FF about RN- In a diff. style (ud P35) - Page 23

Originally posted by: rituka7

update soon.........

updating in 5 min........😊

take care......
b bye......
keep smiling......
sheenu....😊

Originally posted by: coolsamthomas

update plsssssssssss 😡

oh i am sooo sorry dearr for keeping you wait for so long.......
updating in 5 min...
don't get angry stay happy shappy always.......
take care......
b bye......
keep smiling......
sheenu....😊

Originally posted by: yyyy

common update ..u can't leave it like this

oh i will surely update....... how can i leave my first fanfic in between......
i love it.... it's just that i was busy....... surely i won't leave it yaar...... i will definitely complete it......
take care......
b bye......
keep smiling......
sheenu....😊

I am soooooooooo sooooorrrrrryyyyyyyy friends……. *holding ears*……… such a big late latif I am…. I know most of you just want to kill me… but see if you kill me then who will update the fic…….. but still I really am sorry…… will be on time from now onwards pakka pakka…………now please forgive me and enjoy the update……

kiran kumar will play the role of Colonel Arjun Sahay (Navin's mentor and Raj's sir)….. sorry shaina for announcing it so late…… so sorry …………

PART 12

In the evening naina and dr. shalini were on their way to shalini's room when they met……..

Person: hey shalini………..

Shalini: oh hi dr. mishra……..

Ritu: hmm… lagta hai you are coming back from shopping (seeing so many bags in their hands)….

Naina: you are right dr. mishra…….. Shalini dragged me for shopping… (Smiling) she needs to prepare for the freshers ball……

Ritu: I see…. And what have you bought???

Shalini: you know ritu… I actually thought that I would make naina buy something… but in the mall exactly opposite happened… she made me buy so many things and didn't buy much for her……

Naina: oh come on shalini….. you were the one who appreciated almost all the things in the mall… I didn't like many thing except this dress so I didn't buy anything else……….

Ritu: may I see what have you bought???

Naina: ya… let's….

Shalini (interrupting naina): no way ritu….. It's a surprise…. You will get to see on the ball……..ok…..

Ritu: well ok (not looking that happy)…. So with whom are you going on the ball???

Shalini: hmm mine in surprise… you will get to know about him on the day itself….

Ritu: oh come on shalini you are keeping everything secret…. Ok fine.. And what about you naina. With whom are you going???

Before naina can answer….shalini answers….

Shalini: are you kidding ritu!!!... obviously she will go with capt. Rajveer… after all she is his wife……

Ritu: but he has promised me 1 week ago….

Shalini:…hmm… looks like you have to find a new partner for yourself… coz now he has to break that promise he made to you coz now he has to fulfill the another promise he had made to naina years ago……

Ritu: what promise????

Shalini: arrey the promise which he had made on his marriage… to be with naina always…

Before ritu can say something……

Shalini: arrey naina jaldi chalo ab…… we have to prepare for the fresher's ball….

Ritu: arghhh…. Dr. shalini you are coming in between my mission…. If you won't stop that then I have to make arrangements for you too………but the most important thing right now is to make naina away from my mission…… hmm… may be fresher's is the last day of your's on this earth naina……….

Smirking she made a call………..

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In the evening naina was sitting on the sofa and was reading some papers when…

Raj enters and saw naina deeply engrossed in some papers…

Raj: is anything serious naina???

Naina: hmm…. (looking at him) not related to you…. You don't have to worry about me……..

Raj was hurted by the statement but the as usual he doesn't say anything and sits beside her……..

Raj: these papers are from hospital. Aren't they???

Naina: I told you to keep away from my matters……

Raj: listen naina…. As long as you are in the academy you are my responsibility… I need to be aware of all your matters… I am your husband… well the world think so… now these papers…..

Naina: …. Are from hospital…fine if you want to know… these are regarding my job there… actually they accepted my request….

Raj: request??? Which request????

Naina: when I came over there yesterday I made a request to them that if I can't work as a full time faculty in KMA then at least allow me to work as part-time one and they allowed me… now I will help shalini in infirmary side by side I will take first year cadets training in morning…. They will call me in hospital only when they need me there…. I don't need to go there daily…..

Raj was happy hearing the news…. He was happy becoz he will be able to spend more time with her… will be able to see her for all of the day…. And she will be with him daily…

Raj: hmm…. Ok….

