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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....I dont have words to describe what i m feeling aftr reading it ....that mothr -son scene was too sweet n very elegnt... but the mstr pce is Jeet n Saachi's moments ..uff....had a brd smile on my face..yeh Jeet hai kya bhai?awwwww..itna loveble kyon hai ?? oh Bhoomi ..i just loved their convrstn..the way Saachi felt shy , he way Jeet was doing masti ...too gud..just toooooooooooo gud ...as u knw ur dlgs ve been very spe to me ... n this time they were brillant ...aisi imp n soft moment pe Jeet ki masti bhari dlgs wow ....nobody cud do it except u ..

Today i found so much Of Rajeev in Jeet ... the way he was asking saachi how he looks in diff times ... how times he has to propose her ...den usdin behkjate toh angan mein phool khilte abtak ..n the way he enjoyed Saachi's shyness n laughd ....i cud C Rajeev only ...

n yes...pics were grt as usual ...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....I dont have words to describe what i m feeling aftr reading it ....that mothr -son scene was too sweet n very elegnt... but the mstr pce is Jeet n Saachi's moments ..uff....had a brd smile on my face..yeh Jeet hai kya bhai?awwwww..itna loveble kyon hai ?? oh Bhoomi ..i just loved their convrstn..the way Saachi felt shy , he way Jeet was doing masti ...too gud..just toooooooooooo gud ...as u knw ur dlgs ve been very spe to me ... n this time they were brillant ...aisi imp n soft moment pe Jeet ki masti bhari dlgs wow ....nobody cud do it except u ..

Today i found so much Of Rajeev in Jeet ... the way he was asking saachi how he looks in diff times ... how times he has to propose her ...den usdin behkjate toh angan mein phool khilte abtak ..n the way he enjoyed Saachi's shyness n laughd ....i cud C Rajeev only ...

n yes...pics were grt as usual ...

Hi Sara, awwww Its alwys a great feelign to get ur comments..and the detil with whcih u wrote..I just felt nice that u apprecate those all..ya its my style i feel soemtimes people who go throguh serious situation wnt a lighter side..and they have it in them..teh humour its just to whom they wna tto show and whom they dotn want...Jeet has humour whcih he shares with Saachi adn only at tiems..not like Ashu everytime... thats his personality here..

thansk so mcuh dear for appreicatign the pics..i do take effort in that its new thing..as u know i didnt have any pics of Rk at all with me..thsi has been like downloading loads and uploading loads..lol..btu was fun and am glad u guys liekd it and the story became more impressive..thansk sara for all those enciragin worsds..am not that god..btu with time and episdoe tried to improve mysefl... luv u lots dear...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Episode: 35

02-01-08

Saachi told everything to her family, though her brother Kushal was very happy and ready to face the punishment for his doigns,

his father Abhigyan was concerned about him and was worried. Saachi knew Jeet and his family will take the correct decision in this regard.

Saazaa jo bhi ho mujhe pata hai Sahi hi hogi,

Jitna dard diya utni takleef khud kobhi hogi,

Pachtaava jitna marasakta dard badha sakta hai,

Yeh uss dard ko gunaah ke ehsaas ko kam karsakatahai…

03-01-08

Jeet's sisters Dia and Ria with their family came to Mumbai as they were informed about Jeet getting married to Saachi. They also had a discussion and with total agreement they decided to follow what Maa had in her mind.

7-07-08

When Mishra family was called upon at Jeet's residence, it was like a small engagement ceremony… Jeet had searched the ring in his room which he had misplaced, co-incedently he got the ring at the feet of his father's snap in his room. He took it as his fathers blessing and Jeet and Saachi got engaged that day. With this also followed was Maa decision. Maa first asked kushal if he genuinely will follow whatevr she asks him to do. Kuhal was preety confident he is ready to take anything, if that makes his sister happy and his guilt is lessen. Maa took promise in frotn of all..and after he agreed Maa told him that as his punishment, he has to let his sons, Ayaan and Ayush to stay with her, he should not meet them or talk to them… As Saachi is now part of their family Children will be tken good careof. The children were use to staying with their Bua… Kushal had already agreed and had not option but to say ok. He was not worried for the children but for him, how will he live without them, without talking with them and all the dreams he wanted to fulfill for his children…He now could understand why Maa had put this…she wanted to take the fatherhood away and make him realize what her children had gone thorugh.

