FF-Back 2 the Nandas The End Final pt30 p

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ixray

@ixray

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Posted: 17 years ago

#121

what archita is pregnant with ranbirs child??? how heart breaking for all three of them.i personally don't like stories where partners are unfaithful to each other so this turn in your story is,in my opinion again going the ghisa pita route again, there are plenty of soaps for that.

nevertheless your writing is superb.

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Ria

@*Angelic Ria*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#122

Hey great Part!
Please continue soon.

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#123

Part 21

Recap-Archie goes back to London. Rewa and Astha team up to take down Kanya and Ranbir.

Two months later it's Chunnu that is leaving but this time there is no party. Kanya is totally missing Archie. Rewa started asking all kinds of questions and digs at Kanya about Archie. Kanya had told Rewa to mind her own business. She liked Archie towards the end. Ranbir also started to like Chunnu and already the guy is leaving them. All this time they'd wasted when they all could have been adults and got on had fun if they didn't behave like children. Well all that was in the past now. They had to look to the future. Both guys bonded real quick after of course getting rid of their misunderstandings.

In those two Months Ranbir made a great friend in Chunnu. He loved him almost like a brother. The guy was actually fun and not the least bit annoying like he used to find him. Kanya and Chunnu shared a special bond and he respected that. Ranbir couldn't help fee a little jealous but Kanya had made sure that Ranbir was involved in anything Chunnu did with Kanya. Ranbir also decided that he'd venture in a new business with Chunnu. That way he had a reason to go to America. The business would be based on Shampoo and the model would be Ranbir. Kanya had insisted on it. But it didn't take much convincing as Kanya had learnt fast on how to get her way with Ranbir. She'd become master at how to deal with Ranbir. She had him round her little finger.

Kanya hugs Chunnu and can't believe he was going. He'd been there for her in the past and felt like a part of her was going. Her childhood friend. She was crying now. Remembering everything back. Ranbir looked a little worried. He was thinking what if she realised she really has feelings for Chunnu now that he was leaving. He felt insecure and he hated feeling like that.

K-Ranbir don't look like that. Suit nahin kartha tumhe.

R-Kaise nahin dikho mein. Tum rohti ja rahiho.

K-Meri friend jara ha hain. America mein aur tum. Archie to use kitne mahine ho gayi hain. Sab ja rahe hain. I feel bad na because of everything we did.

R-To hum akhri baar unhe nahin dekenge. Honeymoon pe humain jaana hain ki nahin. Destination jaha tum chaho.

C-Ha Kanya America mein tum dono ko ghumane le jaunga. Kitna beautiful country hain. Tumhe sab tourist places leke dikha unga. Tu roti bohut hain. Jabse dekhta hoon rohti jaati hain.

K-Tum dono mujhe bohut satate ho. Ranbir mujhe jalatha hain aur tum mujhe chira the ho.

C-Ranbir dobara iske ankhon mein asu nahin dikhne jaye. Aur tum please yaar use jalana mat. Agar woh tumhe jalane lagi to tum gaye kaam se,

R-I know woh pehli se mujhe bohut tang kar chuki hain. Tum dobara use dekh paoge. This time mein tum dono ko tang nahin karunga. Jitna ek doosre ke saath rehna chahte ho reh sakhte ho. I won't be in your way.

K-Don't U dare Ranbir. Jaha mein hoon waha tum. I will hold u to taking me on my honeymoon to America. O don't forget tumhara modelling shuru hone wali hain. I can't wait for the debut.

R-Pehle bechare ko jaane do. Use miss karne ki kuch samay do. Baad mein hum use milne ayenge.

K-OK. Done. U really know how to make me smile. Chunnu tum apna kayal rakhna aur phone karte rehna. Waha jaane par hume bhool na mat.

C-I don't think waha jaake tumhe bhoolunga main. Especially U Ranbir. Stay happy guys and don't let anybody get in the way of U both.

R-Take care bro!

C-Do U guys want me to say anything to Archie. I will be seeing her pretty soon. As i want to make a stop over in London.

K-Tell her we R missing her a lot. Also tell her that she needs to call us. She's not been answering our calls lately. Ranbir bhi uske saat gussa hain. She called us the first month and the calls eventually stopped coming.

