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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: angel 16

i will try my best to do so bt 4 me its tough to xplain emotions in english b,coz in hindi i can xplain it more clearly b'coz i m writing first time. bt i will try it surely.


its just a request.... dont take it too seriously...i mostly feel that reading hindi english is a pain... so i was just telling u my views abt it...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
i have only one word to say jhakassssssss 😆 seriously its verryyy nice ff i jus loved it 😳 pls continue soon plssssssssssss 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey lovely ff but what is sujals past cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i have only one word to say jhakassssssss 😆 seriously its verryyy nice ff i jus loved it 😳 pls continue soon plssssssssssss 😊

thanx alot dear .
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15

Firstly thanx to u all for ur comments So here is d nxt part

PART-2



IN LONDON


S- while jogging in park sujal is remembering his past aur wo ek dum se ruk jata hai aur apni aankhe band kar leta hai tabhi peche se akar koi uske shoulder par haath rakhta hai Aur ek dum se wo turn ho jata aur wo apne peche rebaka ko khra dekhta hai


Rebaka - sujal,s frnd and angad,s so called girl frnd


S- hi rebaka , how r u.

R- hi, I m fine, and wat.s abt u

S- I m also fine, so wat r u doing here

R- with surprising and questioning face She ask sujal, wat can people do in morning time in parks

S- oh I m sorry, I didn't mean that, actually I av never seen u here b4

R- oh that's right I av also come here first time

S- oh I see, nice meeting u here , bt I av to leave now

R- no sujal

S- surprised by his reply

R- oh I mean that I m leaving for usa today , so can u plz come to my house and collects angad,s watch b'coz he left it out at my house last night

S- just shocked and now he realizes that y angad is saying that he wanna sleep more

R- r u coming or not ,

S-yes, b'coz that angad's favourite watch and a last present by angad,s father to him he doesn't want to loose it any cost and after collecting angad,s watch he come back to house.

S- jab sujal ghar jata hai to dekhta hai ki angad abhi bhi so raha hai, tab uske dimag me ek idea aata hai or wo angad ke bathroom me jakar ,ek pani ki bucket lata hi or sara pani angad k upar dal deta hai

A-just open his eyes in frustration and ek dum khra ho jata . who d hell has done this.

S- tel me angad xcept me who can do this wid u may b rebaka


A-rebaka ka naam sunte hi angad ki neend gayab ho jati hai aur woe k dum question change kar K puchta ye koi tarika hai kisi ko uthane ka


S- kun angad wo bhi mujhe rebaka se sekh kar aana patega and just giggles

A-kya rebaka -2 laga rakha hai subhe subhe tujhe koi aur nahi mila that play girl kahin ki

S- so wat r u angad Mehta, don't u think u also fall in same category of play boys. Ok leave it this is ur daily routine and im really not interested in discussing ur affairs. Just tel me where is ur wrist watch.

A-oh no. wo to rebaka k ghar rehgai . how could I do so. I can 't believe myself. I m such a stupid. .at this time angad is feeling so much guilty and he is thinking how could he b so irresponsilble towards his dad's last present to him


S-tabhi apna hath aage karta hai aur uske haath me angad ki watch hoti hi

A-ek dum se watch dekhta hai aur uski aankhon me aansun aa jata hain us time use lag raha tha ki agar wo ye watch kho deta to kya hota aur woe k dum se sujal ko hug karte hai aur kheta hai thnx buddy agar aaj iske badle tu kuch bhi mangle to maine tujhe de dunga . u r my best buddy.

S- I know that. Bt don't 4get jo tune abhi kaha


A-kya kaha. Mujhe to kuch yaad nahi

S- angadddddddddddd. I m gonna kill u.

A-wen ever u want. ……………………….. .waise jab chahe kuch bhi mang liyo kabhi mana nahi karonga

S – ok maine sahi time ka intezar karonga aur tab tu mujhe mana nahi karega us cheez ko dene k liya

A-I promise u nahi karonga. Then he just leave towards his washroom.

S(to himself)- maine janta hoon angad to apne parents ko bahut miss karta bas batna nahi chata. Then he also leaves from angad,s room.

Now IN INDIA

Kashish aur daksh donor jogging par Jane ke liye tayar hoge hote hain

Ka and D together gud morning mom and dad

Vand L gud morning

So tum dono apni daily ki itni romantic morning talks k baad jogging par Jane k liye tyaar ho hi gaye

D- yes mom v r ready u know na how she is. She is always interested in fighting wid me .


K.- wat do u mean by that I m always and wats abt u .

V- plz ab tum donor dubra mat shuru ho jana

D AND K Ok mom hum jaa rahe haan

V(to herself)- janti hoon in lariyoon me bhi tum donor ki dosti hai.

