FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

that was totally.. cute.
hehe.. kanya.. falling on his lap.. aww so cute.
u love abercrombie.. me too.
.hehe..
anyways.. continue soon please.
please.. pretty please

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aspatel2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

That was Awesome 👏 Pls cont. sooooooooooon I dont know how i missed your FF 😭 though i read it as whole and it was supperb! pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😊

-Axita 😊

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

They arrived at the farmhouse and unloaded the luggage...an the boys left to get cleaning supplies from a near by store..as for the girls did their unpacking and started taking dirty sheets off the furniture....when the boys arrived and they went staright to take a bath..and did their unpacking as well..while eva and era broomed and kanya riya and ira started cooking...it was mostly kanya cuz ira and riya followed directions....and the guys helped mop the floor....it was 9pm that they finished the floors and everyone was exhasted....like killed....then kanya served the food and everyone was so hungry...she had to get up and cook some more..and ayaan sloka nd parth compimented her ranbir just admired her..thinking eventho shes so modern she cares and has values...So they eat and since the girls cooked teh guys did the dishes...and so by the time they were done..all the girls were sleeping..(kanya was in a pink nightie gown coming down to her knee caps with a robe coming down to her shins)so ranbir came in changed (nomal silky night suit)and went staright to the bed kanya was sleeping in but din notice she was there...and went to sleep..and so in the morning the scence was....
Kanya and Ranbir were facing the same way, not at eachother..so sideways..and ranbir had his left hand around her shoulders while the other hand was gripped onto her other hand..and ranbir head was on top of kanya..(ssssssssoooooo cute) 😳

And ranbir moved which caused his brusky hair on his face to touch kanya's soft cheeks and waked her up...she opened her eyes..and looked at her trpped by ranbir..knowing he din do it on purpose..she din yell..but she smiled and asked her self y she did..and forgetting that looked at the time it was 8 am
knowing no one would be awake rite now from last day's exhastion she tought she start making breakfast and even lunch so everything wud be ready when they were done...so she tried setting free but ranbir had firmly hold onto her ...so with her finger she poked his stomach which made him dig his head in the space between her and shoulders..and his hair tickled her neck and she smiled and blushed but then kept poking him and he soon opened his eyes
K:can u get off me?(she said with a disgusting face..eventho she was kinda happy)
Ranbir noticed he was sleeping with kanya and that too..holding onto her..so he let go and jumped off the bed..
R:im sry woh kaal raat maine dekha nahi..aur mein-
K:its k
Kanya goes in the bathroom smiles but asks herself y she is smilin she hates him and takes her mind off of it and takes a bath and the day arrives with alot of work...

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Meena

@princessmandy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

continue its gettin betta now lol 😳 😃

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indiangirl31

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

wow that was really good...plzz continue soon 😛

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sam

@sam78

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

it was very nice.

so sweet, kanya cooking for everyone. ranbir and kanya's scene was so lovely and cute, i just loved it.

do write soon.

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

.. taht was really.. cute.. i think..
that was like.. the cutest.. update..
ever.
continue soon please

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raji

@rkath

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

that was soooooooooooo cute!!!
continue soon!

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Nabila

@blah07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

wow the story is great so far.. please continue 😊

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Durga1191

@Durga1191

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

when Kanya comes out she wears a red saree, Ranbir just keeps on looking at her. Kanya leaves the room and goes to the kitchen.
Ranbir takes a shower and goes to the kitchen to get some water. Ranbir comes to the kitchen and sees Kanya working he just keeps on looking at her Kanya sees him and accidently cut her finger. Ranbir gets scared and runs to her, takes her finger and sucks the blood.

Kanya: Ranbir its ok thik ho jaye ga
Ranbir: kya theek ho jaye ga, chalo mein abhi first aid laga ta hoon.
Kanya: just keeps on looking at her while he does first aid to her finger.

At night, Ranbir was working late on his laptop. He somehow gets distracted and sees Kanya sleeping. He just keeps looking at her, he comes close to her and sees that her hair is on her face. He comes near her face and slowly takes the hair away from her face.
Kanya in her sleep moves around and accidently she holds his hand.
Ranbir tries to take his hand away but kanya is holding his hand very tight.

Ranbir:(to himself) kitni shant so rahi hain main nahi chahta ki woh uthe, mein yahi so jata hoon. 😳

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