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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
wow da tow parts were awesome!!
yeh i agree kc i want rankan scenes//but da ff is excellent!
sirecely please updaet soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
i lov archie in ur ff
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

I really want ranvir n kanya together now😭

hope that archie is not preggie, nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii more sad secnes yaar😭😆

can't wait for the next part😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
it was a mindblowing part 😳..now please unite rankan asap 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 15

Recap-Kanya and Archie are saved by Ranbir. Archie and Kanya challenge each other for the affection of Ranbir and who can win him.

It is nightfall all the family are near the fire and totally enjoying the nightlife. Everything is so romantic. Kanya and Archie don't leave sight of Ranbir. Both are eying him as if he were their prey and they the huntresses of the night. Arcie totally egging Kanya on. Chunnu just couldn't believe these two women were going gaga over a guy who didn't seem to be tothered by either of them but if he were to get involved tab aur bhi maza hayega. Ira had brought her portable cassette and played music. Romantic ballads mainly for the couples.

E-I wish i had a boyfriend tab mein zor se nachti. Chachu ap Kanya ki saath dance karo na.

I-I've notice tum dono pehle jase te waise nahin. Koi affair kya?

R-Ira mera dimaak mat kao please mood nahin.

E-Hum ap ke liye mood karvadiya hain. Mosam bhi achi hain aur yeh sama bhi. Scenery is perfect and music bhi hain.

C-Tum aggar nahin karoge to mein jati hoon Chutki ke paas.

R-Jana apne yaar ke pass. Mujhe koi farak nahin partha. Mujhe sirf meri Archie chahiye.

C-Par mujhe bhi tumhari Archie chahiye. Dono ke saath maza hi kuch aur hain.

Kanya looks at Ranbir. Very hurt by his comments about Archie. How could he like that vile woman who saw Ranbir as a challenge. He wanted Archie she knew because Chunnu was winding him up. She saw his love for her by the way he clenced his fists so tight. Ranbir could barely control his rage. It was getting too much. The first thing he did was walk away looking at Kanya. She saw the hurt in his eyes.

R-Jao tumhara dost tumhe nachne keliye bhularahi hain.

K-Hum dono ek saath nachenge na?

R-No mujhe Archie ke saath rehna hain. See u later. Ghar mein.

A-Ghar nahin jayenge Ranbir yaha rahenge. Ok. Ek saath. Ao mere saath nacho na.

Ranbir and Archie start dancing very romantically. The youngsters were a little surprised. Kanya was the hurt one now. What the hell was she to do to make Ranbir see that she loved him. Chunnu came to her and they started dancing. Ranbir looked her way once and then shut his eyes. He couldn't stand Chunnu's hand all over Kanya and grabbed Archie a little tight and eased his grip as soon as he realised what he was doing. Kanya thought he closed his eyes to just block everything but then saw that Ranbir opened his eyes for a brief moment. Chunnu had turned Kanya around and then was leaning in for what looked like a kiss. Kanya saw this and remembered the bet and gave the loudest slap right across Chunnu's cheek. Shlok and Arth rushed to Kanya and Ranbir just burst out laughing. Looks like Kanya didn't like the idea of Chunnu kissing her. Good at least he got what was coming to him.

A-Ranbir tumhe jana chahiye. Contract marriage hi sahi but woh biwi hain tumhari. Jao uske paas.

R-She's a big girl. Kitne baar use warn karne ki koshish ki magar suntha kaun hain mera. Ab sarne do dono ko. Tumhari tabiath kaise hain ab.

A-Fine. Thori sar dard kar rahi hain but other than that i am ok.

R-Wine lao. U might not notice it with a little sip.

A-No maine pina chor di hain. U know after that night. I decided not to ever drink again. For the next year. I want to stop partying.

R-I should follow your example. But it's hard. I feel that its my friend sometimes. But i love the fact tum mere pass ho. You're so good to me.

A-I know. Kya karu? Tum mein jo major study ki hain! Kash tum bhi meri likes aur dislikes itne ache se jaante to is museebat na athi hain.

Back at the party Chunnu goes after Kanya. To see what all that was about. He wasn't going to kiss her. She got the wrong impression of him. His best friend and he couldn't even play a practical joke without hurting her. He just wanted Ranbir to take action.

C-Chutki what was all that? Itna bara chata mujhe mara. Mein mazaak kar raha tha. Ranbir ko jalane keliye.. promise. Tumhara kasam.

