Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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Zainab

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Nice part!! I'm smiling so much😆😆😆 What's going to happen to rahul and muskan now??? Cont. soon.

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aspatel2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon great part 👏

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Kanzy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

really nce goi! contd soooon!!!!!!!!!!

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Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

tht was great.incredible n shokin as per for muskaan n rahul...........plz continue soon
luv ur ff
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Isha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

awww u have such a cute fanfic totally love it! update soon 😊

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Pari

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

its awesome 👏 gud to see rahul doing muskan's tarig 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

it was toooooooo gud.plz cont like this 👏

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Zahra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

nice part.continue soon.
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Riddhima gupta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

SCENE-18

Everybody was putting mehndi and sapna's mehendi was looking very pretty...and in the middle of her hand it was written AMIT...
Riddhima "waah sapna...Amit ka naam tere haath pe bada achcha lag raha hai"
Sapna blushes...
Muskaan "aaye haye,kitni pyaari lag rahi hai sharmate huye"
Anjali "tum log ab use chedna band bhi kar do"
All laugh....
Sapna's mum "beta tum log bhi mehendi lagwa lo"
Riddhima,Anjali,Muskaan "ji aunti"
Some girls start putting mehendi on the hands of Riddhima,Muskaan,Anjali...
The girl who was putting mehendi to Riddhima asked "is pe liska naam likhe?"
Riddhima "a...wo..."
Sapna "likhiye ARMAAN"
Riddhima "Sapna....?"
Sapna "haan aur nahi to kya .....ab tere haath pe Armaan ka naam kaisa lagta hai ye dekhte hai"
Riddhima blushes and the girl writes ARMAAN on her hand...
Riddhima looks at her hand and blushes...
Sapna "Anjali,ye dekho naa....Armaan ka naam Riddhima ke haath pe kitna accha lag raha hai"
Anjali "wow Ridz,ye to sach much bahut accha lag raha hai"
Riddhima blushes even more...!
After 1 hour Riddhima goes to the washbasin in the dining room and removes her mehendi...
Her mehendi had a dark red colour...She smiled looking at Armaan's name on it....
Then somebody pulls her into a room.....It was obviously Armaan...He keeps his hands on Riddhima's bare waist....
Riddhima "Armaan tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
Armaan "main tumse milne aaya hun"
Riddhima "wo kyun?"
Armaan "wo mujhe Muskaan ne bataya ki tumne apne haath pe mera naam likhwaya"
Riddhima "wo...Sapna ne mehendi wali ko keh kar likhwa diya"
Armaan holds her hand and sees it ans kisses on his name on her hand...
Riddhima blushes...
Armaan kisses on her forehead and then all over her neck...Riddhima just closed her eyes....
Just then somebody knocks on the door....
Riddhima "k...kaun hai?"
Muskaan "Arre Riddhima main Muskaan....wo tujhe Sapna dundh rahi thi"
Riddhima "m...main aayi"
Muskaan "ok,..par jaldi aana"(she goes)
Riddhima "Armaan,ab jaane do...Sapna bula rahi hai"
Armaan "to....maine tumse milne ka itna intezaar kiya hai to vo bhi karigi"
Riddhima "Armaan......."
Armaan "Riddhima ..mujhe tumhe kuch dena hai"
Riddhima "kya?"
Armaan takes out the "PUSHATNI KADAS" from his pocket...
Armaan "ye tumhare liye"(makes her wear them)
Riddhima "ye...."
Armaan "ye hamare pushtani kade hai ....mom ne diye hai"
Riddhima "to kya tumne unhe hamare bare mein sab bata diya?"
Armaan "nahi...maine bas unse itna kaha ki mujhe vo ladki mil gayi hai jiske sath main apni puri zindagi bitana chahta hun"
Riddhima's eyes get watery....!
Riddhima hugs Armaan....!
Riddhima "Armaan...i love u "'
Armaan "i love u too"
Then Armaan & Riddhima come out of the room...Riddhima goes to meet Sapna and Armaan goes to meet Amit...

SCENE-19

Riddhima enters ...
Sapna "lo ye aagayi"
Anjali "Ritzi kahan reh gayi thi?"
Riddhima "vo...di...actually"
Muskaan "Arrre Anjali uska chehra to dekho...ekdam lal hai ...matlab loverboy se mil ke aayi hai"
Riddhima blushes even more...Muskaan ,Anjali,Sapna laugh at her state...
Sapna "ok.....ab usse tease mat karo ..nahi to kahin sharam ke mare mar naa jaye"
All laugh again...
From downstairs....Sapna's mum"Riddhima beta ...zara niche aaana ..kuch kaam tha"
Riddhima to herself "Thank god! atleast is embaressment se to bachi"She runs downstairs...

Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago