'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 27

aww that part was a stunning one... 👏 👏 👏 finally khushal had the guts to accept his mistake even though i guess its a little too late 😭 😭 😭 can't beileve saachi would do something that drastic 😲..... she does love him a lot 😳 😳 poor jeet 😭 hez leaving leaving 4 delhi, well can't blame him 😕 ...hez in such a dilemma..which side should he take 😕 i hope he makes the right decision soon.. plz cont soon ur stry really addictive 😛

bhoomi whr r u waiting 4 the update??????

Originally posted by: golu_1677

bhoomi whr r u waiting 4 the update??????

Golu, just got late to upload the pics..and ya postin it in few sec..aaj late hogaya..na...no punishmetn haaan...😉

Originally posted by: Paru_M

aww that part was a stunning one... 👏 👏 👏 finally khushal had the guts to accept his mistake even though i guess its a little too late 😭 😭 😭 can't beileve saachi would do something that drastic 😲..... she does love him a lot 😳 😳 poor jeet 😭 hez leaving leaving 4 delhi, well can't blame him 😕 ...hez in such a dilemma..which side should he take 😕 i hope he makes the right decision soon.. plz cont soon ur stry really addictive 😛

Hi ...awww i loved ur comments....and am glad u r enjoyign readin my ff...Yup Jeet kya kareey..and somewhere u also feel na what he is doign is right in hsi own way...now lets see destinsy kya kart i hai... (writer kya karati hai😆)..hope i make the next episode good enough for u to liek it and feel its correct...its addictive..oh ho..wow!! hope its an healthy addcition..and u smile mroe and cry less..😃

Episode: 33

01-01-08

Jeet was in his room packing everything to shift to delhi…his luggage was ready ..he kept looking at the room..the walls, the memories of taking Saachi close into his arms..kissing her, hugign her and feelgin the love and his feelgins to be with her the whole life..the way they were always in love ..their relationship's ups downs..the way they came out more stronger with time and their love grew with each phase ...the emotional bond they developed… the distance which had made him to miss her more and love her to no end….

Woh Saaari yaadein yaad hain,

Woh pyaar bharri baatein yaad hain,

Sab kuch ek Sunder Sapnasa hai,

Aaj bhi yaad kar dil Muskurata hai,

Bass Judaaii ki yaad dil mey talwar lagati hai,

Woh assuo bhari sawgat dil ko pathar banati hai…

Jeet was very emotional and sad… he suddenly realised on that day he had thrown that ring on the bed…where it is…? He searched but didn't get it ...

Jeet's mom came..and asked..

Maa: Kuch dhund rahe ho..

Jeet: kuch khaas nahi maa..bas yunhi.. waise sab packing hogayi hai..aap ki packing bhi hogayi hogi…bas nikaltey hain..Ashu ataa hi hoga…

Maa: Tum apne sapney yehin chood ke jaarahe ho..unhey sath kyun nahi le chaltey Jeet…

Jeet looked at her..with a sad face…and tried to control his tears..

Jeet: Maa..main sapne nahi dekhta…(Maa came close and with love kept her hand on his face and Said,)

Maa: Jeet tum mujhse koi baat batlatey nahi..is ka matlab yeh nahi ki mujhe baatein samajh nahi atee..Apne Papa ke itney kareeb rahe ho..ki Maa se share karne ki adat nahi hai tumhe…Lekin Maa sab jaanti hai…sirf tumhe apne asoo mey nahi baandhna chahti…

Jeet: Maa main aapko kabhi yeh dikhana hi nahi chahta tha…ki main kabhi bhi kamzor hua hun… main jaanta hun aap phir bhi jaan jaati hai… (he kept his head in her lap)

Apne asuu kabhi nahi dikhaata,

Aapke dard ko kaise main badhata,

Himmat deneki sirf koshish karta,

Kisisey bhi sahara pane ki ichaa ab na rakhta…

Maa keeping her hand on his head…

Maa: Jeet beta main yeh janti hun… tumhare papa ke jaane ke baad maine, Dia aur Ria ney, assuoo ke sath dard ko bahaya. Tumne dil mey ussey basaa ke rakha hai..aur iss baat ne tumhe ander hi ander bahot ghutan dii hai…

Jeet just kept silent..

