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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yyyy

👏 awesome update .........thankuuu soo muchh dearrr..........

Thanks for updating...i didn't know u were busy...i thought u left this fic here since u started updating new one quite frequently.. ........ i am so sorry dearr.... it's just that i was getting so many comments and pms for that fic so i had to update it before this one...... i wasn't only busy.. there is some problem going on in my life... i was dealing with it... actually i am still dealing with it.....so didn't get much time to write this one... i am sorry for the late update... i will try and update it more frequently..........

Naina bhi na 😡 😡 ..it's high time..it's better if she listens to her heart 😳 ...i want raj to teach her a big lesson..by behaving with her in same way as she is doing now right now. ......... Naina is seriously behaving very rudely with Raj.....she will definitely listen to her heart.... Raj can't behave rudely with her... He loves her too much to even think about it...........

It's so good to know that at least simi trusts raj...and i feel really bad to see helpless raj 😭 😭 .............. hmm except Naina everyone there has brains and they listen to their heart.... only Naina is the one behaving so badly with him... arrgghh i hate her........even i feel bad for raj... i hope Raj tells her the truth very soon so that she can realize how badly she was behaving with Raj....



when simi used to say navin sir..i thought simi was a cadet earlier and navin was her teacher 😳 😳.u see like our RN😳 ........ no.. Simi used to say him sir aive hi.... because she respected him... and she wasn't a cadet before navin's trial.... thanks for replying dear......😊

take care......
b bye...
keep smiling...
sheenu...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi friends …… I know I am very late but there are things in my life which can't be avoided…. This part is very long and I hope it will be able to make up for the delay…….

Not much of RN in the part though…… simi's secret is out in the part…..

PART 13

"who are you??? Aur ye sab kya hua????" navin asked simi but she was in shock ……….she was constantly looking towards the burning bus…………………..

…………...

At this point Simi was now in tears……….she was crying remembering the dreadful accident which has taken her whole family away from her………..

"Navin sir saved my life…… but I was left alone after that accident" Simi says " I was in shock. He took me to the hospital. He was always there with me…. After two days I told him everything when I came out of shock. He said that he would always take care of me. I don't have to think that I am all alone in this world. And that day we became friends. But I used to call him Navin sir only coz he was in the army and he saved my life"

"I am sorry Simi…" Raj said quietly…

"Its ok sir…."Simi replied wiping her tears "After that day he took me to his flat in Delhi and got me admitted to one of the colleges there…. I started living there in his flat… He used to come on weekends…. Those two days with him were so special for me…mai hamesha un do dino ka wait karti thi… then one day……….

"SURPRISE!!!!!......." A man shouts while closing the eyes of simi from her back

"Arrey Navin sir aap………" simi says while turning "aap aaj kaise aaye…… aaj to Thursday hai aur aap to hamesha Saturday subah aate ho…."

"Pehle tum mujhe ye sir sir bolna band karo…" Navin replied "aisa lagta hai jaise mai koi bekar se college ka sada hua sanki professor hun…"

Simi giggles "nahi sir… aisa nahi ho sakta… mai aapko sirf sir bolungi… aap mujhse itne bade ho.. army mei ho… aur fir aapne meri jaan bachai hai… mai aapko hamesha respect hi dungi…"

"oh come on Simi… hum friends hai.. aur tum mujhe naam se bula sakti ho…aur tumhari jaan bachane ka dekho mujhe kitna bada fayda hua hai… ek itni pyari dost mil gayi hai" Navin said but after seeing her expression "OK OK… agar sir bulana chahti ho to sir hi bulao…"

Simi grins hearing this… "par mujhe bas ek baat batao…" Navin asked…

"Agar kabhi tum kisi aise insaan se pyar karne lagi jo army mei ho aur jisme ye saari qualities ho jo tumne abhi batai hai…. chalo kisi bhi insaan ko chodo…. Suppose karo agar kabhi tumhe mujhse pyar ho gaya kya tab bhi tum mujhe sir hi bulaogi????" Navin asked her……….

