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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: freaky_angel

i agree i take sooo long to read it cz i dont speak hindi but yh it is really up to u!😉

i m agree wid both of u. its really very easy to read a story in english than in hindi bt actually problem is this v watch all these serials in hindi so its bit easy for me to tel story and converstion b/w persons better in hindi than english . . i hope u don't mind it. really im very sorry for not taking ur request. bt surely i will try my best.

bt really thanku so much for reading it.

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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
cant wait 4 angad and sujal 2 cme 2 india
👏 thanks a lot for ur comments

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hinu 😳 great going 👏 see,i read nd commented..see,i am a good bacchi 😳 it's great 2 hear ur tally class is going superb 😃 nd i am doing good wid my ''chem''class 😊 2day i hv chem tuition 😉 😉 so,wish me luck 😉
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Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

hey hinu 😳 great going 👏 thanx see,i read nd commented..see,i am a good bacchi 😳 it's great 2 hear ur tally class is going superb 😃 nd i am doing good wid my ''chem''class 😊 2day i hv chem tuition 😉 😉 so,wish me luck 😉

its gr8 dat ur "chem" 😉😉 😉class is also going gud and ur best frnd's gud wishes r always wid u.. all d best dear. and do n't worry i m sure dat very soon all equations of chemistry will be on ur tips. don't u think so😉
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PART -3

IN KHANNA HOUSE

Khwaish- kh
Kripa-k


Hum dekhte hain e larki mirror k samne bhati hoti hai aur apne baloon me comb kar rahi hoti hai. usne blue colour ka suit phena hota hai . uske hatoon me bahut sari bangels hoti hain . wo bahut hi pyari lag rahi hoti. Phir wo mirror k samne se khri hoti hai aur ek room ki tarf jati hai

IN ROOM
Hum dekhte hain is dusre room me har tarf drawing sheets phele hooti hain, walls pe bahut se paintings hoti hain aur bed pe ek pyari se larki so rahi hoti hai tabhi uske room ka door khulta hai aur usme ek larki enter hoti hai aur phir wo bed par jakar bathti hai aur phir bade pyar se khti hai kripa ab uth bhi ja 7 baj gaye hain

So jo larki so rahi hoti wo kripa hai

K- khwaish di plz dus min sone do bas abho uth jaongi

So dosri larki khwaish hoti hai

Kh- kripa gallery jane k liye late ho jaye gi uth ja jaldi

K- di bas uth rahi hoon

Kh- theek hai to 10 min or so ja itne main tera room theek kar dati hoon

Kh(to herself) kripa main janti hoon to yahi khegi 10 min di islye main tujhe hamesha dus min phele uthati hoon

Phir khwaish room mein sari drawing sheets ikhti karne lagti hai

K- di pl aap 10 min k liye yahan se jaye kunki jab tak aap yahan rahengi tab tak aapki ye bangels k aawaj mujhe soone nahi dagi. Pata nahi daksh jiju or aapki engagement k bad aapne ye itni sari bangels phenna kuon shuru kar diya.

Kh- (with a cute smile on her face) kunki daksh ko bangels ki aawaj bahut pasand hai.

K- ahem ahem- kya pyar hai .mujhe sone bhi nahi deta

Kh-kripa………………………………aur wo bed se ek pillow utha kar kripa ke face par marti hai. jab tujhe pyar hoga tab puchungi to uske liye kya-kya karti hai. abhi tujhe mujhe satne me bada maja aata hai na tab main bhi tujhe dekhongi

K- in sleepy voice plz di mujhe kabhi pyar nahi hoga b'coz I don't believe in love

Kh- haan –haan janti hoon .par main phir bhi intezar karongi ki koi aisa teri zindagi me aaye jo tujhe pyar karna sikhaye

K- aisa koi hai hi nahi . so just 4get abt thisx

Kh- aacha theek hai ab tu jaldi se uth ja aur tyar ho ja aur haan main tujhe batna bhul gai ki aaj daksh aur kashish gallery aane wale hain

K- di gallery to kashish di aane wali hain jiju to……………………………

Kh- kripa……………………………………….

