FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

btw if you liked this one plz check out my other one

Pyar hoga toh kuch is tara

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/880774/ff-pyarhogatohkuchistara-updtdpg49endng

~~**~~Updates~~**~~

1st-Entrys and RanKan first meeting

2nd-Kanya meets Ayaan

3rd-Pammi and Malika decide RanKan Wedding😕

4th-RanKan meet to decide YES/NO😕

5th-Kanya agrees for the wedding😊

6th-RanKan touch😳

7th-RanKan water spill,RanKan engagement😳

8th-RanKan engagement,Mehndi excuse of Kanya to Ranbir😳

9th-Sangeet,Ira's entry😊

10th-sangeet dance(after guests leave)& game(RanKan win)..dog after ranbir😆

11th-shaadi aur rasamey

12th-suhaag raat, kanya in ranbir's lap😆

13th-cleanup, RanKan on the same bed?!😆

14th-RanKan almost KISS😳

15th-BD b-dayParty,RanKan Scence in van(sleeping😳)

16th(2 parts)-portrait😆

17th-necklaces tangle,Ranbir gets hurt😆

18th-nikil

19th-RanKan kiss,surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😳

20th-the night😳

21th-morning after the night😛

22th-luv increases

23th-RanKan go shopping😃

24th-Kanya pregnant?....RK scene😳

25th-Kanya dead?🤢

26th-Kanya returns!!😃

27th-Kanya goes home....who is the lady in black...and who is Sania? RK luv!

28th-RK scences

29-ranbir in kanyas rm😳

30th-funny😆

31th-rk get married and sania bumps into???

32th-Kanya pregnant😛

This is another fanfic like everyone elses
Obviously a love story written by ME
But i have added something that might make it different from others about Kanya
And I hope you guyz like it
And even if you dont plz let me know
by giving comments or suggestions
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The plane landed on its wheels(DUH!)
Out stepped the family of Godbole's
The father Anand stepped out,...A man with principles and self esteem but the most..love for his little happy family. He walked out buttoned his suit and walked ahead to meet his clients.(btw....it was their private plane)
Side by him was his wife, Pammi.A women with pride for her husband and care for everyone......She was blocking the door looking around at her india she hasnt seen for---
"Eh Pammi...tujhe koi bimari hai.....chal chal nikal"
"Kya Shanta Tai abhi ek bar dekh toh lene do"
"Abhi yahaan hi rehna hai.....dekh le na...Abhi chal"
"Aap bhi naa..................Chalo Pooja, Harpal, Kanya--hum india pohch gaye hai"
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Harpal came out ..streching his arms yawning out the exhastion of the plane ride...............When he kicked by his sister.....
P"Harpal ab chal tujhe toh mein dekh lu gi"
she was going after him when his other sister came in he way
K"Ab aap log yahin se jagadd naa shuru kar dee ge......come di aap toh badi hai"
H"aacha hua tum aagayi Kanya ......di ka toh screw hi is saffar se dilaa ho gaya hai"
P"Ek du gi naa.......Kanya tu haat...tujhe paata hai naa isne mere chhare ki kya halat kardi thi.........meri hi purse mein se mera hi make up mujh par ..aur toh aur mere liye ek muuj bhi ---"
H"Ek na ek din toh honi hi hai toh aaj se hi practise"
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Kanya-20 yrs old..going for designing..loves her family more than anything in the world...apparel is always fancy dressings..like right now she has jeans and a sleeve less long top on.....she HATES people who think of others as low and disgusting.....and jugde people by looks or money. She aint one of them.

Pooja-21 yrs old..loves bollywood and sony tv...shes had experience as a writer in America and is planning on continuing in India..she doesnt have a grudge on clothes but she doesnt wear salwar kamez...instead right now shes wearing a tanktop with a sweater coming down to her chest(hope you know what i mean)

Harpal-20 yrs old. the middle one.Will soon handle his dad's business...normal guy with a decent mind.

