FF: Mera Dil Pt 23 Pg 68 - Page 4

wowww...another gr8 ff.... i ave no words....
hey r those 3 kids....her children????????

plz help me out on it??

superb concept of both ur ffs...

u write owesome....

continue soon 😉

Originally posted by: *Armaan*

Hehe..great part but dont tell me armaan is dead!! 😔 anyways continue soon so we aren't in suspense anymore!!

*Armaan* 😛

i agree with u

its a gr8 ff
its so different from the original story
they hav kidz!!
but wheres armaan?

Recap: Sukandra tries to kill Dadi... Riddhima decides to leave the house... Dadi and the kids unite to bring back Riddhima's memory.

Morning

In the mandir, Riddhima is doing the puja. (By the way, Riddhima is wearing a gorgeous sari. Just wanted to let you guys know. ) Dadi, the bil, sil and the kids are with her. Sukandra is still sleeping and is getting angry hearing the prayers. She gets up and goes downstairs in the mandir. She gets more angry seein Riddhima still in the house.

S: Tum?! Tum abhi tak yaha par kya kari ho. Tumhe tho kal raat hi chale jaana chahiye tha.

Riddhima ignores her and continues on with the prayers.

S: Mein tumse baat kari hoon.

She finishes the prayers, and gives everyone the parshad. She goes to give it to Sukandra.

R: Bhagwan ka parshad hai. Ka li jiye.
S: Mujhe koi parshad ni kana. Aur tum mere ghar mein abhi tak kya kari ho.
R: Kal bohot raat ho chuki thi na, iss liye mein ni gayi. Aur vaise bhi agar mein aaj chali gai, tho phir mein kaha ra hoon gi? Tho phir meine socha, ki apni meri itni madat ki hai.. tho thoda sa aur bhi kar di jiye.
S: Kya chati ho tum?
R: Thode din aur rehani ki ijazat. Mein aap se vaada karti hoon, jaise hi mujhe rene ke liye, koi achi si jaaga mil jai gi, mein chale jaongi. Promise.
S: Teek hai. Mein Rahul se ke doongi, tumari madat karne ke liye. (By the way Rahul is the brother-in-law.)
R: Thank you.

Sukandra leaves and Riddhima has smirk on her face.

R: Mujhe yaha rehane ki ijazat de kar, bohot badi galti ki hai apne.

She eats a ladoo. (What is she upto? ) She goes into the kitchen and takes out everything from the fridge and cabinets and puts them on a counter. Rahul's wife, Priya comes in the kitchen.

P: Bhabhi, aap.. aap kitchen mein kya kari hai.
R: Who mein aaj sab ke liye breakfast banaa na chati thi. Aur mujhe tho yaad hi nahi, ki sabko kya pasand hai aur kya nahi.
P: Tho aap mujhe bola le thi. Mein aap ki madat karti. Dadi ko sirf vegetarian kana di ji ga. No eggs and no meat. Bachao ko tho roz kuch naiye cheez chahiye kaane ka liye. Tho uth kar apna menu decide kare hoge. Aur Rahul, ko tho hamesha jaldi lagi ho thi hai office ke liye. Ma, ko light kaana pasand hai.

She looks at Riddhima. Riddhima was holding onto her head.

P: Bhabhi kya hua?
R: Maloom ni. Achank ser mein dard hone laga.
P: Bhabhi, aap aaye betiye. Mein aap ke liye pani lekar aati hoon.

She brings and gives her the glass of water.

P: Ab kasi ho?
R: Thodi si teek hoon. Maloom ni kyu.. lekin achank ser mein dard hona laga.
P: Shayad aap ko kuch yaad arra hoga, bhabhi. Bhabhi, jaab mein pehli bar iss ghar mein aiye thi dulhan ban kar, tab apne mujhe sab ki pasand aur na pasand baataaya tha. Teek ussi taara jaise mene aap ko abhi baataaye.
R: Mujhe tho ni lagta iss sar dard ke saath mein aaj kuch bhi kar sakti hoon.
P: Koi baat ni bhabhi. Aap kal khana baana di jiye ga.
R: Teek hai. Lekin tumhe meri madat karni pare gi.
P: Okay bhabhi.

Priya makes breakfast for everyone. Riddhima is sitting at the dining table with dadi. Priya comes and serves everyone. They all eat and go away. Riddhima notices this. She goes to Dadi's room. Dadi shows her pictures and tells her about everyone in the house.

D: Yeh hai Sukandra.

Tum Sukandra ke baare mein tho janti ho. Aur yeh hai Rahul.

Rahul ab Malik khandan ka saara karobar sambal tha hai, apne papa ke saath. Isski shaadi ho chuki hai Priya ke saath kuch 7 saal pehle.

