FF: Mera Dil Pt 23 Pg 68

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Part One.........................Page 2

Part Three......................Page 6

Part Four........................Page 8

Part Five.........................Page 10

Part Six...........................Page 11

Part Seven......................Page 13

Part Eight........................Page 15

Part Nine.........................Page 17

Part Ten..........................Page 18

Promo..............................Page 20

Part Eleven......................Page 21

Part Twelve......................Page 22

Promo...............................Page 26

Part Thirteen.....................Page 27

Part Fourteen....................Page 30

Part Fifteen........................Page 34

Part Sixteen.......................Page 38

Part Seventeen..................Page 45

Part Eighteen.....................Page 49

Part Nineteen.....................Page 55

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Yes, please explain more! and really looking forward to reading more of your FF. hehe...and yah would love to read it!!

*Armaan* 😛

Hey thnx guys!!! 😛 Well for the people who have been reading the kzk ff, they know that it's more serious, and how should I say it... thriller. It's like a suspense ff. But for this new ff, I'm trying to make it like filled with comedy, romance, drama, and most of full of masti! 😆 So, like Ridz is like hyper 24/7. Armaan is like the kinda responsible one. He's like in the middle. He's just realizing all the responsiblities he has. But he's still just a youngster. Atul is comedy full time. Sapna is the cautious one. She like worries too much about the consequences. Anjali is more of a supporter. She supports Sapna if she thinks she's right. She supports Atul ALOT!!! The thing is she secretly likes him, and only Ridz knows this. There are more characters but I'll tell you guys about that after. I hope you guys like what I'm thinking about so far! 😳 It's quite entertaining. I think you guys will like this. 😆

Plzzzz reply guys
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They show Sanjeevani. The camera slowly starts heading to a ward room. Outside there is a couple talking to a doctor.

M: Doctor, kya ab hum inne ghar lekar ja sakthe hai?
D: Ha. Lekin agar koi bhi reactions aap ko mile inse tho humhe foran baathaaye di ja ga.
W: Teek hai.

They take the person home. At home, there is a puja going on for someone's well-being. They show someone trying to go to sleep, but is unable to because of all the noise going on downstairs. She finally has enough of it. She gets up and goes outside.

Angry lady: YEH KYA SHOR SHRABA HO RA HAI?!!!!!

The puja stops. The couple come in with the patient. The whole entire family is shocked to see her. Especially the angry lady. Now she's not angry, but she's stunned.

Angry+stunned lady: Yeh.. yeh.. yeh yaha par.. k.. kya kari hai?
Man: Yeh aaj se yahi par ra hai gi. Humare saath.
A+SL: KYU?! Hospital mein kamaro ki kami hai kya?! Yeh yaha par bilkool ni ra hai gi.
Woman: Lekin, yeh doctors ne..
A+SL: Bar mein gay doctors! Mujhe iski parshayi tak ni dekhni iss ghar mein.
Woman: Lekin yeh papa ke orders hai.
A+SL: Ufh! Tumare yeh papa bhi na. Patani kaise kaise logo ko lekar aaja the hai, iss ghar mein.

The lady goes into her room. The rest of the family is really happy seeing her once again.

Granny: Shukar hai bhagwan ka, ki yeh bafaas aa gi. Varna na jaane iss ghar ka kya ho ja tha.
M: Teek kaha apne. Aacha hi ki bhabhi bafaas aa gi. Ab dekhlene, sab kuch pehle jaise ho jai ga.

The take the patient, to a room. She's sleeping. The whole entire family surronds her and take a heart full look.

Granny: Aise lagta hai, ki saadiyo hoge isse dekhte hua.
Woman: Aur saadiyo se zaada lagta hai, iss ghar ke Ram aur Sita ko dekhte hua. Itne saal beethe gay, magar who karvi yaadein, abhi tak taaza hai mere mein.
Man: Teek ke ri ho tum. Aisa lagta hai ki, kal hi tha, jab humne in dono ko kodiya.
Granny: Chalo, isse sono do, hum kal aa kar baat kar le ga. Abhi hum chalte hain. Hmm.
MW: Teek hai dadi.

They all leave the room. In the house there is a mandir. In the mandir, the Granny is praying.

G: Bhagwan, aap ka lakh lakh shukar hai, ki apne humari ghar ki laxshmi ko sahi salamat ghar le kar aa ge. Magar, isse jald se jald hosh mein lad di jiye. Iss boodi aurat se aur takleef saaiye ni jati.

They show the patient's room. There are 3 little kids in the house. They come in the mandir and sit beside the granny.

Kid #1: Dadi, humare ghar mein kaun aaya?
D: Humare ghar mein aapki mami aiye hai.
All the kids: Mami?
D: Ha.
Kid #2: Lekin who tho bhagwan ke paas ni chale gi thi?
D: Chup. Aisi baataa ni karte. Tumse yeh kisne kaha?
Kid #3: Humhe.. meri mama.. ne.. baataye.
D: Tumari mama baas mazak kar ri hogi. Baachao kya tumhe yaad hai, jo aunty aap ko, hamesha chocolates di karti thi.
All kids: HA!!!
Kid #1: Ab samja! Yeh wohi aunty tho nahi..
Kid #2: Jo unke saath shaadi kar kar aiye thi.. umm.. kya naam hai...
Kid #3: Ufho bhodu... tumhe.. itna easy.. sa naam.. yaad.. ni.. aata..
D: Tumhe yaad hai, beta?
Kid #3: Ha.
D: Kya hai?
Kid #3: Un.. unka.. na.. naam.. hai.. ARMAAN

ARMAAN ARMAAN ARMAAN ARMAAN ARMAAN The name echoes all the way to the patient's room. Her finger's start moving a little. She opens her eyes. She starts getting very fady images in her mind. She gets up, and the first word that comes out of her mouth is

ARMAAN!!!!!!!!!

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I hope you all like the first part of my new ff. Plz guys reply soon. 😳

wow nce start
plzzz continue soon 👏