C-Keh dunga. Ranbir buddy next time yaad rakhna. Humara business plan. Bohut mehnat ki hain. Woh ladkiya already select karna hain aur phir we can start mass production.aren't u excited.

R-Very. Till next time.

C-Yeah bro. Kanya Ranbir ka kayal rakhna aur uske balon ka bhi worth millions. Take care of each other. Till then Alvida.

With that Chunnu leaves for England to see Archie while Ranbir and Kanya look at each other.

K-Zyada excited hone ki zaroori nahin. I will be watching u with those girls aur Chunnu ko bhi bolungi mein.

R-What? Ladkiyon ko Chunnu select kar raha hain not me. Gussa kyun hoti ho?

K-Gussa my foot. Zyada hasna mat. I'm not laughing.

R-Chunnu kit ho. Kya laga ke gaya hain. I love u na.

K-Ya so U say now. Aggar aur koi humare beech ayi tho mein mar dalonga thumhe.

R-U look so cute.

K-Makhan lagane ki koi zaroori nahin.

R-Kya rang nikal rahe tumhare galo pe. Mein to abhi mar jao haste haste.

K-Mare tumhare dushman Ranbir. I am missing them. Bored ho jaungi. Tum to tumhare business aur phir mujhe. At least mein un sab ke saath thi ab kya karungi mein.

R-Abhi bhi mere paas thori samay hain. We'll spend it in our room. Then maybe we can discuss tumhara future mere zindagi main. Kya kayal hain?

K-I like your style of thinking. Mere future to tumme hain.

R-Aur mere tumme. Business karoge mere saath.

K-Dekhte hain. Pehle bedroom mein phir office mein.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago

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unpredictable91

@unpredictable91

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Posted: 17 years ago

#124

hehehe
it was short but great part continue soon 😃

Edited by unpredictable91 - 17 years ago

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Fatemah

@KC294

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#125

i loved it...
pls continue sooon

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Saba

@stars_shine*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#126

gr8 update! wonder wut happend to archie? anyways gr8 update!! plz continue soon!!!!

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salma

@Sallu-

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#127

👏 👏 it was brill!

continue sooon!

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#128

Part 22

Recap-Ranbir and Chunnu make a joint project for the US as Ranbir plans to expand his business worldwide. Kanya starts getting bored. Chunnu leaves to go back to America.

Kanya and Ranbir are in the bedroom having a long making out session. Ever since they both confessed to their love for each other its as if they can't get enough of each other. Whenever the other is away even if it's for half a day. Nights weren't enough. Days weren't long enough. Ranbir couldn't get out of work commitments. The thought of being away from each other was too much for Kanya and the boredom of being stuck in the house all day with Shanaya and the sister-in-laws was all she could hack. They were all too annoying. For some reason she found it upsetting being around Shanaya. Mainly because she felt for the poor girl. If only she could be happy like her. She knew how it felt when your love wasn't reciprocated. She knew Ayaan was weak and Shanaya was only young like her.
Ranbir decided that he would take Kanya out to dinner. He knew she wasn't the same after Chunnu had left. It had been another month and they just seemed to be flying past. She tried to hang out with Pooja but she had work. Kanya told Ranbir she'd go to work with him to see how he works but mainly to be near him. He reluctantly agreed for the fact he knew she'd be a huge distraction but it would be worth it if she was with him. Kanya asked Malika and she told Kanya it was ok for them. So Ranbir drove Kanya in his car. He'd decided to give the driver the day off with full pay.

R-So Mrs Nanda. We have finally arrived in one of the most infamous offices. Can i take your coat?

K-Ranbir. Shut up! Mere pyare saand. So cute lagte ho par U R not my gulam. Or my servant.

R-4 U I'll gladly be whatever U want me to be.

K-Ranbir this is the first time i will be working alongside you. Do U know how excited i am.

R-I can imagine. R u sure tum bored nahin hoge. Look at this place khabie kaam khatam nahin hota. Not very romantic place to be in.

K-Ranbir jaha tum waha mein. Ghar mein bethe bethe meri dimaak pak gaye. Mom mujhe ghar mein kuch karne nahin deti. Shanaya roz mujhe annoy karthi hain uski rohne se. Rewa aur Astha ko tum jaante hain. Baat baat par woh mujhe roka karte hain.

