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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
thanks a million to:
*Shital
*tanya
*sana
*rkath
*javey
and
*rekha

for reading my fanfics and following them and appreciating my work,im gratful to u guys n all the others who read it and like it

thank u guys

shona 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
I BET RANBIR WILL SAVE HER!!!
useless ayaan!! 😆 (jk...)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Plz update soon!
I love this FF to bits!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
hey i just read your fan fiction in one go
It's great
Your doing an awesome job 😃 ...Continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
oh shona all d part r lovely....

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hi shona i just luved all the parts and waiting 4 the next one
Edited by :):) Daksha:):) - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
^^thank u guys 4 liking my work
next part coming up shortly 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
hi guys ok heres the next part ....hope u will like it as much as the previous ones
if u are losing interest then tell me n i'll try to improve it

ok sabse pehle nazar dalte hai recap par:
*BD has heart attack n few days later discharged
*Ranbir lies that he was april fooling them and that he isnt in love
*mallika n ranbir have a talk and ranbir reveals the truth


Abb ageh:

ayaan in his room thinking abt what ranbir had said a few days ago to BD
A:kya vakaye mein woh masak tha yah phir saachiye? jo woh hum sabse chupa rahe hai.Kya chachu aur kanya mein kuch attraction ho sakta hai...nahin nahin....mein bhi na...kya kya soch ta hoon

He goes to sleep

Kanya:ayaan bete tum abb tak yahan ho...dekho ranbir jr. aur baby kanya apne badi bhaiya ko kitna miss kar rahe hain aur tum hoke badi bhai ka farz bhi nahin adha kar rahe ho...chalo chalo un ki nappy change karo bete varna phirse joota marongi

A:yes kanya chachi mein atah hoon plz jootah maat mariye

K:very good-she laughs evily

A:aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!

Ayaan's dream was broken 😆

A:(deinking water)phewwwww woh sapna he tha...kanya cha...cha.. chachi 😆

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

in another dark room far away from the nanda house three people are talking in the dark-abbreviation for person:P

P1:we have to do something quick...i want to fill her life with so many sorrows that even the word sorrow is an understatment

P2:darling sab kuch ho jayega...be patient

P3:everything will be done this time without any mistake maam

P1:and if there are mistake toh tum bach nahin

P2:looks like your hindi has become weak while u were in london its varna tum nahin bacho ge

P1:that doesnt matter the point is i want her dead or atleast suffering

P3:kaam ho jayega...maam ur work done

All 3 of them:cheers!!!

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
the following morning all the nandas n kanya have breakfast
BD:kanya putar tum aaj apni saari saareeyan aur lehngas le ana...tum ayaan ki saath he jaana

Reva:actually badi maa ayaan ko pane papa ki saath kuch kaam hai issliye woh nahin jayega

M:aaj kaunsa naya kaam hai...reva agar tum apne bete se pyar karti ho toh usse apne pyar ki saath rehne doh

R:ayaan ko jo kaam hai woh mein dekhlunga...kanya ayaan tumhare he saath chalega

K:ok...umm badi dadi

BD:haan putra yeh rahe paise...puree 50 lakh hai aur aaj sham tak sab katam ho jaane chahiye

K:par itne saare...kaamane mein kitna waqt laga hoga aur ek hi din mein saab janne du

Reva:haan baap ki ghar 1 lakh bhi nahin mila hoga

BD:reva...kanya mujhe garv hai tum pe ki tum paison ki izzat kar ti ho par ye sab tum logon ki liye toh hai

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Kanya leaves with ayaan
they leave one shopping mall to go to another
they're in the car park wen ayaan gets a call and goes to the side to answer it as he cant get a clear network wen some one grabs kanya from the back and puts her into a van

ayaan looks around for her but cannot find her anywhere
just then he gets a phone call-C:caller

C:uss din toh kanya ko bacha kar bach gaye par aaj kaise baach aoge...kanya ko aaj aise jaga pe raka hai jaahan tak jaane ka tum soch bhi nahin sakte...apne ghar ki hoone wali bahu ko bacha sakte ho toh bhachao

A:hello...kaun ho yum aur...cut gaya damn it!!!mein ab kahan jaun kanya ko dhundhne


on the other hand kanya is alone in a room n the kidnappers lock the place and go to tell their maam the good news

Kanya trys to find a way to get out when she sees a phone...it works so she dials ayaan's number
Ranbir picks up-Ranbir and ayaan have the sme phone and it got switched in the morning so they had each others phones unknowingly
R:hello

K:hello ayaan mein kanya bol rahi hoon...mujhe kuch gundo ne kidnapped karliya hai aur tumhari press factory ke peche raka hai...plz mujhe bachao varna ye log mujhe maar dalenge

*~*~*~*~*~*~*

on the other hand ayaan dees a temple n goes there n prays to god

A:saab kehte hai ki jo kuch sache dil se mang ta hai woh usse milta hai aur main apse kanya saahe salamat mangata hoon

a newspaper suddenly flys towards him n he catches it

A:newspaper...jab uss admi ka phone aya tha tab kuch pressing ki awaz ah rahe this....aur ussene kaha ki woh jaga pe mein khabhi nahin jaata kanya ko dhundhne aur wahan pe to koi ata jata bhi nahin...kahin kanya humare newspaper pressing factory ki peche ke garage mein toh nahin


Ayaan and Ranbir are both in their cars driving from different parts of the city towards their goal:Kanya who was near the press factory


thats it

precap:
Kanya rescued and comes out running towards ranbir...he has his arms open for a hug 😳
Also Natasha entry-find out which acress i would choose to play her role

thats all

regards,
Shona



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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
😊 😉 woh it was so nice i swear i just loved it and now i'm think what can be the next part
waiting for next part 😊 😊
good work shona keep it up i'll give you the top marks A* keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

its depend if its a evil or goody role

anyway ranbuuuu darling save her

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago

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