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Posted: 17 years ago
update plzzzzzzzzzz with long part asap.
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So sorry for being late… my summer training will start from 9th june and I have to make arrangements for that…from next time I will try to be regular…..

PART 11

Naina: raj tumpe bharosa karna to maine 3 saal pehle hi chod diya tha… but ye dr. mishra…. I think something is wrong about her……

Why do I think that she wanted me to fight with you for not telling about our marriage to everyone in the academy…… and I also think that she wanted me to leave this academy………. But why would she want that…. And there was something in her eyes…..what was that?? Her eyes look familiar…….no in fact she looks familiar to me…..

But why does she look familiar to me??? I think pehle bhi mai inse kahin mili hun ya koi tasveer dekhi hai…. par mujhe kuch thik se yaad nahi hai…. shayad kafi purani baat hai…… pata nahi...... par lagta hai pata karna padega………

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In one room:

Someone was talking on phone….

Person: u told me that naina is angry with raj… but it all seems ok between them…..

From other side: but how is this possible??? According to our sources….

Person: to hell with your sources… now how will I complete the mission?? I want naina out of captain's life….

P2: if you can't send her out of KMA or Ambala.. then send her out of world… kill her……

P1: but how… I mean do we really need to kill her….

P2: first try to create differences b/w her and capt. Shekhawat… if u wouldn't able to then kill her… waise bhi if she is dead then our mission will become easier… then you have to convince capt. Shekhawat to remarry you and then…….

P1: ok…. We have fresher's ball in 4 days…. Let me see what I can do… I will try to create diff. b/w them till then and if get a chance I will kill her……..

P2: ok b bye.. But remember this is your last chance…. You have done such a big mistake last time….

P1: ya I know…. I will try my best this time…. Last time if Capt. Navin hadn't suspected me then triggers would be in our hands……

P2: ya… he also managed to get some proofs against us.. Thanks to your stupid brains…. Till date we don't know where he had kept those proofs…

P1: he is not in the world anymore so why are you worrying about those.......

P2: those are very solid proofs.. Don't you know??… We also have to find those…. Coz if Capt. Rajveer found those proofs then………

P1: that's your responsibility…. My work is only to get triggers out of KMA….

P2: you don't have to worry about my work… I will complete mine… you complete yours.. Otherwise boss won't spare you….. Take care sweety……

P1:ohh…. You get lost… I will do mine…. Tell boss that this time I won't do any mistake…….

Saying this she turns and we can see her face this time….none other than dr. mishra….

Ritu: hmm… naina I don't want to kill you… your brother died becoz of me…. So you better leave KMA and Capt. Rajveer…. Otherwise I will make sure that you meet your brother very soon……

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Naina was in her room when someone knocked…..

Shalini: hi naina… what are you doing??

Naina: nothing… just reading novel… you need anything…

Shalini: hmm… your company…

Naina: what????

Shalini: actually I need to go for shopping… so I need someone's company….

Naina: hmm… ok…but why do you want to go for shopping so sudden??….

Shalini: don't tell me that you don't know anything……

Naina: what do I need to know???…..

Shalini: ohh come on naina… we have fresher's ball in 4 days and you are saying that you don't know…

Naina: ohh… waise bhi shalini I came here yesterday itself so how would I know…

Shalini: capt. Rajveer din't tell you!!!.... he must have forgot… chalo waise bhi now I told you na… lets go for shopping…

Naina: ok…

Shalini: lets go to mess first…. I want to see what first yr. cadets are doing… its their lunch time…

Naina: ohh… you keep track of their schedule… good…

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In mess:

Huda: oye plz na simi….

Simi: no means no….

Shalini and naina entered…

Shalini: kya hua cadet???

Pooja: ha ha…. maam… ye huda kab se simi ko call kar raha hai.. par simi iska call baar baar kaat rahi hai….

Shalini: kya hua simi????......

Yudi: who maam…ye huda chahta hai ki simi uske saath freshers mei jaaye but simi maan nahi rahi…..

Shalini: kyu simi??? tum huda ke saath uski date banke kyu nahi ja rahi…..

Simi looks towards naina and doesn't say anything and leaves the mess……

Pooja: oye isse ki hoya…. Mai dekh ke aati hun…

Naina: ruko pooja…. I mean mai simi ko dekh ke aati hun…. I think mere samjhane se wo maan jaayegi…..

And naina goes behind simi…….simi runs and goes near academy bell….

Naina: simi stop….

Simi: naina I don't want to be here……..

Naina: simi meri taraf dekho…..batao kya hua??

Simi: naina tumhe pata hai ki mai captain navin se… aur unke jaane ke baad mai kisi ke bhi saath kaise chali jaun….

Naina: simi.. dekho mari taraf… pata hai mujhe ki tum bhaiya se bahut pyar karti thi aur ab bhi karti ho….

A person was listening their convo and gets shocked hearing this….

