ff- love will find a way - chapter 10

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Ok I will do a small one from today's march 4th episode. Not very romantic but hope you guys like it.

After mallika hears that Kanya does run a massage parlour she gets very upset.

mallika: Kanya mein tum par bahut vishvas rakhthi thi. Lekhin aaj Mujhe lagta hai reva teekh hai.

Rewa is smiling from one corner.

Kanya: with tears in her eyes Mummiji !!!Woh toh mein....

mallika: Please. Tumhe Kuch bolne ki zaroorath nahin hai. You have broken my heart and my emotions today.
PLEASE!!! Tum khud is ghar chodkar chale jao. Mein aur is rishtey ko Bachana nahin chahti.

Kanya with tears in her eyes looks at ranbir sadly and leaves with Shantu. Ranbir looks confused not knowing what to say. Aditya notices this but just ignores him thinking that he is acting in front of his family.

Outside as usual aditya and ranbir plan to drop shantu and Kanya. But this time Aditya seems more excited than Ranbir. Ranbir looks lost and confused. Vision of Kanya's tears seems to be pricking his heart. Aditya keeps appreciating him about his mindblowing idea but Ranbir doesn't react. Also he remembers the scene where Ranbir Broke Kanya's engagement and she gave him a shaap that he should get a girl who teaches the real meaning of love.

Shantu came there and as usual started taunting Ranbir and Aditya. While she was busy teasing aditya about his flop ideas and tried to irritate Ranbir calling him a Saand. But she was surprised not seeing Ranbir's reaction. Instead Ranbir was busy looking at Kanya with a heartbroken look. Kanya had tears in her eyes and they were not talking but instead their hearts were talking.

Kanya looks at Ranbir and her heart talks to him: Ranbir kyun tum mujhe aise satate ho. Mere paas hokar bhi tum mujhe duk dete ho or door hokar bhi…... Mujhe maloom tha ki hum donon ke rishtey ko yahi anth hai. Per ajj mujhe kyun aisa lag raha hai ki meri koi apni cheez mujse door jaa rahe hai. Kyun sab kuch soona soona lag raha hai. Kyun.. Jawab do ranbir.

Ranbir looks at Kanya and his heart talks to her: maantha hoon ki hum donon ka ye rishta sirf ek contract marriage tha. Par lekin aaj jab ye contract end ho raha hai to mujhe dukh kyun ho raha hai. Mein tumhe dukh panhunchana chahta tha. mein tumhe rulana chanta tha. Par aaj Kyun mujhe tumhare aankhon ki aasu dekha nahin jaa saktha.

Later shantu interferes and breaks their eye lock as usual. Ab chale sand. Ranbir and kanya's ego take over their emotions and they go on their hate trip as usual. Ranbir looks at kanya and tells her "Aaj tum is rishtey se aazad ho. Aaj tum apne raastey kush aur mein apne raaste."

Kanya: pichle baar bhi yahi kah rahe the lekin peeche peeche tum aaye aur mujhe lekar a gaye tumhare is booth bangle me. Is baar math aana. Warna mein tumhare mom ko humari sacchayi bata doongi.

Now they sit in the car. Ranbir drives the car and Kanya sits behind him. Kanya takes the longest route to her house because he did not want to drop her off. Kanya looks at ranbir in the rear view mirror with a concerned look. Later he drops her off and stands there unlike last time to bid her good bye. But as usual she does not turn and when she turns he turns away.

Now Ranbir comes home and sees his mother crying. He doesn't know how to handle her. He goes to her and tells her I am sorry mom. But mallika ignores him and shows him their contract marriage paper. Ranbir looks shocked and doesn't know how she got it.

Mallika: Tum donon ke contract marriage ke bare me mujhe usi din maloom hua tha jab tum donon ke shaadi hue te. Lekhin meine socha ki mein tum donon to kareeb la sakhun or is contract marriage ko ek sacche rishtey mein badal sakhun. Lekhin jab tum donon ek doosre ke saath rehana hi nahi chahate to mein aur koshish nahin karna chatha. Isliye is contract marriage ke papers ko mita do is divorce papers ko pakdo aur is rishtey ko thod do.

Ranbir: par mom.

Mallika: mein kuch sunna nahin chahti. Mein kanya ko aur takleef nahin pahunchana chahthi. Who acchi ladki hai. Hamesha is rishtey ko todne ke liye or tumhare diye hue wade ko nibane ke liye usne apne aap ko galath dikhayi hai. Aur tum in pariwar logon ke beech me acche insaan ban gaye. Bahut sahan li tumhare waje se. tum usko in saare muzzebat se chutkara dedo. But one thing ranbir. Tum paschaoge. You will definitely repent.

Ranbir looks at the divorce papers with tears in his eyes.
At kanya's house: she sees her marriage picture with ranbir and just weeps.
In the background this song plays. [song from dor]
rishtey, barose, chahat, yakeen
un sab ka daaman ab chaag hai
samjhe the haaton mein hai zameen
mutti jo kholi bas khwab hain

dil mein yeh shor hai kyun
imaan kamzor hai kyun
naazuk hai dor hai kyun

Shall I continue this......


