'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 30

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Posted: 17 years ago
bhoomi faboulous end to the fic. 👏

But i am sad it ended so soon. 😭

It is one of myu fav fic. Have read ur earlier short stories too they were great. pls write a new fic soon. will be waiting for it.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

bhoomi faboulous end to the fic. 👏

But i am sad it ended so soon. 😭

It is one of myu fav fic. Have read ur earlier short stories too they were great. pls write a new fic soon. will be waiting for it.

Hi Golu...

Yup I will post the shor story soon..and ya that one havnt posted in Sg at all so u would have not read that one... hope u like it as well.. am glad u r happy that the Story ended... happy int he sense the way the story ended.... sad ka chodo am here so u will read more short stories from me soon... 😃but wihtou pics...as they rnt serial based na...

Golu need to thank u for the encouragemtn u gave..and am so gald to get int ouch with u after such a long gap... just few liens for u..

This friendship is just like a chain

I am glad that we met again,

Getting response & appreciation from you,

Encouraged me to write emotions true,

Golu I will try and write stories few,

Each time I wish to brign a smile bright and new...

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Posted: 17 years ago
sweeeeeeeeet ending ... i felt like i finishd watching a feel gud movie which had everything ... wil be waiting fro anothr fab story frm u coz i knw our suprb creater Bhoomi will never let us down ....

lods of jhappi coming to ur way ..n plz dont say thanks everytime ....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

sweeeeeeeeet ending ... i felt like i finishd watching a feel gud movie which had everything ... wil be waiting fro anothr fab story frm u coz i knw our suprb creater Bhoomi will never let us down ....

lods of jhappi coming to ur way ..n plz dont say thanks everytime ....

Hi Sara, am glad that th endign u foudn it to be sweet..ehhehe.... u felt gud likgin watchign a movie aww thats a great compliment..it had everything..hmmm i think it had a lot of things.and few which werent i would liek to shwo it in my next ever if i write ff... Awwwwww😳superb creator...ab dost kiski hun..doston ka bharii asar hai u see...😃..loads off jhapi miley mujhe au rkya chahiye...balle balle..😃🤗

Ok Ok..thanks nahi bolungi...pyaarisi jahppi dungi tumhe..aur Luv u bolungi..yeh to theek hai na...ek thanks ko choddo to dekho kya kay mil jata hai..😉😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
such a sweet part 👏 👏 😳aww jeet nd saachi r finally together 😳 😉 he made the right decision 👏 😛 ohh but you ended it 😭 😭 😳 i completely forgot that it was a short stry 😭 ur way of writing and expressing emotions with the right words...it was really beautiful and touching 👏 this is one of my fav sk fanfics 😛 i hope u write another one 😛 can't wait for that 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Paru_M

such a sweet part 👏 👏 😳aww jeet nd saachi r finally together 😳 😉 he made the right decision 👏 😛 ohh but you ended it 😭 😭 😳 i completely forgot that it was a short stry 😭 ur way of writing and expressing emotions with the right words...it was really beautiful and touching 👏 this is one of my fav sk fanfics 😛 i hope u write another one 😛 can't wait for that 😊

Hi Paru, thanks dear so much for appreciatign my FF.... I am glad u felt that Jeet made the right deicsion adn the way the story I tried to tell u liked it.... u felt the story beautiful n tocuhign that makes me really happy...and cencouarages me to write more.... its one of ur fav Sk...oh ho...I have written my first ever story with Rajeev n Amna in mind so its a pecial one for me..I compeltely brooguth back my kth memories with the snaps... i will post a small too short for u all..lol.. short story very soon.... hope u do read it..😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww.............im going to miss this story soo much............i have got used to coming on I-F everyday n first of all checking for your updates bhoomi............Plzz do write another story on sujal kashish........or base the other stories of yours (that you have already written) into SK stories nd post them 😳

U are a rocking writer 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awww.............im going to miss this story soo much............i have got used to coming on I-F everyday n first of all checking for your updates bhoomi............Plzz do write another story on sujal kashish........or base the other stories of yours (that you have already written) into SK stories nd post them 😳

U are a rocking writer 👏

Hi Vandu.... awww even i am gona miss ur comments adn the smiles the excitign feelign whenever i read ur reply but than this was a short story and the next comign stories will be short as well....and as u came here to read my story ..i use to coem n read the reply and if i saw u hav written..i knew u will make m smile by ur commetns.. i still can forget the way u asked for Ashu autograph and i was laughign adn feeling...oh wow!! so cute.... Vandu whaetver Ashu wrote for u that day..is what i woudl want to say for u even now...

waise kuch line sof peosm to hojaye for u...

Vandana tumhari baatein kitni mitthi hai,

Padhkar hoti mujhe hamesha khushi hai,

Hamara yunhi chalta rahi baaton ka silsila,

Yunh hi muskurati raho aur na rahe ab koi gila...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Vandu.... awww even i am gona miss ur comments adn the smiles the excitign feelign whenever i read ur reply but than this was a short story and the next comign stories will be short as well....and as u came here to read my story ..i use to coem n read the reply and if i saw u hav written..i knew u will make m smile by ur commetns.. i still can forget the way u asked for Ashu autograph and i was laughign adn feeling...oh wow!! so cute.... Vandu whaetver Ashu wrote for u that day..is what i woudl want to say for u even now...

waise kuch line sof peosm to hojaye for u...

Vandana tumhari baatein kitni mitthi hai,

Padhkar hoti mujhe hamesha khushi hai,

Hamara yunhi chalta rahi baaton ka silsila,

Yunh hi muskurati raho aur na rahe ab koi gila...😃

Awww...........that poem was lovely...

Tumhari poem mujhe lagi bahut achi hai

Ye baatein mujhe lagi dil se badi sacchi hai..

"Tumse Milke" naam ki story padhke ....hamari dosti ki shuruwaat hui bahut achhi hai😳

Aur ab tum samajh lo yeh dosti bilkul pakki hai😉😆

Im not as good as you in writing poetry but still😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Awww...........that poem was lovely...

Tumhari poem mujhe lagi bahut achi hai

Ye baatein mujhe lagi dil se badi sacchi hai..

"Tumse Milke" naam ki story padhke ....hamari dosti ki shuruwaat hui bahut achhi hai😳

Aur ab tum samajh lo yeh dosti bilkul pakki hai😉😆

Im not as good as you in writing poetry but still😆😆😆

Oyeee good nahi tum to very good hooo... Realy ncie poetry Vandu ..i tell u keep writign liek this n thoughts will coem up and u will write more such ebatiful liens... I am impressed and really felt wonderful to read it... haiii..👏

Yeh poetry tumhari achhi hai,

Tumhari baat bilkul sacchi hai,

Aur hamari dosti jarror pakki hai,

Hum miley IF kitna lucky hai,

Vandu likho yunhi likhti jaoo,

Merri sari jhappi tum paaloo...🤗

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