Shanta tai-? yrs old(almost in her50's)Used to work for them when they used to live in India but now is part of the Godbole family. LOOKS THE SAME WITH THE FLOWERS AND STUFF

Anand-Head of the family..although not the oldest. Rising in business of hotels and has been leaving in the States with his family for more than 10 yrs...left India with nothing worth living on and is returning as a business man.(HE ISNT A REALLY BIG KNOWN BUSINESS MAN BUT IS WEALTHY)

Pammi-Anand's wife. leads the family through problems....has just too much pride of being an indian and is quiet an exciting character. SHE LOOKS THE SAME AS WELL
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They arrive at their bunglow.........
Everyone is sooooooo tired they arent able to speak
P"Kitna lamba safer tha....meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi"
ST"haa...........ab hum bharat mein aah gaye hai ab yahaan Pammi, tuhje koi problem nahi ho gi"

They are talking when a girl arrives

Ri"pammi aunty ....kesi hai aap?"
Pammi looks around with a question mark on her face
P:"tum kon maine tumhe pechana nahi"
Ri:"mein....riya?! ....yaad aya?"
K:"omg riya......tum yahaan------(she runs over and hugs riya)mom maine ise kaha tha hum india aane wale hai"
P"are riya...kitni badi ho gayi hai"
Paami kisses her on the fore head
And riya takes her blessings
P:jiti raho putar
Po:"wow riya...long time no see---vese tum bhi kafi-"
ST"mein bata ti hun....woh kete hena .....JAKAS"
R:thank you shanta tai
ST:vese mein bhi tujhe bhuli nahi hun.....tu aur kanya meri hi gohd mein kele ho

Everyone says bye and leaves for a bath in their room
Riya takes kanya to the door

Ri:ek kamm karte hai....mein yahi do gali badd hi mera bungla hai.....mein tujhe kal legavu gi hum shopping ke liye jaye ge
K:tik hai
Ri:chalti hun.....kal subhah mein tujhe phone karu gi
K:bye

[sunshine....lovely morning ....birds chirping]
Kanya wakes up
and goes out for breakfast
She sees evryone at their own work
She goes up to pammi
K"mom..mein aaj riya ke sath jaa rahi hun...woh mujhe gumane le jaarahi hai...mein jao naa?
P"sure putar lekin...sabhal ke tu bohot dino baat yahaan ayi hai"

Kanya's getting ready when her phone rings
Ri"mein tujhe lene avu?"
K"hai mein tayar hun"

She sets her phone on the table grabs a pair of jeans with a decent looking t-shirt. She places her phone in her tote(purse)
and puts on flipflops
and heads out the door

Riya picks her up on a scooty
K"omg i havent seen one of these for ever....btw tumari maa ne toh mana kiya--"
Ri"haa mom ko mera yeh scooty par travel karna aacha nahi lagta...lekin maine apni gadi ki tire ko panchar kar diya aur baki sab gadi toh sab le gaye the"
K"esa kyun kiya."
Ri"are tumhe bomay gumana hai.....toh tumhe uska traffic aur gali ya nahi dekho gi toh maza kese aaye ga?"
K"tik hai ab chale"
Kanya sits behind Riya and they take off ...1st to the mall

Ri"this is the bay mall"
K"aacha ab mujhe sab ke liye gifts buy karni hai..tumhe yaad hai sab....Kaajal,phir um......Sanju .....aur-"
Ri"ha ha sab yaad hai..mein tumhe milvau gi lekin ab toh ender chale"

They had bought gifts for everyone and were heading out with milkshkes
When.......
Someone bumped into kanya and resulted to drpping all her bags and spilling her milkshake on herself
Ri"dekh ke nahi chal sakte"
THe guy turns and walks up to kanya
He looks at her from head to toe and laughs
Guy:ek toh tum itni patli hoke itna sab kuch utha ti ho aur jab girti ho toh mujh par ghuzaa?
K:listen dude...its ok just chill
Guy:kya kaha...its ok....maine sorry kahi aur maine kiya hi kya hai ke mujhe tumse maafi maang ni pade?
That was it Kanya was hot red with temper
K:listen watever your name is...i dont wtf ur name is...you mind your self ok?
R:my name is Ranbir Nanda
Hearing this riya knew not to say anymore
Kanya kept on talking
K: Ranbir nanda ...tumari galti yeh hai ke tum itne bade ho...
R:kya? kya kaha?
K:you are huuuuuuuuuge!!!! ek toh tumm ek ek.....(she din no how to say buff. in hindi so....) buffulo ki size ho aur dekh ke bina chalte ho
R:wat .....buffalo?........tumne mujhe buffalo kaha?
K: aur nahi toh kya.....ek aandhe ki tara chalte ho aur..
Riiya pulls Kanya away
Ri:come on knya....lets go
K:dekh lu gi tujhe
R:chal chal ......jaa