R-I know i told U let me handle them. If they so much as hurt U i'll kick them out of the house.

K-Ranbir meri jaan i don't need U to fight my battles for me. I can defend myself. Let me handle this my way. Jaanu u R so cute when U R so macho. My knight in shining armour. Now office chalo. Dekhte hain janab sach much itna kaam karte hain ya phir yeh ek bahana hain.

R-Mujpe yakeen nahin?

K-Tumpe hain par doosrope nahin.

They go past the hallway and everybody gets up to greet them. Ranbir shows Kanya where to go and gives her a pile of files to go through just to keep her busy.

R-Ab dekhte hain tum kaam karsakhte ho apni akalki saath or R U just all looks.

K-I can't believe U said that. Take it back.

R-Make me.

K-Ranbir. Marungi mein.

R-Office mein i'm untouchable. Cho ke to dekho.

K-Can't i sit with U?

R-Kyun? Mujhe kaam karne nahin deoge. That much i can guarantee. Pehle yeh karo baad mein dekhte hain tumme kitna dum hain.

K-Mujhse challenge kar rahe ho?

R-Ha! Take it however u want.

K-Har jaoge.

R-Dekhlenge. Yeh kaam sabhke liye nahin.

K-Inaam mein kya milegi mujhe.

R-Jo tum chaho.

K-U won't be able to say no.

R-If i have it in me i will ive it.

Kanya gets to work straight away. She goes through all the files in record time mainly so that Ranbir would be with her in his office. Before Kanya entered the room she saw Ranbir's secretary next to him. She was touching Ranbir's hand. She also seemed to want something that Ranbir didn't want to give her. Ranbir looked a little surprised to see her. He checked through all the files while Kanya was glaring at him. Ranbir didn't know what got in her. He let her stay in with him.

K-So who was she?

R-Who was who?

K-Us ladki ki jiski haath tumne pakadke rakhe.

R-She's Seema the secretary. She was wondering if she could have some time off.

K-So tumne kya kaha?

R-I told her we R busy. Tumhe kya hogaya hain.

K-U just looked a little too comfy.

R-Jaan U R the only one for me get that.

K-I don't like U being so close with them. I wanted to be here not over there. The whole idea was so that i could be near U.

R-Kya karoge? Ab to tum shart jeet gaye. U can ask anything and it will be yours.

K-When the times right i will ask. Maybe even for a new partner.tum bohut bure aur boring ho.

R-Acha to yeh baat hain. Maam mere saath khush nahin. Fine dinner pe tumhe nahin le jaata.

K-Ranbir. U never take me seriously.

R-Kanya babes. Tumhari face hi kuch aisi hain.

K-Choot. Tumne raat mein aur kuch kaha tha. Aur ab kuch. Fine dekh loongi tumhe gharpe. Saari raat tum pachtoage.

R-KANYA! Is this what U wanted.

Ranbir turns Kanya around fast and gives her a kiss. Kanya at first tries to get away as she was mad at him but then gives in. She starts responding faster.

R-I told U tum mere liye distraction ho.

K-Kya karoge. Mein mast cheez jo hu.

R-True. Par aur bhi aise mast cheez yahi kahi pe hain.

K-Ha par deewane meri bhi bohut hain par dil to kisi ghade ko de beti hoon.

R-Haseeno bhi bohut hain par tum jaisi jangli billi ko dedi hain.

K-Perfect match.

R-Oh yeah. Chunnu ne phone ki hai. Mainly about hamare business venture ke liye. We R going to America in the coming months its allcoming together. Usne Archie ko mila. Before he could mention anything about her the phone line went dead. Something strange is going on there. U don't think those two hooked up?

K-No. She's too into you. But Chunnu is into her. That much i know. Can't wait to see him.

R-Who said i was going to take you.

K-Oh so be like that. Mein bhi dekhloongi. Like i will wait around for U. Either U take me with U. Or i leave forever. Tumse baat karna hi bekaar hain.

R-Baat baat par tum ladte kyun ho. Like i can ever leave U behind.

K-Ab aye na raaste pe.

They both leave home and get changed for dinner. Ranbir had more surprises for Kanya. Find out what it is?

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago