'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 28

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Wow !!...awesome parts...just read the parts i missed out ..thanx to my net 😡 Btw congrats on winning the parody contest... u deserved to be the winner 👏 👏 👏

HI bini, jaanu u read na..i can get ur comments whenever..eheheh ya I won the parody..hahah me deservign ..lol.😳😳😳thanks...

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow awsome is just the word a really well written pat gr8 job cont soon

thnaks jyothi ..hope u like the episode i post..now...😃

Episode : 34

01-01-08

Jeet was just gettign eager to call Saachi…he didnt even thought a sec about what is the sazaa his mom had thought to give to Kushal, he had full confidence on his mother...and knew his Maa said with such determination...as if his father was standing there to tell him , I will take care of all those things… Jeet went into the other room in hurry and banged as Ashu was entering and he said,

Ashu: Jeet..yeh jald bazzi kyun….meri baat sunn….(Ashu didn't let Jeet say anything..and made him sit ..)

Ashu: Main janta hun, jo kuch huaaa bahot hi mushkil hai…Jeet..lekin...tera pyaar yehan hai… Rithik ko Saachi ki chinta hai…aur mujhe teri..tum dono ki zindagi dau pe hai …tumdono ander se ghutt rahe ho..Jeet…main…aisa nahi honey dunga…Tu abhi chal ..abhi…

Jeet laughed loudly seeing the way Ashu was pleading with him and was very emotional…While Jeet laughed Ashu thought Jeet was getting mentally imbalance… he wondered…and thought about the pic on his mobile…

Ashu showed him the pic where Jeet had written in his calligraphic style…

'Yeh to Suna tha ki SACCH ki JEET hoti hai,

Yeh to haqueeqat hai ab SAACHI ka JEET hochuka hai'

Ashu: Yaad hai tuneey pehle hi kaha hai..Sachh ki Jeet…yaniii tere Sacche pyaar ki Jeet..aur Tu to Saachi ka hai..tum dono ek dusre se lag kaise ho saktey ho…

Jeet smiled cheeckily and hugged him… Ashu felt why is he behaving so strangely..why he is happy…this is such an emitonal moment..

Jeet: Ashu..achaa hua tuneey yaad dilaya iss diary ke panney ko..amin soch hi raha tha Saachi se milunga baat karung to kya kahunga…ab kcuh kuch idea aa raha hai..i will show her this…am sure she will know what I feel..

Ashu: Tu milega..Saachi se??? Kaise? Delhi ...sapney mey kya? He was completely shocked…

Jeet: Mumbai mey hi…Main yehan se Saachi ke sath hi jaunga…

AShu was so happy…. : Jeet tu sacch keh raha hai…main bahot khush hun…lekin Kushal..aur ..

Jeet: Kushal ko sazaa dene ka faisala Maa lengi aur Main Saachi ko iss cheej se jodhna nahi chata…akhir mey Saachi ki takleef uska dard bhi to humse dekha nahi jayega…Agar ussey kuch ho ..to main apne aap ko bhi maaf nahi kar sakunga… Kushal ko uski sazaa milegi..main samajh raha hun Maa kya karna chahti hai.

Ashu a bit tensed asked him: Kya karna?

Jeet: Ab Woh agey chalkey hamey khabar ho hi jayegi…bass intezaar hai..Saachi ko baat kehne ki… Main phne pe nahi baat karunga…jaake mil ata hun..

Ashu: Am so happy Jeet…sach tum dono ka haal dekh..mujhe to bahot hairat ho rahi thi..tumdono kaise pal pal guzarrahe ho..kitna mushkil hai yeh main jaanta hun..

Tumhare pyaar ko kisiki nazar na lagey,

Tumdono ynhi khsuh raho khuda karey,

Tumhe yunh muskuratey dekho to khuhsi hoti hai,

Saachi Aur Jeet ki jodi sabsey sunder dikhti hai…

Jeet wanted to give Saachi a surprise and so went to her house…

Abhigyan opened the door as it was night… Abhigyaan was shocked to see Jeet at his place…

Jeet: Saachi se milna hai…(with a stern face)

Saachi who was awake and was crying through out the night came out to see who was at the door…she was shocked and couldn't belive her eyes…

Jeet: Hi Saachi…chalo kuch kehna tha..baat karna tha…ander aasakta hun na..( Saachi was worried as her bro was also at home..)

