Rain:the ultimate..!!! Pg18 p. 8B

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys .. hardly any of u must know me so i m moona , so i was starting a ff with 4 couples:
Angad-Kripa
Kavya-Anjali
Laksh-Kt
Josh-Aaliya
I hope you guys will like the introduction and encourage me.Please tell me what you guys really think of this FF and what can I do to improve it somehow.

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Rain: The ultimate love season..!!!!

Water can cause a light refreshing feeling inside you but at the same time it can fill horror in your hearts.
It can reavel to you its enjoyable side but doesnot think twice before welcoming you to its dreadful side.
It can soak you wet with fun filled drizzling and that cloudy weather but it can kill you with its storm.
The element making you welcoming love but the element making you regreting love as well.
However both of these sides of water related to rain .. the stormy rain or the joyous rain ....exactly like the two different sides of a person are connected to the heart... and both the heart and the rain are connected to the everlasting sensation of LOVE.

My story is about 8 teenagers .... this story revovles around them...

Here are my main characters:
***all the girls are roomates.....and all the boys are roomates..they live in dorms...all their parents are filthy rich and love them alot but dont have time for them thats why they are living in dorms ***

Angad Khanna: A big flirt changes girlfriends like clothes ... doesnt belive in love... loves partying but at the same time good at studies ... is the dude of the college and the captain of the basket ball.. best friends with Kavya , Lakshya and Josh.

Kavya Nanda: Flirt .. changes girlfriends but not as quickly as Angad.. he trys to know them more and see if they fill the requirements of his dream girl if they dont then he just passes time with them. Best friends with Lakshya , Angad and Josh. Average in studies

Lakshya Nanda: Kavya's twin. The clown of the four ...always makes people laugh.. is secretly in love with Kt even though he doesnt know her he goes to the libarry every thursday just to watch her reading and chewing her pencil... He knows Kripa very well as he met her @ her parents business house in a party once and he got to know KT's name from her.. even though know one knows his bestest best friend is Kripa and vice versa.Oh yeah and he is very naive and gulliable.

Josh Kapoor: A really sweet , kind , helpful guy who parties but doesnt smoke or any of that stuff but he does drink.Respects girls and is very good in studies......is the captain of the soccer team.Girls are attracted to him but he is waiting for his dream girl.Loves teasing girls ***that are his friends***but respects them ..loves his sis.Best friends with Angad , Lakshya and Kavya.

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*** The girls have a band called " Rythme".. each girl knows how to play every instrument and knows how to sing.
But each of them sings accorsding to their voice
Kripa- melodious voice-Love songs
Aaliya-emotional voice-Sad songs
Anjali-husky voice-rock songs
Kt-Happy and inspiring songs***

Kripa Kapoor: Known as KK .Understanding , caring and loving but shows her this side only when needed. Otherwise naughty and always messing arounds with her gang...hehe keeps on showing Lakshya that she is a better prankster than him. Best friends with Kt , Anjali , Aaliya and Lakshya.Good at studies.Belives in love.Very cute.Is the one with mixed qualities of her best friends(girls).Josh's sis!

Anjali Sharma: aka Anju is a tomboy but hot!! good in studies ..beats the beep out of guys who flirt with her..other than that very much like Kripa.Very naughty.Has serious attitude problems.

Aaliya Basu: named Aali by her friends .. very pretty , good in studies , naughty, guys give her attention and she loves it but has her morals and knows her culture.

Krishna Tulsi: aka Kt is very beautiful , sweet,kind,caring , innocent yet naughty , good in studies and is very much like the other girls..

*****All of them just graduated and are here for the first time... they know eachother cuz they were together in high skool and all of them are studing Science.They are already here for one month but still havent met.. even though they are in the class basically cuz the guys just hide in their seats in hope not to be seen by the teacher*****

One day on a trip to a tropical island .... name it Drenckland(it is completely fictional)... all 8 of them are lost in that tropical island in the rainy season and ............................................................ ........?????

Another thing I m a die hard AK fan 😳so I may give them a little more attention 😕but i'll try my best to do justice to each couple!!😊

Do comment please...

Edited by lalala10 - 16 years ago

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madhoo

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sounds very interesting. Please continue soon 😊

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: madhoo
Sounds very interesting. Please continue soon 😊

Thanks😳...I will 2morrow 😊......thanks again.

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sameira

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey great into.. can't wait to read more..continue soon 😊

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257121

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Posted: 17 years ago

yh great stry continue soon! 👏

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Manisha Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

This is very interesting.looking forward to the rest....great thinking................. 😃 😃

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Tahira

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Posted: 17 years ago

gr8 intro
i also love rainy season 😆 😉
cont season

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

Alrite here is the next part.. hope you guys like it.

PART1.