19-01-08

Jeet and Saachi were to get married this day, Kushal was not allowed to come close to the mandap as he had promisednot to go near his children. The children were enjoying , playing with Jeet's family. In the mean time when the traditional methind of marriage ceremony was taking place.. Saachi knwign from Dia di..that as Jeet's father died her mom was not allowed to do the Kanyadaan alone.. Saachi insisted that the Kanyadaan ceremony be done by her mom and not her father. Maa and even Jeet told her no to do so, but she knew the amount of pain Maa and Dia dii went through..and that the kanyadaan of Dia dii was done by Ashu's parents.

While Saachi's mom did the kanyadaan alone. She was very proud of her daughter and Knew she will be happy in this family.

Kanyadaan ka Punya kamana,

Pehle apne Paa ko bhi to dekhna,

Har buraaee ka hissaab iss janm mey hota hai,

Jo sachaa hai who phir sabkuch paleta hai…

Days passed by after the marriage. The honey moon which brought them to be one in soul, in body and in mind…

Aaj koi nahi tum aur main hatho mey hath,

Yeh janam bharka mera yaar hai Saath,

Mera laal joda tumhare pyaar ka rang,

Saatoo janam rahengey yunhi hum Sang...

The time which tells them that they have got the whole world in theri arms..the happiness whcih is just makign them fly ...

The most beautiful time they spent with they both and no one around..

just loving to be in love and never to leave each other hands…

The love had blossomed and felt humbled to be in each other arms for the rest of life… to give away to each other completely ….

Manoo tum mere hi to the,

Hum bas kabse intezaar kar rahe the,

Ab zindagi le ley koi bhi rukh,

Sawmp diya tumhe apna sab kuch…

It had everything the romance, the togetherness, the small little fantasy to whisper some sweet nothing into each others ears, to bit that little touch which made smile come near, the rolling of the hair and the wet kiss on the lips, the shy face but still want to feel it…

Khushboo yeh tumhari,

Mehssos kare hawaein,

Jo pass hojau itna,

To lagey meri hi hai tumhari baahein…

The feelgin of getting lifes most treasured gift. And the little game to fight and take each other in arms, to behave like a child and say funny jokes with none around… share the secrets , the nightmares and make each other strong…that we r together so now they will never be any harm…

Tum Saath ho aur sab kuch hai,

Sath tumhara hi to sab kcuh hai,

Darr ,Fikr ab kissliye hai,

Tum meri main tumahri yeh mobobaat hai..

The love which said, how lucky I am to find u..

the magic which they always feel looking into each other eyes…which said

Tumsey milkey the kuch dino pehle hi,

Har din lagta hai naya phir bhi,

Manoo tumhe dekh ab bhi dil jhoom ta hai,

Tumhe chuukar dil aur khil uthata hai,

Choomke tumharey gaal,

Puchoo na mera haal,

Tumse jyada kuch aur na apna lagta hai,

Tumho to jahan hai aisa dil kehta hai...

The honey moon is over but love continue to surround, the fights have started which made them know they realy r like the normal couple..they love and they want and they demad..as they know if not from love ones then from whom? The love still exists it has more to follow, which each phase in marriage more to know and more to grow…

The little cute fights had started and soon Saachi was made the Director of Sarakar groups. Within a month Sarkar groups were among the most selling products in Indain market..In the business awards, Sarakar group got the Swadesh gaurav award for takgin the Indian business to other countries and competing the foreign products with huge profit margin. Jeet had thanked his team and alogn holding the award high up had dedicated to his late father the trophy.