Saachi: theek hai…aooo…(she took him into her room)

Jeet very casually sat and looked at the room…. : bahot achaa hai room…actually tumhari choice bahot acchi hai… humsafar dhundney mey bhi..…(he winkled)..

Saachi couldn't react….she was not understanding what was happening…She asked him hesistantly..

Saachi: Jeet tum yehan kaise..

Jeet: Main pehli baar tumhare ghar ayaa hun..aur yeh kya pooch rahi ho..Tea coffee...nahi puchaa aur kyun puch rahi ho..

Saachi: Tum itne khush ho… shayad meethaii hi chaahiye…lekin yeh meethass koi kadwahat ke peeche to nahi na…

Jeet understood the seriouness and herdidnt want to make her more worried and sad..Jeet looked at her with a smile and told her to sit and he will tell her… Jeet told her whatever he spoke with Maa…

Saachi: Maa kya sazaa soch rahi hai…

Jeet smiled and said, agar mujhe aur Maa ko ache tarah janti ho..to samjhlo..jo hoga woh sahi faisla hoga..tumhe yeh to nahi lag raha hai na..ki..

(Saachi interrupted him…)

Saachi: Nahi Jeet…aap jo fasla karogey woh hamey manzoor hoga.. Bhaiya tumse milkey aye aur sab kcuh kaha…bahot hi disturbed hain..aisa lag rah ahai..guilt ke mareey weh Bhabhi ki maut ke liye bhi apne aap ko hi doshi maan rahe hai… ke unke karni ki sazaa ek key baad ek parivaar waley le rahe hain..Ab Maa job hi fasla karey sahi to jaroor hoga..

Jeet took Saachi's hand in his hands..and with a certain love..and feelgin of getting close to her..said,

Jeet: Uss din 7^th July ko jab maine tumhe propose kiya tha tumney Naa keh diya.. aur jab apne dil ka har ek sach kaha us din pucha tha na… Jeet kya ab shaddi karogey… To…Jeet bent on shi knees and looked into her eyes and holding her hand said,

Tumsey milkey Muskura utha,

aur kuch hi pal mey Pyaar hogaya,

Maine Zindagi ko jeena sikha

Aur Zindagi tumhare Naam kardiya,

Ab Tumse mohobaat hai

Saachi tumsang jeena hai,

Kuch aur na socho bas kahdoo

kya Meri ardhangini ban tumhe jeena hai?

Saachi had tears flowing from her eyes, with every word he said, and Jeet knew its her love for him, and the pain she has gone through from so long. She had kept these tears inside her and all those r getting washed away as the love is taking away the pain giving happiness to her…

Jeet wiped her tears with his hands and had tears in his eyes looking at the long months they lived without each other and the pain they had taken in which broke their heart each day, each memory made them love each other more…

As Saachi saw im also having tears..she smiled and said,

Saachi: U look realy cute when u cry… Jeet laughed and with a very naughty smile asked her,

Jeet: When I cry I look cute..when I smile hwo do I look?

Saachi blushed and said: Pretty cool and lovable…(she kept her head down)

Jeet: Oh ..(he too blushed) and when I am not crying I am not smiling at that time…how do I look Saachi..

Saachi: Hmm…Aaa…. She took her time..and with extreme shyness said.. in a very soft tone.. Pretty HOT…

Jeet laughed loudly and Saachi hit him…she just was embarrsed by her own words…

Jeet: I look cute sometimes, I look cool sometimes and I look Hot as well…so my advise to you is, marry me soon..or else there can be so many wanting to get married to me..I amquite handsome u see..

