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Posted: 17 years ago

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Don't you think their should be some suspense, drama, conflict?
I believe their should! After all, their are alot of Ranya stories where their falling in love! I need more Drama! Anyways I want Kanya to find out! And do a 180 degree turn. Well, Can't wait for next update!

Hi

I totally agree with you make it more dramatical,more conflict and more suspense.

Make Kanya suffer a bit more.šŸ˜†
Great Part!šŸ‘

So they are friends now.

Cool lets see for how long this friendship lasts.

Anyway Please continue soon.

Edited by *angel94* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 17

Recap-Kanya finally confesses her true feelings for Ranbir. Kanya and Archie become friends after their problems with one another is cleared.

Ranbir comes back to the Nanda house from work and gets the shock of his life. Archie and Kanya actually hand in hand looking at the clothes that he couls clearly see that they went shopping. Women he didn't understand them then and he still doesn't understand them. They change their colours so fast they might as well have split personality. Ranbir just looks on. Kanya and Archie look up at Ranbir and just burst out laughing looking at Ranbir's confusion. Ranbir gets annoyed.

R-Why the hell are you two laughing? I'm not that funny. Since when were you two so friendly. I thought u were both arch rival. Which way did u guys wake up?

A-Ranbir we have patched up our differences and decided that it wasn't worth getting too bothered by it.

R-Glad to see u guys have made up. Now u can leave me at peace. Both of u!

K-R U sure u want us to leave u alone. U have two women vying for your attention most guys would die for that.

R-Trust me i'm not most guys and i have had my share of women and see nothing but trouble.

A-Ranbir i wanted to tell u tomorrow but might not get the chance. I'm leaving first thing. Before i leave i want to see my best friend and the love of his life together. Share some time with me.

R-What you're leaving! So soon. I wanted to talk to u about some things. Important things.

A-I don't want to waste time on talk. Lets go out for dinner. This is my last night here. Lets make it memorable. A night never to forget.

K-Yeah Ranbir we should go. Do something special. Archie has had enough of parties. We can dress up in formal attire.

R-Whatever? U two have just made my head spin. I'm still having trouble standing up.

A-I thought Chunnu should also be there. After all i was rude to him. I don't want to leave with a bad note.

R-Whatever? Like u guys want. (Ranbir looks at Kanya to see her reaction to this. He then goes up and sees the suit that Archie had obviously bought him.she sure knew his taste and just smiled)

A-Just give him time Kanya. He's been hurt pretty badly and rejected. Trust me it really stings. It leaves a bad taste. Have u already told him about your feelings.

K-Yes but he doesn't believe me. He just looked like i knocked the wind out of him.

A-Today you need to let him know this is for keeps.


They both get dressed in their gowns and go to Nina's.
A posh Indian restaurant. Chunnu comes to pick Archie up as a sort of date. Ranbir comes down and looks at Kanya. She was burning his eyes. The red hot number she wore just seemed too much for him. Kanya liked the look on Ranbir's face.

K-How do i look Ranbir?


R-Sexy!!! Uhm I mean you are looking good. I guess this is to pick up some guys at the restaurant.

K-Ranbir. I did this for you. Only u.

R-Yeah right!

They arrive at the place. They eat their starter. Chunnu for once only spoke to Archie about their lives in their countries. Archie told him about London while he told her about his life in the US. Both decided that they would keep in touch just as friends. Ranbie and Kanya enjoyed their main meal which was Italian lobster with clams. While Archie just ate pasta as did Chunnu. For desert it was devils fool chocolate which everyone but Chunnu ate. They got up to dance with Ranbir taking Archie.

A-For old times sake.

The song playing in the background is Khanbie Alvid Na Kehna. Ranbir has a gentle grip on Archie.

R-What is this Archie. U haven't looked my way once. When did u make this plan to leave India so soon? Why?

A-Ranbir. It's time for me to move on. I am satisfied seeing u with Kanya. U need to be with her.

R-But it won't last. We are too different. I love u Archie.

A-And we will? I know u Ranbir. Probably feeling sorry for me! Poor Archie suffered enough. She has nobody. Kanya doesn't love u so as Archie loves u then i should be with the one i love. Archie's had a hard life. I don't deem myself weak that i will break. I never needed anyone before and i don't need a knight. I know u love me but only as a friend. Don't confuse yourself.

R-But it can grow.

A-Ranbir. If i am honest with u. I should never have even bothered coming to India but Aditya bhai said u needed help so i pushed Kanya so far that she had no choice but to confront her feelings and it's worked. She really loved u a lot. I know she's hurt u so much but u need to realise that before it's too late. Go tell her how u feel. No good her sister knowing. Tell her from your heart. Dil kol ke baat karo. She will not disappoint. In life what is love if u don't walk on dangerous grounds and take risks. This is what love is. Sometimes it's not what u expect and sometimes u get more than u bargain for. I wanted u true but if i am honest with u after seeing Kanya i can truly say she is the one made for you. Trust your feelings Ranbir. Don't let your fears dictate what u want or anyone tell u any different.

