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aww it was so cute lz write more soon =)
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Part 23

Recap-Ranbir and Kanya flirt and go to the office together to spend more time together. Chunnu calls Ranbir about their new venture together.

5 months just flew by in no time. Ranbir has a special surprise for Kanya. It's the anniversery of Ranbir and Kanya's wedding and Ranbir plans the best thing for Kanya. Kanya also has a special surprise for Ranbir and she is just dying to tell him the good news. Ranbir had his Mom Malika and his mieces distract Kanya for the day by pampering her to a day out in the Spa centre to get pampered. They were going to get manicured, pedicured, facial and even a massage. Kanya's only thing was she didn't want to be away from Ranbir.

Ranbir had decorated the house with flowers. All different colours. He had their song set on a timer to start playing as soon as Kanya entered the house. It was Hum Tum Followed by Tumse Hi. Everything was going to plan. He even had red lights on and asked one of the workers to switch the light off so it would come on. Everything was just the way Kanya would love it. At the same time Ranbir was nervous. He didn't know what to do with himself.

Back to Kanya. She just wanted to tell Ranbir how much she loved him and more but how? She didn't know where to start from? Or even What to say? How Ranbir felt? Every moment she spent away from Ranbir was mainly spent on thinking about him. She'd heard that every marriage has a Honeymoon period and then things go sour but she flt nothing like that in the past 8 months she spent with ranbir as husband and wife. The other 4 months didn't count as they both hated the sight of one another.

M-Kanya beti! R U Ok? U were miles away while. Kya baat hain?

K-Kuch nahim Mummiji! Mein to yuhi apni duniya main thi.

M-Main samaj gayi. Ranbir ke bare main soch rahi thi na. Tum dono ko saath dekhkar mujhe bohut chen ati hain. U 2 R great together. Kisi ka nazar na lage tum he. Yehi meri dua hain. Main kush hu ke tum dono ek doosre ko kitna pyar karte ho.

K-I am so blessed Muumiji. Mujhe ap jaise Saas mili. U know jo mujhe itni achi se samajthe ho. Ranbir is my life. Khabie maine sapne me nahi socha ke meri sasural aisi hogi. Apke saath jab hoti hu main meri Mamma ki yaad nahin aati.

M-Meria agar beti hoti to tumhari jaisi hoti but i am glad tum meri bahu banke aye meri Ranbir ke liye.

I-Ap Chachu ko itna pyar kyun karte hain? He's not all that U know! Ap khabie kisi aur Hero ke sapne nahin dekhte kya?

K-Trust me Ira jab tumhe pyar hogi tum kisi Mard ke bare main khabie socho ge nahin apne pyar ke alaava. Ranbir is the only Hero and Man in my Life.

E-Chachi U R so sweet. I hope i find love like U guys that it consumes my life but mujhe kaun pyar karegi. Look at me. Kitni moti hoon.

K-Eva U R perfect the way U R. There is someone made for everybody. Dekho na mujhe for example maine shuruwat main kisse pyar ki this. Tumhara bhaise but he wasn't the person i was meant for. Phir Ranbir came in the most ridiculous way that only happens in soaps on tv. But look at us Destiny has a way of getting U with your Soulmate. Ranbir is that one person. Dekhna when U least expect it u will find the one. Plus we love U for who U R and never get down or feel bad because every woman out there feels the same in different ways. Nobody is comfortable with the way they R even the perfect people have insecurities.

E-U mean that!

I-We love u the way U R Even Shanaya. Who is oo busy trying to impress Ayaan with jer crying.

S-I heard that. Tum log mere mazaak urathe ho. So mean. Main Mummy se kahungi! (Starts crying)

E-Please change the track Shanaya. Ur face will crack. U want bhaiya to Like U more na then please rhona band karo. Its a wonder bro hasn't gone mad yet but he's on the verge.

I-Chachi tum aj tori nervous dikh rahi ho!

K-No i'm not!

I-Bata do we won't tell.

K-Main Ranbir se........

I-Nice to know our company hasn't taken U away from thinking about Chachu. He is a lucky guy.

E-I bet he has a hard time getting away from U. Today he couldn't wait to get rid of all of us from the house.

K-I know! Ghar jake khabar lungi main. Woh bhi today.

M-Kanya U R looking so gorgeous with your hair streaked in highlights. Ranbir won't recognize U.

K-He better recognize me warna uski tho......