Saachi hit him one hard on his chest…and Jeet screamed ohhhh…. Saachi got tensed if he really is hurt…Jeet held her hand on to his chest took her close..and Saachi was feeling too shy …She looked out if none were near the room.. Jeet told her lets go out..and both walked hand in hand outside the house..

Jeet: Come on..So how many times I have to propose u…tell me..shaddi kar rahi ho..ya phir…

Saachi : Ya phir kya?

Jeet: Ya phir… shaddi ke begair bhi I dotn have any problem…ussdin yaad hai na..how close we were…oh..uss din agar behaktey..ab tak to angan mey phool hotey..

Saachi pulled his ears… Jeet took her close and asked..her.. kaho bhi ab..kya meri jaan leni hai…Saachi held her hand on his lips.. Jeet closed his eyes and Saachi kissed his cheeks..and kept her head on to his chest…

Saachi: Mujhe tumhe kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi hoti hai..phir bhi aaj tumne lavzo mey puchaa to lavzo mey main keh deti hun Jeet…

Tumsey milkey jana tha,

mere sapno ke shehjadey tum hi ho,

Kuch mulakat batala gaye the,

tumsey bebanaah pyaar hai mujhko,

Har pal har saans kehti

tumsang jeena har dam hai,

Main Priyasi hun tumhari

ardhangini ban rehna Satoo janam hai...

Lovingly Jeet showed her the diary page he had written , all the memories of his childhood. Saachi and Jeet walked into a new beginning..of their life…

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this was awesome Bhoomi 👏 . Good to see Jeet n Saachi together. And Jeet is so sweet. I feel he is just like a child.

hi bhoomi,
im sonika . im posting comment for da 1st time bt im following ur fic frm starting as a silent reader 😉 .
bt i thought i shud comment as an appreciation becoz ur fic is really awasom 👏 . ur poems r tooo..... gud 😳 😳 n ya the names u hv chosen "jeet" n "saanchi" sounds really special. do continue soon 😛 😛 .

Originally posted by: golu_1677

this was awesome Bhoomi 👏 . Good to see Jeet n Saachi together. And Jeet is so sweet. I feel he is just like a child.

Hi Golu, an glad u enjoyign reading this episode it is a special one..and i wanted u all to liek these. Am glad u like Jeet...I tried to that bit where men usually ebhave like a child most often...😉 hope u read the next episode which will come sooon..

Originally posted by: lotus lover

hi bhoomi,
im sonika . im posting comment for da 1st time bt im following ur fic frm starting as a silent reader 😉 .
bt i thought i shud comment as an appreciation becoz ur fic is really awasom 👏 . ur poems r tooo..... gud 😳 😳 n ya the names u hv chosen "jeet" n "saanchi" sounds really special. do continue soon 😛 😛 .

Hi Sonika...am so happy that u felt liek appreciating my FF and so have replied here...so sweet of ur.adn thanks for the encourgemtn ...am glad u r enjying the poems and the name..oh i am very particualr abotu the anems..the name have to igve me the feel of the charcter they r..or else i just cant start it...😆..ya am posting hte next..and this will..be a realy sepcial epsiode..why..u need to check that out...

hey bhoomi amazing part just enjoyed every bit of it the emotions were well described and the poems were amazing cant wait to read more cont soon and one big jappi to keep u waram🤗

Originally posted by: togepe30

rocking part!!! 👏

Hi Vandu..... am glad u enjoyed this part...hey u didnt write cotinue soon...hehehhe but am posting hte next....part....the THE important part..u see😆😉

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey bhoomi amazing part just enjoyed every bit of it the emotions were well described and the poems were amazing cant wait to read more cont soon and one big jappi to keep u waram

Hi jyothi....wow!! i luv ur jhappis...waise hi mujhe tand jyada lag rahi hai...writign part with RK and AS ..actually HOt lagna chiye na..phir bhi...am glad u enjoyed the episode..and poems..ab to pakaaungi hi..with poems..dont kwo u guys dont get bored yeh poem kahan se beech mey ayaa...sochkey..heheh... read the next imp episode... 😉luv u...