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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: 26javey26

I love Ranbir n Kanya scenes 😳
this part is really good



thanks-ur another ranya fan
i think we kayaan fans are the minority 😆

guys i just typed up the whole update/new part but i lost it all-no worries will do that agen in a while
so plz bear with me

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
OMG plzzzzzz continue it ASAP i wanna no wat happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
thx Shital for ur kind comments
ok heres the next bit but firstly a recap:
*ranbir n kanya arrive at Nanda house
*kanya falls off stool but ranbir catches her
*ayaan walks in just then

A:Kanya are u ok?chachu thank god app agaye varna najaane kya ho jata?mera bholu ayaan hamesha bholu he rahega 😳 ...doesnt even know ranbir loves kanya
😆

R:tumlog yaha baatein karo mein abhi ataa hoon(he walks off)

Ayaan has bought food for kanya and so he makes her sit down and feeds her...she looks at him sweetly n begins to feed him....they tell one another stuff nad laugh....Ranbir is watching this but Ayaan n Kanya cant see him.He is taking pix of kanya....Ranbir notices that not even once did kanya mention hum which means she dont love him...a tear trickled down his face as he walked back to his room


a few minutes later BD n mallika come into Ranbir's room

M:kya baat hai beta tum jabse ayee ho kuch baalse gaye ho....kya baat hai?

R:kuch nahin mom

M:tum apni mom ko bewakuf nahin kar sakte mujhe baatao

BD:mallika teek keh rahi hai baatao kya baat hai putar

R:kuch nahin

BD:mallika mittai baatni shuru karo....tumhare bete ranbir ko pyar ho gaya hai

R:no way BD

BD:accha toh uss ladki ki kaasam ki tum pyar nahin karte

BD:haan BD mujhe pyar hogaya hai aur uss ladki ka naam hai kanya

M:RANBIR ye tum kya keh rahe ho

R:mom ye sach hai

BD:arre samja kar mallicka tum bhi na...ranbir ka matlab hai ussne ek kanya ko pasand kiya hai-kanya yane ki ladki

R:nahin BD mera matlab saaf hai mein Kanya godhbole se pyar karta hoon

M:agar ye sach hai toh tum abhi ayhan se chale jao

R:nahin agar koi jaayega toh vo ayaan hoga main nahin

BD:haaye rabba kya tu sach kehraha hai

R:yes BD

ayaan and kanya walk in they have heard the whole convosation
on seeing this BD grasps her heart n falls to the ground

thats it from me!!!
bye for now will be back soon with next bit

Precap:Doc:she has suffered from a heart attack
R:all this happen coz of me


hope u enjoyed that

regards,
shona


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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
thx wahida
i dont know what to do coz i myself am a kayaan fan n there are so many ranya fans who will kill me if i dont make ranya one
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
^^^^good idea!!!
well u gonna have to wait n watch...i mean read
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Shona i luv u
i mean i luv ur fanficsss they r so interesting
plzzz continu it quicklyy
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
plz continue
im glad he revealed that he likes Kanya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
hey itz realy 2 gud, ud soon. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
LUV U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!

in the serial nothing is going foward!!...yahaa pe...DHOL BAJRA HAI!! 😃
hai mera(matlab humara) RANNU! 😆 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
ok guys im in a real rush now so im gonna do a mini update
hope u guys like it!!

heres a recap:
*ranbir sees ayaan n kanya together
*ranbir tells BD and mallika that he loves kanya
*on hearing this BD faints

everyone rushes towards BD and take her to the hostpital.A while later the doc arrives

Doc:she has suffered a heart attack so she shudnt hear anything that will make here sensed

M:Ok doctor hum une dekh sakte hai

Doc:yes

Everyone goes inside the room
BD:Ranbir tum kya keh rahe the

R:APRIL'S FOOL BD!!! aaj first april hai aur jaise apne mujhe fool banaya tha last year iss he tarah meine apko iss saal...apko kya laga mujhe sach mein pyar hogaya hai...hahaha...maine app sab ko april fool banaya

BD:chal mein tumse baat nahin karti....jaan nikal di thi meri

R:BD sorry

after a few days BD is discharged and at home

Ranbir is in his room thinking
R:mein aise swaarthi kaise bansakta hoon...abb jab meine saach kaha tab sab ka reaction bohat kehta hai...meri vaaje se BD ko kuch ho sakta tha...ayaan aur kanya par kya beetii...mujhe kanya ko bholana he hoga

Malika enters his room
M:ranbir mein jaanti hoon uss din jo tumne kaha tha woh koi mazak nahi tha balki saachiye thi...tum kanya se pyar karti ho

ranbir cannot hide anything from her so sits her down and puts his head in her lap and crys his heart out...seeing flashbacks of him n her and then flashbacks of her smiling away wen shes with ayaan

R:mein kya karu mom

M:dekho tum agar usse saacha pyar karte ho to uss ki khushi dekho

R:woh ayaan ki saath bohat khush hai

M:to tum ab kya karoge...kahin dur chalejao ge?

R:nahin mein yahin rahun ga aur apni taraf se puri koshish karunga kanya ko khush rakh ne ki

he smiles



thats all

heres a precap
Kanya is kidnapped n ranbir n ayaan are both trying hard to save her

who will save kanya n who will she go off with

stay tuned to find out


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