And his question left her in thoughts……………………

Simi (in her mind) "Navin sir se pyar????.... kya aisa kabhi ho sakta hai…… ya ye kahun kahin aisa ho to nahi chukka hai…… kya mai sach much unse pyar karne lagi hun……nahi ye nahi ho sakta….mai unse pyar nahi kar sakti…. Lekin fir mei poore week unke aane ka intezaar kyu karti hun…. Kyu jab bhi wo aate hai to dil ko ek rahat milti hai…… kyu jab bhi vo apne mission ke liye KMA jaate hai to dil ghabra jaata hai jaise koi bahut pyari cheez mujhse koi cheen raha ho…….is duniya mei mera koi nahi fir bhi jab wo hote hai to aisa lagta hai jaise mujhe aur kisi ki jarurat nahi ab…. Kya yahi pyar hai??? kya sach mei mujhe….. haan shayad ye sach hai…… sach hai ye… mujhe unse pyar ho gaya hai…… I love him…."

"Oh no… kitna asaan sawaal poocha tha… par ye ladki…" Navin mumurs "SIMIII….." he shouts…

Simi comes out of her trance…. And sees that Navin was staring her….. She kinda blushes and says " y… yess.. sir…kya hua??"

"KYA HUA????" Navin asked staring her "oh god simi… kya hua tumhe… maine kitna simple ques poocha.. aur tum to aise soch mei dubi jaise apna poori life ka future plan kar rahi ho…ya sach mei mujhse pyar karne lag gayi ho…"

"W… wo sir……" Simi hesitates "actually……"

"Accha chalo chodo…… I want to tell you something important" Navin says interrupting her

"What sir??" Simi asks "Is anything serious in KMA????"

"Hmmm…. Kind of" Navin replies "I told you about my mission in KMA right???"

"Yes sir… About nuclear triggers right?" Simi asks "you told me last week……Kya hua sir??? Nuclear triggers safe to hai na sir"

"Arrey nahi nahi…. They are safe…… vo actually baat kuch aur hai… vo Ambala mei jab mei spy ko dhund raha tha to vahan ke hospital mei mujhe …….." Navin blushes leaving Simi confused…

"kya hua sir aap thik to hai na…" Simi asks him.. "aap hospital kyu gaye the????"

"Arrey nahi mei thik hun…. Darasal vahan hospital mei mujhe ek doctor mili…." Navin again blushes and then continues "and I think I am in Love…………"

"KYA???????? …………." Simi was shocked hearing this….. Today only she realized her love for Navin and she lost him on the same day…………She stares him blankly as if not believing him……..

"Kyu laga na shock….. I knew U won't believe me… Par simi this is true…" Navin said "I am in Love with 'Itu'…"

"I went there to see an orderly who was injured in an encounter with spy and there I met her… She was his doctor… Oh god she is so beautiful…. So smart… So intelligent…" Navin continues with out looking at simi who was wiping a small drop of dear which rolled out………..

"You know Simi… when I met her I was not able to believe that I met such a good looking and smart girl… She is Se**… she has everything that a man searches in a woman…. Oh god Simi… I can't believe that she is mine….." Navin continued "I told Raj about her…. He is currently posted in ladhakh but he said he will come to meet her next month…. I also sent a pic of her to Naina…. She will also come next month after her final exams…. Oh god I can't wait to go back…. 'Itu' my 'Itu'"

"This is a very good news sir…" Simi replied forcing a smile on her face "I am very happy for you…. When will you bring her here so that I will also be able to meet her?? You know I can't come with you there because of my college"

"I will bring her here next month so that the three most important persons of my life will meet my girlfriend together….." Navin replied "chalo chalo now I am here for a very important meeting I will meet you in the evening…."