THis incident ruins both Kanya and Ranbirs mood=(

stay tuned and I promise it will get better

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

interesting start nice ff 👏 👏 good to see godbole family rich so then ranbir cant call her poor or anything 😊

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

thanz
i was kinda sad that no one commented
BUT U GUYZ DID IM REALLY HAPPY NOW 😃

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

Riya calms kanya down
Ri"chill gurl...it happens"
K"did u see him .......so much attitude?!"
They sit down in a restarunt
Ri"im gonna make you meet one of my friendz"
Kanya is now back to normal
K"really? who?"
Ri"his name's Ayaan....he went to the same college as me and we meet when eveyone gets together"
K"oh......so .......hes cumin here?"
Ri"yep"
Riya looks around and sees him....
Ri"there he is"
Ayaan comes and sits down
Ri"Ayann this is Kanya, my best friend.....and Kanya this is Ayaan"
A:hi nice to meet you
K:same here
A:can i get you guyz somethin?
K:im not hungry....especially-
Ri:shes right im not hungry either
A:ok then ill take you guyz to the park?
Ri:sure
A:ill get the car
Ayaan leaves
Riya looks at Kanya .....plz dont make a fuzzz
K:fine ill forget it
Ri:thanz
(btw kanya still doesnt know ayaan and ranbir are related)
They arrive at the park
Walking thru the greenery riya gets a phone call
Ri:hello
"its me"
Ri:mom?
"come home and get your car rite now"
Ri:mom im at-
"i don wanna here anythin.....home rite now"
Ri:bye
K:wat happened?
Ri:i have to go home and get the car ill meet you guyz here in half n hr
A:do you want me to drop you off?
Ri:its fine ill be bac
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Riya leaves
leaving kanya and aayan alone
A:so i hear u arrived from the states
K:yep i leaved there for about 10 yrs
A:long time
K:i guess
A: us waqt mein tum kabhi bhi yahaan nahi ayi
K:pata nahi mom and dad ne kabhi bhi iski baat hi nahi ki thi
until now aur woh bhi kyunki dad apna business yahan start karna chaate hai
A:really? thats nice
Ayan and kanya talked getting to know eachother and got quiet fond of eachother
K:so i guess Riya should be arriving any time now?
A:i can drop you home
RING RING
Kanya got her phone from her purse and picked it up
Ri:kanya im so sry i cant come i have to the hospital
K:everythin alright
Ri:yea its just one of my cousin is having a baby
K:oh .....k thats fine.....ill go home then ...bye
Ri:bye
A:wat happened?
K;one of her cousins having a baby
A:ill drop u home
K:thanz but-
A:come on youre my frind too
K:ok
Ayaan drops riya off at her house
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the next day at breakfast Anand was reading his news paper
when he suddenly asked
An"kanya would you go to goa for me?"
K"wwhat ?kyun?"
An"wahan humari ek hotel start hui hai aur mein waha nahi ja sakta aur pooja aur harpal bhi kam mein buzy hai"
K"sure no problem"
Kanya packs and leaves for goa.....shes riding when suddenly her car breaks down....She's waiting for it to be fixed
and the surroundings are jungle-like.when suddenly a car passes by and stops
Out comes Ayaan.He goes over and taps Kanya on the shoulder who is facing the other side.Kanya turns around
K:omg ayan tum yahaan
A:haa mein woh actually business ke liye goa ja raha hun.Lekin tum yahan woh bhi akeli?
K:mein bhi ek hotel ka kuch kam tha aur dad nahi aa sake toh uno ne mujhe bhej diya
A:oh.....tum chha ho toh mein tumhe drop kar sakta hun
K:haa..lekin yeh gadi ka kya?
A:woh toh driver fix karke goa aajaye ge
K:lekin yeh aakela? nahi...yahan kuch hogaya toh?
A:mera driver usko de dete hai.Dono saat mein fix karke goa aajaye ge
K:tumare mobile number kya hai?
A:kyun
K:kaho naa
Ayan tells her his mobile number and she gives her mobile to the driver
K:kuch bhi hua toh is number par phone karde naa
"ji madam"
A:ab chale
Ayaan was very surprised to think someone like her for where shes lived and her status to care for people lower than her