Naina: par simi…bhaiya is no more… u have to move on.. bhaiya always wanted you to be happy… agar vo tumhe aise dekhenge to socho unhe kitna bura lagega…

Simi: nahi naina… mai navin sir ko nahi bhool sakti…

Naina: tumhe unhe bhoolne ko kaun keh raha hai… mai bas yeh keh rahi hun ki agar tum aise hi udaas rahi to mere bhaiya jahan kahin bhi hai unhe kitna bura lagega.. aur fir kisi ko tumpe shaq bhi ho sakta hai….

Simi: jab kisi ne jana hi hota hai to vo hamari life mei kyu aata hai….. navin sir ne meri jaan bachayi.. meri life mei itni khushiyan di… pata hai mujhe unhone mujhse kabhi pyar nahi kiya… par fir bhi mai khush thi ye sochkar ki wo hamesha mere saath hai.. par jab unpe musibat aayi to mai kuch nahi kar paayi naina…. Mai apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti…..

Naina: nahi simi tumhari koi galti nahi hai…. tumne to akhri saans tak bhaiya ka saath diya… jis insaan ki galti hai wo tum nahi ho…jisne mere bhaiya ko mujhse chin liya wo tum nahi ho simi……..

Simi: naina….. ek baat kahu….

Naina: hmm…..

Simi: naina I don't think captain rajveer can kill navin sir……

Naina: I have seen him simi… I have seen him shooting bhaiya with my own eyes….

Simi: but naina sometimes what you see is not the truth…… truth is hidden sometimes and you have to search for it………

Naina: I don't know…. My mind says what I saw is the truth…..

Simi: kabhi kabhi dil ki baat bhi sunni chahiye….hamesha dimag jo kehta hai wo sach nahi hota… par dil jo keta hai in the end wahi hamesha sach hota hai… batao kya tumhara dil ye manta hai ki captain rajveer navin sir ko maar sakte hai….

Naina: I don't know… I stopped listening my heart…whenever I see him I always remember that scene….

Simi: naina just think about it…. I believe captain rajveer is innocent… I saw pain in his eyes……..the pain which is there in your eyes….

Naina: I don't know… I don't want to know about it… lets go in mess…

They both leaves and the person who was listening their conversation comes forward….there were tears in his eyes and he made a call.

Person: sir, I think I have found the girl who had helped captain navin……..

From other side: what??? where????

Person: sir I think I need to confirm it…

Sir: ok… call me in two days after confirming everything………jai hind captain……

Yes he was none other than captain rajveer… he came there when he saw simi running towards academy bell and naina following her……

Raj: jai hind sir and he disconnected the call…..

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In mess:

Huda: oye pata nahi kya hoga….ye simi maan to jaayegi na……

Pooja: array bharosa rakh… mujhe lagta hai naina usse mana legi…..

Alekh (in his mind): ye naina aur simi ka jarur kuch locha hai… ye captain ki wife us simi ko pehle se janti hai….

At that moment captain rajveer enters…

Captain: what happened cadets??? Aur cadet gupta kahan pe hai…. shalini naina kahan hai??? tumhare saath nahi hai wo…

Pooja: sir naina simi ka mobile recharge karne gayi hai… abhi dono aate honge… simi ka network fir se jam ho gaya tha…

Shalini: vo captain simi cadet huda ke saath freshers ball mei jaane ke liye nahi maan rahi thi isliye naina usse manane gayi hai….

From back:

Naina: simi jaayegi… vo jaane ke liye tyaar hai…

Huda: array waah… thanku naina ji…. Ye huda aapka ehsaan jindgi bhar nahi bhulega……

Pooja: to yani sab final…. I will go with ali, simi will go with huda, alekh will go with neelu, naina, yudi aur shalini maam aap kiske saath jaoge…

Shalini: obviously naina to captain rajveer ke saath akhir unki wife jo hai… kyu captain…

Raj:hnn..haan… matlab if naina has any problem…

Naina: I have no problem… but if you have promised someone then….

Shalini: oh come on naina.. ab agar capt ne kisi se promise kiya bhi hai to unhe usse todna padega… after all no one except you has the right to go with him… ok… aur meri date.. well aap sab behosh jaoge unhe dekhkar…

Pooja: kyu madam.... koi celeb. hai kya???

Shalini: hai bhi aur nahi bhi… waqt aane pe dekh lena… bas cadet yudi aap bataiye….. kiske saath ja rahe hai aap….

Yudi: maam wo maine abhi tak socha nahi hai…

Shalini: to jaldi sochiye cadet… time nahi hai.. just 4 days u have… ok now naina I think we should leave…

Raj: where are you going doc..

Shalini: obviously captain shopping… after all we need some break from this academy… and me and naina also have to prepare for ball..

Raj: do you need any help dr.(eyeing naina)???

Shalini: oh no captain.. we will manage….see you in the evening captain….

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Shalini: tumse dr. mishra ne kuch kaha kya???

Naina: what???/

Shalini: dekho naina… I know whatever you said in the mess is becoz someone has said something to you… did you meet dr. mishra??

Naina: hmm… after breakfast today itself…

Shalini: and she said something to you about capt. Rajveer right…

Naina: hmm…..