K- okkkkkkkkkkkkk di just chill . waise main tabhi khoon aaj aap. itni khush kuon hain aur ye khete hi kripa bed se uth kar washroom me bhag jati hai.

Kh- kripa tu nahi sudhregi aur wo phir tohra sa sharmati hai

K-bathroom k door par khri hokar "wari janwan" di kya sharmati ho main to fida hogi is par

Kh- kripa now im gonna kill u.

K-u can't di aur wo phir jaldi se apne bathroom ka door lock kar lati hai

Kh-(to herself) ye larki pagal hai aur wo thoda sa hasti hai aur phir neeche apne mom –dad k saath jakar dinning table par breakfast k liye beth jati hi

Vasu- khwaish beta kripa kahan hai

Kh- mom bas wo abhi aaa rahi hai aap janti hai na uske dus min.

Then all three of them khwaish, vasu and cg stat laughing together

K- tabhi kripa neeche aa jati hai . aap tino ye kis baat par has rahe hain mujhe bhi batiye taki main bhi thoda has sakoon

Kh- tabhi ek dam se bol deti hai mom soch rahi thi k kuon tumhare liye bhi koi larka dekh liye jaye and just giggles

K- with angry look what rubbish r u talking di. U all know na mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni then (only to herself) mujhe to kabhi shaadi nahi karni

Kh-aacha baba hum sab majak (joke)kar rahe thee bas ab gusa mat ho jaldi se breakfast kar mama aur main tujhe gallery drop kar denge aur phir fashion house chale janegaye aaj bahut kam hai mujhe

K- theek hai bt di plz aap aisa majak mat kiya kijiye

Kh- tu mujhe kuch bhi kah sakti hai aur main itna sa majak(joke) bhi nahi kar sakti

K- sorry di mera wo matlab nahi aap to mera saath kaisa bhi mazak(joke) kar sakti hain bas ek shaadi……………… ki baat chorkar

Cg- main chalta hoon tum logon ki baate to pata nahi kab khtam hongi waise bhi meri lalit k sath ek meeting soch raha hoon use nxt week dinner par invite kar lon wid family

Kh- ye sunkar bahut kush hoti

K-ahem ahem……………………. Papa kisi ke chere pe kitni badi smile aagai

Kh- tu chupkar kripa. Papa waisa idea bahut aacha aaj main daksh aur kashish se milne wali hoon unhe bhi bata dongi

K- papa kahish di se to main milne wali hoon khwaish di to……………………….

Kh(wid irritation) – mama papa plz aap is kripa ko chup kariya na pata nahi kya kya bulti rahti hai aur mujhe tang karti

Cg- haan bhi kripa ab khwaish ko tang karne ka haq bhi kisi aur ka

Kh (now wid lil bit anger) papa aap bhi ab main aap me se kisi se baat nahi karongi

Vasu- beta hum to sirf majak kar rahe the, tujhe hurt karna chate the

K- I m also sorry di

Kh( now wid a smile on her face) –main janti hoon ki aap log mujhe kabhi hurt kar hi nahi sakti isliye sorry balone ki koi zarorat hi nahi hai lekin haan ab hume chalna chahiye warna yehin khre- khre sham (evening) ho jaye gi aur wo main bilkul nahi chahti

K- di aap sach me nahi chati k aaj sham ho…………………………………….

Kh- kripa to phir shuri hogi. ……………………….

Sab hasne lagte hain aur phir sab apne apne kam k liye chale jate hain.