Aap jahan bhi hain hame dekh rahe hai,

Aap ke charnoo mey mere sheesh jhuktey hai,

Aaj aapka sapna kamyabi ka pura hua hai,

Aaj aapka sapna khushhali ka panap raha hai,

Sabkuch aapke umeedo ke raah dagar par hai,

Yeh Jeet ki har Jeet Aapke Ashish ke damper hai…

Maa had already thought the day she feels Kushal has learnt his lesson enough she would get back the children to him, though Ksuhal was asked to take his children after a period o tiem..Maa would be very connected to them and felt hem as her grandchildren and always loved them enough. Ashu and Rithika got married within a month. Ashu Rithika & Saachi Jeet became proud parents on the same day. Rithika gave birth to a baby boy Ashu named him 'Rocky' and Saachi gave birth to a baby girl she named her ' Parul'. Ashu pampered rocky so much that after 8 years the child had become a rowdy and Jeet didn't like him as he would beat parul, snatch her things, pull her pony and Jeet was pretty protective of his beautiful angel. Ashu later sent Rocky to a boarding school. Don't know what can happen when Parula nd Rocky meet….after 15 years…. What the will say..Tumse Milkey??? Who knows…no story has an end… Every story has a new beginning… So Cheers friends..!!!

'Tumsey milkey' kahani hai Saachi aur Jeet ki,

Saachi aur Jeet ke vartamaan aur juddey ateet ki,

Kahani hai Ek ke dard se dusre key ehsaas ki,

Pyaar ko khoney key darr aur paaney ke pyass ki,

Kuch meeethi yaadein, Sazaa aur Sacch ki Jeet ki,

Apno ke takraav aur 'Tumse Milkey' PremGeet ki…

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😃This was indeed the last part of " Tumsey Milkey" Hope u all enjoyed ur time reading it.

Thanks to all my readers...my friends and Specially to Bini, Sara, San, Nida, Reena,Vandu, Jyothi, Golu, Paru_M, cutie13, suhanasafar,aredhel,babygirl,harpy,ami_princess,Ruhee,bindas girl,

seasplash & lotuslover for appreciating my effort.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 why did u end the story . i hope it had gone on for ever


this is an amazing story every emotion and poem was heart warming and every day i used to wait to read the next part i just loved the story and i wish u write one more lovely story. this was a gr8 story written by a lovely writer gr8 job hope to read lots more frm u and a huge jappi frm me to u for this wonderful story which always took me into a world of imagination 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by jyothi_cool - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

😭 why did u end the story . i hope it had gone on for ever


this is an amazing story every emotion and poem was heart warming and every day i used to wait to read the next part i just loved the story and i wish u write one more lovely story. this was a gr8 story written by a lovely writer gr8 job hope to read lots more frm u and a huge jappi frm me to u for this wonderful story which always took me into a world of imagination 🤗 🤗 🤗

Hi jyothi,

I first want to thank u for the support and appreciation u have given me and the loads of jahppis whcih were great to have.😳..I had started this on the 1st of Jan on new year...with a set of time that in oen month i will end it..and am happy I did that...I usually write short stories with only max 7 parts or 9 btu not more...evn i have writen short stories not here in If with 3 parts only...so thsi one was a new for me..but i absolutely enjoyed writing with such wonderful readers i had....so plzz dotn be upset that the sory has ended...😃

I am thinking of posting my short stories whcih dont have any refernce fromanyone from telly here..so it wil be wihtu pics but ya poems will follow..havnt decided when ti post it but surely will do as i my mood tells me to...

Abotu startign a new ff..my mood takes evrything..when i have that mood and the idea which tell me a start and end..i will surely write...😃 these few lines fro u dear... u have always encougred my poems..so here it goes..

