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Posted: 17 years ago
Nandu ur comments on song's 😛
waiting for them
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Posted: 17 years ago
Chkd 'em,Rashi... 😆 ...I told u before....ur song selection is always perfect!! 😛 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Nandini and rashi tooo goood yaar.. like every thin churiwala, mulaem hat, but hate that Bandar... Keep it up my younger Sisters.. Mwaah😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbie3143

Nandini and rashi tooo goood yaar.. like every thin churiwala, mulaem hat, but hate that Bandar... Keep it up my younger Sisters.. Mwaah😳

Thanx Fatty di....😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbie3143

Nandini and rashi tooo goood yaar.. like every thin churiwala, mulaem hat, but hate that Bandar... Keep it up my younger Sisters.. Mwaah😳

Yes Fatty dear.......we ailll continue... 😳

mwahhhhh to u to.... 😳 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
Herez the continuation....
Recap:MC listens everything.... 😭

Contd:
She enters the room in a huff....Dharam Veer are quite shocked....she straight away goes and slaps Veer for the work he did.... 😡 ....thatz because she is not used to such pranks... 😕 ...Veer is like... 😭

MC:Humne Tumhe Kya Samjha Tha Aur Tum Kya Nikle!!! 😡

Veer:Kya Hua,----??

MC:Itna Sab Kuch Hone Ke Baad Bhi Tum Humse Pooch Rahe Ho ''Kya Hua''?? 😡 Humne Tumhari Saari Baatein Sun Li....Tum DHONGI....Ek Choodiwala Hone Ka Faayada Uthaya!!!Tumhari Himmat Kaise Hui??

Shez soooo angry that she forgets the reason behind visiting the mela.... 😳

MC:Tumse Yeh Ummeed Nahin Thi,Hume!!!...and shez about to leave,when....

Veer:Meri Baat Toh Suno....holding her hand....Jaisa Tum Samajh Rahi Ho Vaisa Bilkul Bhi Nahin Hai...Main Toh Bas....

MC:KYA???Kaisa Matlab Hai,Tumhara??? 😡Tum Humara Haath Chodo....and she gets rid of him after contant request....

She gets out shedding tears.... 😭 ....shez hurt...

BF:Arrey....Rajkumari ji....Yeh Kyaa Hua...Aap Ro Kyun Rahi Hain???Kisi Ne Aap Se Kuch Kaha???Uska Naam Bataaiye...Main Useee..... 😡

MC:Nahin....Kisi Ne Humse Kuch Nahin Kaha...Chalo!!! 😭

Veer tries to stop her....Dharam too helps him...bt in Vain.... 😭 and Veer is now looking helpless....bt hez still determined...!!! 😉

To be continued....
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Posted: 17 years ago
well u did a great job well done cant wait for the other part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
well u did a great job well done cant wait for the other part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Herez the continuation....
Recap:MC listens everything.... 😭

Contd:
She enters the room in a huff....Dharam Veer are quite shocked....she straight away goes and slaps Veer for the work he did.... 😡 ....thatz because she is not used to such pranks... 😕 ...Veer is like... 😭 (yeh kya hua kaise hua kab hua kyun hua... 😭 😆 )

MC:Humne Tumhe Kya Samjha Tha Aur Tum Kya Nikle!!! 😡 (socha tha kya kya ho gaya... 😆 )

Veer:Kya Hua,----??

MC:Itna Sab Kuch Hone Ke Baad Bhi Tum Humse Pooch Rahe Ho ''Kya Hua''?? 😡 Humne Tumhari Saari Baatein Sun Li....Tum DHONGI....Ek Choodiwala Hone Ka Faayada Uthaya!!!Tumhari Himmat Kaise Hui??

Shez soooo angry that she forgets the reason behind visiting the mela.... 😳

MC:Tumse Yeh Ummeed Nahin Thi,Hume!!!...and shez about to leave,when....

Veer:Meri Baat Toh Suno....holding her hand....Jaisa Tum Samajh Rahi Ho Vaisa Bilkul Bhi Nahin Hai...Main Toh Bas.... (suno na suno na sunlo na 😛 humsafar mujhiko chun lo na 😳)

MC:KYA???Kaisa Matlab Hai,Tumhara??? 😡Tum Humara Haath Chodo....and she gets rid of him after contant request....

She gets out shedding tears.... 😭 ....shez hurt...

BF:Arrey....Rajkumari ji....Yeh Kyaa Hua...Aap Ro Kyun Rahi Hain???Kisi Ne Aap Se Kuch Kaha???Uska Naam Bataaiye...Main Useee..... 😡 (bolo bolo kaun hai woh.....)

MC:Nahin....Kisi Ne Humse Kuch Nahin Kaha...Chalo!!! 😭

Veer tries to stop her....Dharam too helps him...bt in Vain.... 😭 and Veer is now looking helpless....bt hez still determined...!!! 😉

To be continued....

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good work nandu...........

i'll continue from here... 😳 but 2moro..😉

I hope the songs are going fine with the situations...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: seiba

well u did a great job well done cant wait for the other part 👏

now check fariba whether the song's r fitting fine or not...😕

sugesstions are welcomed.. 😳

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