Rain:the ultimate..!!! Pg18 p. 8B

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#101

Thanks everyone for the lovely comments and um... I'm not quoting cuz I just got aware of the "3 quote" rule so I'm just being cautious!!lol!
Nyways thanks alot everyone..really sweet of you guys!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#102

Thanks everyone for the lovely comments and um... I'm not quoting cuz I just got aware of the "3 quote" rule so I'm just being cautious!!lol!
Nyways thanks alot everyone..really sweet of you guys!

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sweetaddiction

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Posted: 17 years ago

#103

nicee--
cant wait for the trip !! :D

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Mona Khan

@lalala10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction
nicee--
cant wait for the trip !! :D

Hmm thanks.. I try to contiue as soon as possible.

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#105

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It was a cloudy day and the students were running here and there cuz in half an hour they were leaving and they still didnt have their breakfast.Now after breakfast they all are lined outside 5 buses.
When the teacher calls all the names the students get in. Kt is with Kripa and Anjali with Aaliya. Kt sits down but Kripa doesnt .
Kr: Sorry yaar! I have to talk to Kavya.
Kt: O..ok!
Kripa and Laksh exchange seats.
Aaliya sits down and so does Anjali.Now the seatings are like this.
Kt=Laksh
Kripa=Kavya
Anjali=Angad
Josh=Aaliya.
The starting 2 hours were enjoyable for everyone as they sat and sang songs. But then Mrs.Flinch came and made an announcement.
M.F: Attention everyone ! We will be stopping at a hotel at 6 'O' clock . And then , the next morning ,we will continue.
The bus on which our main characters were sitting was behind all the others. Everything was going smooth.
Josh was trying to get Aaliya's attention , who would just frown or roll her eyes.

