FF-RK-the end-a death n leap @ end pg21!! - Page 3

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thanks yh sumtimes even i dont get it but wen we're watching tv in UK- stuff like star plus n all it has subtitles which is cool n helps me understand it better 😳

updtate coming up shortly

shona

ok here comes part 4 but firstly heres a recap if u cudnt be bothered or dont remember part 3:
*ranbir gets out n leaves kanya
*ayaan dreaming of kanya n hugs house cleaner n they have a supposedly comic scene-house cleaner turns out to be shanta's friend
*kanya's condition goes from bad to worse when ranbir comes back-there he shows care for kanya 😳
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Ranbir cannot find their car and feels weak himself now as well wen he sees a mandir sorta thing and goes there-its a small shiv mandir and the pujari is there

R:baba kuch kahne ko milega,dekhye ye ladki ki haalat bahot bure hai aur agar isse kuch kahne peene nahi mila toh ye maar jaye gi please mere madat kijeye(he now has tears in his eyes)

Abbreviation for pujari ia P

P:yajman yahan paas se mein tumhe kuch pal de sakta hoon tum yahin rooko mein abhi aya

Ranbir walks into the mandir and puts kanya down and kneals down himself
he remembers BD's words
"agar bhagwan se kuch saache dil se mango toh woh mil jata hai"-ranbir didnt beleive it then but now circumstances were different
There was a diva/diya here the shivlig,ranbir picks it up and put it in his hands and says

R:(looking at the shivlig)jab tak app iss ladki ko teek nahin karte tab tak mein yahan se nahin jaonga(he has a determined look in his eyes and his palm is nearly burning-ranbir didnt even wince at the pain)
from the depths of his heart all he wanted was kanya to be ok

R:agar isse kuch hogaye toh mein kya karunga,mein kise laadne jaunga,mein kya javab dunga gharwala aur ayaan ko...plz bhagwan isse ek bar teek kar do phir dekhana...main isse ek pal ke liya bhi akela nahin choodunga

the rujari comes in with fruits and a lady
he pushes the diya out of ranbir's hand

P:yeh tum kya kar rahe ho beta...agar tumhara haath jaljata to

Ranbir just looks into blank space

P:yh meri beti Radhika hai abb ye iss ladki ko teek kar sakti hai...beti isse le chalo

Radhika gives ranbir a glance and together they move kanya to a room.Radhika treats kanya's wounds and applies medicine on them and comes out to talk to ranbir
but ranbir is on the phone
He rings home

R:comon pick up the god damn phone

the ladies of the nanda family excluding astha and sooraj's wife and ayaan are sitting down disscussing ayaans wedding when the phone rings
BD puts it on loud speaker and answers

BD:hello saat shree akaal
R:BD mein ranbir bol raha hoon
BD:meine itni bhi budhe nahin hoon mere paas caller ID hai

ye bhudiya kabhi nahin sudhregi thought ranbir

Mallika: acha beta tum aur kanya kab ah rahe ho

R:mom business meeting aaj nahin ho saki aur shayad ek doh din aur lag jaye so mein aur kanya aaj nahin aah rahe hai

Reva:its ok ranbir tum ah jao uss gavar ko vahin chood do

BD:reva chup haro yum...acha ranbir putar kanya ko phone do

R:a big D kanya woh kanya shopping karne gaye hai apne behen uss serial wali ki saath...acha rak ta hoon

he put down the phone

Reva:ye ranbir uss gavar ko aaj itni izzat kyun de raha tha

Mallika:kuch gadh bar hai

BD:gadh bar nahin plan successful hai...mujhe lagta hai ranbir ko pyar ho gaya hai kisssi lakdi se mumbai main

cene shifts to ranbir
Abbreviation for radhika in the following is Radhi
andd ranbir for this bit is Ranb

its nightfall and he is lookig at the sky when radhika comes in

Radhi:bohat pyar kar te ho usseh?

Ranb:kis se

Radhi:ap chahe kitna chup aye par saaf dikta hai ki ap uss ladki ko bohat chah te hai

Ranb:ye kya bakwas hai

Radhi:acch main behas karne ki liye nahin aye par meri baton pe zaroor vichar kijiye ga...aur haan abb woh ladki katre si bahar hai par app yahan se jane ki badh usse badi haspatal mein zaroor le jaye ga...accha mein chalti hoon

Ranbir is by himself....he thanks god then has flashbacks of him n kanya n there arguements and all then smiles then says

R:agar yeh pyar hai toh haan mein usse pyar karta hoon...(shouting outside)mein ranbir nanda aaj yh kabul karta hoon ki mein kanya godbole ko ji jaan se chahta hoon...I ❤️ her mein usse pyar karta hoon.

Precap for next bit: ayaan on phone with ranbir
A:chachu mein wahaan ah raha hoon
Ranbir thinking to himself if ayaan comes here he will know the truth abt me and kanya and he will be hurt and shattered
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thats all for now
be back later with next part

hope u liked that

shona

nice, its very cute and can't wait for your next episode 😆

ranya scene was cutiepie....... 😳 😳

oh shona nice part.. especailly d way rannu say I luv kanya godbole....