But he keeps sitting there…… naina was waiting for him to get up and go… but when he doesn't……

Naina (irritatingly): do you need anything else??? I told you everything……….

Raj: hmm…. Actually……..

Naina: now what??? you asked and I told you everything regarding my job… there is nothing that I haven't told you…….

Raj: there is naina… there is………..

Naina (getting confused): what are you talking about???

Raj: well I had listened you in afternoon……..well when you were talking to cadet gupta……..

Naina (getting nervous as well as): what????? how could you??? You spied on me…. You were listening to my conversation…….i was right about you… I can never trust you… yes I was right……..

Raj (getting angry as well): hold on naina…… just hold on……. I went there becoz I saw you running worridly after cadet gupta… I was concerned about you becoz i…… (he realized what it is that he was about to say)… well but you won't understand…. You always misunderstood me….always… you never ever tried to understand me… you have just accused me for everything that has happened... but what is the use to tell all this to you… you won't understand… I know you won't……. well i wasn't listening to your conversation until I heard navin's name….

Naina gets nervous as well as confused after listening to raj…. There is something… something in her heart that wants to believe raj…. Something was forcing her to believe her heart just for once…. But like always naina listened to her mind becoz she knows that her heart will say only one thing that raj is not the killer of her brother…… raj can never kill navin.. he can never broke naina's heart her trust…….he can't even think about breaking her heart…… but like always…

"Simi is not related to navin" naina tells raj…. But seeing raj's face she understood that she can't lie to him…..she can't… becoz of all her close ones he is the only one who understands her well… even after 3 years….

"I want the truth naina"raj says… "Just for once plz… believe me… it will help me in solving navin's case… To find the real person behind all this" raj requests " Plz naina…"

But naina keeps quiet…

Seeing this Raj finally says… "Naina I know that there was one girl who was working with navin before……well when he was trapped. Jailer raichand told us… please naina… it's for Navin. Maybe that girl knows something which can help us in our mission. And after listening to you and cadet gupta today I ………."

"Simi is the same girl" naina finally says……….

"But how is she related to navin?? And she was working with him as far as I know so she should be an army official but she is here in KMA for training" raj asked her "and she loved navin????"…

"Fine let me call simi here first" naina says "she will tell you the every thing…."

And naina asks an orderly to get cadet gupta in rajveer's room……

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Simi and pooja were on their way to their room because it was already 9:30pm and lights were going to be out in just 30 min…

"Cadet Gupta Capt. Naina singh shekhawat is calling you in her room" orderly tells simi and walks away…..

"Oye ye miss call tujhe kya msg deke chala gaya???" pooja asked simi "Naina tujhe is waqt kyu bulayegi????"

"Pata nahi… lemme check first…" Simi says "May be there is something important.. Otherwise naina wouldn't have called me this late… I will go and check you go to our room…"

"think hai….. par listen don't get late… lights will be out in an hour…if major nair's found you out after lights out then he will cut your connection" Pooja says….

Simi nods while going in opposite direction towards faculty quarters…..

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"May in come in?" Simi asked…….

"Come in cadet gupta….." raj said……

"Sir, vo actually Naina called me…" Simi says…..

"hmm… I know… we both need to talk to you Simi" Raj answers…

Simi was surprised listening her first name from Raj's mouth……

"he knows everything Simi" naina said while entering the room….

Simi gets nervous thinking whether Raj's knows everything about her but then she thinks that it is not possible coz only Naina knows about her but after seeing Naina's face she understood that she was right…

"Jailer Raichand told him that one girl had come to meet bhaiya in jail who had helped him and he listened to our conversation today" Naina tells her "So I told him that you are the same girl"

"Don't worry Cadet gupta I am not going to tell anyone about this" Raj says seeing the expression on Simi's face "But I need to know the complete truth. Simi it will help us finding the truth behind Navin's court martial. Jailer told me that after talking to you Navin was very much relaxed as if a huge burden has been taken off…"

Simi was quiet and doesn't say anything..

"Please Simi… its for Navin… may be that information help us to prove him right" Raj says "I know you loved Navin. Can't you do this much for him? Please trust me Simi. I am trying to prove him right for past 3 years now but there was always a link, a blank which I was never able to fill. But now I know that you and Naina are those missing links. I need to know the whole truth. How did you and Navin meet? And what did he tell you in jail? Everything Simi…."