The women go to get massaged and then it's time to go home. Kanya all the way kept on having flashbacks of every moment she and Ranbir spent together. Each moment she couldn't help but smile. While at home everything was set.

R-Aditya bhaiya what do U think of this!

A-First class. Mujhe yakeen nahin U did all this by yourself. R U ok? (Feels Ranbir's temperature) U don't have a fever.

R-How can U forget what today is?

A-I was teasing U. Sab kuch badal gaya but tu mazaak ko mazaak nahin samajhtha. Kanya will be blown over. Ek dum filmy style ki hain but don't U think tujhe aeroplane main yeh banner main likha hone hain Kanya will U marry me?

R-Idea meri thi but itne short space main this is the best besides yeh sab karte hain. This is more special for me and Kanya.

There is just another 7 updates left and then i will finish this story for good.😳

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt update !
continue sooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 update!!
very cute!
plz continue sooN!
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that was a great update... pls continue soon
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aww y are u going to end this ff lol but i love the story and i can't wait for the next update =)
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Part 24

Recap-Ranbir is thinking of proposing to Kanya while Kanya has some good news to share with Ranbir. Both struggle how to tell the other. Kanya finally arrives with the family home.

Kanya steps into to the Nanda house and her eyes are fixated in everything around her. The house was done up nicely with rose petals all around. Every aspect in the decor was precise. Kanya wanted to know what was going on. Aditya bhaiya was beaming with excitement so she knew it was something good. She saw a trail of roses go up the stairs and thought what was all this? She started to go up while all the other family members were busy downstairs waiting. Malika couldn't helpit and nor could Eva, Ira so they all wnt following Kanya after she'd already stepped into their bedroom.

Kanya looked at their bedroom. This place looked like heaven. Candles all around the room and rose petals. The room smelt devine. Kanya looked towards the mirror Ranbir's back was all she could see. She sensed he was nervous so she ran straight to him and held him from the back. She could smell the Davidoff on him. She turned him around and looked at him looking so intense. She couldn't help it but just laugh. She also knew what day it was so had an inkling what all this was about.

R-Kanya tum has kyun rahi ho?

K-Tumhare expressions dekhe mujhe bohut hassi ajati hain.

R-Tum mujhpe hasrahi ho. fine.

K-Jaan tum aise hoge to kisi pe hasi ayegi. But yeh sab tum ne kiya?

R-Tumhe pasand nahin aya? (Looking a little worried creasing his forhead)

K-I love it. Its so beautiful. Main jaanti hoon tum mujhe bohut pyar karte ho. humari anniversary kal hain issi liye tum mujhe bahar bhej di. We could have spent the whole 2 days together.

R-It was worth it to see the look on your face but tumhari hasi ne mujhe thora dara diya.

K-Ranbir Nanda kisise dartha hain. Wonders never cease. At least i know mummiji ki alava tum kisise darte ho.

R-This is no joke Kanya. Tumhe aggar main ko du to main zinda nahin reh sakhtha.

K-Shut up Ranbir! (Puts her hand over his mouth) Tumhe kuch hone se pehle main marjaungi. Mujhe rulaneki bohut adat hogayi na.

R-Kanya. I've been trying to ask U in so many way in my head but i have no idea how to pop out with it. I love U.

K-I already know that roz hi kehte hain akele main zyada karte ho.

R-Tum apne ankhen band karo na? Actually i want to see your reaction. Kanya U know jo tarike se humari shaadi huwi i didn't like it. U know registration office main jaake.

K-Kya chahte ho Ranbir?

R-Main dobara shaadi karna chahti hu?

K-What? Tum mujhe chodke dobara shaadi karna chahte ho! i can't believe this. Aise kaise kar sakhte ho. kehte ho pyar karte ho mujhe se aur kisi aurke saath. (Really angry look)

R-Kanya tum bhol ti bohut ho. i want to marry U stupid!

K-I know that main mazaak kar rahi thi.

R-Not funny at all Kanya. Jaan hi leloge mera tab dekhte hain tum kiske saath mazaak karte ho. jao ab nahin kartha.

K-Ranbir zid mat karo. Tum jaante ho main aggar zidpe agayi main kaise hoti hu?

Ranbir bends down on one knee and gets the ring out for Kanya. Kanya is looking on ever so excitedly. Ranbir gets the ring out and extends his arm out. Kanya's eyes start welling up. This is the best day of her life after meeting Ranbir and falling for him that is. Ranbir looked at Kanya confused at why she was crying.

