FF-RK-the end-a death n leap @ end pg21!! - Page 4

^^^hehe i wont drag it like ekta's writers do coz i aint competeing for tprs 😆

glad u liked it
im trying to think of how the charectors wud tlk n react
see ranbir feel in love or attracted to a woman first time and as he has spent soo long to stay away from them he doesnt know how ro romance like ayaan 😳 -thats what i think nways

shona

Cool, Awesome work shona plz carry on 😆 😆

i luv those ranbir and kanya scene
😆 😆 😆

thx reks n addictedtotv(btw whats ur real name 😳 )

i'll update soon!!!

shona carry on wen u hav time ok
😆

ok heres what happen next but firstly for those who forgot what happen previously heres a recap:
*kanya regains concious-her n ranbir have convo
*ayaan wants to come to the place where ran n kan are but ranbir stops him
*kan gets angry but ranbir makes her see sense....they are abt to get into the car but kan falls n ran catches her


They look away n get i the car
Ranbir figures it will take them 3 times as much time to get to delhi now as the car is damaged and he doesnt have any money left as the goons robbed him for an auto and the battery in his mobile is low sounds very K serials type their car stopped every so offen n they wud have to wait a while before it gets working agen
this meant ranbir n kanya had to spend the nite together

ranbir stops the car in a deserted area where no vehicles were and gets some food for himself n kanya and in return gives his bracelet 😳 he hands over the food to kanya

R:loh jitna kaana hai kah lo vaise bhi shaadi se pehle tumme hati kati banani hogi

K:shaadi abb 6 hafton tak nahin ho sakti-jab tak ye badages nahin nikal jate taab tak

R:yaar tum janti ho nandas different hone ki liye mashur hai jaise BD woh only mahila is umar mein sharab pee ne ke liye mashur hai aur reva jo apne bees saal ki bete se umar mein kaam dikh ne ke liye mashur hai 😆
vaise ayaan iss liye mashur hoga ki apni dulhaan ko uttaki usse n phere liya simple na(he looks away)

Ranbir feels a tinch of jealousy towards ayaan

K:aacha tumhara kaana kahan hai

R:tum kah lo jo bachega woh mein kah lunga

K:tum mera jootha kaoge?
ranbir nods

K:nahin ek kaam karo hum ek plate main share karte hai 😳

the two of them sit together sharing from the same plate

Kanya thinks to herself that ranbir is sucha nice guy then why does he behave like a cadus sometimes anyway whats it to me all that matters is everything between us seems settled and that we're friends now

they continue to eat


2 days later they make it too the Nanda house

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at the nanda house everyone is shocked at seeing ranbir n kanya still looking injured
BD comes there almost running

ok here are a few abbreviations
BD:big D
M:mallika
Re:reva

M:ranbir bete ye kya hua aur tumne humme kuch bataya bhi nahin
R:woh mum mein
BD:kanya beta tum dono teewk toh ho
M:badi maa humme doctor ko bulana chaheye
BD:par hua kya that tum log ko

Ranbir narrates everything to them

kanya is getting better as radhika medicines were good and cure her in half the time it wud normally take

A:chachu...kanya are u ok

Re:ok kaise nahin hogi ayaan ke roop mein usse blank cheque jo usse mila hai...ranbir tumne usse wahin marne kyun nahin diya

A:MOM!!

ranbir indicates ayaan to shut up

R:reva agar kanya ko kuch ho jaata toh ayaan khush reh pata aur kya tum apne bete ko dookhi dekh sakti ho....nahin na toh abb sudhar jao...ayaan kanya ko andar le jao

ayaan is abt to take kanya's hand when BD smiles
n ayaan understands what she means

Ayaan carrys kanya in his arms n takes her

a few days pass

kanya was looking for her clothes...she reaches out for her suitcase by standing on a stool wen she slips and fall but luckily lands in ranbirs arms

kanya looks shocked as they recall the past 4 times in which they landed up in an eyelock when ayaan walks in and looks shocked 😆


Precap-R: haan BD mujhe ek ladki se pyar ho gaya hai,uss ka naam hai....

thats all for now
hope u liked it

regards,
Shona

haila haila haila
haan bd mujhe ek ladki se pyaar hogaya hai or uska naam hai...(i am sure ke tum ekta ki tara karni wali ho , kuch kaam nahin ho suspence main haina lol kidding)

fantastik ff
RANBIR KANYA ROccKK

I love your FF ..
and romantic scenes between ranbir and kanya
you ate much better than EKTA 😃

Originally posted by: aisha1

haila haila haila
haan bd mujhe ek ladki se pyaar hogaya hai or uska naam hai...(i am sure ke tum ekta ki tara karni wali ho , kuch kaam nahin ho suspence main haina lol kidding)

fantastik ff
RANBIR KANYA ROccKK

no dont worry im not gonna keep suspense like ekta coz i aint competing for tprs
but the next bit is interesting

shona

Originally posted by: wida

I love your FF ..
and romantic scenes between ranbir and kanya
you ate much better than EKTA 😃

thanx im glad u like my work
i guess ur a ranya fan them
will try to continue the gd work

I love Ranbir n Kanya scenes 😳
this part is really good