SS Ek Pal part 10 pg 20 6/1

Hey guys, i am writing an SS, this is my first time writing SS i write FF's anyways.. i hope u guys like this if not.. please let me.. know as i do not want to bore u guys with something that u dont like.. thank u..

Part 1


Story starts after today's epi.. feb 7th..


Next morning in the Nanda family, everyone was gather at the dinning table to have breakfast. But there were two seats that were empty as Kanya and Ranbir were missing.


Ranbir and Kanya walk in, hand in hand to where everyone was sitting.
M: where were u beta?

R: sorrie mom we are late, actually.. i got a call from office so i was taking care of that, and Kanya got late because of me.

M: its ok beta, come have breakfast

R: come baby, helps her pulls her chair out for her

All the kids are saying awww.. and oooss..
as this si the first time their chachu.. actually did something nice for a women other than his mom and BD


M: kids stop teasing them.

Kanya started to blush, she did not even know why she was blushing.

M: ranbir beta, will you come with me to that land owners office as i am going their to buy that land and i want to see that land too.

R: of course mom, when do u want to go??

M: today, actually right now, r u busy right now?

R: no mom, we both can go right now, how about if we leave right after we finish breakfast?

M: that would be great beta.

R: kanya baby, can u go and get that 50 lakhs please

K: ya, be right back

R: okkk thanks.

K goes to Shanta tai's room to find that bag, but she doesnt find it, so she starts crying. She starts panicing.. she doesnt know what to do. So she thinks that she has her cell phone so she calls Ranbir on his cell

R thinks why is kanya calling me on my cell when we are at home, but still picks up his cell..

R: hello?

K: ranbir, can u come to the guestroom?

R: why what happened??

K: can u just come?

R: ok i am coming just wait...

Ranbir comes to the guestroom and goes to kanya and sees her crying Ranbir feels really weird as she is crying he feels restless. and he doesnt even know why, he doesnt want to feel this way, but he cant help himself..

Ranbir goes to kanya, Kanya is sitting on the bed, so ranbir goes to kanya and ranbir is on his knees talking to kanya..

R: kya huva kanya, tum roha kyun rahi ho?

In between sobs, K: becauseeee..... i .... cant.... fi...nnnddd.. th.. aattt.. b..agg...

R: what?

Kanya after hearing ranbir yell starts to cry even more..

R: ok sorrie, areey chup kahana sorrie.. ab chup baba... wipes her tears with his hand

R: r u sure u checked every were?

K: ya i am sure.. i cant find it.. omg.. i am so bad.. i cant even handle one single responsibility.. i am so sorrie ranbir seriously i am really sorrie..

Kanya starts crying again..

R: calm down.. sweetheart nothing is going to happen ok.. i will just go and tell mom...

K: nahi.. mummy ji will get mad at me..

R: nahi baby, mom wont say anything to u.. i promise.

R goes downstairs.. to get Maillka..

M: kya huva ranbir..??

R: mom actually.. mom..

Reva getting excited.. and thinking to herself that: yes kanya today is ur last day.. sorrie.. last moments.. just enjoy..

M: haan ranbir kaho?

R: mom actually.. kanya cant seem to find that bag..

Everyone gets up from their seat

E: what?

R: ya kanya cant seem to find that bag..

Everyone goes to the guestroom

K feeling really bad, and really scared too as Shanta tai is not there either..

M:kanya beta.. waht happened?

K: mummy ji.. sobbing.. i .. kept it .. here yesterday.. but now i cant find it..

Reva: see chachi... she is just lying to us.. she stole it.. as.. she has never seen this much money.. ever in her life..

Kanya crys even more.. when reva says that..

Shanya is there too.. and says.. ya she is here.. for money and for my ayaan..

R: what the hell are u talking about shanya?

S: kyon chachu.. when i came yesterday.. kanya was not in the room remember..

R: haan.. but still that doesnt mean anything...

S: well than do u know where she was.. yesterday

R: umm..

Reva: ya ranbir.. do u know where she was yesterday..

Someone: ehh.. tum sab.. kyon.. meri kanya ke phiche pade hai..

Kanya runs to shanta tai and just hugs her..

M: shanta tai.. do u know where that bag is..

S: kyon si bag

Reva: woh jis mein 50s lakh the..

S: oo vo bag.. to yahan hai.. shanta tai.. goes.. behind the dressing table.. (i didnt know.. where to put it.. so ya..)

K: shanta tai.. but.. u put it here last night..

S: kya kanya.. itni si.. baat ke liya.. itna rona.. remember i had two bags.. and the one that i put it here is stolen.. thats why i did that.. so.. if somebody.. comes to steal.. they will steal the wrong one..

K: love u shanta tai..

Sh: but that still.. doesnt mean that she is after my ayaan..

R:(trying to act innocent): what are u talking about shanya?

Sh: chachu.. ask her where she was yesterday night..

M: yesterday.. night.. she went with.. Shanta tai.. to drop kanta bai.. i saw them.. and.. reva.. and sid saw them too..

Re: ya.. umm.. we saww themm...

R: see shanya.. u r just being nosy..


ok guys that is it.. if this is boring.. please let me.. know.. i wotn continue it.. and sorrie.. if there are any mistakes.. havent.. reread it .. and.. i am very bad at writing in hindi.. so.. please.. do.. over look that..

please do comment.. thank u..

nirali❤️

Index

Part 1 pg 1

Part 2 pg 3

Part 3 pg 5

Part 4 pg 6

Part 5 pg 8

Part 6 pg 10

Part 7 pg 13

Part 8 pg 15

Part 9 pg 18

niru jaanu...me first 😃...

haila...'ek pal'...bring back memories...i had a ss in KS with that title and have a running ff in kayamath too...😆😆😆...kool naa...

i love this update...it was so cute...i loved how ranu called kanu baby even though no one was in the guest room...😳😳😳...thoda sa pyaar hua hai, thoda hai baaki 😉😉😉...cant wait for next update

JAZ

aww its really good!! i especailly liked it b/c you wrote it in english, which is a huge plus b/c my hindi is horrible.. thx 😊 im looking forward to wats gonna happen..

~Nabila

ranbir talking sweet to kanya, that is very nice.
i love this FF.

do con't soon, i want to know what will happend next.

that was really really cute.... 😊
please continue soon....

Nir_janu, thats was cuute when Ranbir calls her baby lol...shoo shweet!..plz do carry on...

i hope that happens on monday ohh i hope kanya does not fall in any kind of trouble..she is so sweet..

hey its really good and u shud continue it all through out the weekend... if u have time lol 😳

great work

👏

but i have a question FF stands for Fan Fiction. Whats does SS stand for?

Nehal