R-U really are a gem. The most rarest of them all.

A-I know. That is why i need to get away before i am trapped. I got a lot so do not feel bad for me Ranbir Nanda. Or u will get a slap. In here.

R-I love u Archie. U have opened my eyes. So i should just jump in there and reveal everything.

A-Yes. As do i more than anything u know but follow what is in there Bhuddu. U were slow on reading raw emotion back then i guess nothing changes. Kanya and i have had a chat and she kind of understands about anything foolish u might have done. But there are somethings that are best left unsaid. Whatever happened between us stays buried. Maybe with time but this is new she might never understand.

R-But shouldn't i come clean?

A-Look a woman can stand a lot of things but betrayal is not one. Besides it's not like it meant anything. U need to forget the past and start new. Let Kanya know this too. From now on everything u guys do is from a clean slate.

R-Fine. I might just omit. Nice suit by the way.

A-Kanya chose it. U R 1st class duffer. She already knows so much about u. Go dance with her. I have a long day ahead of me. Don't want to tire myself out.

Kanya and Ranbir have a dance but without saying anything but at the same time their eyes spoke more words than anything else. For the first time Kanya wasn't jealous. She almost felt like Archie was family and one of her friends not Ranbirs. She wanted Ranbir to hold her forever this way just gazing into her eyes. Maybe one day soon he will accept her in his heart for real and believe that they are really meant to be together forever. Destiny brought them together and destiny will find away to keep them together.

But how long can friendship or love last based on lies. Somebody should have told Ranbir that. Stay tuned for more.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
Anjali-K thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great Part.šŸ‘
Please continue soon. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was sooo gooooooooood!
please update sooooooooooon!
matwamango thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
i don't know if i can carry on writing this story. i feel like i'm not inspired by it. i had at all mapped out in my head but no inspiration. i'm thinking of ending it maybe after another 3 updates. 😔 So angry at myself. I normally have a stream of ideas but it seems a little boring Rankan getting together but i want them to experience love
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Posted: 17 years ago
AWW I LOVED IT IT WAS SSSO cute plz wrtie more soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update
plz continue soon!

you can end it if you want BUT you have to start another FF right away!!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow..it was fantastic, there is so much supsence now!!..I hopes there are cute scenes between Ranbir and Kanya after this..hint hint..haha..anyways great job..cant wait for the next update.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 18

Recap-All 4 go out to dinner at Nina's. Ranbir, Archie have a heart to heart where Ranbir decides to spill his real feelings for Kanya.

All 4 go home. Chunnu and Archie exchange numbers and he promises to drop by and visit Archie in London as does Archie. Ranbir and Kanya bid goodnight to Archie. Archie goes to her room and just crashes down on her bed and sleeps like theres no tomorrow. Kanya heads upstairs too but looks at Ranbir before she tries to enter her room. She is still walking and bangs into the door. Ranbir laughs feeling at ease for the first time. Kanya looks at him crossly and too starts laughing. Ranbir goes up to see if she is ok. He touches the side of her head and shakes his head.

R-Kanya tumhe dekh kar chalna chahiye. Kuch hojatha tho? Take care of yourself!

K-Why do u care Ranbir? Whay? After all i've done!

R-I care Kanya. A lot more than i thought was possible.

K-why?

Kanya looks shocked by his direct admission. Ranbir just smiles at her knowing full well what was going on in that head of hers.

K-Ranbir i really enjoyed myself with u. I wasn't threatened by Archie's presence for the first time. I just need to know where i stand. I know i have no right asking for anything from u Ranbir after all the things u have already done for us but if in anyway u feel that u have any feelings for me that is not hate let me know. I will always be waiting for u. Only u. Nobody has any hold over me but my heart is set on u. (Kanya gives Ranbir a kiss on Ranbir's lips) This kiss wasn't part of any dare.

Kanya goes in her room and is about to shut her door when Ranbir stops it with his hands. Kanya looks at him a little taken aback by his actions but she felt it must be positive if he did this. Ranbir looked at Kanya with respect for putting herself out there. He knew it took a lot as he felt the same when he told his feelings to Pooja. Ranbir entered their room which he deemed as Kanya's room as he used to sleep in the guest room. He shut it behind and held on Kanya trying to find the words. The right words to express himself.

R-Kanya. I. I. I find this a little difficult. God mujhe kya hogaya hain. I am never stuck on for something to say. Kanya dekho. I mean.

K-Ranbir take your time. Kya kehna chahte ho? (She holds Ranbir's hands.)

R-This isn't helping. U holding my hand. Your making me nervous!

K-Ranbir tell me what it is u want? U want me to hold u tighter?