"I will tell you everthing sir because I know you are right and I believe you" Simi says quietly… Raj looked surprised "Navin sir trusted you a lot and he asked me to tell you and Naina everything… But after you shot… "she stopped then again continues "well after everything I never got any chance to tell you anything… I believe that you will be able prove Navin sir innocent. We I mean me and Naina have worked a lot on the information he gave to us but never was able to understand it. Maybe you can help us"

"Sure Simi…. I am glad that you trusted me coz noone now trusts me…"Raj replied and Naina turns away at this "I had made myself a promise 3 years ago and now I am making this promise to you that no matter what I will prove Navin innocent even if the cost is my life…"

Naina's heart starts beating fast at the last sentence. And yes there was a fear in her heart… fear of loosing him… but as I said she had stopped listening to her heart years ago….

"I will tell you everything sir… from the first day when I met Navin sir to the last day when he……"Simi says…. "I met Navin sir two monthes before his trial when he saved my life in an accident in which all my family died……………………………….

"Oye Simi puttar kya kar rahi hai??? itna uchal kud na kar…. Aaj hi to tere bhai ki shadi hui hai… dekh ja apni bhabhi ke paas beith….aaj vo apne saara parivaar chod ke hamare ghar ja rahi hai….. usse akela mehsus nahi hona chahiye…" a lady shouted on a young girl who was about 19 years old………..

A bus was running on the road which was empty… heavy rain was falling… there was valley on one side of the road while trees on the other side…. It was a very black night…

"oye ki hoya mamiji…. Yahi to mere khelne ke din hai…. abhi to mai bacchi hun… aur bhabhi ke paas to mai tab baithu jab bhaiya wahan se kahin aur jaaye…" Simi replied "jab se hum Ambala se chale hai tab se bhaiya wahi bhabhi ke paas baithe hai… ab to bas hum Ambala ke bahar pahunch jayenge 1 ghante mei.. par dekho bhaiya ko"

"oye dramebaaz jyada na bol" a man in sherwani replied "tu hi to mujhe yahan baitha ke gayi thi ki bhaiya aap yahan baitho bhabhi ke paas… aapko unke saath hona chahiye" he scolds his little sister….

Simi giggles and says "thik hai bhai.. ek to maine aapn ka bhala kiya… itne acche bearish ke mausam mei aapko bhabhi ke saath baithaya aur aap mujhe hi daant rahe ho.."

Everyone in the bus giggles and they continued their journey laughing and teasing each other……after few minutes' bus takes a very sharp turn with very high speed…. Everyone in the bus almost falls towards their left side……

"Oye driver ji jara dekh ke chalao…. Abhi hum sab bas girte girte bache……aap ko speed slow kar leni chahiye thi turn ke paas" an old man scolds the driver……

"sahib vo………"driver was nervous while saying this

"kya hua??? Itne pareshaan kyu ho…. Kya hua… koi baat hai…."the man replied

"kya hua baba???" Simi asked the old man….

"pata nahi boliye na shyam babu… kya hua… aap itne pareshaan kyu dikh rahe ho" simi's father asked the driver….

"sahid vo gaadi ke breaks nahi lag rahe hai…"driver replied tensed….

"KYA?????????????????" simi and her father shouted……and all the members start looking towards them………

"ji sahib wahan turn pe hamne break lagaye the par lage hi nahi… aura b bhi nahi lag rahe hai… hum try kar rahe hai par…….." driver said

"hey bhagwan…." Simi's father holded his head "ab kya hoga… aaj mere bete ki shaadi hui hai aur aaj hi ye sab……. Ab kya hoga???hamari poori family"

"baba… baba… aap tensed na ho… kuch nahi hoga… bhagwan sab bhala karenge" Simi said comforting her father "shyam uncle aap break lagani ki koshish kijiye… roads slippery hone ki wajah se nahi lag rahe honge… aap jara jor se dabaiye"

"kuch nahi ho raha hai bitiya…." Driver was completely horrified "breaks nahi lag rahe hai…. mujhe darr hai kahin kuch…………."

"nahi aisa kuch nahi hoga…….." simi's mother says "mere baccho ko kuch nahi hoga… aapne dekh ke nahi aa sakte the……… hey bhagwan"

Soon a chao filled the atmosphere of bus…. The people who were laughing are now crying. Some of them were trying to comfort others… some were praying to god to keep them safe………….but there prayers were not enough……….