You see a huge room with 2 bunk beds (so the total no. of beds is 4), a huge stereo next to the Tv.Then u see 4 desks, one has books on it , the next one has a computer and Cds on it, the other one has magazines , jeweleries , make up and teddy bears on it , the last one has wrappers , notes scattered , and lots of photo frames on it.
The first desk belongs to Kt ,the one next to it to Kripa , then Aaliya's and finally the last one to our Anjali.

Suddenly the bell starts ringing and a voice comes from the speaker "each and every student to have breakfast and come in the main hall by the next hour and mister james arnold make sure you take a bath..!!"

As soon as the voice go out a girl sits up from the bottom of one of the bunk beds."Kya yaar ... itni subah subah utha diya ." The girl sleeping on the bed above her says "yaar anju tujhe tu sirf subah ko hi tang karti hain mujhe to sapne mein bhi haunt karti hain.. gaint!!" Then the first girl gets out and we see her face its Anjali.."chal abh uth......OMG shit ..shit ..yaar I didnt do the physics assignment Aali help me out please..!" Yes the other girl is Aaliya..."O ok ..its besides the jewelery , u can copy it" Anjali makes way to Aaliya's desk when Aaliya says "and dont throw my stuff ". Then u see a girl doing aarti and she sings in a really nice voice both Aali and Anju look at one another and smile.Then a girl comes out of the bathroom
G:Arre Kt ..thanks for making my bed .
KT: No problem Kripa .
In the mean while Anjali has copied Aaliya's assingment.
AN:thanks
AA:No prob
They freshen up and are ready to go when Kt remembers something:
KT: Wait .. tum log ye (u know the thing u give after pooja extremely sorry dont know what it's called) le lo.
All the girls eat it up .
K+Aa:I love you Kt
They both glare at each other.
Aa: Hey keep your hands off my girls.
K: You mean my girl
Aa: So you think she's your?
K: Ahan
Aaliya opened her mouth to reply but then saw Kt and Anjali leaving so she points her finger at Kripa and Kripa pretends she about to bite it.
Aa: Ahhh KK stop it yaar.
K: Aali u r such a meow meow.
Aa: You mean a cat.
K: Yup now lets go huns.

While this was happening on this side lets take a look at the other side.

As soon as the bell rings and the same message is given the guys whine ...not because they have to get up but because its an hour before they can go to the hall.
You see two guys sitting on a chair while the another one the one of the top bunk beds and all 3 of them are watching another boy who is rehearsing his lines.
The boy on the bed is watching the guy who is rehearsing with amusement thinking how brainless can any one get??, while one of two guys is hitting his head with some rolled papers which happens to be the script , while the third guy has his head in his hands.
The guy who was holding his head shoots his head up
G: First he sets the alarm 3 hours before the waking time and woke all of us up and now he's rehearsing and torturing us with his weird acts .
All of them are silent.
The guy on the bed: The aspirin is in the drawer.
G: Thanks.
The guy rehearsing continues and all start watching him and after 5 minutes he finishes.
The guy rehearsing: well ?
The guy who took an aspirin is now on the bed .He glares at him and says "Pathetic"
The guy rehearsing:What do u know .. You have no sense of creativity in you Angad.
Angad :What so ever dude .. what so ever.
The guy rehearsing asks the guy sitting on the chair: What do u say ?
Guy on chair: Hmmmm....what do I say ...?? WHAT DO I SAY!! For the past half an hour I have been telling you that you are speaking the girls dialogues but no you wont listen.

The guy on bed (not angad the one laying before him.): Calm down Kavya. Laksh , Kavya's right u r saying the girls line and dont over react you look like a drunk person classical dancing and if you move your bony body soo much then you will hit the female lead behind you which will be quite unwanted but if its that gaint ms.bronze then you will defitinally win the best actor....
L:Ok..if you say soo..
Silence again..
L: waise Josh...I always wanted to be a classical dancer...
K:Oh great ..here we go again
J: God shut up both of you1
A: Arre tum log aj un hot girls ko beach pe milne aa rahe ho na...??
K: Koun si wali??
A: yaar wahi jinhone kaha tha ke Thursday ko milna.
K:Arre haan.
The guy on the bed : Nahi yaar.
A:Come on yaar Josh .Iss bar tu chal.Plzz tune Kavya se uss din ka assignment bhi liya tha uss ki fees hai ye.
J:Ok...whatever.
L:Nahi main nahi aa sakta ..
K:kiun.
L:mood nahi hai. (how do I tell u guys mujhe 'USS' ko dekhne jaana hai aur phir apne buddy se bhi milna hai.)
A:chal na yaar.
After alot of persuading they force him to go with them.
L:Ok fine .I'll go.
Lakshya in his mind thinks: shit buddy will be waiting .I'll have to call her and inform her about this.Shit call bhi nahi lag rahi hai yaar. Ek tu ye KK bhi na her cell phone is practically attached to her ears all the time.