R-Don't U like the ring? Doore le ata hoon. Aur bhi 6 rings hain mera paas. Aditya bhaiya ne kaha jobi ring main choose karunga tum usko pasand karoge. Tum yaha wait karo main leke ata hoon.

K-6 rings kitne bar propose karne ke iraada hain mere saand? Yeh khushi ki asu hain. Tum ek number bhuddu ho? propose bhi ki karna nahin ata?

R-Yeh propose kaise karte hain? Maine kitne picture ko dekha hain phir bhi right nahin hota!

K-Ranbir meri jawab nahin sunoge?

R-Let me get the other 6 rings uske baad. I don't intend to propose for another 100years.

K-Ranbir.

Kanya bends down to his level. She holds his head in her hand and says Yes giving him the biggest Kiss. Ranbir was floored. This woman had definitely got a lot of fire in her. The kiss was full of all the emotions Kanya was feeling. They broke the kiss off as soon as the door opened. They looked round and saw the nephews and nieces whistling away along with Ranbir's cousins and his Mom just had a big grin on her face.

A-Go Chachu. That was one Hot kiss.

R-Arth get lost warna marungi. Tum sab ki koi sharam hain bhi ya nahin. Kisike bedroom main aise ate hain kya! (Going all red)

I-Chachu i hope jab koi mujhe propose kare to ap jaise na kare. It was too hilarious.

K-Ira tum unki mazaak mat ura. Yeh mujhpe jati hain. Mummiji tum sab yeh jaante te.

M-Ha beti. Ranbir tujhe surprise dena chahtata. Woh bilkul apne Dad pe gaya hain.

R-Mum ap please stop it. Usne hain kaha na.

S-No wonder ap aur Chachi ke romance abhi bhi chalu hain. Kya style se ha kahi hain. Mamma aur Dad ko dekhte hain to lagtha hain ke woh ek doosre ke dushman hain.

M-Shlok ab tum jao hum sab ko shadi ki tayari karna hain. Ek din ki time limit hain. Is ghade ko kitne baar kaha sab kuch tere business ke tara planning kar. Suntan hain kya?

K-Mummiji ap Ranbir ko mat datiye.

Shanaya-Dekha Ayaan. Tum baat baatpe mujhe data te rehte ho aur rulate ho aur Kanya ko apni pati ka insult dekhnahi jaati. Tum aise kyun nahi ho sakhte?

Ayaan-Kyunki tum meri sar ka jate ho. tum kisi ki saath bhaag jate kyun nahin?.i'm happy for U guys. U deserve it.

Kanya thought it was best to leave it to the wedding night to tell Ranbir her good news. She wasn't sure he could take all the news standing up as he was already hyper. Big D came and took hold of Kanya. Pammi and Anand came by to take Kanya home. Ranbir looked a little off. He ran downstairs.

R-Ap log Kanya ko kaha le ja rahe hain?

B-Woh wapas ghar ja rahi hain.

R-KYA?

P-Jamai Raja. Uski dobara shadi apse ho rahi hain to it's bad luck to see the bride before the wedding na. U don't want your wedding to get waxed?

K-Mamma ki matlab hain jinxed.

P-Ha wahi beta. Ek din main kuch nahin hoga.

R-Pummy the Mummy ek din ek zamana hojatha hain. Ek decade main usse ada din nahin jati ussi na dekhe. Rehne dona.

K-Mamma woh pyarse keh rahe hain. Maan lo na.

P-Chup puttar. Tum dono ek din ke baad zindagi bar ek doosre ke saath rehna ok. Main to ja raha hoon.

R-Ok then shaadi cancelled. If i knew Kanya mere saath nahin rahegi then yeh stupid idea khabie nahin ata. Yeh sab Aditya bhaiya ki dosh hain.

AB-Ab maine kya kiya?

K-Ranbir main bhi jana nahin chahti but tumhe kale k good news dene ki promise karthi hoon. Aur tumhe ek badiya kiss dungi. Ok.

R-Fine.

K-Ranbir dekho meri taraf. There is technically less than a day. Bye babe.

Ranbir gives Kanya a great big kiss and they head their separate ways.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
haila! how romantic! 😳
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aw... how sweet...
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OOO CONtinue soon brill so far!

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