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Arziya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#61

Omg tht was sooooooo gud!!!!!! i luved it 😳

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Sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

hope their door is locked! anyway great update! 😃

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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 17 years ago

#63

OOO, not so innocent niru!! i mean, seriously, two fading away scenes!! That's two too many for little innocent Hinna 😃 😳 😳 Ranbir and Kanya better go on their honeymoon soon and then i better hear some good news from kanya 😆 😆 so continue SOON!! like TOMORROW cuz it's FRIDAY 😃 😃

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 17 years ago

#64

aww very romantic and cute...continue plzz 😳

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Nazia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#65

great updale nirali. its romantic 😉

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aish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#66

awww nir...rlly cuuute...ur fan fic's really brighten my boring weekends without k.i.t..thanks!...update swn!

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Natasha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#67

Aww that was so romantic!!

Please update soon or whenever u can.

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sam78
very nice, it was beautifual.

Thanks a lot sam..

Originally posted by: KC294
that was hot. 😳 ... and shantu man 😆 ... why she being nosy... leave the love birds alone amazing...

Hehehe dont worrie till i am here ST wont come inbetween the love birds hehe

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
wow!! can anyone feel their cheeks blushing with the heat being produced on the computer.... hey that was hot... once more... 😳

please do continue!

hehe.. i hope u liked that part though hehehe... just did

Originally posted by: phool527
😳 😳 😳 haila nir 😳 😳 .. binish is going to faint any time now.. kya part tha yaar.. soooo 😳 😳 .. heheheh.. awwnnnnn shanta tai kahan ja rahi ho.. wapas apna breakfast karne jao ab.. bohut hogaya tera natak.. that was sooo adorable... kanya ranbir is right u just have to say it.. i noe its not easy.. heheheh.. 😉 😳 😆 .. anywayz great part niru..im not gonna complain about small part bcuz i noe how hard it is to write FF's.. see im being a good girl now.. BINISH IS NOT ABOUT TO CRY 😉 😆 😆 this part was SOO COOL.. 😉 😆 see ididnt say SO NOT COOL or BINISH IS ABOUT TO CRY.. 😉 .. 😆 😆 .. i think niru gets it right niru.. see im protecting ur rep.. 😆 😆

Binish u making my rep go down the drain u know that.. seriously. with this kind of comment geez.. binish hehehe

Originally posted by: emerald_jule
Omg tht was sooooooo gud!!!!!! i luved it 😳

hey thank u so much

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
hope their door is locked! anyway great update! 😃

Of course their door is locked.. or it would be really weird dont u think..

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~
OOO, not so innocent niru!! i mean, seriously, two fading away scenes!! That's two too many for little innocent Hinna 😃 😳 😳 Ranbir and Kanya better go on their honeymoon soon and then i better hear some good news from kanya 😆 😆 so continue SOON!! like TOMORROW cuz it's FRIDAY 😃 😃

Hey hin.. what r u talking about i am the most innocent person u know.. and u know i am right.. u and mit are the one.. with that smiley.. remember.. anyways.. and what is this.. no blackmailing.. u know i hardly come online.. if i would i talk to u every day.. u know that.. right.. so u know i dont get time.. so.. stop yelling at me.. got it.. Ms. Hinna.. who forgot to comment.. btw..

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes
aww very romantic and cute...continue plzz 😳

thanks punjabi princess

Originally posted by: nazeeei
great updale nirali. its romantic 😉

Thanks nazeei

Originally posted by: aish-uk
awww nir...rlly cuuute...ur fan fic's really brighten my boring weekends without k.i.t..thanks!...update swn!

Aww so sweet of u.. thank u so much i am glad.. that i made a difference

Originally posted by: sam78
nir please please update soon.

thanks sam again hehe

Originally posted by: ange94
Aww that was so romantic!!

Please update soon or whenever u can.

Hey ange glad that u liked it..

Originally posted by: baby_gurl#1
awww...very HOT! cont soon!

thanks i am so glad that u liked it

Originally posted by: miss5stars
nirali u shudd continueeeeee tonite 😃 😃 😃 urr fanfic was tooooooooo cuteeeeee😳 😳 😳

thanks see u said i should.. and i did.. hehehe..

