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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww cutre part plz write more s oon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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please dont tell me that the kid is ranbirs???...cant wait for the next part!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh i really feel sad for archie if she knew ranbir is never hers then why forced herself to get pregnant i guess the comming parts would make things clear 😊..u described the kiss very well 😳 i could visualise it 😳
i am going to india on 21st so wont be able to read ur updates 🤢
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 16

Recap-Kanya and Chunnu talk about the bet. Kanya and Archie race for Ranbir. With Kanya finally expressing the only way she could with a kiss to a shocked Ranbir. Archita plans to leave India back to London.

The day after the beach party Ranbir has many questions but even more miexed up than ever. He didn't want to make a scene but Kanya definitely took the wind out of him with that kiss that he could still feel on his lips. He was too busy with tending to Archie as she'd disappeared when the kiss happened and when he came to the vehicle she was fast asleep next to Chunnu leaving Ranbir to travel with Kanya in silence. He knew he had to confront her. He just felt weak. That was what Kanya did to him break all his defences leaving him vulnerable. He knew how Arche felt as that is the same way he felt. Ranbir slept in the study room as he didn't trust himself to be in the same room with Kanya. Who knew what they'd do? He made many mistakes in life but could he take this risk?

Kanya slept peacefully for the first time knowing full well that Ranbir would be hers and Archita can do nothing about it. She'd dreamt about Ranbir and it was all X-Rated which made her blush. She went downstairs where she saw Archie on the phone. She looked frail and almost like she could drop anytime. Part of Kanya felt a little bad. She knew Archie had feelings for Ranbir.

A-Hi, i would like to book a ticket for England, Heathrow Airport.....What? oh right. Ok then for tomorrow. Thank U. Bye.

K-So you're leaving us. U lost and leaving. Itna jaldi haar maangayi.

A-I have got what i came for in a way. My jobs done. Kanya look after Ranbir yeah. Please don't ever hurt him or i will hunt u down.

K-What? Why did u come here? All this time u have been nothing but a pain now why the sudden change of tone? U are definitely up to something. Come clean what are u about to throw at me now? I tell u there's nothing i can't handle. U wanted revenge. U said u will take Ranbir from me. As far as i know he's still here.


A-Look Kanya. I'm not in the mood for a fight. Please leave me alone just for today.

K-Like u did with me. Have u any idea how many sleepless nights i've had because of u. Scared that i'd lose Ranbir for good. I will not leave. Does Ranbir know u are leaving?

A-Don't tell him until tomorrow. I'm sorry for being so mean to u. I really am but.

K-More secrets. Is there even anything about u that isn't fake. U don't have the bottle do u? All this big talk. Well too bad today how does it feel to lose?


Ranbir comes down the stairs and could feel these two women were at it again. Can he get peace ever. He really needed to speak to Kanya and Archie. Both completely left him with a dilemma. He didn't trust Kanya. For all he knew this was all to get on Archies nerves and poor thing didn't look any better.

A-I'll leave u two alone. I need some fresh air like now. U two talk. Make sure u get your feeling out in the open. U guys have bottled too many things. Time to reveal all.

R-Archie i need to talk to...... (Archie was already gone)

K-Lets go upstairs. Where nobody will interfere.?

R-Are u sure? Thats advisable. We normally tear each others heads.

Kanya nods and both arrive to their bedroom. They finally talk to each other about last night.

K-Ranbir yesterday wasn't an impulse.

R-Out of the blue u kiss me just as Archie is about to. What is going on in that head of yours. Is it that Archie wants me but u hate her and u don't want us together. I mean it won't matter in some 9 months later. We'll be our separate way just like we planned.

K-Ranbir I Love U. I guess i always have in some way but this whole contract thing i tried to think of it clinically. So did Pooja and Shanta. I thought if there was a distance then we'd be fine. I thought i hated u to the core. It's not about Archie but about u.

R-Kanya did Pooja tell u about me and u just feel that if u use this then i would leave Archie?

K-Ranbir. Look into my eyes. Do i look like i am lying. Yes D told me everything but only after i revealed my true feelings. Trust me it took them for 6 just like it did me.

R-Since when?

K-Since Archie came. She was all over u. I couldn't handle it and u let her touch u. I wanted to torch her just for setting me on fire with jealousy. I was confused. I thought i Loved Ayaan but i was wrong that was some silly girl crush. Then Chunnu i never loved him in a lovers way but as a companion. He understands me so much and would marry me in a heartbeat if he knew the truth. Then i find out Archie knows about the contract and was openly flirting with u to the extent that she yold me her intention. Every time she touched u it cut deep in my heart. I know how u felt then. I know i was a total 🤬 . But i do luve u. I don't know how else to tell u. I know i've done and said unforgivable things in the past to u but if theres a chance for us i want us to be together in everyway. U are my soul Ranbir and i feel i'd die in an instant for u. Archie kept on threatening to take u away from me and i just. I was desperate and i couldn't say it in words so i did it the only way i felt i could show u. I've never been kissed and nor have i ever kissed anyone on the lips before. I couldn't give something so important like that to someone i didn't love.

Kanya was crying now. All these mixed feelings were just too explosive for her to deal with. Ranbir could actually see she meant every word and wasn't just saying them like he thought she was. What about Archie.