As the bus came across a bump in the road and the bus disbalanced for a second , Kt fell on Laksh . Kt got lost in his raven black eyes as Laksh unlocked a hidden passion in her glowing eyes. Laksh moved his hands from her arms and kept them at her waist. Trying to figure out the colour of those eyes , he now moved one of his hands right beside her left eye and as she closed it ,weakened by his touch , he caressed it.But their sweet moment was disturbed by Laksh's cell phone ringing.Kt quickly moved to the window blushing from the happenings. Amazed by herself. While Laksh cursed under his breath awhen he saw the number and rolled his eyes , but soon smiled as he was in a good mood , amazing the people who he was smiling at him.
Kavya and Kripa kept on calling and messaging either Laksh or Josh. It was both of them calling Laksh ,when he was romancing with Kt , completely unaware of what he was doing. They did it just for fun because both knew how much he hated getting unneccassery calls on his cell , infact the whole school knew as once Laksh had thrown a fit in the cafeteria when Josh had his cell in his hiop pocket and he sat down due to which the button automatically pressed and dailled Laksh.But both were shocked when they saw him smile at them , shake his head and look away. But both of them didnt give up .
Kv: Now what??
Kr: lets disturb bhai!!
Then they both dailled Josh's cell phone number.
Josh after trying many times had goiven up and was quite disturbed by her behaviour so he kept his head on the window and closed his eyes , while Angad was peacefully sleeping besdie him. It was then when Josh's cell phone rang , Josh feeling miserable left it ringing untill Angad nudged him and tried to give him the cell phone which was in Angad's hand now and was still ringing! Josh opened his eyes and frowned when saw Angad with his cell i his hands and his hands stretched towards him. Josh moved his hands in the air with afrown on his face and kept his head back and on window and closed his eyes in a gesture telling him to leave it. Angad gave a weird look at Josh and frowned because it was due to him his sleep was disturbed. In a bad mood he picked Josh's cell .
A(annoyed) : Helllo??
Kayva heard a grumpy Angad and quickly moved the cell from his ear to Kripa's and kept it there.
Kr: Hello bhai? If you are mad then chill me and Kavya were just joking around.
A: What ever.
Kr: You???? Just tell bhai it was me ok? Bye.
Before he could continue she kept the phone down.
Angad was freaked out. " Kavya and Kripa ?? What ?? Why are they sitting together. O well ..who cares ..not me!" And he roughly fixed his pillow and decided to sleep again but not before looking back at Kavya and Kripa arguing.Then he just frowned and went to sleep dreaming about nothing.
While on the other hand Kripa was giving Kavya a peace of his mind. As soon she kept the phone down , she pinched Kavya on the arm and told him not to do that again. He apoloogized and he then they started having fun again.
Anjali and Aaliya were both playing thumb of war ,after Aaliya insisted on doing something as she was bored to Anjali who was listening to music. But both of them were pushed forward as the bus came to a stop and Mrs. Flinch told them to move inside the hotel.They both took their small back packs , as the luggage would be safe in the bus , got inside and waited for Kt and Kripa to come out.
Soon all the students were gathered in the hotel and were told to saty in rooms with their dorm room - roomates. After they all refreshed , the girls went to eat. Almost all the students were there. So the girls ordered their meal near the swimming pool.They sat down to eat an unhealthey meal consisting of a burger ,french fries , soda and ice-cream.
The boys had other plans. They were making plans of going to a night club near by. They all then decided to sneak as their permission wasnt granted.
After dinner the girls decided to visit a movie theator and they went as their permission was granted.
At 11 the girls and boys both left not knowing that only an hour later an ergent annoucement was made. The students were told that due to exterme weather condition there were land slides near the island and they had to return to the dorm. So they all left not knowing that theyw ere leaving behind 8 students .
When the girls returned they found it od that everyone went to sleep so early but ignored it and went to sleep.
When the boys returned Angad said he had to break up with his new Gf as he qould probably get another tommorrow.and he went to the receptionist to find out her room number but was shocked when she tols them that their school staff and students had already left. He ran to the other guys and told them. Then they all saw the manager , who after hearing what happened, told them to relax and that tomorrow morning he would fix a car for them to take them to their destinantion.They all agreed.
But the next morning the boys got the shock of their lives when they saw the Aaliya , Anjlai ,Kripa and Kt screaming at the manager and the manager trying to calm them down. Josh slapped his head and mumbled "oh no" , while Laksh heard Kavya say "oh yes!".
The guys walked towards the girls.
An: This is not done ... my pare-
Manager: Oo. look there are those guys , you can go with them.
The girls turn around and frown seeing all the boys smirking.
Kr: Just when I thought it couldnt get any worse!
J: Kripa !?
Kr: Alright..what ever ..we'll go with them.
Manager: Ok ..good now everyone listen.. we have managed to get a car for you and just tell the driver where you have to go.
Kt: To a harbour.
Man: ???
Aa: We need to go to Hawai. But ..we will need a boat too!
L: Dont worry ... I got my cell and my dad's number.
An: Wow! And that fits in the situation how???
Kv: Girls... I tell you!! We dail our fathers number and he talks to the sailor at the harbour and we take the boat to the harbour.
Kr: Ohhh....
While all of them were working things out Angad decided to just listen.
Finally after alot of arguments they all sit in the car.
(the car is big and all of them can fit in it ..just imagine please)
Josh sits in the front with the driver. Angad sits by the left window , Kavya beside him , beside Kavya is Anjali , beside Anjali is Kt sitting by the right window. Opposite to Kt is Laksh and opposite to Angad is Aaliya and between Laksh and Aaliya is Kripa.
All the girls have their back packs . After minutes of uncomfortable silence , Kavya asked Anjali if she had water. She turns red as everyone is looking at them as they are the only ones talking, and gives him the water bottle.
An: Please dont touch your lips with the bottle opening.
Kv: Then how do you suppose I drink it??
An: Keep it at a little ditance from your mouth and bend your face back .
Kavya followed her instruction but spilled the water all over himself. Everyone started laughing.
An: OMG!!! You dont know how to drink it this way??
Kv: Um.... no.
An: Fine just drink it the way you drink it.
Kavya winks at a confused Angad and drinks it properly , he could feel Anjali's sweet taste on the opening.He gives it back to Anjali.
An: You can have it.
Later when they all stop at a store for grabbing something to eat , the girls buy things from their own credit cards , and so do the guys. But when they all are about to sit it starts raining , and everyone runs quickly to the car and get in pushing each other. They dont see who is sitting with who. Aaliya gets in the backseat first and is now by the left window , beside her is Josh , beside him is Angad and Kripa is sitting by the right window. On their opposite Kt is sitting by the window, beside her is Laksh, beside him Anjali and on the other window is Kavya.
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Ok I know the part is small...really small but I tried my best and ummm.. hope you like it..
Do Comment Please!

Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago

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Mona Khan

@lalala10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: 26javey26
really good

Thank u😊!

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Kiran

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Posted: 17 years ago

#107

Great part.. you kind of left us at a cliff hanger! I wonder what will happen when they all realize who there sitting next to..

Waiting for the next part eagerly. I think kavya did that with the bottle on purpose, I like Kavya's character, he bring in the fun of the story. Angad was awfully quite in this part.. i wonder what he was thinking.. Continue soon! 😃

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Tahira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#108

gr8 part
kavya u sould learn drinking manners 😆
cant wait for more

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Mona Khan

@lalala10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#109

@ **esha** : thanks , i will continue soon 😊 !

@ kimmu :lol..thank u so much..! yeah well...he did do it on purpose. Yeah they will react in the next part! Thank u..u r funny and yeah I 'll reveal it in the next part! BTW I love ur username ..it's so funky and cute!

@ freaky_angel : thanks yaar!

@ cutie13 : aww thanks.. yeah he should! thanks i will try to continue soon!

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257121

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Posted: 17 years ago

#110

im eager to read da next prt cant wait!

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