Rain:the ultimate..!!! Pg18 p. 8B

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esha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#91

cont soon plz
its really good

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hi guys extremely sorry. But I have exams in less than 3 weeks and then on top of that I was admitted in the hospital as I wasnt feeling well and I m extremely sick. Please try to understand!!
Extremely sorry!!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: **esha**
cont soon plz
its really good

Thank you!! I will asap!!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

no i mean u can tell if a frind is joking cant u?

lol..yeah ..i guess..
OMG! I love your siggy!!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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------------------------------------------------------------ ---------------------------------------Part 5:-
The next day.It's a sunday so there are no classes.All over the school you see students doing different activities , while the others have gone home as tomorrow the trip to Hawaii will begin. (they will go in air conditioned coaches.)

On the school ground ,by lunch time , you see many students doing different activities.
But then you see someone roaming around the sports field. Amongst many people, for the first time he is feeling lonely . There is something bothering that person...is it what he sees bothering him or what he hears bothering him????
You see his black eyes full of question. You see his face and it's Kavya.
Kavya: That one voice I've been treasuring all these years , that one voice still fresh in my memory , that one voice kept deep inside my heart,that one voice I've been finding for the past 3 years..That voice. When I find it..it belongs to someone my heart doesnt love. That voice which made that day the most beautiful day of my life...
------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------Flashback-------:-
You see a young guy driving while the rain is pouring!!
It's Kavya. Suddenly the car stops! He gets out and checks the car. After checking the car he kicks the tire indicating that that now he was on his own in this rain.
K: Oh god!
As soon as he said this he heard a loud bell. He turned around and saw a mandir. He ran towards it. The mandir was big with different section , like one for private pooja's , one for daily prayer and one for special occasions like Holi , Diwali etc. , one for wedding and alot more.
Kavya went into the section with for the daily prayers.As he was advancing he heard heard a melodious voice singing .He went closer to that voice but could only see the girls back was alot of rush.The girl had her head covered with her duppatta.As she was about to turn his cell rang.
Kavya looked at his cell.
K: Damn ...iss Laksh ko bhi abhi phone karna tha!!
He rejects Laksh's call.But she was already gone.
After that Kavya came to that mandir regularly for 2 weeks but that girl never came. Kavya forgot everything and put an effort in finding her.But the result were same ...she couldnt be found.
After many sleepless nights Kavya decided to let it go ..but she stayed in a corner of his heart and when ever a female would come on stage his heart would skip a beat , but when he would hear the voice he would be disappointed...
------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------- Flashback----------------------

He continued walking untill he wasnt tired. Then he sat under a tree. As he closed his eyes he saw a huge field with greenery everywhere. He opened his eyes and the the vision was gone.Then he closed his eyes again. And finally came to a conclusion.
K: I need time to decide!!

Then we the basketball court. The basket ball court has huge steel nets around it.(you know like in the Dill Mill Gaye court).We see boys and girls roaming , playingor sitting. In a corner you see a boy sitting with his hood on and his shades on too. The guy is making weird faces.
Just then a girl wearing a pink cashmere sweater and a capri comes.
G: Hi Laksh.
L: Kripa...where were you???
K: I was ..um..stuck with Mrs.Flinch .Dude like whats up with the get up man??
L: O (takes his glasses off)..I was just trying to hide from Josh .
K: Why...???
L: He saw us together and he was asking me and I told him that you were apologizing about your behaviour that day.
K: Ohh ok.
L: So was the plan dawg??
K: The plan is that we both get to exchange seats in the bus.
L: Alrite homie!
K: Can you please not talk like that?
L: Ok!So continue.
K: Yeah...yeah we exchage seats and hey whose sitting next to you??
L: Kavya.
K: Ok..well c'ya later g2g!
L: Later.

Josh who was waiting anxiously to talk to Aaliya after yesterday's incident was pacing here and there in his room.
J: Where is she?? He asks himself .
J: She will be with Kripa...hah! I will catch her during lunch

Anjali comes in the room and sees all the girls packing.She starts packing too. All the girls are lost in their own thoughts when the lunch bell rings .
Kt: Come on lets go.
Aa: Yeah.
And the other two just follow them.