R-Kanya... I...don't know. I couldn't take this again being hurt. I .

K-Ranbir. Love is about risks no matter what. U are worth that and more. U are my life.

With that they kiss again and this time it goes on a lot longer. Ranbir could taste Kanyas tears. He kissed her eyes. Ranbir stopped the kiss as he knew she had to be told the truth about Archie and him. He didn't want it to come out by Archie. He had to see Archie but that would have to wait until later on. Kanya had a smile on her face. For the first time she was totally happy and hopeful.

A-Aditya bhaiya. I've done my job well. I am planning to leave tomorrow. I will say my goodbyes to the family tomorrow but i just wanted to warn u that i need my space.

AB-Archie i've seen plenty of movies to know that you love Ranbir a lot. I don't want any details but from the symptoms and what my wife went through with my two children. Are u pregnant?

A-Yes. But don't tell anyone. I'm 35 years old. Aditya bhai. I know that i can never love anyone like i do Ranbir and i don't want to be alone so i did the underhanded thing. London is big and crowded depending on where u go. Its also painful i've never gotten over him. Ranbir knows about us but not about the baby. That is how i want to keep it.

AB-I should never have called u. I knew u had feelings for him and that as a friend u have his best interest at heart.

A-Look bhaiya. The same thing might have happened if u got someone else. At least this way its a gurantee that Kanya will go for Ranbir. Please promise not to say anything to anyone. Secrets kill but this is for the good of everyone.

AB-If that is your wish but secrets always have a way of coming out.

Kanya comes out of her room downstairs and spots Aditya bhaiya with Archie. She gets curious and goes down and hides away.

AB-I promise Archie. But this is wrong. I'm glad u helped bring Kanya and Ranbir together. If u ever want to work in films let me know. I will tell Big D and she will finance the money for a film. U really are a great actress.

A-I just feel bad that i was so hurtful to Kanya. Poor girl. She got to see the part of me when i was vicious as a teen. I don't think she'll ever hurt Ranbir now. If she does i will be back in a hurry.

AB-U take care of yourself and if u ever need anything let me know. See u later on. Make sure u don't take the cowards way out without saying bye. Ranbir would never forgive u.

With that he leaves and Kanya enters the scene and gives Archie a scare.

A-Don't creep on people. What if something happened to me? I do want to live.Oh yeah what do u care. How long were u there?

K-I know everything how Aditya bhaiya sent u from London to do what?

A-If u know then fine. I came to bring u guys together. I'm not heartless. The only way to get u to notice Ranbir was if u got the same treatment u gave Ranbir unknowingly. If i cut your ego. Acted like a complete prat and openly expressed myself which wasn't hard as i love him anyway but he loves u. Kanya i am really sorry with my treatment of u. I've done some low things but sometimes u need to not just lose but gain something back. Plus Ranbir probably doesn't know about Aditya bhai sending me as i told him when he was drunk.

K-So all this revenge business was all an act.

A-Yes believe it or not. I am human and wanted Ranbir and maybe got more than i bargained but he belongs with u Kanya. You guys are made for each other. You guys are soul mates for sure. I apologize for being the biggest b***h. Forgive me if u can. I am actually a nice girl. I showed u the ugly side of me. The Nandas know the real me. So does Aditya bhaiya. He would never have trusted me with getting Ranbir with u if i was a complete 🤬 .

K-This has totally got me lost. So u never were going to split us up?

A-No. If Aditya bhaiya never called me up i would never be here. So am i forgiven?

K-I must admit if u never got in the way i don't think i would ever have realized my love for Ranbir and for that i thank u. As for being forgiven i think it works both ways. I will forgive u if u forgive me.

A-So i guess we are even Ranbir will have a heart attack if he sees us like this.

K-Too right he will.

A-Kanya theres something else but i can't tell u butu are the best and forgive Ranbir for kissing me and anything else. Most of the time he was drunk so wasn't aware of his actions.

K-U know what. This is the start of our relationship and from today onwards is where i will count Ranbir for everything he does. Its a clean start.

A-Good to hear. Friends.

K-Friends. So the first thing as a friend u should tell Ranbir u are leaving or at least postpone it for a week.

A-Sorry the sooner i leave the better. For me.

With that they both go out for the day and just enjoy their girly day out.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
wow dats awesome...archi is sho sweeeeeeeeeeeet plz update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I don't want Archie to have Ranbir's baby can't you make the plane that Archie takes crash or something killing her for good! šŸ¤”
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: simran1285

I don't want Archie to have Ranbir's baby can't you make the plane that Archie takes crash or something killing her for good! šŸ¤”



Hehehe Simran Di! (I'm calling you Di, cause your older than me)

Don't you think their should be some suspense, drama, conflict?
I believe their should! After all, their are alot of Ranya stories where their falling in love! I need more Drama! Anyways I want Kanya to find out! And do a 180 degree turn. Well, Can't wait for next update!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
wht a kool updat3e plz write more sooon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
aw so sweeeetttttttt....
pls continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
u update too quick dear 😳 😃are u having holidays..
archie is such a sweet heart 😳 i guess chunnu nd archie will make a great pair the confession as a kiss was lovely 😳 now waiting for rannu to express in words 😳
Edited by famy.kn - 17 years ago

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