"That day I realized that I love Navin sir but I also lost him the same day….. But still I was happy because he was happy…. He really loved 'Itu' a lot…." Simi said while wiping the single drop of tear which rolled out of her eyes…

"Ya I remember…. Navin told me about his girlfriend but he wasn't able to tell me the name because of the bad line due to snow falling in ladhakh… But the name wasn't 'Itu'…." Raj said "He told me that her name is 'R……….'… after that the line was dead… from that I concluded that the name of his girl friend starts from R"

"I never asked him the full name… 'Itu' was the name he used to call her…." Simi replied….

"Even I remember…. He mailed me her pic… but because of the server problem I wasn't able to load the pic completely…. It was blurred….." Naina speaks for the first time………..

"Can you show me the pic????" Raj asked her

"Hmm…. I think It's still there in my laptop…." Naina replied…..

"Ok…… Simi what happened afterwards" Raj asked

"After that week he wasn't able to come delhi for the next three weeks…….. and then one day I got a call from him…." Simi says remembering another dreadful day in her life….

"Simi hello simi…. Are you there????" Navin said panting..

"Kya hua sir??? Are you alright??? Is everything OK??" Simi asked……

"Nahi simi… Nothing is alright…. Simi she cheated me…… she cheated me…. She is the spy" Navin said and his voice chocked with the last sentence……

"kaun sir??? Kiski baat kar rahe hain aap…. Aur aap thik to hai na sir… aapki awaaj… aap ro rahe hai na sir……" Simi was very much concerned about him….

"She Simi…'Itu' …. My girlfriend……..She is the spy and she had come in ambala to steel the triggers" Navin replied with tears in his eyes……..

"WHATTTTT????? What are you saying??? How can this be possible sir??…"Simi was very much shocked hearing this…… "She loved you……"

"NOOOO Simi……no…." Navin shouted on phone…. "she never loved me… She was using me to get the triggers…. She came here today with me for the party and after the party she went to steel the triggers from the secret room…she also managed to get my access card…….but I saw her and went to catch her….. but there were other terrorists also so I picked the triggers and ran away from there…… triggers are with me now Simi…."

"WHAT???? sir kya bol rahe ho aap… aap jante bhi ho iska matlab…. Iska matlab abhi aap army ki nazrao mei ek terrorist ho jo trigger leke bhaag gaya hai……" Simi was now in tears… "sir please aap army ke kisi senior ke paas jao aur unhe sab kuch bata do…warna aap……"

"Koi fyada nahi hai Simi…… They already have declared me as a traitor… hamare kuch senior bhi unke saath mile hue hai……..aur mere paas wahan se triggers leke bhaagne ke alawa koi aur rasta nahi tha…… agar mai aisa nahi karta to wo triggers un terrorists ke haath lag jaate…….." Navin replied…. "mei bas tumhe kuch batana chahta hun….. abhi mai Raj se bhi baat nahi kar pa raha hun aur na hi Naina se……."

"K…… K…. Kya sir…." Simi was in tears completely…….

"Suno mai un logo ke against proofs lene ja raha hun…… mujhe pata hai kaun kaun log is desh ke against kaam kar rahe hai…. Usne mujhe khud hi sab bata diya… aur mujhe ye pata hai proofs kahan pe milenge……" Navin said "Dhyan se suno… mere paas jyada waqt nahi hai… mai army se jyada der tak bach nahi paunga… abhi kuch hi der mei poori army mujhe dhundne nikal padegi… mai usse pehle wo proofs leker kahin rakh dunga… mai janta hun mera bachna ab namumkin hai….."

"aisa mat kahiye sir……. Aapko kuch nahi hoga……bhagwan mere saath ab aisa nahi karenge…… wo fir se us insaan ko nahi cheen sakte jisse mai behad pyaar karti hun…" Simi said……

"KYA???? Tum mujhse pyar….. tumne pehle kyu nahi bola……" Navin asked her… he was very much shocked by her confession…. "I am sorry simi…….."

