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Posted: 17 years ago
hi dat was a really gd update.
plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you so much for all this lovely comments..
i have read every single one..
thanks a lot once again..

ur update.. coming soon..
and i will try my best to make it longer.. so that..
ur.waiting.. doesnt go wasted
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thats short, but I loved it. Dont u make people go with them. Nir y is every1 always mean 2 my Ranbir? This is cute. Love RK part. Cont. soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Mitu1228

Thats short, but I loved it. Dont u make people go with them. Nir y is every1 always mean 2 my Ranbir? This is cute. Love RK part. Cont. soon.



finally got time.. to read huh.. hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok... i know i know that i took so long to update this but what can i do.. i am senior in high school. and this is my last year.. so i have all things that i have to finish.. before.. i leave.. so sorrie about not updating.. i promise too make this update. really long.. as i have to carry this.. story. forward..

Note:
when u guys said that kanya is pregnant that was not what i have actually thought of, as my main focus in this ff.. was something really different so just wait.. for kanya to be pregnant.. and plus.. it is only what.. a week.. that they have been together they cant get pregnant that fast..

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R: no one is coming, it is our honeymoon why would anyone else come with us

K: no response left from there smiling

R: yelled Kanyaaa no one is coming right???

K didnt say anything and left from there...

R was thinking who could be coming with them, he just prayed that, that Shanta tai doesnt come with them or it is going to be a huge kabab mein hadi.. for sure

Kanya was in their bedroom, packing there clothes and Shanta tai comes to her,

ST: kanya

K: ji

ST: where r u going??

K: ST me and ranbir are going on our honeymoon...

ST was shocked...

ST(thinking): what is wrong with her, she sounds happy to go to honeymoon with that saand.. i think i should ask her..

ST: kanya..

K still packing and smiling away: haan

ST: what is going on with u and ranbir??

K shocked with that question and looks at her..

K: what do u mean??

ST: i mean like u r happy to go on a honeymoon with that saand..

K: ST please,

Just than ranbir was about to enter their bedroom, but stopped to listen to their conv

ST: what please, tell me i want to know i have seen u guys staring at each other, holding hands even when no one is here.. what is going on ???

K: ST come here and sit..

ST: what??

K: please,

ST: ok

K: ST, we both love each other, yes that is true, there is something in this relation that me and ranbir cant deny, there is far more than just physical relation we both have started to trust each other, and started to love each other...

ST: but, how , when, why..

K: ST what kind of question is that??

ST: but i dont understand..

Just than ranbir enters the room..

R: what is there for u not to understand..

ST: that how can u love each other..

R: because she is the one who i have let to make feel all those feelings that i thought werent there..

K: ya, shanta tai.. u know how the things were with ayaan..

ST: but than how can u love someone else, when u loved ayaan

R looked at kanya as he also was thinking the same

K: because, with ayaan i thought that i was in love, but i guess it was one of those crush.. that just makes u think that u r in love but u really r not..

ST changes topic as she sees kanyas eyes getting moist, and she didnt want to make her cry..

ST: theek hai, so where r we going??

R: WE???

ST: ya we...

R: what why??

ST: because i am not going to leave kanya with u alone..

R: oo hello, i am her hubby..

ST: well so what..

R: so.. we dont need u for sure..

K was laughing seeing this two fighting it was a sight to see..

K imagined Ranbir having this cute little arguments with there kids (ok so u guys thought that she was pregnant but she is not so i thought maybe i will give u some..thing fimilar.. hehe)


Kanya starts dreaming..


Little girl: daddy, u r so mean

R: what how am i mean pari.. my darling

P: because u r not taking us to the waterpark...

R: well

Little boy looks older than pari: what well daddy, we want to go..

R: but..rishi

Rishi: what rishi??

Rishi & Pari: MOMMMMMMMM...

K comes running...:: kya hai.. what happened??

Note:
Rishi will be called Champ. so.. C=Rishi.. and P=Pari

C&P: mom, tell daddy, that he promised to take us to waterpark..

K: u two are getting very nutanki day by day..

C&P: what?? starts to cry

R: hehe... thats what u guys get..

C&P comes near him. and starts hitting.. him...on his arm

R: hey hey it is bad too hit ur daddy do u not know that??

C&P: u both are mean..

They were bout to go out.. when.. R gets hold on P and K on C..

they both carry them to their bed..

K: awww my babies, are mad at their mom and daddy..

K: ok we are sorrie.. holding her ears...

C&P: why is papa not holding his ears..

K gives ranbir a look..

R holds his ears too..

R: now is it ok..

P: ya.. *sobbing*

R: my princess stop crying please.. i was just kidding. i have taken this whole week off.. just to be with u guys..

P: promise papa..making a puppy face

R: promise my sweetheart..

C: so u guys are taking us to waterpark right..

K: right..

They all start.. having a pillow fights..

Ranbir goes to kanya and snaps his finger

R: kanya where r u??

K: comes back from her dreamland.. : oo sorrie..i was just thinking..

R: what??

K:nothing..

R: anyways.. k tell ur ST that she is not coming..

K: ST..

ST: i know i know i am not going to be kabah mein hadi.. i am going to my house.. anand and pammi are waiting for me anyways...

ST goes near kanya and wispers: if this saand gives any trouble call me..ok..

K: just nodd her head, and smiles..

R: what did that phool ke dukan say??

K: Ranbir stop calling names

R: yes mother..

K: hehe..

R: why r u laughing..

K tells him what she was dreaming about..

R: oo really.. looks like u want to be a mom soon...

K: ya.. why not.. dont u want to be a daddy soon..

R: ya.. than i guess i have a lot of work to do.. during our honeymoon..

K: what work??he

R: just gives her a look..

K understanding.. turns red.. as a tomato..

R laughs...

R: now can u please tell me who is coming with us.. seriously i am waiting so patiently here..

K no response..

R: i am getting tried with ur no response..

hey guys that is it. for right now..i will update the next part.. really soon. i promise



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Posted: 17 years ago
really great update
plzz continue soon 😊
diya219 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was cute.the whole kids wanting to go to the water park n having a pillow fight.that was adorable.plez continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago

omg u finalli updated!!!lol!!!
realli nice
um.........plz dont take too long for the next update cont soon!!!
btw ..........thanz for all the help!! 😉

i wonder who it is!!!
if kanya isnt pregnant!!!

???😕

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
i loved it niru...
thanx for keping the suspense...
it was a great update...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
It was so romantic. Even i dazed off. Imagining the real Ranbir and Kanya in the same situation 😳 😆

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