K-You disgust me Chunnu. Mere ghar mein aag laga di hain tumne. Waise bhi humare beech thori bohut problems the but yo've made us drift so far away. Itna ghatiya mazaak. I'm married or did u not notice that?is this what our friendship means to you. Don't you dare touch me ever again. I'll scream so loud i swear i will hit you were it hurts.

C-Chutki. Dekh main khabie tera bura nahin chahunga. Trust me. Humara dosti ki kasam. I value you a lot. I don't know how things got so out of hand.

K-Chunnu don't call me Chutki because that is what my friend called me and you are no friend of mine. Tumne meri dil pe tes ponchayi hain. Itna ghanda mazaak. Tumne bet lagay. Do you know how cheap that makes me feel. Ranbir is my life. Aggar woh kisi aur ki ban jayegi tho mein zinda nahin reh sakhti. Mein mar jaungi sisak sisak ke. Tum kya chahte ho. Mein andar toot rahi hu.

Kanya started crying uncontrollably. Chunnu comforted Kanya and just let her cry for a few minutes.

C-To jana use bata. But you do forgive me na?Please Kanya. Mu mat moro. I like Archie a lot. I only see you as a friend. I could see the cracks in your relationship i just wanted to bring you close. Sachi.


K-U'r my best friend but mujhse thori door raho aur Ranbir ko satana mat. I need to deal with this and get him back at any cost.

Kanya goes back to where the rest of the gang were and saw Archies arms around Ranbir which pained her so much it was heartwrenching like someone tore her heart. Ranbir saw her arrive. Teary eyed. He wanted to go see what happened and make sure she was ok but Chunnu was there. He knew that from the look of their eyes that they had patched things up real fast. Looks like you can't beat a strong friendship. Archie turned Ranbir round as she knew who he was looking at. Archie showed Kanya her watch. It was nearly midnight and Archie was smiling so much.

A-Ranbir if i kiss you tum mujhse kuch kahoge to nahin?

R-This isn't the place Archie. My family are here.

A-Apne dost ko ek kiss nahin de sakhte. Ek kiss hi to manga hain maine. It's not like something we haven't done. Ya phir se remind karao.

R-I guess. Mom is used to us doing that anyway but private main karte na. I want to say something to you. Its important.

A-Kucch mat kaho. Just hold me.

Archie told Ranbir to close his eyes and he did. Archie was leaning in for the kiss in front of Kanya and the whole family. Kanya just ran as fast as she could and everyone stood up. Looking at what all the fuss was about. Archie was smiling and Ranbir just had his eyes closed waiting to be kissed. Kanya pulled Ranbir round and kissed him for the first time and put every emotion in. She took Ranbir by surprise that he opened his eyes and to his shock he saw Kanya doing what he thought was impossible. He thought he was dreaming all this and slowly the kiss developed its own pce and it became a little frantic and so passionate. They both had their soul into that one kiss that seemed eons in coming.


The youngsters Shlok, Ira, Eva, Arth, Ayaan and Shanaya were all whistling. They have seen their uncle like this for the first time. Malika too was alittle taken back but happy to see Her son and Kanya expressing their emotion. Rewa, Sidharth and Astha just rolled their eyes. Aditya was beaming and thought bringing Archie was the best thing he ever did. It worked.


Archie had done the impossible and got these together and was getting ready to leave. She had tears in her eyes. And hated her fate but she had done the right thing even though she was hurt inside. Ranbir never loved her the way he did Kanya. They belonged together like soulmates. She looked at her stomach.

A-Looks like its just you and me little one. Dad ko unka zindagi milgayi aur mujhe Ranbir ki nishani. I will love you so much that my pain will ease by you in me and you will love mamma back. Karegi na. Come on. Our job is done.hum wapas chale jaate hain. India is not for us. I can't see your Dad with anyone else but he is in safe hands. she will love him maybe more than i could ever. Love is sacrifice and at least meri paas tum ho. I can't wait to meet you.

Archita headed for the mobile with Chunnu. Both were smiling but Archie had sadness in her. She felt her stomach and just found a sense of peace.

C-Tum batein kisse kar rahe te.

A-Mere zindagi ke saath. U won't understand.

Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
gr8 update...n thnks for the long update!!
was rilli gud...cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
OMG Great part!
So she was pregnant!!
So is this last part??
Anyway great part, they finally confessed!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
😲 She's pregnant! Archita? She's a mixed character! First sacrifice and before revenge?

Anyways... Wat will happen when Ranbir finds out?
Continue Soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
wow dat was ACE

plz yaar update it sooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
aw i loved it...
pls continue soon

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