Suddenly a sharp turn came a jeep was coming from the other side and…………………………………………….next moment bus was no longer on the road……………………..

The man in the jeep stops and sees the accident…………..

"oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!…….." Navin exclaimed…. Yes the man in the jeep was none other than Capt. Navin Singh Ahluwalia who was returning to KMA after a long meeting in delhi regarding his mission in KMA…………

He ran towards the bus and saw that a fire had burnt the bus…………..

"oh no……. lagta hai koi nahi baccha……. Hey bhagwan…. Ye kya ho gaya??? Par ye bus itni tez kyu chal rahi thi???.... lagta hai police aur hospital ko inform kar dena chahiye…………….." navin says to himself while dialing a phone number when suddenly he saw………………..a hand holding a branch…….

"lagta hai wahan koi hai….shayad us bus mei se koi bahar gir gaya hoga accident ke waqt…… oh no lagta hai uska haath bas chutne hi waala hai…."saying this Navin started running down the valley carefully……………..

"hey hold my hand……"" Navin shouts while giving his hand to the person……. "hold this or you will also fell deep in the valley…….."

The person holds his hand and started coming upwards… and yes she was none other than Simi…… as she was standing near the door at the time of accident she was pushed out of the door by the sudden jerk……..

Navin pulls her and she fell on top of him…. She was having a blank look on her face……..

"who are you??? Aur ye sab kya hua????" navin asks simi but she was in shock ……….she was constantly looking towards the burning bus…………………..

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At this point Simi was now in tears……….she was crying remembering the dreadful accident which has taken her whole family away from her………..

"Navin sir saved my life…… but I was left alone after that accident" Simi says " I was in shock. He took me to the hospital. He was always there with me…. After two days I told him everything when I came out of shock. He said that he would always take care of me. I don't have to think that I am all alone in this world. And that day we became friends. But I used to call him Navin sir only coz he was in the army and he saved my life"

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End of Part……..

Hmm… now one secret behind Simi is revealed that how is she related to Navin…… other will be revealed in next part…… also fresher's ball will be there in the next part……..so get ready for the party…………

Now so sorry for the late update…… kya karun I am so busy now-a-days……will try to be on time from next time onwards…….. will update confusion tom probably…. Still writing the update but seeing my late latifi I am nt promising….. and ya friends please do watch aamir… it's really a very good movie… terrific… excellent and Rajeev is so damn good an actor…… he really acted so well… and please do see the climax…… it's just awesome……...... not revealing much... but I just loved the helpless smile on his face with bag in his hand and phone ringing in pocket...... do watch it....it's really very touchy... I would have cried if my friends wouldn't be there......... I am thinking of going and watch it again…… I just loved it…….

But for now please…

Take care….

B bye……

Keep smiling…..

Sheenu….

wow that was a brilliant update 👏 👏 👏

RITU god damn it i hate her soooooooo much 😡 she better not do anything to Naina otherwise Raj ka kya hoga 😭 and what Shalini said well looks like he has to break your promise because he made a promise to Naina a year ago to always be by her side 😳 i could imagine that Ritu's face would have been worth watching...... argh!! i just detest her 😡

yaar yeh Naina seriously she is gonna regret big time for what she is actually doing to Raj, i wonder how she will feel when Raj does the same thing with her 😡 i think she should get the taste of her own medicine and Raj should behave as rudely with her 😕 but yaar i am feeling so sorry for him, he loves her sooooo much but she ...... argh! if i was her i would never get angry on him, she should really listen to her heart, because it shows the right path and what you see is not always the truth 😕

Simi, bless her she lost her whole family 😭 😭 😭 she has had a terrible past and Naveen was there for her, he is absaloutly sweet 😳 but that was sooooooo sad, it was her brothers wedding day as well she seemed so bubbly, and the chul buli kind and now...... she is bit like Naina was in LRL a chul buli girl who has turned all serious, damn i wish Naveen was alive, she would not have been like that because atleast one person she loved would have been here 😭

anyways i just hope the three, Raj, Naina and Simi together prove Naveen innocent and kick that Ritu Mishra's a**!!

