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Posted: 17 years ago
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OO!! NIRU!! i just read all 3 parts!! ME LOVED IT!! absolutely loved it!! it was sooooo awesome!! i loved the Ranbir and Kanya scenes!! SOO CUTE!! and, i see, ur not as innocent as i thought u were!! 😆 😆 u have to continue like right right right now!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
nir if you do not mind please write some romantic part about ranbir and kanya for 14 feb.

if you do that will be great.

thank you for write the FF you are writing.

it is great.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
heya wonderful update as usual... 😊
it makes up for the lack of rankan scenes in the show
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
hey great update and ur Natasha story is interesting...update again soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Hey guys.. i know i know.. that i promised i will update on valentines day.. but what can i do.. i had to copy.. my notes and stuff.. soo.. i couldnt.. sorrie about that.. so here is the next update.. i hope this is good.. enough.. for.. Ranya's fans..


R hugged her.. and they both went ot sleep in each others. arms..

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In the morning.. Kanya tried moving, but she couldnt.. there was this something really comfy, and something that was holding on to her really tightly.

Kanya opened her eyes a little to see who is holding her this tightly, but who is this comfy, she has never felt this comfortable in her sleep till now.
When Kanya opened her eyes she saw that Ranbir, was the one who was holding her for his life, yet he had this cute smile, and he was sleeping like a baby who is holding on to their fav toy.

Kanya just kept on looking at him, and went into a flashback thinking about everything that has gone through in her life, how she found out yesterday that she is not her mama papa's daugh, how Natasha is trying to kill her, and how She and Ranbir shared that kiss. A kiss which is suppose to be something really small, but which speaks a thousand words. Kanya remember that once her friend told her that if u kiss a guy, and there are no fire works or anything that means that u dont share anything special with him. But Kanya said that was more than just fireworks, that was like.. something that she couldnt describe, something that just happens but u cant describe. Kanya thought that would ranbir not like to be husband anymore as i am adopted.

Kanya came back to the present, and looked at ranbir he was sleeping, so nicely, she had a urge to kiss those lips, which had the cutest smile on the world, but than again she didnt want to wake him up either, so instead she went up a little and kissed his forehead very lightly so ranbir wouldnt wake up.

When Ranbir felt something very sweet, yet very feathery on his forehead, he smiled even more, but he opened his eyes to see what just touched his forehead. First thing that he saw was that his cute wife was staring at him, and she blushed because she didnt think that he would wake up , but he did.. so he gave her his ever so sexy smile.

Ranbir bent down a little, and caputred those lips, that were telling him that if he doesnt kiss them right now, he will go crazy. After few minutes, which only seemed like few seconds, they both broke up trying to catch their breath.

K: ranbir, what is all that about?
R: what? i had to kiss u, or i would have gone crazy..
K: u r so disguisting..
R: why? is it because i kissed my own wife.
K thought to herself: wow, him saying.. that i am his wife sounds like i am listening some peaceful yoga music.
K: i didnt want to get kissed by u first thing in the morning..
R: well u know what, that is waht get for looking so cute first thing in the morning..
K: aww, ranbir.. u called me cute..

(all this while they both are still in a hugging position, ranbir's hands on her waist, and kanya's hands on his neck)
R: waht well, first thing in the morning, u r suppose to be looking a little messy..
K: well, i guess i dont look messy in the morning..
R: ya coz u do, later in the day..
K: what? started hitting him..
R: ok baba, sorrie.. here i will hold on to ur ears. ( ranbir holds kanya's ears)
K starts hitting him even more..
R: ok ok.. (laughing) sorrie baba, trys hugging.. her.. but she would just smack his hands away..
R hold her hands really tightly, and gave her another kiss.
Trying to catch his breath..
R said: see now i have found a way to make u be quiet.. great
K: oo shut up..
R: theek hai.. i will give u my shirt..
K: RANBIR..
R: what u r the one who said, shirt up..
K: i didnt say that.. be quiet.

They both were just lying there.. on their bed.. trying to feel each other.. trying to feel how it feels to be together..

K: ranbir..
R: umm.
K: i.. umm.. i.. want.. .. want..
R: turns her so he can see her fave: what kanya?
K: ranbir, will u still be with me.. even after knowing that i am adopted..
R: got mad when she said that..
K: ok.. i didnt mean to ..
But before she can say something.. Ranbir kissed her hard, as if punishing her for saying that..

R: kanya, dont u dare say that again...
K: i just wanted to know..
R: u and me both know that.. we were in this relation because of somethings.. that we are not going to discuss right now.., but that doesnt mean.. it makes a difference that u r adopted because.. as u said yesterday, mama and papa are ur parents no matter, if u r adopted or not..
That means i am ur husband no matter what.. got that part.

K: umm.. smilied
K: r u sure??
R: i think i will just have to show u, how sure i am..??
R was on top of her, and started kissing her.. Kissed her forehead. than her left eye than her right.. than left cheek than her right cheek.. and.. went down her neck.. started nuzzling.. her neck.. leaving.. love bites..
than finally.. came for her lips..

And the scene fades away.

ok guys.. that is it.. for now.. as i have to go to.. sleep.. school tom.. i know i know..
it sucks hehe..
hope u guys liked it..



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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
aww soo sweet...make sure u continue through out the weekend 😃 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
wow, nir that was great.

i have no word to say for this writing. it was perfact.

great, brillianat, awesome and beautifual.

write soon please.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
awww nir.. this just made my day!! 😊 i just came back from my valentine's day dinner w/ my bro n his wife!!!.. how sad is that.. im a 19 year old.. loser. can you image sitting in a restaurant w/ couples all around you??.. not best scene 4 a single person.. anyway, ur update cheered me up.. im loving all the kissing 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
ok ok...sorry...aane mein dehr hogayi...so so so sorry...😕...but i took a nice nap after i got home from school so now i am nice an refreshed and all...so now i can focus on your ff 😃😃😃

haila 😳😳😳...what a chumma...omg omg omg...but haila...😡...first im going to kill you, then i will go after shanta...😡😡😡...kya yaar...she is such a mood kill 🤢🤢🤢...we need to get shanta married, then she will have her own love life and stop ruining rannu and kannu's 😉😉😉

haila...yeh kaun hai...natasha im sure huh...but haila...so sweet...ranbir is worried about his biwi 👏👏👏...😳😳😳...and haila...i can totally picture ranbir saying goddamit, so what if its is jai's...we love ranbir so yeh bhi chalega 😉😉😉...haila...a 3yr old with such great memory...wow...natasha hai ya super woman 😆😆😆...i love that ranbir is giving her support 😳😳...

you know i am coming after shanta...im going to tie her up and lock her in the nanda guest room...baas main abhi aati hoon...i got my ticket and everything...😉...haila...rankan on the same bed 😳😳😳

oye niru...what is this...i updated yesterday so where is part 4...i updated all three ff's yesterday...now its your turn...😡😡...

JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
omg i luved it
like sssssssssssssooooooooooooooooomuch
plz cont soon 😉

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