FF: Mera Dil Pt 23 Pg 68 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
hey plz reveal tht if armaan is dead alive or where is he?
plz continue soooooonnnnn................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
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luv ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part.do update soon.i will be waiting 👏
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wow just wow 👏 👏 ,plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

here's da pic oh soham dat i found!
i hpe it helps! u can keep dis as soham if u want! 😛 😊

Thanks alot pwincess kanzi!!! I'll update the previous post with it right away!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Dadi ma shows pictures of the family members to Riddhima... Riddhima finds a CD in a file... Her head starts hurting after watching the CD... she tells Dadi ma that she thinks all this has happend to her.

D: Kya?! Tumhe poora yakin hai ki yeh sab tumara saath hua?
R: Who..
S: Kya hua tumare saath Riddhima?

Everyone get tensed.

R: Ji.. ji who...
Soham: Kuch ni badi ma. Mami tho yahi ke ri thi ki.. ki jab who choti si thi tab.. tab who bohot gaane gaati thi. Aur kal who meri madat kare gi. Hai na mami?

He turns around and winks at her.

R: H.. Ha. Hum sab baas yahi baate kar re the.
S: Ok.

Sukandra is about to leave when she stops at the doorway. Riddhima looks at the smashed T.V., then at Sukandra. She wishes in her mind that Sukandra wouldn't look at the smashed T.V. Sukandra looks around.

S: Meine aap se poocha tha ne meri ek file ke liye?
D: Ha. Mili ka?
S: Nahi. Abhi tak tho ni. Lekin kab tak mujhse chup kar rahe gi. Ek na ek din tho mil hi jaye gi.

She leaves the room.

Everyone: Phew!
P: Bach ge.
D: Ha. Magar kitni der tak. Ek na ek din isse sab kuch maloom par jaye ga.
R: Lekin usse pehle, mujhe iss CD ka raaz jaana hoga.

She takes out the CD and puts it in a case.

D: Lekin tum yeh kaise karo gi? Kaun jaane ke yeh CD kitni purani hogi.
R: Iss liye tho mujhe Rahul ki madat chahiye gi, Dadi ma.
P: Aap kya soch ri hai bhabhi?
R: Suno...

She tells her plan to everyone in the room. This is said in mute.

Next Morning

R: Rahul, kya tum meri madat karoge?
Ra: Of course bhabhi. Priya ne mujhe sab kuch baataa diye. Aap ka cabin aaj hi dupar tak tiar ho jaye ga. Agar aap ko, koi zaroori kam hai, tho phir aap Armaan bhaiya ka cabin use kar sakte hai.
R: Ar.. Armaan ka cabin?
Ra: Ha, bhabhi. Jis din Armaan bhaiya aur aap ka accident hua tab se..
R: Ek.. ek minute tumne kya kaha? Mera aur Armaan ka accident hua?
Ra: Ha bhabhi. Aap dono ka accident hua tha. Issi liye tho aap 5 saal ke liye coma mein chali ge thi. Aur bhaiya ka tho kuch pata ni chala. Aap jab ghar aiyi tho, aap tho bohot boori halat mein thi. Aap ke sar par bohot zaada koon beh ra tha. Jab hum aap ko hospital, tab doctors ne humhe baataya ki aap coma mein chale gi. Aur phir uske baad, bhaiya agar zinda the tho sirf aur sirf aap ke yaadein aur aap ke pyaar mein.
R: Rahul, tumhe mera alag sa cabin banane ki koi zaroorat nahi. Armaan ka cabin hai. Mein ussi mein apne kam karle karogi.
Ra: Jassi aap ki marzi.

Riddhima finishes her breakfast and leaves for office. When she's going to Armaan's cabin, everyone welcomes her with flowers and hugs. She responds to them politely. As she entered Armaan's cabin, a gust of wind blew making her hair go across her face. The door closes. A few memories come back to her. The romantic times she had with Armaan in the cabin. She looks at the sofa and table. She touches the sofa. She remembers the time when she brought lunch for Armaan. They both were feeding each other. When she was feeding Armaan he bit her fingers. She laughs a little. She goes to the desk. She touches the back of the manager's chair. She sits down in it. She remembers the time, when she first sat down in the chair when Armaan was here. And the time when she was doing a report and Armaan was flirting with her. She laughs once more. She sees the picture of her and Armaan together with a kid and a little baby in Riddhima's hands. She picks it up. A tear drop falls down on the frame. She quickly wipes it off. There's a knock on the door. She puts away the picture.

R: Come in.
Mishra ji: Welcome back Madam. Aap ko baafaas aana ki hum sab ko bohot kushi hai.
R: Thank you.
Mishra ji: Agar aap ko kuch bhi chahiye tho aap plz humhe baata di jiye.
R: Ji. Umm.. Mishra ji.. aap mujhe Armaan ki sari files de sakte hai. Mein jaana chati ki Armaan kaise logo ke saath kam karta tha.
Mishra ji: Of course Ma'am.

He goes and gets all the files for Riddhima. He also briefs Riddhima in all the meetings and decisions Armaan made, and all the info. about the partners, and the people that he worked with.

R: Thank you. Aap ja sakte hai.

He leaves.