Maa: Saachi bahot acchi hai…tum ussey kitna pyaar kartey ho..aur uska pyaar tumhare liye kitna hai..yeh to ussi waqt pata chala jab woh tumhare liye daudati raat ko ayi…mere bulane par..

Jeet: Maa Saachi ki baat na kare to hi achaa..jo chutta hai…ussey bhuladetey hai… aap jaakey araam kijiye… aur koi bhi phikr nahi…

Maa: Nahi..Jeet… tumhe main galti karne nahi dungi…Jaantey ho Jeet mere hatho mey kya hai… Yeh tumhare Papa ki Personal diary…kaffi kuch likhtey the…kabhi koi seekh kabhi kuch yaadein..har din nahi bass kabhi kuch Mehsus hota woh likhdetey the…

Jeet felt nice to take it in his hand...he felt close to his Papa with that...

Maa: Jeet iss mey unhoney ek Ghatana ka jikra kiya hai..mujhe bhi yaad hai woh waqt..tab Tum mere pait mey the…kiss mushkil daur se hum guzarey hain..

Jeet was listening to her with a lot of happiness as whenever he remembered anything about his father it made him very happy…His father was always his Hero…

Aapke zindagi ka hare k pannha,

Mujhe kitna kuch sikhlata hai,

Aapse juddi har yaad mujhe,

Dilo jaanse apni aur khichta hai…

Maa: Jeet bahot saalo pehle ki baat hai, Tumhare Papa ne naya office banaya tha.. Shuruwat hi thi, Unhoney kuch mahino mey 1lakh rupaiy Tizori mey rakhey the, bank holdiyas they kuch 4 din, office ke cashier Vilas unke bahut achey dost the, Tumhare Papa ko keys dekey wey apne parivaar key sath holidays par gaye. Ab ek raat ka sawal tha… lekin uss ek raat mey hi Tizori se rupaiye gayab hogaye…tumhare papa ko pura yekin tha ki wahan ke watchman ne hi nikaley hongey, kyunki chavi to hamare pass thi, cashier parivaar ke sath chutti pe gaye the…Watchman ko paiso ki jaroorat thi uski beti ki shaddi ussi mahiney thi… Tumhare papa ne police ko jab complaint kiya tab yehi bataya … Hamey paiso ka bahut nuksaan hua tha..aur mere medicine, hospital kitnee kharche sath they…saree kaise pure karnegey hum soch rahe the…

Bahot mushkil ka daur tha,

Pasio ki tangi aur naya kaam tha,

Hamarey rupai churaye hum phas gaye the,

Karz mangey kinse soch mey dhaas gaye the…

Police ney watchman Vallabh ko bulaya , interrogate kiya aur ussey hirasat mey liya puchtach ke liye… uski beti ki shaddi yeh baat honey se tutt gayi aur jab uski betiney police station mey akey apne pita ko bataya to Vallabh wahi heart attack akey marr gaya… Tumhare papa ko bahot hi bura lagaa tha.. Vilas jo cashier the woh 4 din ki chutti ke baad bhi nahi aye..yeh samjhtey deir nahi hue ki kissney yeh plan kiya ho… Lekin ab gunaah kisii aur ne kiya, woh bhaag bhi gaya samjho… lekin begunaah ko sajaa bhi milee aur uska parivaar barbaad hogaya..