Then they all go down to the breakfast tables.While having his breakfast Laksh notices Kripa , Kt and her friends coming...he is just staring at KT.Then when KT goes to get the food item for the girls he notices Kripa smirking at him.
He gives her a You-will-never-change look.Then he in signs tried to tell Kripa that he wont be meeting her today but got interrupted by either of their friends.

The day went on and finally all classes were done.Kripa was waiting for him , but he never came she was really angry at him.While the guys were having fun all the girl were discussing what is the announcement going to be. The girls then started rehearsing.
Aaliya however couldnt concentrate.. all the 3 girls noticed this.
Finalyy when she gave up Anjali came and sat next to her.
An: Aali kia hua???
Aa:Woh......woh actually..
K: Kia woh woh.there is something bugging you and we can tell so come on tell us.
Kt: We wont force you but when you tell someone you feeling s your heart becomes lighter.
Aa: Kripa ....kia tum Josh ko janti ho??
K:Haan
Aa:To ..tumhare uske..tum usse kaise janti ho?
K: Mera bhai hai woh.
Aa: bhai???
K:haan bhai..kiun tum dono ke beech kuch?
Aaliya blushes before Kripa could finish.
K: (excited) really?
Kt: tune hume kiun nahi bataya?
An: haan yaar kia inta bhi trust nahi hai hum par???
Aa: Chill guys ... aisa kuch nahi hai bus kuch dino pehle uss ne mujse dosti karna chahi aur maine haan kar di ..uss ke bad hum dono ache dost ban gaye ...and i kinda like him...just a little ! And I saw you both hugging os I got a little hurt.
All the girls laugh.
K: I think he must like you too because he only talks to 4 girls around his age , me , my 3 cuzins from which two are married and one is engaged.
Aa:So you think he likes me??
K: No (jokingly)
Aa: huh?? widens her eyes in an innocent.
Anjali takes large strides towards Kripa and playfully folds up her sleeves"teasing my Aali..huh?" and she starts tickling her ...soon enough all 3 were tickling poor Kripa ..who started tickling Kt , who moved backwards and fell down with Aaliya and Anjali being the fighter she was got on top of both of them and started to playfully punch them. Kripa Came from behind and leaned on Anjlai who was too shocked and couldnt do anything just laughed and due to Kripa's pressure layed to the floor.Kt took the chance and started hitting Anjali with a pillow.Anjali returned Kt her kind gestures.Kt threw the pillow and it hit Aaliya who was on top of Kripa and was fooling around with her .When it hit Aaliya , she was pushed down due to the force and hit Kripa's head with hers. Both of them stood up and started chasing Kt then they reached the bed and started fighting near it. Anjali very quietly pushed all of them on the bed but Kripa was quick and grabbed Anjali with her.They all fell on the bed and started laughing their heads off.
Kripa: I love you guys.
Kt: Yeah..we are a happy family...
Aa: I love you
You love me
The others join her.
We are a happy family
With a huge wide hug and kiss from me to you
Wont you say you love me too.
They all laughed and all the four hugged.
When all were sleeping Kripa was murming .
K: I'll kill him.....itni mushkil se plan banya us majnoo ke liye aur woh chal diya .... woh tu mujhe best friend consider hi nahi karta ..main apni cuzin ki birthday party jaldi chor ke aai thi us ki waja se jab usko last minute test ki peparation chahiye thi.Main ne usse apna bhai mana aur woh chala diya !! Koi bat nahi..its ok ..not a problem.Bus ab main uss se baat nahi karongi.....urrghhhh who am I kidding main uss se baat kare baghair kaise reh sakti hoon???

While on the other side Laksh was feeling very guilt:
"Main ne ye acha nahi kia. Ussne meri kitni help ki hai 'USS' bare mein . Uss ke jaisa dost kabhi nahi mila aur na hi mille ga. Woh meri behen jaisi hai aur main ne us ko tang kia bus ab kal jab tak woh maaf na kare main kuch nahi khaoonga. Ye sab in logon ki ghalti hai likain ye bhi mere dost hain na akhir kar....O god agar wo naraz no ho aur jaldi man hay aur agar naraz ho tu kam se kam baat kare mujhse plzz."

In the same room someone else wasnt sleeping as well. When all were sleeping he faced the ceiling and smiled. "Goodnight Aaliya"It was Josh.

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Ok so I know Laksh and Kripa are very emotional and overly dramatic but there happens to be a reason for it.........
Do comment please

Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago

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megha sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

nice start and nice concept.
ak r my fav as well

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Awww thanks ..well u know I just edited this part so You can read it again if u want.. but thanks alot for the comment.
I know AK look so heavenly 2gether they both are completely opposite to each other and that is what spices things up!!

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