'Tumsey Milkey'(ff with RK&AS)Ep:35Ending - Page 31

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Oyeee good nahi tum to very good hooo... Realy ncie poetry Vandu ..i tell u keep writign liek this n thoughts will coem up and u will write more such ebatiful liens... I am impressed and really felt wonderful to read it... haiii..👏

Yeh poetry tumhari achhi hai,

Tumhari baat bilkul sacchi hai,

Aur hamari dosti jarror pakki hai,

Hum miley IF kitna lucky hai,

Vandu likho yunhi likhti jaoo,

Merri sari jhappi tum paaloo...🤗

hehehehehe!!🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Ravinder duggal

just caught up
sorry couldn't reply before
It is a freat ff and hope you write a new ff soon

Take Care 😊


*~Ruhee~*

Hi Ruhee,

thanks for appreciating the ff...no nee to say sorry..and ya i have alrady posted a new short sotry of mine..titled" when I was broken" do read and hope u do like it as well..

Originally posted by: harpy

ur story rocks..write one more

Hi Harpy..... 😊am really glad that u liked this story 😃and yaa i have posted another short story in the forum...its less than 10 parts story ... hope u like that too...

Originally posted by: sanightingale

helllooosss dii...hows u??? m soooo soooorrrryy for replying sooo late...the ending was extremely wonderful..u ended it so well..just perfect 😃 !!!
i enjoyed the whole story a lOt....and last epi mein Rocky and Parul ki entry was gr8 😆 ..abhi we want a continuation pleassse:) whenever u can:)
i've read Badalte Chehre also:))...n thats a very nice story too! 👏
keep writing this way..u rock, completely!! 🤗
love,
Nida..

Hi Nida...🤗 helloss bola theek hai..lekin yeh kya asorry boldiya😲dont u know San ko puchlo sorry bola to main kabhi kabhi punishment bhi deti hun😉 endign achii lagiii feels nice...as its the beginin n endign which stays in the heart all the way when we think abt the story full....rocky n parul ki continuation...😆 patta nahi when i will....yehi story i felt when too long 1 month tak maine tum sab ka dimaag khaya..😉..dont lets see agar likhne ka mann kiya to rocky n parul ki story continue karungi.

U read Badaltey chehre😲baapre... ab mere baare mey ur impression na jane kya hoga..lol...all who have read say they never thought main asia likhungi....hope u can stil remember me with mroe of fun fillign bhoomi..and not serious type wali bhoomi😆..

Awww Nida..i always loved ur comments..and jab bhi padha nida ne likha i would smile ... so dear Nida... will contnue writign as i have such wonderful readers and sweet friens likes u.... me rock...areey love u for all the love u have given...a BIG FIVER STAR chocolate for u..⭐️

Originally posted by: seasplash

hiiiiiii bhoomi its me khubu again😉😉😉
i just completed this one and i wont repeat it again tht the story was to be fall in love with one😆😆😆
well i think this was ur longest story upto today and beleive me it was a hearty one
u portrayed jeet and saachi's character very beautifully 😳 😳 😳
and i like ashu's character also
finally keep on writing these kind of stories 😊 😊

Hi Khubu... u read the whole story .it was to long hope neend nahi ayeee..ya ayee ho to bhi gam nahi... chalo kissiii kaam to ayegi meri story..😆.. Ya Jeet and Saachi r charcters i would want Rajeev n Amna to play.. could visualise and ya pics ka tabhi maine sikha tha... these days with busy time havnt done in these short stories.. hopeful future mey will do more effort..😉.. Ashu..ya many here were in aww of his naughtness... ab kya karein.. such peopl who make us laugh r so less.. when we ind few we become very happy..😆... ya dear khubu will post as my mood directs my mind..😃 thanks dear for all the wonderful coments from u..

Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

hey bhoomi!! finally commenting for this ff 😆........ first of all a huge applause for u👏............ ( it might end at infinity 😉 )

the whole story was awesome......... well, wot more can i say.....i think already told u that ur an awesome writer............ very well descriptive and natural............ i just luv all ur stories.......... they seem so real😃......... i can actually imagine every char. from ur ff's.........

ashu's character was my fav. in this one😃....... hez sooooooooo sweet......... just luv his jovial nature........... jeet and saachi's luv is soo deep......... rithika and ashu also make a good pair😊.....

so finally parul and rocky is it?? hehe.......... sooooo sweet........... by the way, read pyaar hai also........ that was toooooo good......... wonder were u got those skills from........wel, maybe thats y ppl say, talent is born, not made..... so 3 cheers for u and ur ff👏👏👏

now will comment in paigram tomorrow.......... u see i get tired commenting😆.....

bye bhoomi!!

take care.......

and keep rocking😃