A story I created......Plzzz do read it!! - Page 13

Oh nandu don't say thanks u deserve appreciation....
😉 👏 👏 👏
Look I added one more song 😳

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

Oh nandu don't say thanks u deserve appreciation....
😉 👏 👏 👏
Look I added one more song 😳

U too Rashi.....😳.....and that song was amazing!!!!!This happens to be a total Filmy DV!!!!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

U too Rashi.....😳.....and that song was amazing!!!!!This happens to be a total Filmy DV!!!!!😆😆😆

😆 true very true.....😆

👏 Wow nandu n rashi...so sweet n gr8 imagination 😳 👏 👏
do continue 😛

yup Ishu we will
definitely... 😆

Originally posted by: Innocent Ishita

👏 Wow nandu n rashi...so sweet n gr8 imagination 😳 👏 👏
do continue 😛

Thanx Ishu....n we'll continue,for sure....😛....

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Thanx Ishu....n we'll continue,for sure....😛....

cant wait for the continuation 😳😳nice work done👏👏

I'm back with the next part,guys....Rashi and Me helped each other and this is our continuation...hope u like it..... 😛

Recap:
Veer disguises himself as a Choodiwala and hez successful.... 😃

Contd:
Veer in the getup of choodiwala...

Le lo kanch ki choodiyan.... rang bi rangi choodiyan.....

MC : Searching for veer... 😳

Veer : Aji sunti ho hum aapse pooch rahe hain. Aapke hathon mein yeh choodiyan bahut acchi lagengi..

MC : Hume nahi kharidni choodiyan....

Veer : Kyun kya hua...

BF : Le lo na.... yeh agar itna keh raha hai to le hi lo.... 😊
MC : Humne kaha na nahi lena matlab nahi lena... 😡

Veer : Kyun beti (giggling) kya hua aap kisiko dhund rahi ho kya?

MC : Kyun.... aisa kyun poocha aapne ... aur ha hum kyun aapko bataye.. aapko isse kya matlab hum kisiko dhunde ya na dhunde....

Veer : Nahi maine socha aapke saath yeh Bandar toh hai hi to aap kise dhoond rahi ho.... 😆

BF : Kya tumne hame Bandar kaha....Rajjya ke hone wale raja ko Bandar kaha.... 😡tumhari yeh jurrat.... 😡

Veer : Kya MAINE Bandar kaha.... Nahi ji aapne shayad galat suna... (giggling). Maine kaha aapke sath itna bahaddur hote hue aap kisi aur ko kyun dhoond rahi ho.

(MC too giggling )

To kaunsi rang ki choodiyan doon aapko....mujhe lagta hai aap pe yeh rang bahut acha lagega....

MC : Ha de do... Yehi de do...( thinking that oh God yeh Buddha mera picha nahi chodega lagta hai..... mein ab use kaha dhundoo) 😭

Veer :Yeh lo beti main hi tumhe pehna deta hu.... 😳

MC : Ha le lo pehana do.... (looking here there)

Veer holds her hand... 😛

Veer : Kitne mulayam haath hain aapke....kitne sunder....(Thinks...Mann karta hai ki kissie kar loon... 😳 )

MC blushing all the way....she looking at him and he looking at both the hands as well as her beauty...

BF : AE!!!Tum Choodiwale ho....apni hadh mein raho,Samjhe...Varna....(he pulls out his sword)... 😡

Veer : Haan,Varna? Varna kya kar loge?

There....Dharam is watching everything....

BF : Kya tumne nahin dekha mere haath mein kya hai? 😡

MC tries to stop him but she is unable to do anything...

Veer : Aise kitne hi talwaar maine dekhe hain....Waise yeh toh bahut hi chota hai,Beta!!! 😆

BF : Lekin kaafi asardaar hai!!!!Ab zyaada behes ki...toh yeh tere khoon se rang jaayega!!!

Veer : Woh toh waqt hi bataayega!!Ek chota sa talwaar hone par ghamand mat kar....agar maine apni talwaar nikali toh tumhe saari duniya Laal dikhaayi degi,Samjhe!!!! 😡

BF : Dekho!Mere paas tumse behes karne ka zara bhi waqt nahin hai,Buddhe....Ab tak main chup raha...par ab nahin rahoonga....main....

MC : BAS!!!Ab tum apna muh mat kholna!!!Kisi buzurg se kaise baat karte hain...kya tumhe nahin pata???Hume maaf kar dijiye(says to Veer).....inki taraf se hum maafi maangte hain....woh....

Veer : Nahin!Aapko maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... 😡 ....jise maangni chahiye....usko toh maangna hi padega,aaj nahin toh kabhi aur!!!

BF : Tujhe toh main dekh loonga,Buddhe!!!Chaliya Rajkumari ji..Abey oye....Haath chod,bey!!!! 😡

He leaves her at once....while they on their way,she spots Dharam peeping!!! 😆

MC : Hmmmm.....Hum abhi aate hain....(to BF)

BF : Par....

She follows Dharam....he is unaware of her following him....he goes to Veer to talk to him...

Veer : Agar aaj woh beech mein nahin aati toh main us Bandar ko.... 😡

Dharam : Rehne do,Veer.....use toh saza milegi hi...tum jo ho!!!! 😡

Veer : Hmmmm...Mere talwaar se ab toh woh bach nahin sakta.... 😡

Dharam : (Making a face)....Waise ab toh tum khush hoge hi!!! 😉

The lovely background song Pa Ma Ga...in the form of 'Ooooooo'.....is played... 😆

Veer : Haan...bas ek bar woh mujhse aake kahe ki woh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai....toh main.... 😳

Dharam : Ahem Ahem....and he starts laughing!!! 😆

She hears everything...at this time shez both happy as well as angry!!!Shez not a girl who bears everything and so MC goes to the room behind that Choodi shop where they were chatting....

To be continued.... 😃

oh nandu and rashi. 😃 😃 ..this rocks yaar. 👏 👏 .....chudiwala 😳 😳 how cute 😳 😳 and especially this line ''Kitne mulayam haath hain aapke....kitne sunder....(Thinks...Mann karta hai ki kissie kar loon... ) '' 😳 😳

andu ur'e a real star..... 😃 😃

Originally posted by: mad-about-Rajat

oh nandu and rashi. 😃 😃 ..this rocks yaar. 👏 👏 .....chudiwala 😳 😳 how cute 😳 😳 and especially this line ''Kitne mulayam haath hain aapke....kitne sunder....(Thinks...Mann karta hai ki kissie kar loon... ) '' 😳 😳

andu ur'e a real star..... 😃 😃

Awww....thanx Reeti....for ur lovely compliment....😛