IN GAREWAL HOUSE

Daksh aur kashish ghar me enter hote hain aur aate hi dono sofe par beth jate hain aur phir dono ek sath bolte hain.
D- mom kahish ka orange juice
Ka- mom daksh ka apple juice

V- pata hai la rahi hoon aur wo juice lakar dono ko de deti hai. tum dono aapna juice nahi mang sakte

D and k- nahi mom aap janti hai na

V- haan haan janti hoon tumhe aisa karna bahut aacha lagta hai aur ye kahkar veena wahan se chali jati hai

Ka- daksh abhi tak angad bhiya ka phone nahi aaya

D- sujal ka bhi nahi aaya

Actually ye in choron(4) ki routine thi ki wo her din ek dosre se baat karte the dakah sujal aur angad se aur kashish sirf angad se lekin ek din D and K phone karte the aur ek S&A aur aaj sujal aur angad k turn thi aur as usual wo dono bhul gaye the

D- aaj phir se ye dono bhul gaye hongi

K- koi baat nahi abhi thodi der me unhe yaad aa jaye ga jaisa tumhe kabhi yaad nahi rehta aur hamesha main tumhe phone karna yaad dilti hoon

D- kashish tum meri tang khichna band karoo aur ab hum dono chalke ready ho jate hain

K chalo waise bhi tum kabhi kabhi to apna dimag lagakar baat kar to ho

Ye khete hi kashish apne room mein upar bhaag jati hai aur door lock kar leti hi

d- kashish mein tujhe dekh longa kuon

k- kuon aaj se phele kabhi nahi dekha

Daksh ab kuch nahi bulta aur door k bahar chup chap khra ho jata

K(to herself )kahin daksh sach maein to gusa nahi . door kholkar dekhti hoon

Aur kashish jaise hi door kholti hai daksh uske samne khra hoota hai par uske haat me ek cockroach hota hai aur kashish cockroach ko dekhte hi bahut jor se chilne lagti hai aur apni dono ankhoon par hath rakh leti hai aur bahut jor se chila rahi hoti hai

Daksh ko ye dekh kar bahut hasi aa rahi hoti lekin phir daksh ko thoda bura lagne lagta hai kunki wo bahut aache se janta tha ki kashish ko andhere aur cock roach se bahut dar lagta hai aur phir cockroach ko phek deta hai aur bahut pyar se kashish k aankhon se uske haath hatata hai aur kheta hai I m very sorry kashish

K- phele to kuch nahi bolti lekin phi jaldi se daksh ko hug kar leti hai aur thodi low voice mein bolti hai aisa karna jarori tha main tumse kabhi baat nahi karongi

D- very sorry kashish. Phir wo bade pyaar se apne dono ears ko pkar lete hai

K- ye dekh kar kahish ko hasi aa jati hai. its okkkkkk daksh. Par dubra aisa mat karna

D- kabhi nahi karonga lekin tum bhi ye mat kehna k mujme dimag nahi hai

K- wid a naughty face wo to sach me nahin hai daksh

D- kashish………………………

K- okkkkkkkkkkkkk . I m just kidding.

D- acha kashish choro ab in sab baton ko aur chal kar meri shirt nikal do warna mein phir se confuse ho jaonga

K- haan janti hon tom to chalti phrti confusion ho ,chalo ab nikal deti hoon
(actual ye daksh ki habit thi ki wo wahi shirt phenta tha jo kashish nikal kar deti thi). Phir wo uski shirt select kar deti hai aur apne room mein tyar hone k liye wapas aa jati hai



Todhi der me kashish tyar ho jati hai usne white colour ka churidar suit phena hota hai aur anklets pheni hui hoti jo bahut hi pyari hoti hain . kashish ne apne hathon me bas ek watch pheni hui haoti hai. waise kashish ko bangels phenna bahut pasand hai bt apne profession ki wajhe se wo aisa nahi kar pati hai.
Kashish ne koi artifical make up nahi kya hota , uske baal khule hote hain aur wo bahut pyari lag rahi hoti.


