FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: rkath
wow that was great
can't wait till the wedding!

sry guyz for who are all looking out for the wedding but its not interesting and i din really rite much bout that

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: election
very good.. continue... plz make the font size a little larger otherwise very good

sry bout that😕

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

The final day arrived...
the day of the wedding....Riya and Kanya were at the rathods house when Pammi came and patted th heads of them both and left w/ tears...and kanya felt bad and had a regret look on her face....
Ri:kya hua?
K:moma yeh samaj ti hai ki mein shaadi karke humesha ke liye chali jao gi...lekin mein toh jitni chald ho sake us nanda house se bahar nikal jao gi
Ri:kanya plz...abhi kuch aaja bol
K:wateva chalo ab
They arrived at the plce and they both sat and started the pooja....now they got up and took their pheres....Ranbir held onto his her hands(not wanting to) but kanya cudnt refuse cuz everyones watching.....on the other side riya and ayaans marriage took place....the all sat down and ranbir put the mangalsutra in kanya's neck...while aayan did the same to riya...and planted sindur in their parting..and soon all the rituals were done...
...
now came lunch...lunch was very exhasting...Ranbir Kanya Riya and Ayaan had to sit together...Riya and Ayaan were really happy while Kanya n Ranbir were the total oppisite....Then came Reva and Aastha...
Re:ayan beta..riya ko apne haat se kilao
ayaan did as told..when aastha looked at Ranbir and Kanya who were not really hungry and playin w/ their food
As:Ranbir kanya ko kilao
R:kya?
Re:ha ranbir..woh ab tumari paatni hai
Ranbir didnt want to give any suspision that they totally HATED eachother so ranbir did the same with a face of fake happines but more hatred than ever
...
Aastha and Reva had very picky eyes and they noticed how Ranbir and Kanya disliked eachother
So..
As:tumne dekha woh dono ek dusare ko itna pasand nahi karte
Re:aur iske pehle kuch unke bich ho jaye aur sari property ki malkin Kanya ban jaye-
As;humhe kuch karna ho ga
They gave other smart looks and went to the others
....then came the evening....and it was time for kanya and riya to leave
they bid their goodbyes and even though kanya knew she wasnt going away for a long time she got teary..and hugged everyone like shes never going to see them again......riya and ayaan went in one car and ranbir and knya in the other
IN THE CAR
R:tum itna kyun ro rahi ho....tum vapas toh cahli jao gi
K:mujhe pata hai...lekin pata nahi mein aapne aap ko rok nahi pai...aur pata nahi mein woh ghar mein jaa pao gi bhi yah nahi
R:kya?
K:kuch nahi
R:kya kaha?
K:mujhe tum kuch kehne ki sarorat nahi hai..is liye..mid your own bussiness
R:wateva
They arrive at the nanda house and kanya and riya kick the grains and put their feet in the dish of kanku(red water) and walk in the house
BD:aaj mein bohot kuch hun...mujhe mere ghar ki dono lakshmi
M:haa..mein bhi bohot kush hun
Reva:mein bhi
NEICES & NEPHEWS:...hi kanya chachi and riya bhabhi...hum aapko apna intro.kara te hai
<<mera naam hai era aur mein ayaah bhaiyaa ki behen hun>>
<<aur yah hai eva aur yah meri chhoti behen hai>>hi
<<yeh hai hai slok aur yeh hai parth>>
BD:aacha ab anguti ki rasam ho jaye?
There were 2 dishes with red colored water and then the ring was dropped and tthe person to get it 2 times b4 the other out 3 was said to be the leader in this relation ship
Ranbir nor kanya realy cared but they really had a grudge for eachother so they wanted the other to lose....so the 1st time ranbir got..and the 2nd time kanya got it....the 3rd time...ranbir and kanya were looking fro it when their hands touched and found the the ring and they looked at eachother..and somehing happened..but the cheering from everyone disturbed it...and they both had their hands on it and picked it up with both of them holding on...and then kanya let go
M:ise kya kehte hai?
BD:dono ka apas mein barabar ka control ho ga
R:(thinking)dekhte hai..vaise...kanya-
I:kya soch rahe hai bhaiyaa?
With that everyone spilts up...kanya and riya go to their room..and they the kids dont let ayaan or ranbir go in until they pay for it...ranbir didnt want to go into the room anywwayz..but malika pai for him....so..she pushed him in..and shut the door.....

SRY GUYZ I NO IWASNT THAT EXCITING sry...BUT DON WRY ILL UPDATE SOON

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

..aww continue soon please
i loved that update..
aww poor kanya..
feeling bad..that she is going to be leaving her home..
and she doesnt even know..if she will be to come backk..aww poor her..
continue soon please

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

As soon as the door is closed Kanya gets up from the bed she was plced on by ira ans all and starts taking her jellwry off...then she grabs her clothes and goes to change from the bridal dress and comes out with all this time ranbir and kanya have a weird silence..then ranbir goes to change when kanyas phone rings
K:hello
ST:kanya...beta tu tik hai naa...us bal ki dukan ko apne kareeb mat ane de na aur kyal rak na...hum sa tujhe bohot yaad karte hai(sobs)
K:ST plz don cry
Pooja takes the phone from ST
Po:kanya ...apna kyal rak na
K:di (tears come in her eyes) im miss u all...but don wry ill b bac soon
Po:acha ab rakti hun varna maa ko pata chal jaye ga ki humne phone kiya hai
So she hangs up and ranbir comes out and sees kanya w/ tears in her eyes
R:kya hua?
K:kuch nahi ...woh pooja aur ST ka phone tha is liye-
R:uff...u girls...rone siva kuch karte ho
Kanya looks at him madly and gets up goes to the bed and grabs a pillow an dblanket and walking to the sofa to sleep when.......ranbir grabs her hand
R:suno im sry...aur tum yahan so sakti ho..bed par
K:kya kaha?
R:tum bed par-
K:use pehle
R:woh toh im s-kuch nahi
K:tikhaitik hai...lekin mein tumare saat nahi sou gi
R:(laughs)...mere itne bhi bhure din nahi aaye ke mein tumari saat sou ga
K:kya kaha?
R:kuch nahi...i mean..mein sofa par sone wala hun...tum yahan so jao
The night goes by and in the morning rnbir and kanya arrive att the dining table were all are having breakfast....and the ayaan and riya arrive
...jus jokin around eva says
Eva:so how was ur guys suhaag raat?(laughs)
Kanya looks at ranbir and ranbir looks back and but then they continue to eat as tho nothin was said
Parth:chachu aap ko yaad hai na aaj ...(whispers)farmhouse jaa na hai
K:kyun?
Ira explains that BD's b-day's comin up and they are planning a surprise party there cuz its huge and very beautiful....and they were going to do the decorations and clean it up them selves....
so by noon they leave(riya ayaan ranbir kanya eva era slok and parth)in a van...ranbir drives an hr and then parth takes over for the other hr....while then...they are handing out snacks cuz it might take a while to arrive at the farm house...so kanya(wearing jeans and abercrombie t-shirt=love it) walks to the other side of the van(long van) to get the plates and while walking back to her seat ...parth takes a turn and kanya loses balance and falls into ranbir's lap.....kanya has her hands around his neck and his hands are around her waist and they looked at eachother...until everyone started laughing and they kanya pulled herself off ranbir and walked to Era and helped ira and eva out(Ira is ranbirs sis...Era is ayaan's)..Kanya then glanced over at ranbir and found ranbir doin the same but then he noticed kanya loking at him so he went back to his wrk on the laptop...