Ka- daksh tum se subha jaldi khud kuon nahi utha jata

D- tum ho na mera alarm

KA- jab khwaish aa jayegi tab kya karoge

D- tab wo alarm ban jayegi

Ka – wat to tujhee hum dono alarm clock dekhte hain D-

Aur kya ek meri best frnd dosri meri would be wife . itna to tum donor mere liye kar hi sakti ho

Ka- aur tum hamre liye kya kar sakte ho

D- tumhe kiya lagta hai main tumhare liye kya kar sakta hoon

Ka- mujhe lagta hai

D- kya lagta hai

Ka-mujhe lagta hai hume ghar chalna chaiye mom intezar kar rhi hoongi

D- Nahi phele meri baat ka jawab do warna hum donor yahan se nahi janenge aur I m sure ki tum dr. kirti ka gusa nahi jhelna(face karna) chahogi hospital late poochne ki wajhe se

Ka- tum jante ho na mujhe dr kirti se bhoot dar lagta hai phir bhi aisa bool rahe ho

D- kashish ek baat bato tumhe kisse dar nahi lagta mere alawa

Ka-innocently angad bhiya, mom, dad, khwaish,or kripa inse mujhe baat karte hue kabhi dar nahi lagta aur sabse important jab tum mere sath hote ho tu mujhe kisi se dar nahi lagta

D- wow kashish wat a gud answer .bt tel me one thing jab main tumhere saath nahi honga to kya karoogi

Ka- nahi tum hamesha mere saath rahogye

D- main hamesha tumhare sath rahonga par kashish kya tumhe nahin lagta k ab tumhari life main kisi aur k pyar ki bhi jaroorat hai

Ka- plz daksh hum is topic par koi baat nahi karenge

D- par kyuon kashish har kisi ko apni life me ek aise pyar ki jarorat parti hai jo hamri zindagi ko sari duniya k khushiyon se bhar deta hai aur hamara better half ban jata hai.

Ka- janti hoon daksh lekin jab yehi khushiyan had se jayda ho jaati hain tu unhe kho dene ka dar bhi bhar jata hai aur ab mujhme kisi aur ko khone ki himat nahi. Mom –dad k Jane k baad agar main ji rahi hoon to uske wajhe tum aur veena mom aur lalit dad hain, aur mom-dad ka sapna hai. Varna ab tak main kahin kho gi hoti. Agar aaj main tohra hasti hoon ,khush rah pati hoon to uski wajhe sirf tum ho.. aur sabsi badi bat daksh agar Bhagwan ne kisi ka meri zindagi mein aana likha hoga to wo zaroor ayega aur main use rook nahi pongi lekin haan main kabhi khud kisi ko apne zindagi mein lane ki koshish nahi karongi..aur pata nahi jo insaan meri zindagi mein aaye wo meri aur tumhari dosti ko samjh paye ya nahi aur tumhari dosti ko to mein kabhi kisi k liye bhi nahi khoona chahati


D – bt kashish aisa zarooeri to nahi. Khwaish bhi to hum dono ki dosti ko samjhti hai. to wo kyuon nahi Ka- jarori to nahi har koi khwaish jaisa ho

D- haan ye to sach hai ki khwaish jaisa to koi ho hi nahi sakta


K ahem ahem………………………… to mom se keh dun ki use jaldi se ghar laye aoo

D- nahi kashish jab tak sujal aur angad nahi aa jate tum mom se shaadi ki koi baat nahi karogi

Ka- theek hai to tum 4 months aur wait karo

D- haan janta hoon (bada sad sa face banakar kheta hai)

ka-oh so sad……………

D-cholo ab ghar chelte hain.

Ka- haan cholo .

Now we call it a day.
I hope u like it. Plz comment

Edited by angel 16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
really a nice one please pm me when u updated ur ff

Karenge tumse wafa hum har ghadi,
Kabhi shikaayat ka mauka na denge tumhein,
Haste haste guzaarenge zindagi ka har lamha,
Kabhi roothne ka mauka na denge tumhein.


Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
wowwwwwwwww heena..u have a great talent....aab tak kya kar rahi thi tum!!!!!!!! I must say that this is a wonderful FF....plzzz continue it soon!!

Love u

Di
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
amazing part
cant wait 4 angad and sujal 2 cme 2 india
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock


its just a request.... dont take it too seriously...i mostly feel that reading hindi english is a pain... so i was just telling u my views abt it...

i agree i take sooo long to read it cz i dont speak hindi but yh it is really up to u!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
wow gd ff continue wid da gr8 work!

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