and yeah Naina has to quit being such a *****, i love her but she is annoying me by behaving so coldly with my jaanu Raj 😡

anyways's once again an amazing part 👏 👏

take care 😃
yasmin

P.S i don't know if Aamir is out yet in England but me and my sister are going to the cinema's on saterday so we'll check if it's on the listing, if it's not i guess we have to wait, though i am impatiently waiting for it to release here, hope it does and i know Rajeev must have done a Brilliant job, i loooooooooooooooooooooove him 😳

too good 😛 😛 will ritu kill naina bt if she does she will hav to pay for it bcos our raj is there na.waiting for the update yaar.update soon 😊 😊 😊

too good.....naina finally kuch toh bol rahi hai......

but poor raj tryin to convince naina.....

narration of simi's past was very nice.....

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

I loved it when Shalini said ke Raj ko apna promise todne hoga to fulfil the promise he made to Naina n their marriage!!!!Ritu ka face dekhne layak tha!!! 😆 Shalini is just too good!!!!

Waise uska date Brig. Chandok hi hoga na!!!I know!!!! 😛

Why did Ritu want to see what Naina had bought?? 😕 She is upto something bad!!!! 😡 Woh Naina ko maarna chahti hai!!!! 😡Zaroorat huyi toh Shalini ko bhi raaste se hata degi kyunki Shalini uske raaste mein aa rahi hai!!!! That bloody bitch!!!! 😡

By the way I hope Fresher's Ball mein we have gori gori song with Raj and Naina!!!Uske bagair Ball adhoora sa lagta hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Finally Naina ne Raj se baat toh kii!!!She will spend more time at KMA now as she will be part time faculty!!!Thats great!!!! 😛 Ab woh zyada se zyada waqt Raj ke aakhon ke saamne rahegi!!!!

Raj ne Naina ko bata diya ke he has heard her convo with Simi and know about her now!!!!Naina ko phir se gussa aaya!!!!Uff Naina bhi naa!!!! 😡

Naina Raj se kuch nahi chhupa sakti!!!Kam se kam ish baat ka ehsaas toh huya usse!!!!

Raj almost said that he loves her but stopped himself in time!!!!Kaash keh diya hota!!!! 😳

Naina kabhi toh apne dil ki baat sun liya karo!!!Par nahi usse toh apne dimag ki baat sunni hai!!!Uske dil ko woh nazar andaz karti hai jo sach keh raha hai ke Raj Navin ko nahi maar sakta aur Naina ke dil todne ki baat toh soch bhi nahi sakta!!!! 😭

Woh Raj ke saath aise behave karti hai mujhe uspar bahut gussa aata hai!!!! 😡 Raj bhi uske saath aise rudely behave kare toh accha hoga!!!Kam se kam she will get a taste of her own medicine!!!! 😡 Par Raj aisa nahi kar sakta kyunki Raj toh usse bahut pyaar karta hai!!!! 😊 😭

Simi ko Raj pe bharosa hai!!!Thank God!!! Yeh bharosa kaash Naina ko hota!!!! 😒

Naina ka dil darr gaya Raj ko khone ke naam se!!!! 😊

Behcari Simi!!!Uske bhaai ki shaadi huyi aue ussi din uska poora parivaar accident mein maar gaya!!!! 😭 Simi kitni sharati thi!!!! 😊 Ab kitni badal gayi hai!!!! 😭

Simi hai naa bilkul serial ki or for that matter teri story ki Naina jaisi hai!!!Achanak kaise serious ho gayi!!! 😭 She was so bubby and full of life aur ab aisi ho gayi hai!!! 😭

Navin ne usse bachaya tha!!!How nice!!!You know Navin ka usse bachane ka sequence mujhe Veer-Zaara jaisa laga!!!! 😊

Aur phir Simi ka koi nahi tha!!!Bechari!!! 😭 Par Navin uska khayal rakhta tha!!!How sweet par uske pyaar ko nahi samaj paya!!!! 😭 Par ab zaroor samjhega!!!! 😊 😊

I hope Raj, Naina aur Simi mil kar Navin ko begunah sabit karde!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Looking forward to the Fresher's Ball!!!! 😊 I hope waha thoda romance ho aur acche acche gaane bhi (of SRK maybe)!!!!Aur romance dances!!!!And my gori gori!!! 😉 😉

Aur mera hero Raj toh apne pyaar ko baccha hi lega I am sure!!!! 😊

awesome too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.