R: Yaha par tho koi surag ni mil raha hai. Tho iss ka matlab yeh hua ki, business mein koi problems mein ni thi. Aisa koi insaan ni tha, jo Armaan ko business ke problems ke vaja se usse nuksan poncha sakta hai. Tho phir who accident? Itna baara accident kare ke, koi kaise bach sakta hai?

While finding the answers for these questions, Riddhima fell asleep. Rahul had already left, since he was handling another part of the business. A gust of wind blew her hair across her face. There was walking in the corridors. The footsteps were getting louder. The person opens the door and closes. On the name plate it says, Armaan Malik. The stranger is getting closer and closer to Riddhima. He picks up the photo frame from the desk and smiles. He puts it back down. He picks up Riddhima in his arms and puts her on the sofa. He gently puts her hair back. Riddhima slowly opens her eyes. As he's about to leave, he feels a tug on his arm. When he turns around to look Riddhima is holding on to his hand. He bends down towards her. He makes her let go off his hand. He gives a light kiss on her forehead, and leaves. As soon as he left, Riddhima opened her eyes. She's surprised to see herself on the sofa. She goes outside. She sees someone leave. She starts following him. The man gets inside the elevator. She starts running towards the elevator, but before she could stop it, it leaves. She takes the stairs down. When she gets out she, sees a car leaving. She runs after it, but the car goes away too far. She starts heading for home. The car stops in the middle of the road.

Stranger: Sorry Riddhima. Lekin mein ni chata ki tum mujhe kabhi doond pao.

At home everyone is worried about Riddhima. She comes home. Everyone rush to her and start asking her alot of questions all at once.

D: Tum itni der tak kaha thi?
P: Bhabhi aap teek tho hai?
Ra: Bhabhi aap kaha re gi thi?
Soham: Mami, aap humhe phone tak tho kar de thi.
R: Ufho. Agar aap sab ek saath itne saare sawal pooche ge tho phir mein kis kis ka sawal ka jawab doon?
D, P, Ra, Soham: Mera!!!

They all start asking her the same questions once again.

R: Ek minute!!!! Saa tho le li jiye. Dadi ma, mein ab tak office mein thi.(She bends down towards her.) Priya mein bil kool teek hoon. Rahul traffic zaada hogaye tha. Aur Soham, mere phone ki battery dead hogi thi. (She bends down toward Soham and holds his chin.) Ab mil ge aap sab ke sawalo ke jawab?
All: Ha.
R: Kane ko kya hai? Mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai.
P: Bhabhi aap ja kar fresh ho jaiye, mein aap ke liye khana laga de thi hoon.
R: Thnx.

Riddhima gets fresh and comes downstairs and finishes her dinner. After she's done she goes back upstairs. As she's going to her room, she hears Sukandra yelling at someone over the phone.

S: Meine tumse kaha na ki who file tumara paas hi hai!! Mere ghar mein bil kool ni hai. Poora din uss file ko doond the doond the tak chuki hoon. Aur vaise bhi meine tumse 5 saal pehle kaha tha na, ki uss file ko jala do. Lekin kya tumne meri baat suni. Nahi na. Ab kudh maro ge aur mujhe bhi mar vo ga.
On the phone: Dekho, tab mujhe yeh ni maloom tha ki who phir se baafaas aa jaye gi. Mujhe tho laga tha..
S: Tumhe laga tha ki who uske saath hi marjaye gi? Nahi. Itni koshish ki thi humne usse marne ki lekin who phir se humari zindagi mein aa ja thi hai. 5 saal ke liye pari hui thi, phir se aane ki kya zaroorat thi usse!
On the phone: Dekho agar who file humara haath lag gi, tho phir hum usse phir se aasani se mar sakte hai. Aur kissi ko kuch paata ni chale ga.
S: Tum teek ke re ho. Mein kal phir se doond ne ki koshish karu gi.

She disconnects the phone. She sees a shadow outside the door. Riddhima sees her coming. Sukandra looks out and sees no one there. She heads back in her room. In Riddhima's room, Riddhima is sitting on the bed, trying to believe whatever she heard was wrong.

R: Ma ne humara..

She starts crying.

R: Ma ne humara accident kar vaiya tha? Unki vaja se.. m.. meine apna suhaag..

She starts crying even harder. She looks up with fiery eyes. She gets up and wipes away her tears.

R: Nahi Riddhima. Yeh sach jaan kar tum ro gi ni. Bal kar tumhe badla lo gi. Tumhe badla lena hoga Riddhima. Tumhe badla lena hoga uss insaan se jisne ek pati aur patni ka rishta thoda. Tumhe usse badla lena hoga jisne ek bhai bhai ka rishta thoda. Tumhe usse badla lena hoga jisne ek pita ko apne beta se joode kiya. Tumhe badla lena hoga.

End.

Kya Riddhima kam yab hogi apna badla lena mein?
Kaun tha who ajnabi jo yeh ni chata ki Riddhima usse doond paye?
Jaane ke liye paarna maat bhooliye ga
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
ur ff has soo much mystery
i luv it
plzzz continue soon
n thx again 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
hiii i just strated reading ur ff and it's really good. keep up the good work...n im also dying to know what really happened to AR, how they got married and y is sukandra against them and ofcourse...their romance!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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love ur ff.this is the best.do update soon.i will be waiting 👏

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