Tumhare papa uskey ghar gaye the mann mey bahot bada bojh tha unkey… pata chala ki weh ghar beich ke chale gaye..karz pure bhi nahi kar paye the..yeh sab honey se weh kahike naa rahe.. Tumhare papa bahot pachtayee ki apni takleef mey unhoney begunaah ko sajaa dedii hai…tabhi iss dairy mey unke hatho se likhi yeh lines padho…yeh tumhe sahi rasta dikhayegi beta…

Gunehgaar ko pakadna apni koshish hai,

Sochlo Gunehgaar ki kaise yeh sajish hai,

Lekin Saza gunehgaar hi ko miley,

Begunaah kissibhi takleef mey na fasey,

Begunah ko agar sazaa miljati hai,

Gunah ke kalik tumparbhi padd jati hai…

Maa: Jeet tum samjh rahe ho na… Saachi gunehgaar nahi hai… jab tum ussey pyaar kartey ho aur woh tumse …to tum kyun uskey pyaar ko nahi apna rahe ho..usney to koi gunaah nahi kiya hai, naa hi woh apne bhai ke gunaah ko jhukla rahi hai… Kya Saachi tumharey begair jee sakti hai?

Jeet: Jiss haal mey main ussey dekh raha hun…ussey Jeena to nahi keh saktey… aur meri berukhi bhi kabhi kabhi uska dil dukhati hogi…Par..phir bhi maa Papa ke katilo ke ghar se rishta main nahi jhodd sakta… Uss Kushal ko sazaa to milni hi chahiye…

Maa: Saachi hamare ghar ayegi, tum unke ghar nahi… aur Jeet, beta Main kaha keh rahi hun Kushal ko chodd do… Agar tum mujhpar yakin kartey ho, aur Mere dukh to apni dukh jitna gehra mantey ho..to Sazza mujhe hi tey karne do..

Jeet: Maa…Papa se judde yaddein, safar aap ka bahot lamba hai…Aapse jyada unhe khoney ka dard kaun jaan sakt ahai…main hamesha aapko Apni Maa ke roop mey dekhta.. jo mujhse kitnaa pyaar karti hai meri hi phikr karti hai…aaj aapke chehre mey Omprakash kalra ki biwi nazar aarahi hai…bahot hi yekin se main keh sakta hun, aap job hi soch rahi hai, sazaa dena chah rahi hai…who ekdam sahi hoga..Main aapke har adesh har faisley ko manunga…

Jeet hugged his mother…and she kissed him on his forehead.. and said,

Maa: Saachi ko main phone karu ya tum kar chahogey?

Jeet blushed..: Maa woh , aap thag gayi hogi ..main khud…

Maa pulled hs ears..and said: Achaa,..she laughed theek hai beta aur Delhi ki flight ka kya…

Jeet: Ab postpone karlete hain…(he ws a bit shy and a bit relaxed , he will not be separated fro Saachi)

Maa: theek hai…

As she was going out of the room…Jeet called her back again…and now he hugged her again..and cried for the first time in front of her… Maa was taken aback but she was happy her son was getting close to her and sharing his sorrows.. They didn't speak any words btu felt eh immense love Jeet had for her mother and the affection she has for him. It was like Jeet her small child had again come back to his mother and found the strength and courage he use to get from his father…

Maa Aaj apne kitna

mujhe sambhala hai,

Meri dard ko samjha,

khud ko majbut banaya hai,

Aapne mujhe phirse

bachpan ka ehsaas karaya,

Aapke anchal se jo lipta

Aapne ekpal mey sara gam bhagaya...

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Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome part 👏 .

thanks Golu.... am glad i have readers who wait for my next episode ... hey Golu..i won the parody contest..do read my entries it will lighten u...

wow!!! rocking parts.....just read thelast fewparts..........i was out of station so padh nahi payi thi isiliye comments nae kiya 😛

continue soon!! 😉

Wow !!...awesome parts...just read the parts i missed out ..thanx to my net 😡 Btw congrats on winning the parody contest... u deserved to be the winner 👏 👏 👏

wow awsome is just the word a really well written pat gr8 job cont soon

Originally posted by: togepe30

wow!!! rocking parts.....just read thelast fewparts..........i was out of station so padh nahi payi thi isiliye comments nae kiya 😛

continue soon!! 😉

Hi vandu... u back...it feels ncie..am glad u r enjoyign reading the story...hope u like these episodes as well..