Edited by nir_jaanu - 17 years ago

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Shazeen

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Posted: 17 years ago

#69

nirali u shudd continueeeeee tonite 😃 😃 😃 urr fanfic was tooooooooo cuteeeeee😳 😳 😳

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#70

Hello everyone, i know i used have updated before but guys i am really busy this days as i have after
school things i have to go too, than two reports due and hw and than i cant come on weekeneds that
much.. so i cant really update on weekeneds anymore.. so sorrie about that. I would like to say Thank
u so much for all the comments and stuff i really really appericate it seriously, ur comments are the
one that makes me feel guilty for not updating which makes me want to write the next update
hehehe.. so keep on commenting
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At the dinning table

M: areey, ye ranbir aur kanya kahan hai..

ST: ya were r they..

M: shanta tai.. dont worrie.. they will come..

ST getting worried.. she wanted to know.. where they both are..

ST: i will be right back.

M: ST where r u going??

ST: ummm.. thinking of an excuse.. as she was going to go check on RK, ummm.. i forgot something in my room..

ST left before.. anyone could stop her..

When ST was about to reach Ranya's bedroom, Big D was came the same way and saw ST so she went towards her,

BD: ST what r u doing here?

ST: umm.. i... i.... ya.. i was going to my room..

BD: but ur room is that side

ST: ya.. i was going there i just forgot

BD: its ok.. here let me take u to ur room..

BD takes ST to her room and here

ST(to herself): geez this old lady is always in my way..

BD: did u say something Shantu

ST: no nahi mein kuch nahi kaha..

BD: i am just imaging things i think..

Just than M comes as she was wondering what was taking ST so long

M: ST did u take what u needed??? Come and eat ur breakfast as i am sure u are hungry right?

ST: um... ya .. i got.. waht i needed..

M: mom, u r coming to right?

BD: ya lets go.

M,ST & BD went downstairs

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(Hey guys i am going to changing colors very often in here as i am getting bored witht he same color u know what i mean)

In Ranya's room..

R & K just came out of the bathroom

R in his bathrobe and K in hers

K was blushing like anything

K went to her wardrobe and was getting confused what to wear, so she was just staring at her clothes
R sees this so he comes to where k was and hugs her from behind

R: umm, u smell good..

K: get of me (trying to get R's hands of her)

R: what why??

K: coz it is all ur fault that we are going to be late for breakfast

R: well i didnt see u complaining before.. (whispers in her ears) actually u were being a wild cat over there (points to the bed)

K is red as a tomato.. and Seeing K so red R cant help but laugh

K: shut up

R: aww..

R gets a brown salwaar for kanya and hands her the salwaar

R: here wear this u will look hot and sexy..

K: ok.. thanks, love u

R: love u too..

K was about to leave for the bathroom to change but R held her by her wrist

R: umm.. i choose ur clothes so now u choose mine..

K went to R's wardrobe..

K: umm.. first close ur eyes.

R: Kanya

K: Ranbir, please.. giving him her puppy eyes

R: theek hai theek hai baba

K gets his clothes and goes in front of him.. see is holding his clothes in front of him..

K: R now open ur eyes..

R: waht???
Ranbir was shock to see dark blue vintage jeans and white shirt with black blazer

R: i am not wearing that, i only wear suits u know that

K: oo come on R, trying leaving a normal life for once

R: what do u mean?? that i dont have a normal life

K: no.. i mean like trying being casual, u r always so formal dont u get bored..

R: no..

K: whatever, but please wear this for me please

R: okkkk.. theek hai..

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Dining Table

Everyone was enjoying there breakfast except ST

ST was worried, and having weird thoughts thinking what is wrong with these two why are they not showing up

and stuff..

Just than RnK walked in hand in hand..

M: where were u two??

R: nothing mom, i... i..

K: mummyji, actually i wasnt feeling good, so.. ranbir was just taking care of me thats it..

R looks at kanya and smiles

R(to herself): ya not feeling good.. i dont know about that but i was sure taking care of her..

K blushed.. it was like she could read what R was thinking about..

R seeing K blushed, was thinking did she read my mind or something..

They both sat down..

M: soo.. R now u r done with ur work right??

R: um.. why mom??

M: because u need to go for ur honeymoon..

R was looking at M but his hands were playing with K's hands..

M: ranbir answer me

R: ya mom i am done with my work..

M: good, so kanya where do u want to go.. Mauritius or Singapore

K: um.. mummyji, where he wants to go

M: aww, meri bahu is so sweet

M: btw what is wrong with ur right hand

R laughed at that comment to himself

R: ya kanya what is wrong with ur hand.. why r u eating with the wrong hand

K: umm.. um... giving R angry looks

Ok guys that is it.. got to go.. I hope u like this update.. thank u so much for the comments once again..

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