I know i have to continue the previous but I hope to find time and do both. Bear with me if I delay with updates.
Edited by vidyac2003 - 17 years ago

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wow that was soo good! plzz continue! 😊
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arrey yaar why you stop continue...you know i was in the scenes already...it was so beautifully written
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i am writing the second part to the story. please bear with me. it will be put up sometime tomorrow or this week.
Edited by vidyac2003 - 17 years ago
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OMG^^^^ omg omg omg
tht was rele gud
cuz i was listeining to pehli nazar
n i read the end part of the raanu nd kan bein sad nd omg i felt lyk cryin 😳 😆
( yah im sensitivee 😳 )
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please continue it was really good=]
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hey this is awosome
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Keep it up
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Precap [ kanya kicked out, ranbir feels bitter, ranbir and kanya's heart speak to each other, mallika knows the truth and gives ranbir the divorce paper to free her]

Remember this scene is shifting between kanya and ranbir. Ranbir is heartbroken and shedding tears. While kanya cannot control herself and weeps uncontrollably.

At Ranbir's place …

Ranbir: looks at the divorce papers, falls on his couch after hearing his mom's words and lies back closing his eyes. A tear drop falls on the paper. Aditya who feels relieved from a big responsibility decides to call Ranbir for a party and chill tonight.

Aditya: yeh tumhare zindagi ka sabse accha pal hai. Aur tum yahan bait kar kya kar rahe ho. Chalo bar chal the aur aaj poora din maza karthe hai. Meri sadi hui biwi bhi ghar me nahi hai. Chalo isse accha mauka kabhi nahin milega.

Ranbir: bhaiya aap jayiye. Mera dil nahin kar raha hai.

Aditya notices ranbir wipe his tear drop away. He smells something fishy. He notices the divorce papers on his hands.

Aditya: ye divorce papers tere haath mein kaise.

Ranbir: who mom ne di. Mom ko hamare contract marriage ke bare me sab kuch pata tha.

Aditya is shocked. But the more he is shocked about ranbir saying "hum" rather than "mein". A guy who always considered himself as the first most important person was using a "we" rather than a "I". Aditya knew that he was mentioning kanya but was surprised to see how a girl who never existed to him became a part of his life. Aditya sighs and comes out off his imagination

Aditya: teekh hai.. accha hua. Yahi chahte the tum. Ab chaachi be raazi hai is mamle me. To problem kya hai? divorce do na usko?

Ranbir looks at aditya with a concerned look. Aditya sees tears in Ranbir's eyes for the first time in his life. Ranbir comes out of his emotions and covers up telling that something went into his eyes.

Aditya: meine to tere in aasuon ke bare me to poocha hi nahin. Tu uska jawab kyun de rahe ho?

Ranbir: woh to mein socha tha ki …. Kuch nahin … chodiye mein sone jaa raha hun.

Ranbir is about to leave while aditya stops him.

Aditya: dekh ranbir. sab kuch ab tumhare icche se chal raha hai. Ab ye mat kehna ki tum kanya se …..

Ranbir: interrupts inbetween and in a high emotional hysterical tone tells……"haan mein kanya se pyar karta hoon. Pata nahin kab kaise aur kyun. Bas ho gaya. Haan mantha hoon… mein use nafrath kartha tha. Uske dil ko bahut chot pahuncha. Mein uski layak hi nahin. Par mujhe uske saath rehkar aadath ho gaya. Ab uske bina mein adoora hoon. Aaj mujhe who din yaad aa raha hai jab shanta tayi ne kaha ki mein zaroor pachaunga. Aaj mujhe ehsaas ho raha hai ki who ladki kanya hai jo mujhe saccha pyar karna sikhayi hai. Par lekhin woh mujse door ho gayi aur mujhe ye sazaa milni chahiye….mein use bahut pyaar karta hoon, nahin reha saktha uske bina" ……and he weeps hysterically hugging aditya.

Mallika watches all this from behind silently and weeps seeing her son's fate. But this time she decides not to interfere but leave it to ranbir to decide his fate. She walks away from the scene.

Aditya tries to control ranbir…. He tells him to have some confidence in himself and they will go and talk to kanya tomorrow to know what is in her mind.

But ranbir interferes: nahin bhaiyya. Aap aisa kuch bhi nahin karenge. Woh mere saath kabhi kush nahin thi. Aur woh mujse nafrath karti hai. Kyun nahin karegi. Mein to uski layak hi nahin. Ab woh kush hogi apne ghar me. Bas is divorce ke baad who kisi aur se shadi karegi aur kush rahegi.

Aditya: par lekhin tu kush rahega? Tumhare halath dekh har mujhe lagta hai ki tum pagal ho jayega uske bina. Mat de tum ye sazaaa apne aapko. Kya pata woh bhi tumse …..

Ranbir interferes: … pyar nahin karti. Kyunki jab woh jaa rahi thi tab usne mujhe use dobara milne se mana kiya hai. Isliye please bhaiyya. Aap kuch nahin kahenge.

Ranbir leaves the room leaving a thoughtful aditya. Aidtya doesn't know what to do with this situation. He tells to himself.

"Contract marriage ka plan mera tha. in saare muzibaten ka zimmedar mein hoon. Is liye mujhe hi is situation ko teekh karna hai" FREEZE..

Edited by vidyac2003 - 17 years ago
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wow that's so good plz write soon 😊
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excellent..very heartfelt continue soon 👏 👏 👏

pls read my ff alls fair in love and war and pls leave comments thank you =]
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