"Nahi sir aapki koi galti nahi hai……….. abhi in sab baton ka time nahi hai… plz tell me what can I do for you???" Simi asked him…

"I am sorry simi……. suno mera bachne ke chances bahut kam hain.. shayad Raj aaye to kuch ho paye…. Suno mai tumhe us jagah ka pata bata dunga jahan mai wo proofs chupaunga… wo tum raj ko de dena… abhi I am nt able to contact him… kyuki unhone un sab logo ko jinko mai janta hun ki lines block kar di hai… as they don't about you.. I called you……"

"Par sir mai aapse kaise milungi…." Simi asked him….

"Army ko mujhe pakadne mei jyada waqt nahi lagega… tum mujhse jail mei hi milne aana…aur iss bare mei kisi ko bhi mat batana……ab mai rakhta hun….. shayad army ke log nikalne hi waale hai… aur mujhe proofs lene bhi jaana hai…take care" Navin said and disconnected the phone….

"you also take care sir……mai abhi ambala ke liye nikal rahi hun" Simi said but she heared the dialing tone from the other side…….

"Please bhagwaan sir ko kuch mat hone dena… agar sir ko kuch ho gaya to mai ji nahi paungi….aap mujhse mera sab kuch cheen chuke ho.. plz navin sir ko mat cheenna….warna mai marr jaungi….." simi prayed…

And may be those are the prayers that helped Navin later……..

"Par meri prayers ka bhagwan pe koi asar nahi pada……" Simi was crying now "unhone mujhse navin sir ko cheen liya….I lost him also…."

"I am sorry Simi" Raj said quietly "Ye sab meri wajah se……."

"Nahi sir aapki wajah se kuch nahi hua……." Simi interrupted him "I know you can't kill navin sir… He trusted you a lot….aapne nahi kisi aur ne unhe maara hai…… I trust you sir"

Raj (in his mind) "I am still sorry…. I am happy that u trust me.. But I can't tell you the truth now… shayad tumhari prayers hi thi jisne Navin ko bacha liya…….. Par he is not in a good condition… He is in coma from past 3 years…….Par now I need to know who this 'Itu' is"

"What happened on the day when you met him in the jail….. did he tell you something???" Raj asked "According to you when he called you he told you to meet him in jail coz he wanted to tell you something…."

"Yes sir……unki call ke next evening ye khabar aayi thi ki ind*** army ne navin sir ko pakad liya triggers ke saath jab vo ambala se bahar bhaagne ki koshish kar rahe the…….tab aap bhi ambala aa chuke the aur naina bhi" Simi said " I saw you two outside the court one day when naina was crying and you were consoling her.. I recognized you because I had seen your pics"

Raj and Naina both look towards each other and remember that day when Naina cried on Raj's shoulders and Navin asked both of them to marry each other….

"But I didn't meet you…. I saw many officers around you two so I waited for the next day……" Simi continued "Next day when you two were getting married I got the chance to meet Navin sir…..I went in the jail……."

"SIR………….." Simi shouted holding the bars. Navin was lying in one corner of the jail. He got up hearing her voice……

"Sir are you OK??/ ye itni saari chotein…. Sir in logon ne aapke saath ye kya kiya… aap inhe batate kyu nahi ki aapne kuch nahi kiya… aap inhe saari sachai bata do na sir" imi said crying…….

"Simi…Simi…shhh… plz… chup ho jao…" Navin said consoling her "Simi dekho himmat mat haro… mujhe tumhe bahut important baat batani hai… please Simi dekho… ye meri last wish hai… mai chahta hun ki un sab logon ko saza mile job hi iss desh ke khilaf hai…..please Simi……pyar karti ho na mujhse to promise karo ki chahe kuch ho jaye tum Raj aur Naina ke saath milke un sab logon ko saza dilvaogi"

Simi nods while crying……

"To suno… dekho is waqt Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ho rahi hai…to abhi tum unse mat milna warna tum bhi fas jaogi… kal mujhe yahan se transfer kiya jayega delhi.. Raj is the incharge of it.. when he come back from there then tell him everything I told you about 'Itu'"

"Par sir.. delhi mei aapke saath kya kiya jayega…aapko wahan kyu transfer kiya jar aha hai…." Simi asked

"Wahan mera kehne ke liye trial hai… par mujhe pata hai wo log mujhe do din baad trial ke naam pe faasi chada denge…." Navin replied turning back….