In the lunch room (not the cafeteria), you see meals being served to students by ladies wearing aprons.
The girls sit down.
K: Spaghetti and pizza ...yumm!!!
An: I know......
Aa: OMG Anju! Stop drooling!
Kt: Oh..god Aaliya..keep it low and pass me that slice!
Aaliya sighs and passes the slice to Kt.
The boys soon enter. Josh tells the guys to follow him.He goes and sits opposite to the girls.
(The dininig tables are like the ones in Harry Potter get it??)
Angad and Kavya hesitate while Laksh casually sits beside Josh , smile at Kt and mouths "Hi" to her, she smiles back.
J: Hey KK!
K: Oh..hi.
J: These are my friends Laksh , Angad and Kavya. points to each of them.
K: Kt , Anjali , Aaliya!
Guys: Hi!
Girls: Hi!
J:..did u go meet mom and dad?
K: Nah ..as usual they wont hav- Hey!! That's mine.
Kripa takes the slice from Aaliya's hands.
Aa: God ppl!!... Torture me to death today!!!!
Kt: Huh?
An: If your talking about the morning incident it was Kt
Kt:...what me?? it was you...!
An: No way ..you were th-
Aa: Like I said torture me to death.
K: Oh come on Aali ...I mean why would we want to do that??? (hits her playfully).
Aaliya rolls her eyes and then concentrates on the brownie she was eating until she feels something tap her leg. She looks up to see what is going on and sees Josh smirking and caressing his lips.She gives him a cold glare.Josh is confused.
While on the other hand Anjali is checking Kavya out who was to busy eating .
An: Hmmm.... he is pretty good looking .. black hair , big black eyes, and that glow but he's a playboy , casanova , wonders if he has a heart.Oh god !! Why am I even thinking about him!!
Kripa and Angad were stealing glances of each other.
And Laksh ......*sigh* ..was thinking of the time they would spend in the bus , with a dreamy look on his face , and Kt was looking weirdly at Laksh's expressions.
Soon the bell rings and Kavya follows Anjali.
K: Hey...you listen.!!!!
Anjali thought she heard someone take her name.She looked sideways but when she saw no one was there, she just shrugged and continued.
K: Over here behind you!!
Anjali turned around and saw Kavya running towards her . She was shocked when he tried to stop but the next second crashed into Anjali , who was pinned to the wall with Kavya leaning on him.
A: Oh..god ..you!
K: Look I -
Voice-Mr.Kavya??
Kavya is annoyed: Yes mister . david??
M.D: Werent you supposed to be in detention five minutes earlier??
K: Look can I please have 5 minutes???
M.D: No...go to the detention room ...........now!!!!
K: Yes..sir .
And he walks off with Mr.David.
An: What did he want to talk about??

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Ok.. so sorry ..this is half the part but I m trying my best please forgive me and try to understand..thank you!!

Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago

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megha sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#96

take care and get well soon!!!! 😊 😊 😊
best of luck for ur exams
nice part

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sameira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#97

hey great part..continue son.. 👏

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257121

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Posted: 17 years ago

#98

yh we understand! gr8 part and lots of detail !

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 17 years ago

#99

stupid mr david-- bachcha apni setting karne ki koshish kar raha hai aur woh beech mein aa raha hain :P
lol-- nice part-- hope ur feelin better now !! and that everything is goin good :D

