FF-RK-the end-a death n leap @ end pg21!! - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
nice part cant wiat for the next one
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOWWW AND AMAZING I LUV THIS FANFIC PLZZZ CONTINU SOON 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thx guys for liking it-even im enjoying writing this 😛
i just got back from skool so will update in a couple of hrs

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg tis is sooooooooooo bomb!!!!!! i laavvvvvv it!!!! plezzzz continue soon!!!!!! 😛 shona ur amazing!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww thank u amrita 4 ur comments 🤗

ok heres what happen next but lets have a recap:
*ayaan has bad dream where kanya is his chachi
*3ppl are planning saazish-kanya is kidnapped
*ranbir gets told while ayaan uses his brain to figure out kanyas whereabouts and they both set off to find her

abb ageye:

The three ppl are in adark room agen
P3:maam app ka kaam ho gaya hai...kanya godhbole ko humne aise jaga pe raka hai jahan nandas soch bhi nahin sakti

P2:very good

the light shines on these three people to reveal they are non other than Devika,a professional goon and Natasha

N:woh kanya godhbole ki vaajase i lost my family,my money and my reputation but ab i have all that once agen and thats why anand and pammi chahte hai ki kanya marrys ayaan aur they become wealthy and of high status like we

D:uss kanya ki vaja se meri ekloti beti shanaya ko uska pehla pyar nahin mila

N:but now everything has changed Devika abb hum long lost friends mil kar uss kanya and family ki barat baja denge...did i say it right

D:only the last bit was wrong darling...hum uski bedh baka denge...barat toh ayye gi aur woh bhi ayaan ki humare ghar

the goon:maam mere paise?

devika hands over a cheque n he leaves

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

ranbir gets to the press and trys to get in but the tanks of ink n other materials prevent that but he keeps trying

on the otherhand ayaan to it trying to break in but ranbir cant see him n he cannot see ranbir

inside there is a gas leak n kanya is trying to get out but she cant...she starts coughing n is finding hard to breathe

ayaan and ranbir try all means of getting in but cant...kanya is slowly losing concious

ayaan is trying to figure out the code for the door to open meanwhile ranbir finds a metal rod lying around so breaks the lock with it and sees kanyas bad state and immediantly picks her up n takes her outside wen he has a flashback os all the times kanya has shown hatred towards him...he feels hurt...kanya is showing signs of regaining conscious so ranbir walks away think kanya will feel bad if she sees him

ayaan has figured the code and goes to the door which has opened...he sees kanya....kanya runs towards ranbir who has his arms open for a hug....ranbirs heart beat is twice its normal pace 😆 for this is the first time he will be in close contact with a girl

BUT kanya barges rite past him n continues to run straight into ayaan's arms

she crys...he crys...and ranbir crys

A:mujhe ek pal ki liye laga ki tum mujse dur chale jaogi

K:i...mei...wo...but she is too scared to say anything and she just crys while ayaan cradles her

Ranbir gives them one look and says in his mind
R:ayaan usske zakaam do ek baar dekho....

A:bohat dard go raha hai?

K:kya

A:tumhare haath mein aur daye pear mein choot lagi hai...haina

K:tum hai kaise patta

A:chalo ghar

K:mujhe bohat daar lag raha hai?

A:ab tumhe koi chuega bhi nahin...i promise...mein tumhe abb mujse dur nahin jaane dunga

he kisses her forehead

ranbir walks off....unnoticed but
A:chachu app yahan?

R:actually kanya ka phone aya tha

K:meine toh ayaan ka number dial kiya tha

after a few moments misunderstanding clears n the phones are swapped back
they head back for home

After telling the whole story to the nanda family all sit
M:samaj mein nahin ata ki ye ho kya raha hai

R:kaun hai jo nandas ko challenge kar raha hai

K:nandas ko nahin par mujhe aur neri vaje se nandas ko bhi taklif ponche gi shayad

BD:kya matlab putar

K:matlab mein bhi nahi janti Badi dadi par shayad mere mama aur papa jante hai...kya mein unne phone kar sakti hoon?

R:loh...baat karo-he hands kanya the phone

on the line theres anand-abbrevaition=An
An:hello
K:papa mein kanya
An:kaise ho beti akir papa ko yaad kar liya
K:papa mujhe ap se zarurat baat karni hai
An:haan bolo...saab kheriyat se toh hai na
K:papa natasha kaun hai aur mera usse kya lena dena hai
An:na...natasha!kanya hum vahan a rahehain...abhi

he disconnects the phone
K:hello...papa...hello

BD:ye natasha kaun hai?

K:pata nahin par papa kuch parishan lag rahe the

BD:woh jo kio bhi ho mein usse choodungi nahin....akeer mein bhi Big D hoon

On the other hand we see natasha looking at a picture of Kanya smiling

N:agar meine tumhe khush nahin banaya toh mera naam Natasha nahin...ooffff this language...til i dont make u cry tears of blood i will not rest in peace ...u will pay for what ur family n u have done
natasha laughs evily


Thats all guys for now

as i have an exam 2morrow im busy so may not update 2morrow

but heres a precap:

kanya by herself on the balcony tlkibng to ranbir abt love wen he says
who can know abt love more than me then leave n kanyas thinks does he love me n do i 😳

regards

shona



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: good daxa


thats truth that she is amazing i know her she is the best



aww thx amrita n daxa
lagta hai tum logone meri kuch jiyada hi tarif kar di
looks like u guys praised me too much

but thx

n daxa i know u so if u think im the best then ur no less
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
tis jsu gettzz BBEEEEETTTTTTTTER!!!!!!!! good luck on ur xam and continue soon!!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
ur the best Shona
update it soon (L)(L)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
shona can you start your own serial?!?!? :) 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
OMG this is getting so interesting. When will Ranbir and Kanya get together? Btw whose Natasha?

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