Hey that was really good. I think you have a good grasp on how the characters would talk to one another. So please do continue, I would love to read what happened next.

ranbir scene were awesome 😆 😆 plz carry on

thx guys for ur words of appreciatation
ok next part coming up shortly

ok heres the next bit but first lets have a recap:
*ranbir cant find a car but finds a mandir n pijari instead
*kanya's state is bad wen pujari's daughter radhika comes n heals kanya's wounds
*ranbir informs home but lies that his meeting got delayed so he wont come back for a couple days...he also admits that he loves kanya

ok heres what happens next

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Ranbir takes a peep through the door where kanya was lying and looks at her properly

R:aaj tak mein tujhe ek chipkali samaj ta tha kyunki mujhe lag tatha ki ladkiyan ki kaahani sirf kapdon aur shopping se start hoti hai aur make up aur parties pe khatam par tum alaag ho kanya...kanya...ranbir nanda...kitne acche lagte hai ye naam ek saath

kanya is kinda waking up

K:ayaan...mein bhi tumse bohat pyar karti hoon

she opens her eyes and finds radhika there

K:app kaun hai...aur mein yahan kya kar rahi hoon?

Radhi:ji mein rah=dhika aur app bohat bure tara si zakmi hai....app ki saath woh lamma ladka that jo bohat handsome lagta hai woh app ko leaya app nahin jaanti woh app se kitna...
(she stops as ranbir indicated her to stop-kanya cudnt see ranbir)

K:ji app rook kyun gaye

Radh:woh mein kehrahi thi ki woh...apki davaiyan le kar atti hoon

she exists
kanya thinks that she was abt to say something then why did she stop...what possible was it that she going to say

Ranbir thinks to himself i cant tell her i love her as she loves my newphew...i cant steal his love...look even kanya loves himn which is why she recalls him all the time like wen we were in trouble and wen she awoke and wen she was unconcious...i'll show her i hate jher like i used to

ranbir enters

R:so miss chipkali...kaisi ho?

K:tumse matlab

R:look im sorry meine tumhai shukriya nahi kaha toh abb kehdeta hoon

K:kyun bachaya mukhe

R:ah tumhe mujhe bachaye maine tumhe bachaye...yane hisab barabar aur waise bhi agar tum maar jati toh ayaan bhi jaati aur mera ek bhatija toh jaata hi par saath saath business mein loss bhi hota

K:chalo yahan se mujhe ghar jaana hai ya phir ayaan ke paas

R:tum chaal nahin sakti kuch din tumhare pear mein fracture hua hai

K:oh god abb mein kya karu

ranbirs phone rings....its ayaan

R:hello
A:hi chachu BD ne bataya ki app kuch din delay honne wale hai
R:haan woh kuch time laag jayega kyun?
A:woh mein sooch raha tha ki main wahan aaj jaun aur kanya ko lejaun aur app apna business meeting ki liye rook jaye

ranbir thinks to himself that ayaan cant come here or he'll know the truth abt me n kanya n how we were attacked and kanya's injury and get worried

R:ayaan tumhe anne ki zarurat nahin hai...tum wahan business karo mein aur kanya kaal tak poonch jayenge

A:ok chachu plz hurry up ok abb ankhen taras gaye hai kanya ko dekhne ki liye,bahen betaab hai usse gale lagane ki liye aur sapne besabar hai saach hone ki liye

R:bas bas ok bye

ranbir puts down the phone

K:kyun tum nahin chahte ki ayaan yahan aye...tum maan lo ki tum mere aur ayaan ki rista kabhi nahin todh sakte

R:(holds her arm)meine usse maana iss liye kiya kyunki agar woh yahan ata toh woh khush hota tumhe isse tarah dekh kar...kya jawab de ta mein usse ki kuch gondo ne humme mar mar kar dhodala...woh aur pura parrivar worry kar ta iss liye meine usse kuch nahin kaha...ab raat bohat ho gaye hai soojayo...humme kal jaana hai...gadi humme mil gayi hai
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in the morning kanya and ranbir's bandages are minimized as they got ready to leave
radhika tlks to ranbir
radhi:kash har ashik tumhari tarha hota
ranb:hmmm...mein rooh do usse pehle mein chalta hoon...tum janti ho tum woh pehli ladki ho jo mujhe aache tara samaj ti hai
radhi:hmmm agar hoo sake to iss ladki ko chodh na mat
ranb:teen haft ke badh woh mujhe chachu keh kar bulaye gi....woh mere bhatij ki bewi ban ne wali hai aur abb...bohat dere ho gaye hai...bye

kanya trying to walk to the car by herself...ranbir is right behind her when

Kanya looses balance and falls BUT ranbir catches her and they have an eye lock for the third time in 2 days 😳
Kanya cant look away from ranbirs eyes and ranbir obviously cant take his eyes off kanya

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thats all for now
precap: kanya falls off a stool and ranbir catchs her when ayaan walks in

thats all for now
hope u guys liked it
shona

nice update,haila duffer confessed so soon.