A story I created......Plzzz do read it!! - Page 11

Originally posted by: sanniya

yup m also cry alooooooot if its lyk Titanic.... 😭

Me tooooooo

Titanic

sannu u really made those memories tazza........

Ma first ever crush Leo... 😳

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

Me tooooooo

Titanic

sannu u really made those memories tazza........

Ma first ever crush Leo... 😳

ya......hes in ma list 2 😆 so luvly haaaaaaaaaan...😳

bye sannu
c u 2moro.. 😳
GN SD and TC... 😛

Bye......n keep writing ya story....i lyk dem...

ok 2moro i'll post the other part. 😛 😳
😛

can any1 continue w/ the story?

yup........Rashi doin dis..2morw the DAy... 😉

Originally posted by: minal45

can any1 continue w/ the story?

yep continue 😆

I'll continue from there onwards dear......... 😳

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

I'll continue Nandu with ur permission….
It's ma first trail hope u like it….. 😳
If not then

Now our veer goes with dharma but his heart is lost over the mesmerizing beauty of MC (Rajkumari)
And he is lost it……. 😛 (as usual😆 )
Always in the thought's of MC
And MC too quite impressed by the charm and dare of a handsome hunk. 😛
At night both of them looking at the moon searching for glance .😳 (lol sagar's ur idea stolen by me) 😉 😆
Veer always in the thought's of Rajkumari (MC) makes Dharam to worry abt him… 😕
Then they both decide to go to her kingdom to have a glance of her 😳
Now our princess is quite sportive and likes the talwarbazi……. 😛
And in her kingdom such a talwarbazi competition is arranged
Veer and Dharam manage to go to attend this competition…. 😊
They are in the audience when this dreadly competition is going onnnnnnn…
The best talwarbaaz (ie. Surma ) of her kingdom defeat all the competitors that come in front of him ( the one like Alah and Udal in PRC)
And then MC declares
MC: Kya hua is rajjya mein koi bhi aaisa insaan nahi jo ise hara sake…
Aur hame lagta hai kisi bhi rajjya mein aisa koi nahi hoga jo ise hara sake…
To aaj yeh ailan karte hai hum ki job hi ise harayega use muh manga innam milega..

Listening to this veer gets up and when he is abt to say something dharma tries to stop him doing so
But veer rukne valon me se nahi tha (jawani ka ubalta hua khun as u all know lol 😳)

Veer : Kya kaha aapne.. phir se kahiye
MC : Humne kaha ki job hi ise harayega use muh manga innam milega..
Veer : soch lijiye vaada karne se pahele….. aapko apna vaada nibhana padega
MC : to kya samjha tumne hame…
Veer : to thik hai … aapna vadda yaad rakhana 😉
Then the fight (talwarbazzi) starts between the surma and veer
And as usual our hero is veer so he win's………😳
Then he asks I someone else is there to challenge him …
No one stands up
MC : bahut khub… bahut khub……
Humne aap jaisa naujawan jisme itni himmat ho nahi deka…
Veer : Ha. To ab mera inaam…….
MC : ha mango kya chahate ho aap inaam mein…

(imagine the song agar mein kahu mujhe tumse mohabbat hai from lakshya... 😆)

To be Contd………………… 😆
Hope u all liked it…. 😳 coz ma first attempt 😕

Plz comment 😊

beautiful Rashi...it dusn't even seem as if this wuz ur first attempt...ur a natural (talent)....😉😆😆it's great👏👏.....just imagine if veer asked for mc's hand as his inaam😆

read the next twinnes
it's d same written dear...