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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok here's the next part! Sorry for being um...absent?? lol!! Now I m free from exams ...!! I got wings to fly!! lol!!
Please forgive all spelling mistakes.
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Aaliya= Aa.
Angad= Ag.
Anjali= An.
Josh=J.
Kavya=Kv.
Kripa=Kr.


Aa: Omg!! My clothes are all wet.
J: You arent the only one.
Aa: Oh great .... I just had to sit here.
She sees the hurt in Josh's eyes but wrinkles her nose and looks out the window.

Anjali is really disturbed as Laksh keeps on shifting because he wants to look at Kt , who has her back facing Laksh and is trying to dry her hair. And when Kt looks out of the window , Laksh takes a 90 degree turn not bothering to look at Anjali , who is pushed by him and bumps right into Kavya . To save herself from falling further , she digs her hands in his shoulders, as he catches her by the waist. When she looks up she sees Kavya's head tilted back , his eyes closed ,strands of her wet hair on his face. She stared at his face as he smelled her hair. How could her heart actually skip a beat for someone she didnt even know??? She put her palm on his forehead and moved downwards , removing her hair from his eyes as he opened them. As they looked into each others eyes she moved her palm further down his face and when her hands reached his lips , she trembled and came back to reality and shifted in her seat. While Kavya stared at her and then smiling looked out the window . While Laksh and Kt were having fun , as Laksh made fun of people passing by and passed on his comments to her about the boards and signs.

As this was going on here , something was happening there too. After fighting the urge he finally gave in and decided to break the ice but as Angad turned he found himself staring at Kripa , who was looking outside at the rain in fascination , and finally moved closer to her and put his face behind her shoulders and inhaled her sweet fragnance as Kripa trembled feeling his hot breath on her shoulders.She recognized his touch , his breath , his scent and she found it weird .Angad opened the window a little , as Kripa looked at him with a pleasantly confused look. He smiled at her reassuringly looking into her eyes which magnetically attracted him towards them, as she returned him his passionate gaze. He then , not breaking the eye contact, took her feminine and petite hand in his manly one , cautious not to hurt the fragile nymph [( Horia ;) )] in front of him and then moved both their palms outside the window in the rain . Both of them diverted thier gaze from each others eyes and looked at their hands. The feeling of the warmth of each others hands in the cold rainwater was very intense but soft . The sound of their heart beats mixed with the sound of the rain revealed to them a melodious tune , the sweetest one ever , which only they could hear and enjoy . Angad then looked at Kripa and saw something mysterious , he wanted to ignore it but he couldnt because he could clearly see a glint of the pain she had veiled behind that smile. He then promised himself to talk to her about it later as for now , he knew that her smile was real ! Just as he started to smile, Kripa in expert moves moved her hands away from his , quickly filled her palm with water and splashed droplets of water on his face and laughed silently as he gasped .Angad then smiled and moved back on his seat. Kripa closed the window and giggled while taking a tissue paper out and handing it to him. He took the tissue from her and wiped his face with it .Then he moved closer to her. More closer , more closer , and kept on moving closer as Kripa stared at his face with fear,confusion and nervousness until she stuck between him and the window ,as Kripa got lost trying to read his face , he took her cell from her bag and quickly moved in his seat and started checking her pictures out.Kripa was shocked.
Kr: Hey stop it.....!
Ag: Stop what ??
Kr: Stop checking my pictures out.(tries to grab it from it agian and agian.)
Ag: Why?
Kr: Thats bad manners.
Ag: Babes , you have no idea how bad I am.(Kripa tries to grab it again but failed)
Kr: Shut Up! Dont call me babes and give that back.\par
Now the whole gang was watching them.
J: OOOO.... let me see.
Aa: No! Angad give it back .
Kv: No..dont give it to her before checking her contacts!!
An: Shut up Kavya!! And it's really not nice of you Angad!!
Kt: Ok..enough it's really nothing to fight about!!
L: Yeah..just give it back!!
After alot of chaos the driver finally spoke.
Driver: If you guys mind can I please concentrate???
J: Sorry.
Driver: It's ok.
Angad smirked and gave Kripa her cell phone back. As she snatched her cell phone giving him a glare and looked out of the window , he took his cell phone out and smiled at the photo he transferred from her cell to his.