Kanya smiles at Ranbir totally loving the fact that she is making the Ranbir Nanda nervous. Nobody made Ranbir this nervous but his Mom. She completely loved this about Ranbir. The fact that he loved his family so much. Ranbir was just amazed at Kanya for being so cheeky not that she wasn't already. Kanya just grabbed him and gave him a kiss on the mouth with full force. Ranbir wasn't at all ready for this. She knocked him over as he was totally out of sync with his body that turned to jelly and they both landed on the bed. Ranbir and Kanya look at each other.

R-I totally wasn't expecting that but here goes nothing. Kanya. I. Love. U. There i've said it. Who would have thought those 3 words were that difficult to say.

K-Phir se kaho? I didn't quite get what it is u said as it was too slow. (She's smiling so much.)

R-I know u are thoroughly enjoying this! Maine kaha mein tuse bohut pyar kartha hoon Chipkali. More than i thought it was humanly possible. U make me weak and strong as a person all at the same time. I've loved u ever since we went to your parents house maybe even when we first got married.i don't know but no woman has ever had this effect on me before u and i doubt any other woman will after u. I guess it took Chunnu to make me see my love for u. Kanya i've done some really stupid things but the thought of u with another man just killed me. I didn't know what to do and Archie.....

K-Mere pyare sanad tum batein bohut karte ho. I guess it took another person to make both of us ,mad for each other. I'm glad because now i can have my wicked way with u. I've been longing for this day for over a month and u will not spoil it. Kiss me ghende.

R-Kanya u are not listening. Mein aur Archie. We both spent.....

Kanya shuts his mouth with hers. They are seriously on cloud 9. Both of them can't stop themselves.kanya breaks free for a second to see Ranbir.

R-Look Kanya this is important. I did something stupid with Archie. I don't want this to affect us in the future. I have to tell u the truth even if its hard to say.

K-Tum aise nahin maano ge. Ranbir i forgive u as i know tum drunk te and when nashe me log hote hain they do stupid things. I forgive u. Archie's touched on this. From now on whatever happens is what counts as its from this day Ranbir and Kanya are going to see each other as husband and wife. If u carry on this way i will take it as an offense. Now kis me now before u spoil the mood.

R-But Kanya!

K-I see u don't find me one bit tempting!

R-U can tempt any man. Trust me i am stopping myself from pouncing on u and it very difficult this dress is just too much. I can't handle it.

K-Then don't handle it let it run wild. My sexy beast. I want u to show me all that passion that u have locked away.

R-KANYA! U R sure? I don't know if i can stop.

K-Who's asking u to stop. Ek dum first class ki duffer ho.now kiss me duffer before i look elsewhere. Kuch karoge ya phir jaati hoon ek naya lover doond ne ke liye. I'm sure it won't be hard.

R-KANYA! U R threatening Ranbir Nanda. Thats it. Now u've had it.

Ranbir grabs Kanya and kisses her with his all. The kiss was fast adn raw with so much passion. Kanya holding Ranbir's neck with her hands pulling him even closer towards her. Ranbir looked into Kanya's eyes and just knew this is what she wanted.ranbir took Kanya's dress off and Kanya blushed a little. Knaya tried to unbitton Ranbir's shirt but started ripping his shirt. Ranbir loved the fact she couldn't wait so he helped her. They both were so lost in each others arms.

U can guess what they did.

The next day Kanya woke up with the man she loved so much. Her Ranbir. Only her alone. Ranbir too woke up with a smile remembering their night. Kanya turned round and gave him the biggest kiss she could.

R-I see u still want more. Too bad. Archie is about to go early today. We need to get ready and give her a big send off as a family.

K-I will miss her.

R-Kanya about yesterday i was trying to tell u that....

Kanya covers Ranbirs mouth with her hand. She looks at him seriously.

K-Ranbir leave the past alone. If its done with and won't hurt anyone in the near future leave it alone. I have had it with secrets and to be honest even if u and Archie have been together in a passionate way it's in the past. I kind of knew. Don't spoil it. Lets see of Archie.

R-U really are special. U know that Kanya.

K-Keep saying that i might believe u. Come on.

Ranbir and Kanya shower together and get dressed. They come down hand in hand downstairs where all the family are waiting. Malika is so happy to see her sun with his trademark smile. Aditya looks at Ranbir and finally gets it. He goes to Ranbir.

Adi-R U guys together for real. U know as a real couple.

R-Yes bahiya. It took us a decade but we got there. I told her that i love her.

Adi-Wonders never seize Ranbir Nanda confesses his undying love. That should be made into a film itself. Movie super hit ho jata. Kanya how do u feel.

K-Bhaiya i really do love Ranbir. Jaan se bhi zyaada. I also know about Archie. So tumhe bolne ki koi zaroori nahin. Ranbir is my life and nobody else concerns me.


Adi-I'm glad for u Kanya. For the both of u.

Archie comes down looking really pale with her mobile in her hand talking to the secretary at the airport informing her that her flight is postponed to the evening. So the Nanda will have a party there to bid farewell to Archie.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was soo good and loved da hot scene ahr!!!
continue sooooooooooooooon!

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