SS Ek Pal part 10 pg 20 6/1 - Page 3

it was nice.

love the last part.

ranbir saying my kanya, that line was just perfect. it was great, asking the question and answering at the same time.

i would say ranbir is falling for kanya.

ranbir is sooo cute.... 'my kanya' 😳
anyways nice part... 👏 😃

awww nir ur making it all so addictive that i wanna kp reading on and on...soo plzz yaar hurry upfinish ur h/w and write some more ov ur gr8 creations! 👏 😳

aww cute scene...make sure u continue today since u dont do hmwk on sundays 😛 😆

yep i agree.pls write soon.cant wait for ur next part .

niru!...tu maar khayegi 😡😡😡...who leaves off at such a spot...😡😡😡...ther...teri khabar leti hoon...watch where i end my updates...im going to go edit Bani's Secret right now...phir dekhna...how it feels 😈...aur haan...if shantu kills this moment...im going to kill shantu then i will come after your...😡😡😡...there had better be some rannu and kannu action...varna..................................

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

niru!...tu maar khayegi 😡😡😡...who leaves off at such a spot...😡😡😡...ther...teri khabar leti hoon...watch where i end my updates...im going to go edit Bani's Secret right now...phir dekhna...how it feels 😈...aur haan...if shantu kills this moment...im going to kill shantu then i will come after your...😡😡😡...there had better be some rannu and kannu action...varna..................................

JAZ

jazzie im with u 100 percent.. yep thats right niru.. eheheheh.... 😡... u better continue soon.. just had to end there.. wait till i pm u.. 😡.. o and jazzie u will do no such thing.. maine kya bigada hai yaar.😭

I guess u guys are not lucky..
as i was going to update.. yesterday.. but it was just not letting me log on.. hehe..

so maybe.. today.
if i am done with it.. okkk

mwahzz.
everyone.

Originally posted by: phool527

awwwnn.. kya niru.. couldnt u find a better place to end.. seriously.. things were just getting romantic and u broke our heart.. 😳 😉 .. lol.. and ppl im not lieing.. and i do not have all the time in the world.. but loved how ranbir saw how much his pyari wife kanya loves his family even after wat happened.. shes such a typical indian bahu.... hehehheh.. lol.. continue soon yaar. cant wait for da next part.. 😉

.. u know that is not true.. binish.. u have more.. time than anyone else hehe.e. and please.. gal.. i dont break anyones heart.. unless.. i ahve too.. hehe..😆 anyways.. i had to end there. as jaz di.. doesnt update. i am so mad at her.. nir is going to start.. crying seriously.. go and tell her to update.. NOW.. heheh

Originally posted by: blah07

hun, that is such a balaji cliffhanger 😆 😆 .. please update soon.. i wanta know how far this hot scene goes 😉 .. ekkk i hope shanta tai doesn't come in and ruin it... im eagerly waiting 4 the next part 😊

- Nabila

hehehe have seen so many balaji.. serials.. that i have to be faithful dont u think hehehe.. as this is also balaji.. serial hehe.. just wait and watch.. no sorrie.. u cant watch.. so.. wait and read.. hehe..

Originally posted by: sam78

it was nice.

love the last part.

ranbir saying my kanya, that line was just perfect. it was great, asking the question and answering at the same time.

i would say ranbir is falling for kanya.

..thank u for liking that update.. i would say. that too.. that ranbir is falling for kanya.. omg omg omg.. that is such a surprise.. that we both share.. thoughts hehe.. jk jk..

Originally posted by: kunataanya

ranbir is sooo cute.... 'my kanya' 😳
anyways nice part... 👏 😃

..i know isnt he.. hehe..
ya my kanya.. kya yaar.. biwi hai uski..
so.. my kanya nahi kahai ga.. to.. kya.. padosi.. ki kanya kahai ga.. heheh jk jk jk..

Originally posted by: aish-uk

awww nir ur making it all so addictive that i wanna kp reading on and on...soo plzz yaar hurry upfinish ur h/w and write some more ov ur gr8 creations! 👏 😳

..hey thanks a lot.. hehe.. thhis is really.. cool to know.. that some people are addicted to my..ss.. hehe.. sorrie.. hun.. just when i finished.. doing my update.. i saw.. my bro.. coming.. i was like.. wow.. great timing.. nir hehehe..

Originally posted by: indiangirl31

aww cute scene...make sure u continue today since u dont do hmwk on sundays 😛 😆

..hehe.. sorrie.. jaan.. it is very rarely.. u will see me update.. on sunday's this.. days.. as everyone.. is home.. so.. dont get time.. to update.. hehe..

Originally posted by: amoreedamicizia

yep i agree.pls write soon.cant wait for ur next part .

..thank u thank.. u.. so much.. for liking my update.. thanks a lot.. hehe.. i will try to update.. today.. promising.. started writing.. yesterday.. night.. which is a surprise.. as i dont write.. my updates.. till.. the day.. i am going to post hehe..

Originally posted by: jnawaz

niru!...tu maar khayegi 😡😡😡...who leaves off at such a spot...😡😡😡...ther...teri khabar leti hoon...watch where i end my updates...im going to go edit Bani's Secret right now...phir dekhna...how it feels 😈...aur haan...if shantu kills this moment...im going to kill shantu then i will come after your...😡😡😡...there had better be some rannu and kannu action...varna..................................

JAZ

..hey jaz di.. how r u?? hehe.. what is this people.. why is everyone sending me.. dhamki's yaar.. that is not cool at all.. ok.. well jaz di.. atleast.. i update.. everyone.. onces in a week.. how long has it been since.. u update huh huh.. now tell me.. if u dont update.. today.. or tom.. i am going to stop this ff.. u hear me.. and i mean.. u have to update.. both of ur ff's.. or i am going to stop this SS..

Originally posted by: phool527

jazzie im with u 100 percent.. yep thats right niru.. eheheheh.... 😡... u better continue soon.. just had to end there.. wait till i pm u.. 😡.. o and jazzie u will do no such thing.. maine kya bigada hai yaar.😭

.ya binish go after jazzie.. wazzie. hehe.. and tell her to update.. or i am going to stop this ss.. after this.. part.. hehe..
and u guys.. are going to be.. really.. sad if i stop after this.. one.. got it.. as i have a very intense.. part.. coming up hehe.😛😛😛