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Nazia

@nazeeei

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Posted: 17 years ago

THANX FR THE NEXT PART ITS REALLY GREAT FANFIC. 😃

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

They arrive at the hotel
and they spilt up deciding to have dinner togeher
Ayan plans out a dinner of two w/o anyone else
and so they eat and talk when ayaan sudenly asks for a dance.kanya couldnt say no so she agrees and they dance with ayan staring into her eyes and kanya trying to keep then away
NOW I DON REALLY WANA BORE U SO I JUST WANNA SAY DURING THIS TRIP TO GOA AYAN AND KANYA START LIKING EACHOTHER
and wen returning aayan gets a phone call from reva ssaying shes found a girl perfect for aayan and ayan refuses and says he'll marry someone he loves and cuts the conversation
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On the other side
Pammi and Malika are talking..btw they r best friends...so they are talking when suddenly kanya steps in and pammi introduces her to malika and kanya takes her blessings
M:jiti raho....wah pammi kya sanskar diye hai tune ise
P:woh sab chod ab yeh bate ghar par sab kese hai...tik hai...hum sab ranbir kis shadi kara na chhate hai
K:mom mein tak gayi hun...mein room mein jaati hun..bye aunty
M:bye beta
Pammi gets a lightbulb....
M:mujhe toh kanya jesi bahu chhahi ye ..mordern hi sahi lekin sab ki liye isaat(respect) bhii ho
P:ek kam karte hai ranbir ki shaadi kanya se
M:lekin tumari badi beti bhi hai naa pooja?
P:ha lekin woh bohot hi ziti(stubbrn)hai..kisi ka nahi manti ...keti hai pyar hoga phir shadi karu gi aur phir mera career bhi toh mere samne hai
M:aacha toh mein ka ranbir ko yahan leke aau gi...chalti hun
P:tik hai...bye
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BD and Mallika
M:maa mujhe apne ranbir ke liye ladki mil gayi hai
BD:kya ke rahi ho?
M:ha
BD:tumne usi se bat kari
just then ranbir arrives
M:ranbir maine tumare liye ek ladki pasand kar li hai
R:WHT??!!mom aap pagal toh nahi ho gayi....mein aur shaadi kitni bar kaha hai...mujhe shaadi anhi karni
M:agar tum mere saat nahi aaye toh mein tumre sare banks acconuts band karva dugi
R:MOM?!tik hai mein auo gaa
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Pammi and Kanya
P:beta maine tumare liye ek ladka pasand kar diya hai
K:kya?! mom mujhse ek bar puch liya ho ta
P:ek bar dekh toh le
K:mom mein-
Po:mein samja tthi hun...mom aap bahar jayi ye
K:di?!
Po:kanya ek bar dekh toh le phir kehna...dekh ne mein shaadi toh nahi ho jati
K:lekin mein kisi aur se pyar karti hun
Po:kon
K:ayaan
Po:ayaan kya? last name?
K:mujhe nahi pata lekin-
Po:hogaya pyar last name tak nahi janti..dekh kanya use ek bar mil to le
K:tik hai di par last desision mera ho ga
Po:mom!kanya is ready to meet him!
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Ranbir comes in and sits down with Aditya and malika and Kanya comes out in salwar kamez with snacks siding w/pooja.
She sets the tray down and doesnt look up and nor does ranbir look at her.......
Then Ranbir and Kanya are asked about eachother and their eyes cross and results to an explosion
R:tum?!
K:tum?!
P:aap log ek duje ko jante ho?
K:mom mein ise hargis nahi shaadi karu gi
R:shaadi toh dur tumse baat kon kare ga!!
M:ranbir?!
R:mom lets go mujhe yahan nahi rehna
Ranbir pulls his mom but she refuses and asks wwat has happened
R:mom yeh yeh....chipkali ...yeh toh baat karne bhi layag nahi hai?
K:chipkali tumne mujhe chipkali kaha....tumhe pata hai tum kya ho SAND HO SAAND!!!!!!
P:KANYA?!
Po:kanya yeh kya hua...hua kya?
Ranbir explains everything and says he doesnt have any respect for anyone...by then ranbir left and Kanya left to hher room
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IN THE CAR
M:ranbir mein tumhe ek hafta de ti hun...tumhe kanya ko razi karna ho ga or find another girl for you....OR if u dont find a new house and a new job!!!
R:mom?!
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oN the other side
Kanya gets a phone call by riya giving news that shes getting married to ayan
K:kya?!
Ri:yes i no im so happy....and u have to be there at all times i was wondering bout you living with while those dayz
K:sure of course
Kanya starts cryin and pooja comes in
Po:wat happened?
K:he doesnt love me!!!!!!!!!
Pammi comes in and says he will love you of u marry him(thinking they were talking bout ranbir)
sry guyz g2g ill continue l8r