After 15 min. wo dono niche breakfasr karne k liye aa jate hain

Dono aakar dinning table par bethte hain aur kashish daksh ko uska toast aur juice deti hai aur daksh ka uske corn flakes de deta hai

V- pheli baat to mujhe ye samajh nahi aati kit um dono itna kam breakfast kuon karte ho aur dosra ye ki tum aapna khanna khud kuon nahi utha te dinning table se

Ka- mom pheli baat ka to ye answer hai ki aap har weekend itna heavy breakfast krati hain ki wo pure week chalta hai aur waise bhi hum lunch or dinner sufficient karte hain aur agar itna oily har din khane gaye to mote hojane gaye

V- tum dono doctors se to bat karna bekar hai jab mere sujal aur angad aye gaye tab main unhe apni pasand ka breakfast karwon gi

D- only breakfast , sab khuch unhe apni hi pasand ka karwaiye ga

V- chup kar tu

Ka-bas mama ab hum chalet hain warna late ho jayen gaye

V- theek hai tum dono jao par lunch time par kar lena

D- haan mom karlenge . don't worry. Waise aapki dosri baat ka answer to diya hi nahi. And that is our true frndship

V-haan janti hoon lekin ab tum dono jao warna late ho jao ge


IN LONDON

S AUR A breakfast karke college jane k liye ready ho chuke the wo dono bahar aakar car me behte hain aur sujal jor se chilata hai oh no aaj hum phir se phone karna bhul gaye aaj hamari turn thi .

S-oh no mar gaye, daksh bhiya mujhe mar dalengaye

A- aur mujhe dono milkar mar dalengye(d and k). sujal tujhe kabhi time par yaad nahi aata phone karna hamesha late karva deta hai

S- abye ***** mujhe yaad to aa jata tujhe to bhagwan ki dya se wo bhi nahi aata. Chal ab phele phone kar lete hain

NOW CONSVERSATION B/W FOUR OF THEM

Daksh aur kashish jaise hi car mein bethte hain dono ka phone bajne lagta hai aur dono ek saath khete hain aagya inhe yaad

Dono phone receive karte hain

Ka- angad bhiya aapko kahbhi time par yaad nahi ata no phone karna hamesha late ho jate hain

A- kashish ye sujal mujhe kabhi time par yaad nahi dilate

Ka-aap me aur daksh mein koi difference nahi hai dono ejk jaise bhulakar ho

Jab angad kashish bat kar rahe hote hain to daksh aur sujal bhi baat kar rahe hote hain

D- sujal to kabhi time par phone nahi kar sakta

S- bhai main khud kar to leta hoon agar aapko kashish yaad na dilaye to aap to kabhi phone kare hi na

D- wat dio u mean by that

S- I mean ki aap me aur angad mein koi difference nahi hai

Daksh to Sujal and Angad to Kashish - tum me aur kashish mein bhi to koi difference nahi

A TO KA-jaise tum hamesha daksh bhaiya ko yaad delati ho phone waise sujal hamesha mujhe yaad delta. He is my best buddy

D TO S-jaise tu hamesha angad ko yaad delta hai phone karna waise hi kashish mujhe dilate hai . she is my best frnd

Sujal daksh k bate sun raha hota hai aur kashish angad ki

Then D sujal ko bolta hai kashish and u both r perfect
Aur same angad kashish ko bolta hai

Sujal aur kashish ek sath bolte hain yes we know (bt wo sach mein abhi tak ye nahi jante ki wo dono ek dusre k liye bilkul perfect hain)

Phir kashish phone rakh deti aur angad daksh se baat karta hai lekin daksh car se bhaar jakar angad se baat karta hai aur kheta ki wo Friday ko London aa raha hai aur aaj Monday hota hai



Now we call it a day
I hope u guys like it . plz comment.


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thanx dear
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wow great part dear . conti soon. 👏 👏 👏
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wow great part dear THANX ALOT. conti soon.SURE 👏 👏 👏

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Hey Nice parts dear......Im really pleased to see that ppl are writing Sujal fics 😛 😛 ....I luvvvv Rajeev.... 😳 😉

Continue soon ! 😉
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey Nice parts dear thanx dear......Im really pleased to see that ppl are writing Sujal fics 😛 😛 ....I luvvvv Rajeev.... same here i m crazy for him. 😳 😉

Continue soon ! 😉

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