"WHAT???? aur aapko ye sab pata hai fir bhi aap mujhe ab bata rahe hai aur capt. Rajveer ko bhi ye pata hai fir bhi wo kuch nahi kar rahe hai" Simi shouts on him.

"listen Simi ab kuch nahi ho sakta……mujhe pata hai Raj bahut koshish kar raha hai ye transfer rukvane ki.. par mujhe nahi lagta wo successful ho paayega…..filhaal mai jo tumhe bata raha hun wo dhyan se suno….." Navin said

"Par sir……" Simi tried

"No par var simi….. mujhse jyada ue desh important hai….apna dupatta ka corner do…" Navin said..

"KYA??? Dupatte ka corner… par kyu???" Simi asked…

"Bas dekho …….." and saying this Navin took the corner of her dupatta and started making something on it with his blood…..

"YE AAP KYA KAR RAHE HAIN SIR????" Simi shouted on him…

But Navin didn't stop and made a pattern……

"Simi dhyan se suno…. Maine kuch proofs dhunde hai aur unhone jis jagah chupaya hai ye us jagah tak tumhe pahuncha dega…… ye jake Raj aur Naina ko de dena aur unhe sab bata dena….." Navin said "mai unhe khud nahi bata sakta kyuki jab bhi woo mujhse milne aate hai to security cameras on kar deti hai aur hamari saari baatein record ki jati hai…. isliye ye tumhe hi karna hoga…. Karogi na itna mere liye….."

"Sirr…. A aap aisa kyu keh rahe hai… dekhna aapko kuch nahi hoga" Simi said crying badly….

"Nahi simi… tumhe strong hona padega…..mere jane ke baad promise karo mujhse ki tum nahi rogi aur ek strong army officer banogi…." Navin said "Mai hamesha tumhe khush dekhna chahta hun…. Yaad rakhna jab bhi tum rogi kahin na kahin mujhe dard pahunchaogi…. Aur fir tumhe mei akeli nahi chod ke jaunga…. Naina aur raj hamesha tumhara khyal rakhenge……"

"Sir….Sir mat jana mujhe chod ke… agar aap mujhe khush dekhna chahte hai to promise kijiye ki aapko kuch nahi hoga….." Simi said

"Simi mei promise nahi karta… par koshish karunga…… par chances kam hai.." Navin replied…… "Take care simi… ab tum jao,.. varna koi aa jayega aur tum fas jaogi… jailer raichand ne waise bhi mujhe sirf 5 min diye the……jao ab"

"Bye sir……..apna khyal rakhna" simi said while turning back " I love you sir……."

"Hey bhagwan simi ko mujhe bhulne ki shakti dena……"Navin said while looking towards the sky "kaash mai tumhara pyar pehle pehchaan gaya hota"

"Kya usne tumhe ek pattern diya tha…. Kya tha wo??" Raj asked "kya tum mujhe wo……"

"yes sir… ghar jake maine wo pattern ek paper pe bana liya tha……abhi wo mere room mei hai….." Simi replied "mai aur naina last 3 yrs se uspe kaam kar rahe hai par kuch pata nahi chal pa raha…… wo kuch ajeeb sa hi hai… uska koi matlab hi nahi banta…… Mai abhi aapko wo pattern dikhati hun…"

"Nahi simi……ruko" Naina said…. "I mean abhi late ho gaya hai… lights out hone mei 5 min hai bas.. tum wo kal dikha dena… abhi tum jao.."