Laksh was bored as Kt was listening to her Ipod. He finally asked her what she was listening to and she just handed him the Ipod and fell a sleep. Laksh was disappointed but he started watching videos on her Ipod. He looked at her unbelivably. How could she just hand him the Ipod and fall asleep. Just then Kt opened her eyes and started giggling. Her laughter increased when she saw his expression. Dispite his annoyance he smiled .Her laughter was music for his ears. Then Kt and Laksh started listening to songs and enjoyed each others company.
Anjali was disgusted at Kavya for constantly chewing or munching like an animal.
An: Oh God!!
And just then Kavya burped.
Josh and Aliya were ignoring each other
Kripa was messaging with someone who was constantly repling back as Angad was talking to Josh.

On the wet road , their car was the only one there. As they all lay in their seats with blanket covering them , the car stopped.
Driver: We are at the port!
They all get up and look outside , it was 1 in the day yet it was cloudy.
J: Thank you very much!
Driver: You are all welcome!
The driver soon leaves.
After alot of searching they finally find a suitable boat to take them to Hawai in a modern boat.The boat had one room and one bathroom in it.But the sailor refused to go as he had nuisiea . So they all combine their money and purchase the boat. The boys said that they knew how to sail a boat and Kripa was Josh's sister and had seen him sail so she confirmed the fact. After gossiping and talking for hours, the girls were bored and decided to eat something.
An: Lets go eat something.
Kt: Ok but where are the guys??
Kr: They are probably managing the sail and stuff.
Aa: Lets not talk about them while eating.
All the girls laugh and they go in the kitchen , each take a bag of chips and soda from the cupboard, and take out the sandwiches they purchased. Then they decide to eat outside. They go in the open area and sit down and eat ignoring the guys completely. Then after finishing lunch, the boys are drinking beer and the girls are making disgusted face at them.
Kv: I m going to get more...Anjali you want some??
An: No!!! Idiot!!
L: Oooooo.... somebody's mad!
An: I m not mad!
L: I meant the angry mad.
Anjali rolls her eyes.
An: I knew that and I meant the angry mad too!
L: Ok calm... calm woman calm!!!!
Kt stands up and looks around.
Kt: alright! So now where are we supposed to go??
Ag: Hawaii!!
Kt: Yes..thank you but I meant in directions!
J: um...east....ok ..the sailor said it would take 1 and a half day to reach there so we will be there by tommorrow evening.
Just as he said this Kavya came rushing out and informed them that he heard the forecast and they said that there's a storm coming this way .
Kv: And according to them it'll reach at this point by tonight.
J: oh ****!!! What the hell?
Ag: Alright..so.. first we need to calm down and think coolly . Now where's that map??
L: Here.
J: Ok..so if this map is correct than even if we sail the boat in full speed , we'll reach Hawaii by tommorow morning.
Kr: But then thats no use , it's already starting to drizzle.
J: yeah..!
L: How about we sail to this island..??
Ag: Nah! We would have to sail back a long way now.
Kv: Hmmm. How about we go back ??
J: We cant ...that'll be dangerous.. the tides are high and we are almost as away from it as we are from Hawai!! God!! We are sooo helpless.
Aa: Dont give up hope.
An: Ok..we cant go back , nor can we go to other islands , so unfortunately the best way happens to be going through the storm and reaching Hawaii as soon as possible.
Ag: Yeah... so what do we do?\par
Kv: I think we should fight the storm and go towards Hawaii.
J: yeah.
L: ok...so every one wear your life jackets and girls you go in.
An: No way ..we will stay here.
Kr: Yeah..we cant let you fuys out here alone.
J: God! Listen .. it can get dangerous.
Aa: Then you all should come inside with us.
Ag: But then who will manage the boat??
Kt: Exactly! Either we all go in or we all stay out. No other option.
Kv: Guys try to understand.
An: You try to understand we cant let you guys do all the tough work while we sit inside doing nothing.
J: Girls ..please dont add to the problems.
Aa: Oh..come on! We arent that useless.
Kt: Yeah..there must be something we can do.
L: No there isnt anything you can do and even if you sit outside then you would just sit and watch us.
Kr: That is enough for us....we will feel so guilty , we cant be safe unless you are.
Ag: There is nothing to feel guilty about..we dont mind and u guys are fighting over something completely useless.
Kr: Fine..then let us sit if it's "so useless"!!
J: stop being stubborn.
Kr: You are stubborn .
J: You.
Kr: You!!!
J:You!!
Kr:You!!
An: Oh God!!!!
Anjali stomps off to the back of the boat and Kavya follows her.
Kv: Anjali listen to me...it can get really dangerous.
An: And you guys will be in danger too. I m not that heartless Kavya.
Kv: I know what to do and when to do it ..ok? We have been doing this alot..while you guy arent used to it!!
An: Maybe we will get used to it .
Kv: Please...please dont make it hard for us.
Anjali didnt know why she did but she went inside, may be it was the authority in his voice or the plead in his eyes. What ever it was it felt right!

