic about the engagement. Angad is plain annoyed because he had plans to go out but his mom made him stay and help. Angad was actually enjoying himself by passing time flirting with some girls who came to help but that mood didn't last long. Soon Kripa walked into the room looking the prettiest out of all and all the guys turned her way and kept staring at her for a while. 😳 Even Angad was in this trance for a while, but he quickly snapped out of it! Kripa was wearing a light baby blue and baby pink suit. Her hair was still wet because she just had taken a shower, and it gave it that fresh, slightly wavy kind of look. Her hair also made her eyes stand out really well. She had on a really light purple eye shadow on and a very thin line of eye liner. She looked amazing and even after she left the room to go and find Naina aunty her presence was still felt and everyone was still for a while. That is until Angad got annoyed and clapped his hands really loudly.

Angad: Get back to work!


Kripa went into the kitchen hoping to find Naina aunty and she did. She gave Naina the stuff that was in her hand and then Naina left to go put it away. Kripa was drinking a glass of water and was then going to leave when Angad walked in.

Angad: So…look what we have here?

Kripa: (just looked at him and rolled her eyes) don't worry I have no interest in seeing you. Who would want to look at you anyways? Have you seen yourself in the mirror lately? You like a monkey that has elephant ears. (then she tilts her head to the side) Actually make it a monkey that elephant ears and teeth like rat! 😆 😆

Angad: I will have you know so many girls are fida over me! If I go anywhere so many girls will throw themselves on me!

Kripa: Oh really! Then let's see the next person that walks through that door you have to do something to them….. (If you know what I mean)

Angad: (annoyed) yes I do!

Kripa: (pretending to talk to herself) Hmmmm Kripa do you know what would be really interesting! That is if Naina Aunty was the lucky girl to walk in! (Angad gulped at thins. 😕 He knew he would be a goner if that happened. Kripa continued) She did say she was coming right back…..

Soon they heard the voice of a female coming closer. Soon enough they could see her face and it was none other then Naina. Kripa watched in amusement as the color drained from Angad's face, but then someone called Naina back and she turned around. Kripa stood their in shock and the color returned to his face. After a while a girl walked in getting a glass of water. Angad went up to her turned her around and kissed her roughly on the lips. Angad just looks at her with a look saying do you want more? The girl just stood their in shock, and Kripa prayed she wasn't one of Angad's crazy fans. Kripa soon found out she was not when the girl gave a tight slap to Angad and his whole right cheek turned bright red. Angad was angered and Kripa tried hard not to laugh. Angad raised his hand to slap her back when….

Naina: (yelling) ANGADDD!!!!!! 😡 😡

Angad turned shocked to see his mom standing there glowering at him with her heavy black eyes.

Naina: What were you about to do????!!!! 😡

Angad: Mom....i can explain...see....it...was...just that(before he could finsih he was interrupted by Naina)

Naina: 😡 BUS!!!!!! I dont want to hear anything.....say sorry to this girl rite now!!!!!

Angad: But mom...

Naina: I said NOW!!!!!! do u understand??

Angad: (to the girl) im sorry...

The girl: its ok.....i guess! 😭

(Then both naina and the other girl leave.....which left Angad and Kripa alone!!!)

The minute they leave Angad turns around towards Kripa...whos trying hard not to laugh or make eye contact...)

Angad: Kripa......LOOK WAT YOU MADE ME GET INTO!!!!! 😡

Kripa: (couldnt prevent herself anymore from laughing....so quickly said something and left...) 😆 😆

Kripa: Serves you rite!!! (and she left)

(when she got outside she let it all out and started laughing like crazy.....everyone turned around and was staring at her like shes crazy...) 😆 😆

Misthi: Kripa...are you ok???(confused) 😕

Kripa: (who came back in her senses and realized what just happened and was embarrased) Yeah, everythings ok!

Misthi: Ok......

Meanwhile, Angad went to his room....and was completely angry at Kripa...he decided that he definitely need to get Kripa back...but how!!!!!???? 😡

Hope u liked it.....stay tuned for more!!!
luv ya,
Shereen 😃

Edited by hrithick_luvr - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

lol yeah guys sry i had written about half and then had hw so finished the other half of the part i was supposed to write!!! i am sooooo sry for the wait!!! i apologize millions!!! but i have fall break after tommorow so you guys will be getting a lot of of updates!!!😃

Yea i also added a part too...but we will hopefully post a longer part since its friday
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
ooopsss!!!! 😳 sry you guys there are a buch of spelling mistakes!!! 😳 😳 😕
Edited by simplyconfused - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
it was really nice guys.
continue soon 😳
please don't take ages 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
it was lovely...loved it...continue soon tho...don't make us wait soo long for the story.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: hrithick_luvr

thanx kayla...glad u liked it...and we will continue soon

ur welcome... the 2nd part was really gd too... the story sounds very interesting... continue with the next part soon and have some more scenes where kripa and angad are fighting... they are really cute... gr8 job, continue soon... take care

Kayla~

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