"hmm.. Naina thik keh rahi hai simi…. I will see it later on…now you should go as it's very late……" Raj said…

"Ok sir…….. good night sir… good night Naina" Simi said "I hope you will be able to find the clue which Navin sir had given"

"I also hope so simi…… I also hope so….." Raj said "and I am sorry for everything that I caused….."

"It's ok sir……."Simi said and then goes……..

"She loves bhaiya very much" Naina said……..

"Hmm……….I hope that I will be able to bring happiness in her life again…." Raj said…….

Naina looks towards him and doesn't say anything and goes in the other room……

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Simi was standing near the window of her room and was looking towards the sky….

"Why do I feel that you are still with me sir??... Why do I feel that you are not dead ?? that you are alive…… Please come back sir…… I can't live without you…." Simi says while looking towards the moon……

Tum bin kya hai jeena

Kyaa hai jeena..

Tum bin kya hai jeena……

Tum bin jiya jaye kaise

Kaise jiya jaye tum bin

Sadiyon se lambi hai raatein

Sadiyon se lambe hue din

(Aa jao laut kar tum

Ye dil keh raha hai)-2

Hoo..hoo…

Fir shame tanhayee jagi

Fir yaad tum aa rahe ho

Fir jaan nikalne lagi hai

Fir mujhko tadpa rahe ho

Fir mujhko tadpa rahe ho

Is dil mei yaadon ke mele hai

Tum bin bahut hum akele hai

(Aa jao laut kar tum

Ye dil keh raha hai) – 2

Kya kya na socha tha dil ne

Kya kya na sapne sajaye

Kya kya na chaha tha dil ne

Kya kya na armaan jagaye

Kya kya na armaan jagaye

Is dil se tufaan gujarte hai

Tum bin to jeete na marte hai

(Aa jao laut kar tum

Ye dil keh raha hai) – 2

And she sleeps there on the floor near the window with tears straining her face……..

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END OF PART…….

Not much of RN in the part but still I need to complete simi's story before continuing with the actual story…….

RN will be there in the next part… I promise……and fresher's ball will also be there in the next part….

I don't think I need to tell you all who is 'Itu'…. Well I think many of you must have understood that 'Itu' is the nick name for 'Ritu'….. I know it's stupid… but well so is she…… so stupid name for a stupid woman……..

For the next part…. I will try to update it soon.. but can't promise…

Precap????

In fresher's ball...........Action,dance, jealousy, drinking and romance?? between whom????

Take care 😃

Keep smiling

B bye

Sheenu…………..😊

Edited by rogerfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi!
The update was as usual excellent👏.
The flashback episodes are beautiful😊.I could actually see them happenning
in front my eyes.thank u.
take care.
Once again👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
just amazing...so Navin is alive
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👏 Too good...simi's story was sad...i always knew navin would be alive...it's nice to hear from raj...itu name is nice yaar ....i like the idea ...it's different ...i like that u used this name..unlike real lrl where navin's beast frd raj didn't even know his GF's name strange na.....

I am sure this drinking,jealousy,dancing is all related to RN..maybe ritu will try to seduce raj...naina will get jealous and will get drunk and our dear raj will help her..etc..just my guess

But still i feel after naina's realization...she needs to know how it feels when u r loved one doesn't trust u and how much it hurts...just my view..

I am sorry to know u had some issues to deal with...i hope now everything is sorted out...by the way i love both ut ff equally
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Posted: 17 years ago
hiiiiiiiiii....i read ur fic 5 days ago only.....and that to at one stretch 😊 😊 😊 it's just fantastic........raj is mind blowing....so caring and loving.....and naina as usual misunderstanding him 😭 but i hope jab kuch jaldi se sort out ho jaaye......aur haan i want a good romantic scene of raj and naina on fresher's ball......plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......ud soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Navin Simi ka khayal rakhta tha!!!! 😊 How sweet!!!! 😊

Simi ko college mein admission dilaya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 Usse apne flat mein rakhta tha!!!! 😛