Where as Laksh talks to Kt.
L: Please try to understand... anything happens to any of you..we would feel miserable.
Kt: I understand but we will feel guilty too.
L: I m telling you there is nothing to feel guilty about , we will be happy to see you safe.
Kt: But-
L:please...
After a lot of insistence..Kt agrees.
Kt: Ok...but you take care..I.I mean you guys take care.

Ag: Kripa ..now I m getting annoyed ..why dont you understand??
Kr: I know what your going to say ! "It's dangerous ! You can get hurt and blah blah blah" .And what do you think you are that you wont get hurt?? A super hero or something??
Ag: Kripa !
He puts a hand on her shoulder.
Ag: We will be alright.
Kr: Any gurantee??
Ag: What do you think I like getting hurt..no but I cant let you guys be unsafe.
Kr: Well..I know how dangerous it is but still I CANT Let You Guys Be Unsafe Too... and trust me I have no intentions of getting hurt myself. It's either all of us in or all fo us go out!! And I will not let sit inside while you guys are outside under any circumstances!!!!!
Angad loses his temper and picks Kripa up and carries her to the room . Kripa shakes her legs and tries to push him but he was too strong to be effected. He puts her down when he enters the room and blocks the door.
Ag: You are very stubborn Kripa!! We'll message you on your cell phones if we need to !
And he leaves locking the door before Kripa can open it.
Kripa turns around and sees Kt pacing the room and Anjali resting her head on the pillow. She goes and throws herself on the sofa. Soon an angry Aaliya comes inside and Josh behind her .
J: And no smartness.
Aaliya sits down beside Kripa as Josh leaves.
Kr: What happened ??
Aa: Emotional Blackmailing.
An: Typical!!
Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
finally updated lol
it was worth the w8
loved it
updae soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank u both of you... here is the next part!Hope you enjoy it.

------------------------------------------------------------ --part 8A:


The next time Anjali opened her eyes , the sun was shining dimly but still it hurt her eyes. They werent used to so much light....was she sleeping for soo long??? It was then that she noticed her body ache. She turned to the side feeling too lazy to get up. As soon as she turned in hope of finding a pillow she found her head fall on the ground above something itchy and grainy. She opened her eyes , and saw herself on a place with sand. She got up. She turned when she heard a sound. The sound of water. It was indeed water she realized as she turned around and saw herself standing some yards away from the sea.What was happening?? Were they there?? Were the guys alright?? And why did everyone leave her stranded here?? God were they in trouble!! Suddenly she felt scared .... the island seemed deserted and the idea of her being alone on an island with no freaking clue where to go was not so delightful.Anjali ran a hand through her hair. She looked around and found no boat or house or shelter. The sun was killing her.She ran a hand through her hair but stopped half way when she heard the bush behind her ruffling. Scared she stayed still not wanting to face the thing. She heard it again but this time curiosity made her look at the bushes beside long palm trees. This time she saw it move as well. She quickly took a step back. But then she heard sounds like someone speaking or more like murmuring. She was observing the bush closely trying to make out the sound when she saw a man jump from the bushes and fall infront of her on the sand. The man looked up at her and screamed in surprise! It was Kavya. He got up scratching his body.
Kv:These insects I tell you!!
Anjali rolled her eyes.
An: Where are the others??
Kv: I have no idea!!
An:And how did I get on this island ??
Kv: Well I kinda started vomitting so I was in the washroom and then when I opened my eyes I was here so I have no clue!!!
An: Oh great!! Stuck clueless with this idiot!!
Kv: Oh hello madam !! Be grateful that I found you.
An: What were you doing here anyways???
Kv: I was roaming here and there in search of something to eat and I found you!! But theres no food here.
An: What about that coconut tree over there??
Kv: I m not climbing all the way up there.Lets go in the forest may be we'll find something to eat there??
Kavya started walking. He noticed Anjali not following him. Instead she was watching him. She seemed to be thinking.
Anjali didnt no what to do?? Why was he going somewhere else when the food was here?? And why was he so anxious about going in the forest with her?? Were his intentions right?? I part of her felt guilty for doubting him but the other part told her that he was mean. But it was her who was telling her heart not to trust him. She didnt want her heart to break if he did something!!!
Kv: Anjali..humm challen?? Ya phir iss tropical rain forest main snowfall ka intezaar karen???
An: God!! I am coming!! Just wondering what your intentions were?
Kv: Oh! You dont have to worry about that I'm not into girls like you....unless you want me to-
An: Yeah right!! Dream on man!!!
Kv: Awwwww... I know you dream about me and I really dont want to hurt your feelings but I'm not into you!!
An: Ewww... "dream" about you?? That would be more like a night mare!!
Kv: Oh come on Anjali ..by covering up you are just making it too obvious!!
An: Making what obvious??
Kv: That..you know..you like me!!
An: What!?!?!?! When did I say I like you??
Kv: Hah! You just did!
And they continued walking and fighting.