Tumhari baatein mujhe chuu jaati thi,

Meri poems ki tariif jab tum karti thi,

Sochti chalo aur bhi achhi koshish main karun,

Jyothi padh rahii hai to poems aur pyaari likhun,

Tumhari jhaapi mujhe gudgudaati thi,😳

Haii Jyothi ke sweet replies mahool jamati thi,

Aisey hi dosti ,kahaniyon ka silsilaa jarri ho,

Tumsey miley phir lagi tum utni hi pyaar ho...😃

Edited by bhoomikauttam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi jyothi,

I first want to thank u for the support and appreciation u have given me and the loads of jahppis whcih were great to have.😳..I had started this on the 1st of Jan on new year...with a set of time that in oen month i will end it..and am happy I did that...I usually write short stories with only max 7 parts or 9 btu not more...evn i have writen short stories not here in If with 3 parts only...so thsi one was a new for me..but i absolutely enjoyed writing with such wonderful readers i had....so plzz dotn be upset that the sory has ended...😃

I am thinking of posting my short stories whcih dont have any refernce fromanyone from telly here..so it wil be wihtu pics but ya poems will follow..havnt decided when ti post it but surely will do as i my mood tells me to...

Abotu startign a new ff..my mood takes evrything..when i have that mood and the idea which tell me a start and end..i will surely write...😃 these few lines fro u dear... u have always encougred my poems..so here it goes..

Tumhari baatein mujhe chuu jaati thi,

Meri poems ki tariif jab tum karti thi,

Sochti chalo aur bhi achhi koshish main karun,

Jyothi padh rahii hai to poems aur pyaari likhun,

Tumhari jhaapi mujhe gudgudaati thi,😳

Haii Jyothi ke sweet replies mahool jamati thi,

Aisey hi dosti ,kahaniyon ka silsilaa jarri ho,

Tumsey miley phir lagi tum utni hi pyaar ho...😃



hai the poem was really gud i did not know i deserved so much thanks nahi kahjoongi . lekin i really loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
As usual absolutely amazing....the story n above all those awesome poems...u're a fab writer dear...n having read so many of u're earlier works..i know u're creativity holds no bounds...u're the best... 👏 👏

I hope u do post in the short stories that u have penned down..luking frwd to that...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey bhoomi tumne to fic end kar dee 😭 . i commented for da 1st time nd u ended 😭 😭 . im sad becoz i didn't expected dat it will be last.
bt the ending was too... cute 😳 nd full of emotions. a big round of applause for u 👏
i'll wait for ur next fic
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: binidoshi

As usual absolutely amazing....the story n above all those awesome poems...u're a fab writer dear...n having read so many of u're earlier works..i know u're creativity holds no bounds...u're the best... 👏 👏

I hope u do post in the short stories that u have penned down..luking frwd to that...

Hi Bini...am glad that u liked the last endign prt as well..u know its a bit liek..oh i am ending...ehheh but i had already thought abotu the start n end..just that u shoud do before all feel sleepy abt ur story..thanks dear for appreciating my work so much..abt creativity i dont know..how creative i am...i try whatevr my dead grey brain cells give.. me...

Ya i will post the short storie am thnkign which one to post..may be the Confess wala..i will... i think that the best one after this tory... catch u soon..and thnaks for all the encouragment..😃

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hey bhoomi tumne to fic end kar dee 😭 . i commented for da 1st time nd u ended 😭 😭 . im sad becoz i didn't expected dat it will be last.
bt the ending was too... cute 😳 nd full of emotions. a big round of applause for u 👏
i'll wait for ur next fic

HI dear....hey plzz dont get upset..I do feel bad that i was gettign to knwo more of my readers and the story ended..but it was all thoguht before stsratign it..and i dont like to keep my stries pending..thsi already was too logn for me..i usually am in writign short n qucik stories....thanks for all the encouragemtn u gave...and do continue so ..in my next ..

Hey yam gald u liked the endng..and found it cute.. I will soon post my short story here..adn enjoy rading it it will be to hosrt..dotn miss it..

tc..and all the applause really makes me glad to write this one..and write more as well..

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