Priya

In dono ka ek beta hai, Soham.

(Thnx pwincess kanzi for pic of Soham. If you guys have any more plz let me know. I just need 2 now.)
Aur yeh hai Sukandra ke pati.

Abhi tho Shimla mein ge hua hai, kaam ke sil sile mein.

Aur isse tho mein kabhi ni bhool sakti.
R: Kisse dadi ma?
D: Tumari paati ko.
R: Mere paati... Armaan ko?

She gets excited and takes the photograph away from dadi ma.

She just keeps on staring at it. Sukandra comes in. Dadi ma hides all the pictures.

S: Kya dono mein se mere necklace dekha?
R: Nahi. Hum dono tho yehi the.
S: Acha.
R: Phew!
D: Beta, mujhe lagta hai, ki baki sab bata mujhe tumhe aaj raat ko baatane pare ga. Aaj iss ki kitty party hai na. Iss liye.
R: Teek hai.

It's like around 8:30, and Riddhima is still looking at Armaan's picture.

R: Armaan. Mein tumhe yaad karna chati hoon. Mein tumse phir se pyaar karna chati hoon. Maloom ni kyu, lekin mere dil ke raha hai, ki tum yahin ho. Mere aas paas. Lekin mein tumhe doond ni paari. Armaan, kya tum meri madat karoge sab kuch yaad di lane mein? Plz. Mein phir se akele ni parna chati.

There's a strong wind blowing outside. The window of Riddhima's room was open. She goes to close leaving the picture on the bed. As she's closing the window, the wind blows the picture away. When she comes back to the bed, she sees the picture is missing. She starts searching the room. She looks underneath the bed. She sees something, so she reaches out for it. She feels something really heavy. She takes it out. It's a file. When she opens it to read it, an envelope falls out. She picks it and opens it. There's a CD inside it. She puts the CD on. In the CD there's a car driving. And infront of it is a truck coming really really fast. The truck is out of control. The driver just jumps out. The speeding truck crashes into the car. There is oil coming out of the truck. The guy in the car gets out and takes out the other passenger. He pulls her out. He brings her to safety. He goes back to the car and takes out a baby. As he's heading back, someone has lit the oil on fire. The fire is coming quickly towards the car. The lady gets up and sees the fire. She gets up and runs towards the car. When the man takes out the baby he gives it to the lady. They both run away from the car. But the man falls down because of all the blood he lost in his. The lady stops and is about to head for him, but BOOM!!!! There was a massive explosion.

Riddhima is shocked to see all this. Her head starts hurting her alot. She holds on to it, but still no use.

R: NNNNNNNAAAAAAHHHHHHHHIIIIII!!!!!!!!!

She takes a vase nearby and smashes the T.V. She starts crying really bad. Priya, Dadi and the kids hurry into Riddhima's room. Priya runs towards Riddhima.

P: Bhabhi? Kya hua bhabhi?

She just points towards the T.V. and cries even more. She hugs Priya.

R: Who.. Priya. Who.. m.. mar gaye Priya.
P: Bhabhi kaun?
R: Who.. who..
P: Aap betiye bhabhi. Soham, ja kar pani le kar aao.

He gives the glass of water to Riddhima.

D: Beti ab baatao kya hua?
R (still crying): Dadi ma, apne mujhe Armaan ki taasvir di thi na, mein usse doond ri thi, tab mujhe ek file mili. Aur uss file mein se ek CD ghir gayi. Mein uss CD ko dekh ri thi jab achank mera sar dhook ne laga.
P: Bhabhi apne kya dekha? Aap ke ri thi ki... who mar gaya? Kaun mar gaya bhabhi?
R: Maloom ni Priya. Us.. uss ka chera koon se bara hua tha. Mein uski shakal dekh ni pai. Lekin waha par ek aurat bhi thi, aur ek bacha. Maloom ni kyu, lekin dadi mujhe aise lag ra tha ki.. ki yeh sab kuch mere saath hi hua tha.
D: Kya?!

End.

Kya itna baara hadsa hua tha Riddhima ke saath?
Kya Armaan kar paye ga Riddhima ki madat?
Jaane ke liye parna mat bhooliye ga

OMG druga ur AWESOME writter please omg please do continue dont leave us on thid cliff hanger plzzzzzzzzz continueee

Great part continue soon!! Realy want to read more!
*Armaan* 😛

wow yaar...dat was awesome.....
cont soon....

thank u sooooooooooooo much for da pm! ure sooooooooooo gd!!!!!!!!!! jst mind blowin!!!!!!!!!!! i really lyked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so is armaan dead? 😭 i hpe he is nt dead? 😭 😭 😭 contd soon! 😊

here's da pic oh soham dat i found!
i hpe it helps! u can keep dis as soham if u want! 😛 😊