On the other hand Josh , Angad , Kripa and Aaliya were really worried for Kt, Laksh , Kavya and Anjali. They werent sure if they were together or separate , they didnt know how to find each one of them. Were they on this island and on top of that were they even safe?? Kripa just sat there holding her head trying to think of something, while Angad roamed here and there whereas Josh would stand still and make impatient sounds and as for Aaliya ...the poor girl couldnt think because of her constant sneezes!
Kr: How about we go over that mountain first .
J: Nah! I think we should search the forest first!!
Ag: I think that first we should and first find ourselves a shelter because the sun is about to set.
Aa: How do you-aaaccchhhhoooo- know that?
Ag: My solar calculator tells time !!
Kripa rolled her eyes!!
Kr: Great now watch him show off!!
Ag: I was just answering her question.
Kr: What ever!!
Josh told both of them to shut up when he saw Angad opening his mouth to reply back. It was finally decided to search for a shelter first. All four went on to find the shelter.

While at the same time of the same island somewhere else a worried Kt was sitting under a tree which was right infront of a mountain. Two hours ago she had woken up to see a concerned Laksh she was very thirsty and red. Laksh had immediately searched this place ,which was good as it provided shade, and went to get her some water from a lake near by. And just incase she needed it in the future , he took a rock and made a bowl like structure with it and went to get her water.This was the second time he went to get water and now Kt was feeling guilty. Now it had been two hours and he didnt return. Kt was worried.
Kt: It's all because of me.It's my fault!!
Kt grew worried so she went on to check if he was near the lake. She made her way through all the plants , creepers and trees and 15 minutes later arrived at the lake. There she didnt see Laksh she was freaking out now.She was about to turn but suddenly she thought of checking near the water falling downwards in a pond ( a waterfall u can say!). She went close to the edge and looked down , she didnt see him. She was relieved and worried. She turned and was about to go when-


Alright people I know this part is short 😔but I m trying my best . It's summer vacation and all my relatives are one by one landing at my house from the sky...so the next part will be done ASAP😊!! And um... a special treat for L-Kt fans in the next part😃!!So sorry!!
Do Comment!!
Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago
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This is soo embarrassing ...why do I always get soo less comments and views?? Lol! All I'm saying is that last time I only got two comments and maybe you guys dont like my work....see that is what I really want to know. Should I end this FF?? Please tell me. I know most of you must be on your vacations or must be still going to skool or having your exams!! I am seriously not getting so many comments which I take as a sign of not so good work!! So please do tell me should I continue or end it??
Confused Mona.
Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago
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wonderful part plz cont soon 👏
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Awesome part. Please continue soon...
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hey omg that was a lovley part u made everything seem so real! 😡 hey u dont even think about not continuing!!! plz carry on as u sed urself ppl have exmas lolz sorry for taking long b4 commenting!
luv u 😊
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Hi its awesome dear please conti soon .just finish all parts . 👏
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Note
Hi!! I m so sorry (especailly Horia) I like completely disappeared but now I m back and lets hope I dont disappear again.
Thanks for all your comments!! And again sorry!! I'll probably post the next part by tommorrow.
Cheers,<3
Mona
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---------------------------------------------------Part 8B:

Recap: The ship had wrecked on all of them were in different parts of the Island . Kavya and Anjali were together , Josh, Aaliya ,Kripa and Angad were together and L-Kt were together. Laklsh went to get Kt some water but didnt return. After waiting for 2 hours Kt went to search for him. (Heres a little bit of the paragraph from the previous update ):

Kt grew worried so she went on to check if he was near the lake. She made her way through all the plants , creepers and trees and 15 minutes later arrived at the lake. There she didnt see Laksh she was freaking out now.She was about to turn but suddenly she thought of checking near the water falling downwards in a pond ( a waterfall u can say!). She went close to the edge and looked down , she didnt see him. She was relieved and worried. She turned and was about to go when-

Continuation:

She turned and was about to go when her foot slipped and she could feel the gravity pulling her towards the water , feeling helpless she closed her eyes but instead found someone grab her hand.And in another second she was safe and on the ground. She looked up and saw a breathless Kavya and an exteremly frightned Anjali. Anjali quickly hugged Kt.

For a second Kt couldnt figure out what happened but when everything came back to her she hugged Anjali tightly and wouldnt let go.

A: Shhh..shhh.. it's ok! You are fine!!

Kt: L La-Laksh.

Kavya looked up when he heard Laksh.

Kv: Laksh? What Laksh? Was he with you.

Kt: Yes.

"Where is he ?" Kavya asked scared at the thought of is twin getting hurt.

Kt didnt answer as she didnt know where he was and she just hugged Anjali tighter.

Kavya got scraed he stared wide eyed at the water fall beneath. He suddenly got hyper.

He took Kt from Anjali's arms and shook her by the shoulders."Is he in there??" He said pointing at the water fall. "Is he?" . Kt still kept quiet.She just wanted to be alone. She was frusturated and Kavya continuosly asking her where Laksh was making her more scared. "Where is he?" Kavya shouted again.

"I DONT KNOW!! I DONT KNOW!! I do-dont kn-now!" She begin to cry. Kavya's eyes filled up too , not for the guilt of making Kt cry but because of the fear of losing his brother. Anjali slowly removed Kavya's hands from Kt and hugged her again. While hugging Kt , Anjali looked at Kavya . Her heart ached to see him cry and somewhere inside she had a clue why.

An hour later:- Kt , Kavya and Anjali were finding Laksh for a hour but he was no where in sight. Hungry and tired they rested for sometime and then Kavya got up to get soething to eat and told the girls to wait for him there. Anjali and Kt were silent. They sat like that for sometime and when Anjali opened her mouth to say something , both of them heard a scream. Kt recognized that voice and started to run towards the mountain.

A: Kt! Kt! Where are you going? Stop!

Kt: It's Laksh .. I've got to help him.

A: No we can seperate.. when Kavya comes we'll go with him.

Kt: No! You wait here. I have to help him.. it's my fault he got lost and the least i could do is help him!!

Kt left Anjali and started to climb the mountain. She heard another scream and it made the hair on her nape stand up ! She ran towards the top.And that was the last Anjali saw of her.

Kt followed the screams and reached an area with loads of trees.She finally found the person screaming and she was right it was Laksh that was screaming. He was holding his leg and it was bleeding.

Kt: Laksh!

She ran towards him. He diverted his attention towards her. "Kt?" he said. " What are you doing here and how did you find me?". Kt didnt answer him. All she saw was his bleeding leg. " How did you get hurt?" " I went to get water for you but I got lost and then I found this tree with Apples on it and decided to get it for you since you might be hungry but I fell when I was about to reach it!"

Kt's eyes filled up. But she knew she had to do more than jut crying. She riped his jeans to his kness and then took her scarf and tied it to his wound. All the time she had been doing this with a frown on her face made at herself. Laksh kept on staring at her.He was happy that he got this wound.

When Kt was done she sat beside him leaning on the tree. Laksh looked at her. She looked at him.

Kt: What now? (breaking the eye contact)

L: Lets go find somewhere to stay for a while.

Kt : But you are hurt.

L: It's nothing that big I can walk.

Laksh stood up before Kt could stop him.He walked for some distance when he begin to lose his balance. Kt quickly ran and grabbed his hand.

L: Thanks.

Kt: See! now sit down!

L: Ok!

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Ok! This the part and yeah well sorry again and hope who ever reads it likes it.The part is real short but still I tried my best.

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Edited by lalala10 - 16 years ago

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