Shalini: listen I know there are some problems b/w you and Capt. Rajveer… (Seeing naina) oh don't worry he din't tell me anything… I just sensed it… you know I am very smart… these things can't hide from me…

Naina just smiles….. you are very intelligent shalini…

Shalini: and very experienced too…. Naina Capt. Rajveer is a kind of husband which any girl dreams of… You are lucky naina…plz talk with rajveer and solve all the misunderstandings b/w you and him coz misunderstandings sometimes don't leave anything in a relationship….

Naina: you are married.. Aren't you??

Shalini: I am divorced naina.. And my relation is at this stage becoz of some misunderstandings b/w my husband and me….. Isliye naina plz just give a chance to rajveer… may be he will be able to explain himself…..

Naina kept quiet…

Shalini understands her situation and says: array ab chalo bhi.. Warna mall band ho jaayega.. Chalo and she practically dragged naina with her….

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END OF PART….

I know it was short and boring… will try to update next part quickly and also will try to make that part interesting…….

Take care…

B bye…

Keep smiling…

Sheenu…😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
it wasnot boring dear...a important truth has revealed...it was quite a interesting part...how could u say that...Naina Shalini and Naina Simi convo were amaaaaazing...brilliant understanding dialogues...Dr.Ritu...o god what she is gonna do...miiiiiiiiindblowing dialogues between Dr.Ritu and that person...and Simi loves Navin...wow...now can't wait for the next update...this update was just suuuuuuuperb...thankuuuu soooooo much for this interesting part...and all the best for ur summer training... 👍🏼 👍🏼
Edited by quietrajpri1623 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Yeh Dr.Ritu kya planning kar rahi hai!!!! 😡 Naina ko raaste se hatane ki!!!Agar usse aur Raj ko alag nahi kar sakti toh usse duniya se dur kardo!!!! 😡 I will kill that woman!!Pehle une Navin ko phasaya aur ab Naina ko marna chahti hai!!!! 😡

Raj apni Naina ko bachalo!!!! 😭 Ritu uske saath kuch bhi kar sakti hai!!!Freher's ball mein hi kuch hoga!!!!!

Simi Navin se pyaar karti thi!!! 😛 Aur Navin usse nahi karta tha?? 😭 How bad!!!Par ab zaroor karega!!!!I am so happy to know ke Navin is getting such a nice girl as Simi!!!But dono mile kaise thhe?? 😕 Aur uski wajah se Navin .....?? 😕

Bechari Simi!!!I hope use uska pyaar jaldi mil jaye!!!!

Aur Huda.....Simi ka peecha choodega nahi!!!! 😡 Aur Naina bhi ush bhais ke saath jane ke liye kaha Fresher's ball pe!! 😡 Isse accha hota Yudi ke saath jati!!!!

Waise main bahut lhush hoon ke Raj ko Simi ke baare mein pata chal gaya!!! 😊

Shalini aur Simi dono ne Naina ko itna samjhaya!!!Naina ab toh Raj se baat karo!!!Give him another chance!!!

Shalini ne kya khoob kaha hai!!!Raj wakai mein aisa pati hai jiska khwaab har ladki dekhti hai!!!!Aur Naina woh lucky ladki hai!!Par she is wasting it!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Waise Naina ko Fresher's ball pe bahut sexy sa red outfit pehnana!!!! 😳 Raj bas dekh ke clean bowled ho jaye!!!!Like she wore in the Freher's ball in the serial!!!! 😛

Aur haan tumhe aage ke update par bhi edit karna hai aur aage announce bhi karna hai ke kaun play kar raha hai Arjun Sahay's character!!!!Update dene se pehle mujhe bata dena!!!Main phir se remind kar dungi!!!!



Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waiting ffor next asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice updt............ 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was AWSOME i loooooooooved it finally you revealed the mystery of simi, awwwww she loved navin 😳 but i bet navin loved that witch ritu, bless her, but naina is right she should move on, but if naveen was alive i would have been more than happy to have simi in his life btw who is playing the role of simi...... anyways i like simi she give naina a good advise to listen to her heart, because mind usualy does lead you astray, i know for a fact that if naina does listen to her heart then she will start believing that raj is innocent. 😳

and now for that ritu i knew she was the spy lol i think everyone knew 😆 but seriously if this girl does anything to harm naina then she is gonna get it from rajveer because he loooooooves her alot.

anyways once again loved the update, your getting better by the day 👏 👏 👏

take care 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
update plsssssssssss 😡
Edited by coolsamthomas - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
common update ..u can't leave it like this
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Posted: 17 years ago

i am really very sorry friends that i kept you all wait for so long.... well i am really very busy in my training... and i also went yesterday to watch aamir...... and its just too good... terrific performance by the actor.... loved the movie and specially the climax... do watch it....and all my friends also liked it... they said it is really a very big debut by any TV actor on big screen... and i was like..😃.... i may go and watch it again with my other friends..😃... my friends said that you are mad😆😆... but i really loved the movie....😊

but i know i can't make any excuses for nt continuing it... i will surely continue it tom.... i am writing the update.. but i don't think i will be able to post it today..... so tom for sure i will update.... and i will also give replies to your sweet comments tom... along with update...... so till then...

take care....
b bye....
keep smiling......
sheenu...😊

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