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#100

-----------------------------------------------------part 5B:
After an hour Kavya is free from detention , but couldnt find Anjali.
K: Damn it!! Where is she???
He looks out the window and notices its raining.
K: Hm..... its raining...wonder how we manage the trip tomorrow.
Then he goes to his room where there is no one so he logs in his MSN account and mails his parent.Then Angad and Laksh enter.
K: Oh ..hi guys!
L: Hi! Where ere you ?? You missed the best soccer match ever!!
K: I was in detention.
A: Too bad.
K: Not as bad as someone caught flirting.
A: Why are taking the-
L: You guys continue fighting I'll go shower!!!
He goes to his closet , takes the clothes and goes to the washroom!
A: Dude..Kavya pack my clothes for me will ya??
K: you asking or ordering?
A: asking.
K: O..ok then it's ok..!!
Then while packing Angad's clothes Kavya tells Angd , who is playing on his cell , how he hates it when people order him around and if he could kill them and blah blah blah for a good hour until Laksh comes out.
A: What were you doing in there for an hour??
L: What were you doing out here for an hour??
A: Dont try and change the subject!!
L: I was making sure I dont smell.
He flicks his unflickable hair and goes to keep his clothes in the laundry room.
Angad and Kavya look at each other and before they know it they are racing to go in the washroom and Angad goes first!!Then goes Kavya.
When Kavya comes out Angad , Laksh and Josh are there in the room.
J: Hi Kavya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
K: Hi , talk about over-enthusiasm. Didnt we meet in the morning like 4 hours ago??
J: I was just glad you were there. Please pack my clothes for me!
K: Man!!!
J: please!!!
K: Why do I always have to pack the clothes??
J: Fine dont!!!! Laksh meri jaan , lag ja kam pe.
Laksh stomps away and starts packing Josh's clothes.
K: Can u please pack my clothes too?
L: Alright enough...everybody pack your own stuff.
J: Kavya , u fool , look what you did..atleast he was packing my clothes.
K: But that's not fair even Angad didnt pack his clothes himself ...he made me pack his clothes , now someone else pack my clothes for me.
L:Shut up and pack your clothes Kavya , and if you packed Angad's clothes for him that's enough trouble for him he'll suffer later himself!!!
Then the guys start packing.
A: Kavya ..you idiot , you packed my dirty socks.
K: They were better than your "so called clean ones"!(".." they stand for air quotes...I just love air quotes :) !! )
A: And you misplaced your shirt in the bag.
K: Nah! I kept it there. I knew I wouldnt have space in my bag.
A: Shut up and add this to your junk!
He throws the shirt at Kavya who throws it at a huge pile of clothes and looks at it.
K: Hmmmm...now what??
K (carelessly) : O well!!
He shruggs his shoulders and picks up all the clothes in his hands and throws them in the bag and jumps on the bag and closes the zip.He puts his hands on his hips.
K: Pheeeww... I 'm done. Finally!!
L: Yeah...ummm... I can see that!!
A: Done ! I thought it would never end.
L: Me tooo...I 'm JUST glad!!
J: I'm getting out of here man you guys stink!
All three stare at each other and race to the washroom again!!!!
After joking , having fun and fooling around the guys come back to their rooms but cant sleep, so they decide to go down to the Tv room.
(ok let me make somethings a little clear ok? the TV rooms are for boys and girls both at any time with many comfy sofa's arm chairs and couches and a huge plasma tv with a dvd player and the room had 3 other normal sized tvs at the other sides of the room.
Kavya= Kv
Kripa=Kr
Kt=Kt
Aaliya=Aa
Angad=Ag(lol nyone studing the periodic table??)
Anjali=Aj
Josh=Josh
Laksh=L)
As soon as the enter they see Kt and Aaliya hugging each other in fear and chewing nails , while Kripa was on one side of the sofa covered witha blanket on her head moving back and forth and the other side of the sofa was covered with a separate blanket.
Kr: Not that room..no ..no dont open it..dont-
The guys close the door of the Tv room with a thud and all the girl scream.
Door: Thhuddd!
G: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As soon as the girls scream the blanket on the other side of the sofa on which Kripa was sitting fell down on the floor and out came a sleepy Anjali from it.
Aj: Huh? what? Did Bruce lee come already??
All the girls who were glaring at the guys look at her.
Girls: Who????
Aj: Ooo.. forget it. Why did you guys scream?? (annoyed)
Kt: It's all their fault !Points at the guys.
L: Excuse me??
Aa: not excused!! Why did you make that noise ??
Kr: yeah we thought it was happening in the movie.
J: Sorry , but we didnt want to wake up other students thats why we used our brains and closed the door.
Kr: What ever , get a life.
Kv:Exactly ..now girls can you please move away from the plasma Tv and watch this stupid movie on the other Tv.We have a game to catch.
Aj: Catch this .
Throws the pillow on him and the girls giggle.
Kavya throws the pillow back at Anjali.
Kv: hehehe ..very funny no girls??
Aa: I know..
Kv: I was being sarcastic.
Kr: Wow ! Boys actually know what that means.... !!
J: Shut up!!
Ag: Right and now please move ladies.
Kt: You go!
L: No you go.
Ag: Move already.
Kr: you move already .
Kv: God....you girls!!
Aj: Correction .. God...you guys!!
Aa: Come on girls just ignore them. They'll go away soon.
Kt: Hm.... smart.
Aj: how come I didnt think of it.
Kr: because the idea is smart.
Aa: yeah...I do the same with flies , I ignore them and they go away.
J: How dare you compare me to flies.
L: Us.
J: Yeah . How dare you compare us to flies.
Aa: Because I couldnt think of anything worse than flies at the moment.
J: What ever.
Kt: Alright girls..lets go or we'll be late tomorrow morning.
Aa: yeah lets go.
Kr: Who wants to stay when they are here any way...and please leave the sofa in such a state that other people can sit on it!
Aj: Bye..smellies!
L: Kavya I think she was talking to you.
A: Me too.
Kv: What!1 me but I-
J: Quit it lets just watch the match.
L: yeah!
A: yeah!
K: yeah!
And then the all go to their rooms to welcome the next morning and the trip!!!

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Alright thank you people for waiting!!
Do comment!!!!

Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago

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