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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: blah07

awww nir.. this just made my day!! 😊 i just came back from my valentine's day dinner w/ my bro n his wife!!!.. how sad is that.. im a 19 year old.. loser. can you image sitting in a restaurant w/ couples all around you??.. not best scene 4 a single person.. anyway, ur update cheered me up.. im loving all the kissing 😳

hahahah..aww blesss!...well nir u also made my day as i just came back from uni..and i was sittin in my lec thinkin abt kuchh is tara n ranbir...i kno its a lil silly but daym dat guy is magic!...that was such a sweet update..thanks..appreciate the fact u write just for us although u have alot of work to do...thanks agn nir!..but plz do kp going...esp thru the weekendz!..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
its the weekend now and i think you should make a few updates now! 😉 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
haila haila...fade away...😳😳😳...does that really mean what i think it means...omg omg...aab kya hoga...cant wait for next update
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
pls update soon, i can't wait to see what happens. Great story so far, i love it =]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
great update... loved it... pls do continue...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I know i know.. that i cant even say sorrie.. anymore.. that is how bad i am.. but what can i do.. guys.. i dont get that much time to update so sorrie.. about that..
plus i want to say.. Thank u so much for all those comment i am really touched and i would like to say so sorrie.. about not replying to them.. right now.. but what can i do.
if i need to write.. this update right now.. i wont be able to comment.. so it was either one.. i thought.. i would update.. as.. u guys have been the bestest readers ever..mwahzz.. everyone..

So here goes the update

Part 5

K: umm.. smilied
K: r u sure??
R: i think i will just have to show u, how sure i am..??
R was on top of her, and started kissing her.. Kissed her forehead. than her left eye than her right.. than left cheek than her right cheek.. and.. went down her neck.. started nuzzling.. her neck.. leaving.. love bites..
than finally.. came for her lips..

And the scene fades away.
(and yes jazzie wazzie.. u were right.. scene fades only .. means one thing)
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This time ranbir woke up first..
Ranbir staring at kanya, image his life without kanya.. and he saw that there was no person in his life who made a huge impact on him.. except of course Big B and his mom.. but other than that no one has ever came close to the real ranbir, ranbir who wants to love someone, who wants to hold them at night, make them feel special, take care of them when they are scared when they need him..

R to himself while looking at kanya: I promise kanya, i would never leave u, i promise i will love u forever and ever, and i also will try to be nice to ur phool lo ki dukaan.. hehe (laughs to himself)
K felt someone moving.. so she turned and now.. she was facing the other side, Ranbir looked at her.. and saw her back.. which was not covered with anything.. which was fully nak*d to him.. ..
Ranbir bent down a little and gave a kiss on her back..
K: ranbir sone do na..
R kept on.. roaming his hands on her back.. giving little massage and a kisses.. which were saying things that he couldnt.. describe to himself..
K: ranbir.
R: um..
K turned the other side.. now she is face to face with ranbir..
K: what is ur problem..
R: nothing..
R starts kissing.. her forehead..
K: ranbir.. enjoying the kiss.. everyone.. moaning.. would be waiting for us downstairs.. um..
R: ya well u know what i dont care...
R:u know why
K: why?? Ranbir had stop kissing her.. and she didnt like that one bit.
R: still not kissing her.. : because i am with my wife.. and i want to be with her.. right now..
K: getting mad, as he had stopped what he was doing before.. which she didnt like it one bit..
R: u know what.. we both are going on a honeymoon, that too today..
K: umm.. absent mindedly.. .. She put her hands around his neck.. trying to tell him.. that why did his hands stop roaming around her back.. and that he should start kissing her like he did before.
R: umm.. i think i am going to go.. take a shower.
K: what??
R: ya.. shower..
K: ooo..
R: what is wrong??
K: nothing.. (whispered to herself) i thought u would be thinking about something else..
R: came to her.. ears.. and wispered.. : if u want something all u have to do is ask.
K was shocked.. and mad that he was mocking her.
R: so.. u r going to ask.. or should i go take a shower.
K: um.. u can go take ur shower. turned and went to sleep.
R: what?? that is not what i wanted..
R turned kanya around.. she was acting as she went to sleep.. but she didnt..
R: kanya.. (sexy voice)
R kissed her hard on her lips.. but when kanya started responding to his kiss with the same passion.. his kisses turned into a soft passionate one..
R wisperred: ready for second round
K: blushed..
R: she my wife blushing..
K: shut up..
R kissed her.. right shoulder.. kissing.. every where.. than.. went towards.. the left shoulder.. than.. up her neck.. nose.. eyes.. which were closed..
R kissed her twice on her eyes. as he wanted them open.
R: kanya, open ur eyes..
K opened them.. but not looking at ranbir at all.
R: i want u to feel it, i want u to look into my eyes.. when i am making love to u..
K looked into his eyes.. she saw..love, respect saw someone.. who had loads of passion in them.
R starts with his kisses again..

Scenes fades away.
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At the dinning table

M: areey, ye ranbir aur kanya kahan hai..
ST: ya were r they..
M: shanta tai.. dont worrie.. they will come..
ST getting worried.. she wanted to know.. where they both are..
ST: i will be right back.
M: ST where r u going??
ST: ummm.. thinking of an excuse.. as she was going to go check on RK, ummm.. i forgot something in my room..
ST left before.. anyone could stop her..

Ok guys that is all i can type.. i dont promise anything but.. if i can.. i will try to update.. this weekened..
Hope u guys like this part too..


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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
very nice, it was beautifual.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
that was hot. 😳 ... and shantu man 😆 ... why she being nosy... leave the love birds alone amazing...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
wow!! can anyone feel their cheeks blushing with the heat being produced on the computer.... hey that was hot... once more... 😳

please do continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳 😳 😳 haila nir 😳 😳 .. binish is going to faint any time now.. kya part tha yaar.. soooo 😳 😳 .. heheheh.. awwnnnnn shanta tai kahan ja rahi ho.. wapas apna breakfast karne jao ab.. bohut hogaya tera natak.. that was sooo adorable... kanya ranbir is right u just have to say it.. i noe its not easy.. heheheh.. 😉 😳 😆 .. anywayz great part niru..im not gonna complain about small part bcuz i noe how hard it is to write FF's.. see im being a good girl now.. BINISH IS NOT ABOUT TO CRY 😉 😆 😆 this part was SOO COOL.. 😉 😆 see ididnt say SO NOT COOL or BINISH IS ABOUT TO CRY.. 😉 .. 😆 😆 .. i think niru gets it right niru.. see im protecting ur rep.. 😆 😆

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