Navin ne yeh kya puch liya!!!!! 😉 Aur Simi ko yeh ehsaas ho gaya ki woh Navin se pyaar karti hai!!!! 😳

Navin did not know how right he was!!!! 😒 Usne kitna casually kaha!!!!! 😭

Bechari Simi!!!!! 😭 Jaise hi usse apne pyaar ka ehsaas huya waise hi uska dil bhi toot gaya!!!!!! 😭

Navin ne kaha ki woh 'Itu se pyaar karta hai!!!!! 😭 Bewakoof Navin uska jaal mein phaas gaya!!!!! 😡

Raj ne uska naam suna ki R se start hota hai par line dead ho gayi!!!!!! 😒 Aur Naina ko uski pic server problem ki wajah se nahi mili!!!!! 😔 Unka toh bad luck hi kharab hai!!!!! 😔

Raj 'Itu ka pata lagana chahta hai!!! 😛 Raj woh tumare ankhon ke saamne hi hai!!!!! 😊 Usse pehchano!!!! 😊 R+Itu=Ritu!!!! 😉 Get it!!!!! 😊

Bechara Navin!!! 😭 Kitne toot gaya tha jab usse Ritu ki sachai pata chali thi!!!!! 😭

Aur woh Raj aur Naina ko bhi contact nahi kar paya!!! 😭 Puri tarah se phas chuka tha bechara!!!!! 😭

Simran ne apne pyaar ka ikraar kar hi diya finally!!! 😊 Kaash Navin uska pyaar pehle samaj jata toh yeh sab nahi hota!!!! 😭

Par haan Simran ki prayers ne Navin ko baccha liya!!!! 😊 Woh coma mein hai!!!! 😊 Mujhe pata tha that he is not dead!!!!! 😊

Waise Simran ne sahi kaha!!!!! 😊 Raj Navin ko maar hi nahi sakta!!!! 😊 Usse bhi bharosa hai Raj par!!!! 😊 Bas yeh Naina hi hai!!!!! 😡

Woh mili Navin se jab Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ho rahi thi!!!!! 😊 Bechara Navin!!!! 😊 Usse pata tha ke uska kya anjaam hoga!!!!!! 😊 Raj bhi bebas tha!!!! 😭

Navin ne Simi ko diya tha clue ush jagah ka jahan usne proofs chupaye hai!!!!! 😊 Aur kaha ke woh usse khush dekhna chahta hai!!!!Par Navin tumare bagair woh khush kaise rahegi!!!! 😭

Navin ab afsoos kar raha hai ke usne Simi ke pyaar ko kyun nahi pehchana!!!!! 😭

Ab Raj ush pattern ko solve karle!!!!! Aur sab theek karde!!!!! 😊

Simi ko lagta hai ke Navin is not dead!!!!! 😊 Usse sahi lagta hai!!!!! 😊 I hope uski duya ab kubul ho jaye aur Navin usse jaldi hi mil jaye!!!!! 😊

The song was apt for Simi!!!! 😊 😊 😊 It was very touching!!!!!! 😭

Looking forward to the Fresher's Ball!!!! 😊 And loads of romance and action!!!!! 😳 And don't forget Gori Gori!!!!! 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ur fic is just amazing 😊 plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzz update it soon waiting eagrly asap a long part plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
He sorry mai is ko pehle hi padh chuke thi par reply dena bhool gayi sorry for that. 😕 😕
Simi loves Navin so much but that Ritu the bitch i hate her. 😡
Kaash Simi ko pyaar karta Naveen to jyada hi accha hota. 😭
Simi ne pehle Naveen ko keh diya hota to Naveen bach jaata. 😭
Raj bhi bahut kuch kar raha hai par Naina samjhe na to. 😡
Raj ka kya hoga Ritu us ka peecha chodegi nahi aur Naina aise maanegi nahi. 😕
Poor Raj. 😕 😕
Par Naina ko jaldi hi maanan hoga varna der ho jaayegi. 😡
Update soon yaar it's had been a long time. 😊

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