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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
u knw 1 thing good abt this FANFICTION...if shona doesnt meet our demamds we can force her to change it(unlike in ekta's case)
LOL...but at the present this story rox!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: baby_gurl#1

tis jsu gettzz BBEEEEETTTTTTTTER!!!!!!!! good luck on ur xam and continue soon!!!! 😃



thanks hun 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
nice part
cant wait for the next one
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
thx rajrit,shital,wahida,tabby and javey 4 liking my work
u guys rock
next update cuming up

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
ok first lets have a quick flashback of what happen previously:
*natasha enters the show-shes evel but we dont know why yet
*ayaan n ranbir manage to save kanya
*everyone at nanda house is suspicious abt natasha so kanya rings anand who says he is coming immediently


BTW as for which actress can be natasha well here are a few suggestions:
archit kaur
rupa ganguli
kamya punjabi
roshni chopra
or anyone else who is capable of carrying out this job


ok heres what happen next

Anand,pammi,harpal n pooja arrive oh yh not to forget Shanta tai

anand and pammi run up to kanya
A:tum teek toh ho beta

P:kya hua tha...tum natasha ko kaise jaanti ho

K:pehle ap pataye ye natasha kaun hai

A:natasha...hum koi natasha ko nahi jante

BD:dekhiye hum jante hai ki natasha aur kanya ya phir apka koi naata hai...abb jab do parivar ek ho gaye hai to phir ye sab chupa neka kya matlap

A:ji koi baat he nahin chupane ke liye...hum yahan -kanya ko lene ayye hai

M:ok koi baat nahin....kal tak ke liye toh rok jaye

P:ji hum woh

BD:koi par vaar nahin app rook jaye

Everyone goes inside but mallika,ranbir and BD remain with anand and pammi


ok thats it but we will get to know natasha's relationship with pammi n anand in the next part

shona


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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
HEY SHONE
IT SIK FF 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
sorry guys about yeaterdays part i know it was a bit rubbish but i had the whole part planned out but then i had to go somewhere quickly so cudnt type everything so i'll do that today
btw thx reks-ur a gr8 friend nways moving on heres the new update that will get back on the track of entertaining u guys
im not gonna do a recap as there isnt much to recap on

ok so we finished where BD,Mallika,pammi n anand and ranbir were left

M:ranbir i would like you to attend the meeting with mr Richards so go

R:yes mom...bye everyone
(Ranbir goes away)

Anand:ji mein app se kuch baat kar na chacha hoon

M:teek hai app iss kamre mein aye

All off them go into the room

A:dekhiye mein jo natasha ke baare mein kaha jo jara sa jooth tha...mein nahin chahta tha ke kanya ko kuch pata chale...natasha ka humare parivar se bohat bada sambhandh hai aur kass kar ki kanya ke saath

BD:ji...dekhiye app sab kuch humme pata dejiye...hummein phir bhi kanya swikar hai

A:natasha mere bhabhi thi...uska aur bade bhaiya ka love marriage hua tha...woh bahat modern vechar ki thi...woh actress baan na chahti thi aur ussko apni pehli film bhi mil gaye thi par une bata chala ki woh maa bane wale thi...natasha ko bacha nahin chahiye tha aur woh bacha bhaiya ki zindagi baan gaye...isse baat ko le kar bhaiya aur natasha mein kuch jagda ho gaye...bhaiya ye rooz rooz ke jagde se tanga ahh kar kodh ko katam kar diya aag laga kar aur hum kuch na kar paye

anand begins to cry
so pammi continues

P:phir natasha bacha girana chathi thi kyunki ye bacha usska career barbad kardeta...kuch mahine baadh natasha jaise apne hoosh ko betii thi aur mental asylum mein bhariti hogaye...3 mahine badh ussne ladki ko janam diya...kanya ko...woh phir ghar aye...aur

pammi cannot continue as she cannot stop trembling

A:natasha apni harkaton si puri nahin aye aur kanhi baar usne kanya ko katam karne ki koshish ke par kar na paye...kanya ek saal ki thi jab natasha ne kanya ko zinda jaalane ki koshish ki par hummne vahan ah gaye...natasha phir arrest ho gaye aur uske badh pata chala tha ki woh england chali gaye

P:uss din se jab kanya aag ko dekh ti hai usse ek daar sa lagta hai...hummne ek baba se pucha tha aur unho ne pataya tha ki bhaiya ki tarah humare parivar ka koi aur bhi hai jo aag ki vaja se maar jaye ga iss liye hum aag kahin ghar mein aane deete...doctor ko be dekha aur unho ne paataye ki kanya ko fire se phobia hai...woh aag se daar jati hai

A:aur mein jaanta hoon ki kanya ki upar hamle kar ne wali koi aur nahin par natasha hi hai...woh kanya ko apna sabse badah dushman manti hai

P:kanya bhalehe humari apni bachi na ho par woh humare liye pooja aur harry se badh kar hai...

BD:kanya humare hi ghar ki bahu banegi aur hamesha humare saath khush rahe ge aur surakshit bhi

Ayaan comes in

AY:meine sab sunn liya hai uncle aur fasala kiya hai ki mein hamesha kanya ki saath uske paas rahunga...mein usse utna pyar dunga ki dookh ka saaye bhi usse nahin chuega...Malika dadi app toh shaadi ki tayari kiijiye...kanya ko kuch nahin hoga

all happy

Precap:there is a small fire in the kitchen n kanya gets freaked out wen ayaan comes in...later she has weird and blurred flashbacks of fire and a woman

brief abt natasha
she was anands brothers wife who wanted to be an actress
she is pregnant but dont want child but her husband wants it
her husband commits suicide
she goes a bit mad n all
gives birth to kanya
she trys to kill kanya but anand n pammi dont let her
she gets arrested n wen released she goes away to london
n now anand feels shes back 😃

thats it guys hope u liked it
i know its hard to understand but i'll tried to simplify it 😳

bye for now

shona


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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg just read your whole story and i have got to say great job! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
okay thts like COOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLL!!!!
better thn ekta!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
thx tanya
wow im being compared with ekta 😆
well unlike ekta i dont like keeping people in suspence too much

just to let u guys know that soon ayaan will be going away for sometime n then we can have a lot of ranya scenes in this fanfic as well as on screen with the whole wedding thing

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