Luv is life sujal-kashish pg76 note - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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only two comments. is 4 part not liked by anyone ???????????????????😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
great part
i really liked the way daksh handeled tushar
it was really good
it shows how much he cares for kashish
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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firstly thanx to u all for ur comments

here is d nxt part and this is specially for my best frnd saya

Part -5


Its now evening time daksh aur kashish dono gallery jata hain khwaish bhi wahin hoti hai.
Jaise hi kashish aur daksh gallery pohonchate hain wo dekhte hain kripa garden me bethi hoti hai aur kisi painting ko pura karne me busy hoti hai d aur ka dono uske pass jate hain

KRIPA-K

KASHISH-Ka

KHWAISH-Kh

DAKSH-D



D- hey krips how r u

K- hey jij I m fine and wats abt u

D- (wid sad face)- I m fine

K- don't worry jij di andar hi hain so don,t try to make me fool by ur these sad expression so just go now

D- andar chala jat hai aur ka aur k garden me hi rehte hain actually ye gallery bahut hi peacefull jagah par hoti hai aur uske ass pass bahut sundar gardens hote hain jinme charo tarf fountains lage hote hai

gallery and gardens around it





K- hi di aap kaisi hain

Ka- I m fine aur tum

K- di I m also fine aur dekhaye meri painting bhi puri hone wali hai

Ka- really kripa this painting is so beautifull .so natural. So iss bar exhibition me hum ise jaroor diplay karnge

KRIPA,S PAINTING

K-wow di .thanx alot

KA-ab apni di ko bhi thanx khogi

K- sorry di nxt time kabhi nahi khongi bt di hum aapki wo wali painting bhi jaroor display karenge

Ka- han agar wo puri hogayi to b,coz hospital me aaj kal bahut workload hai. I just hope is bar puri ho jaye

K- I also hope so di.

Ka- so tum apni is painting ko final touch de lo maine apne doston se milke aati hon

K- ya di wo bhi apke bina bor hojate honge

Ka- thoda sa hasti hai aur phir whan se garden k dusri tarf chali jati hai

Garden me hum dekhte hain bahut se doves fountain ke pass bethe hote han aur usme garden me bahut se pets hote hain . kashish wahan jakar beth jati hai aur unke sath khelne lagti aur is time wo bahut khush hoti hai kunki ye uski sabse favourite jagah hai

NOW LETS SEE WAT IS HAPPENING INSIDE D GALLERY

D- gallery me enter hota hai aur dekhta hai ki khwaish table par khri hoti hai aur wall par koi painting laga rahi hoti hai aur jaisi hi daksh use peche se bulata hai hi my would be wife how r u aur wo turn hoti hai aur thoda sa muskrati hai , hume laga aap hamari raha me pilke bichaye bethi hongi par yahan to aap ……………………………….

Kh- nahi wo bas…………..aur bas wo yehi kah pati hai tabhi uska balance ek dam se khrab ho jata hai uyr wo table se slip ho jati(don't worry wo garti nahi daksh ke hote hue aisa kaise ho sakta hai)

Khwaish apne ankhein band kar leti hai kunki wo bahut dar jati hai lekin jab wo aankhein kholti to hai to dekhti hai ke wo daksh ki god(*lap) me hoti hai


Wo dono bas ek dusre ke aankhon me kho hote hain tabhi khwaish ko realise hota hai k wo kahan hai aur wo aapne aankhen neeche kar leti aur daksh use pyar se neeche utar deta hai

Thodi dar k liye dono wahin khare rahte hain aur ek dusre ko dekhte rahte hain tabhi khwaish turn ho jati hai (she is blushing and her cheeks turn red like beet root she try not to do so but not possible) b;coz daksh eyes r still on her. Jaise hi wo turn hoti hai daksh uska hath pakr leta hai hey mam itni jaldi kahan chal di mere thanks to deti jao


Kh-thanx for wat??????????

D- ohhhhhhhh so I av to tel u (now wid a naughty smile on ur face

Kh- nonoooooooo daksh thnx a lot

D- itna rukha sa thanx not fair.

Kh-(wid an innocent face) so tel me mr daksh garewal how I can Isay thanx to u

D- do u really wanna know


Kh-( now kh understand wat he means)no daksh I don't want to know

D- no now its too late baby I wanna kiss here (keeps finger on his lips) aur wo thoda aga hone lagta hai aur khwaish ekek step piche hoti jati

Kh- r u mad daksh wat r u saying this is not possible

D-why ur gonna to be my better half within in few months so iav full right and he is stepping towards khwaish

Kh- so listen my would be husband u av to wait till our marriage ok and we will see after marriage

D- wat do u mean by v will see after marriage??? So even after marriage I will av to take permission from u for………………………..

Kh- yes u av dr daksh garewal

D- so wait ms khwaish I tel u that I don,t need permission for doing my job nor before marriage neither after marriage and he take an another step towards khwaish and now she get pinned to d wall

Kh- daksh plz janne do mujhe warna koi aa jayega

D- kuon abhi to bada akar rahi thi. First u av to give me a kiss then I will leave u

Kh- no never

D- khri raho ase hi dekhne do jise dekhna hai

Kh- acha theek phele apni aankhe band karo

D- ahhhhhhhhhh tum larkiyan bhi na

Kh- theek mat karo tumhari mergi

D- kar raha hoon meri maa. Lo kar li aankhein band

KH- jaise hi daksh aan khein band karta hai khwaish use piche ki tarf push karti hai aur wahan se bhag jati hai

D- wahan apna moo(mouth) khol kar khra rah jata hai. use samajh nahi aaraha hota ki abhi ek min phele hua kaya. Then he came in his senses and then he shouts I will not leave u miss khwaish khanna u will av to pay a much bigger amount for it

Kh- (wid a big smile on her face) first catch me if u can then v will see.

Here this parts end

I hope u guys like it

Plz comment yaar


Edited by angel 16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
azzan is so cute, sweet , nd romantic
cont soooN!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tisha_sarin

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
azzan is so cute, sweet , nd romantic u bet really daksh is cute and azan as well😆
cont soooN!!!!!

i will sure
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
its really a nice one please continue soon



Friendship often ends in love, but love in friendship - NEVER...!!

If one should love...They should love you for what you are...!!
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
👏 nice part.....But i want SK 😳 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

👏 nice part thanx alot.....But i want SKu want sk and i want rajeev only wid me😆 😳 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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^^Nopes u didnt get it.......I want Sujal with Kashish......But Rajeev is only mine 😆

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