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

riya wipes her tears and Pammi comes and hugs her
P:Kanya..beta..woh tumhe bohot hi kush rake ga
Riya makes a face and asks:tum itne coinfidence ke saat kese ke sakti ho?
P:mein malika ko jaanti hun woh sirf tumari bhalayi chha he gi...tumhe use shaadi karle ni chhahi yeh
Po:shayah moma tik ke rahi hai...Kanya woh kabhi dhoka nahi dega(saying this was trying to signal to forget ayaan and move on)
K:tik hai mujhe kal tak ka waqt do
Pammi and pooja leave the room and Kanya thinks does ayan even like me?Do i like ayan?I guess i was just attracted to him...as a friend
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Malika and ranbir come home...ranbir walks straight to his room
Aas:[whispers]isko dekh kar nahi lagta iski shaadi ho ne wali hai
Reva:aap sahi ke rahe hai,bhabhi....yah ni ke sari property-
BD:kya hua malika?
M:aap chinta maat karye ...ranbir ki shaadi mein karao gi
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R:ranbir...tu ab is musibat se kese nikle ga?think ranbir think
Adi:kya hua ranbir...everythin ok?
R:yep....wait no
Ranbir explains evrything to Aditya and asks for major help and Aditya whispers an idea into his ears...he 1st makes a face but then as he thinks he doesnt have anythin better.........................He phones kanya and asks her to meet him at the mall they 1st met at .....and w/shantu at her side she agreed and thought of wat was going to happen to happen?
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the next day Kanya shows up and meets Ranbir with Aditya looking out fr ranbir and shantu doin the same for kanya
K:mujhe yahan kyun bula ya?
R;mein tumse shaadi nahi karna chhata hun lekin meri maa chaati hai ki-
K:ki tum mujhse shaadi karo...mera pura parrivar meri shaadi tumare saat karne ke liye piche padi hai lekin mein nahi karna chhati hun tumse shaadi
R:nor do i do i look like ive been waiting for you....nope
K:tum sidhhi tara se baat nahi kar sakte...u no jus askin?
R:eh listen broomstick...mujhe bhi koi shock nahi hai tumse shaadi karne ke liye aur mein toh sirf ek agreement karne ke liye aaya tha
K:kya hai ?
R:dekho mein aur tum ek duje ke saat shaadi karna nahi chhate ...lekin humare ghar wale chhate hai....toh kyun hum is shaadi ko contract ki sarye se dekhe
K:maatlab ki tum aur mein shaadi kar lete hai
R:aur phir tum mere ghar walo ki samne itni bhura dikh na ke woh log samne se tumhe tukra dege
K:tik hai mein tumhe kal phone kar bata dungi
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Kanya goes home and talks to pooja and shantu which results to them that its wrong....then she talks to riya....riya goes on both sides and while tallkin Kaanya mentios nanda which gives riya so much excitement to which she says ayaan is ranbir's nephew
K:WHAT?!
Ri:yea...i think u sud so marry him now...atleast if u don live there forever u'll be there with me
After a lot of persuasion..kanya agrees and Riya calls ranbir telling him her and kanya will meet him at the park

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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rumi.love

@rumi.love

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Posted: 17 years ago

i really liked it
keep up the gud work and cont soon

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

At the park................
Riya and Kanya arrived and so did ranbir
K:mein tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayar hun
R:wHaT?! mera matlab hai.....omg tum toh rya ho ayan ki hone wali patni
Ri:ha aur yeh meri besfriend hai..........
K:tik hai ab mujhe meri family ko bata na hai
Riya and Kanya leave and Ranir leaves the other side
Kanya and her famly goes wild hearing this but noone other than pooja and Shantu knows the reality and the same happens on ranbirs family except for Reva and Astha as they are worried bout the money ......but aditya knows kanya wont last in this house very long..............SO malika and BD decide ayan and ranbir's marriage is gonna occur at the same time...And they leave to delivery the shagun for riya and kanya.
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At kanyas house..
Pooja shantu and kanya are in a room discussing bout what is hapening and if kanya did rite by accepting this propsal and Pammi hears that kanya and ranbir have decided on a contract marriage and her eyes fill w/ tears. She opens the door and......
P:kanya ...yeh tum...mujhe tumse yeh umid nahi thi
S:nahi nahi pammi tum jo soj(think) rahi ho woh-
P:nahi aap mujhse jhoot mat boli ye
K:maa
Pammi leaves the room and out to the living room where ranbir and malika arrive..ranbir is talking w/ BD as she phoned to ask where they were....when Pammi told malika of ranbir and kanya's agreeement and BD hears this over the phone.......and she recieves a heart attack
EVeryone goes to the hospital including the Godbole family.....there when she is out of danger BD asks to meeet ranbir and kanya
BD:Ranbir meri yeh khwaish hai ki tum kanya se shaadi karo
She grabs kanya's and Ranbirs hand and put them together and then faints
Kanya and Ranbir are asked to leave and kanya starts crying cuz she was a part of this cheat......the doctor comes out and gives a list of medicines needed and ranbir leaves. Then kanya (like the main character alwayz does) goes and prays for BD.............Malika sees this and now she is sure that this is the girl that will turn her ranbir into a human......😕.....BD is back to normal and malika asks ranbir kanya and pammi to come with her...they go into a room and malika and pammi try to convince ranbir and kanya to get married.....
R:mom mujhe waqt diji ye
K:plz mom..hum dono baat kar ke aap ko baata de ge
M:tik hai mein aur pammi chalte hai tumm dono yahin baat karke mujhe
R:mom lekin-
M:chalo pammi
Ranbir and Kanya are in the room
K:dekho mein tumse kisi bhi hal mein shaadi karna nahi chati......
R:mein bhi
K:lekin BD ki zindagi ka sawal hai
R:oh....so you want that excuse to enter into Nanda family
K:eh..listen mein toh tumari BD ke liye kehti huun ...lekin mujhe kya paata tumhe unki koi fikar nahi hai
R:ehhhhhhhh....mein apni family ki bohot fikar hai .......aur tumhe mujhe kuch kehne ki sarurat nahi hai
K:tik hai....bye
R:wait listen....chipkali
Kanya walked out the room and went home where she was alone.....and riya saw her leave so she followed her
Ri:kanya(shouting from the door) where r u ?
Riya walked into her room kanya tum yahin....kya baat hai?
K:kuch nahi...............mein..mein ranbir se...(she turned to the window) shaadi karne ke liye tayar hun
Ri:what?! i mean...r u sure? kanya don do bcuz of-
K:i mean it
Ri:ok ... i just want ya to know what youre going into
K:i know...go tell moma
Riya told everyone at the hospital and everyone went mad with happiness and when ranbir found out he just layed his head on aditya's shoulder and Aditya patted him sayin thats how i felt when i got married but i guess u'll get used to it
R:aur koi rasta bhi nahi tha
He goes outside and phones kanya....RING RING....kanya sees it ranbir but doesnt pick it up....he trys again and again...when she finally picks up
K:KYA HAI?(shouts)
Ranbir moves the phone from his ear(thinking) abhi se esa hai toh age kya ho ga
R:tumhe chila ne ki sarurat nahi hai....maine toh sirf is liye phone kiya ki....he looks over at aditya beside him and asks should i say it...and adi nods..... um ..........thank .....u ..tumne mere parivr ke liye ---
Kanya hangs up on him
R:helo..hello....she hung up on me.....uski itni himat?
That night kanya stayed awake and felt diffrent and uncomfortable for the first time and that too bcuz of ranbir....how can i marry him?...shoud i not?maybe ....but what bout his family?....why do i care?....would he have married me if something happened in my family....?......probably not...of course he wudnt....then why am i .....KNOCK KNOCK..comein...it was anand
An:hi beta
K:dad(she said getting up)
An:mein tumse tumari shaadi ki baat karne aya hun....(kanya looked down)..dekho beta mein tum pe koi pressure nahi dal na chaata ....tumhe jo tik lage wohi karna....aur ek baat tum jo bhi fasla lo gi mein tumare saat hun
K:thanz papa
Sha hugged him and he tuck her into bedd GUD NITE
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Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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