A story I created......Plzzz do read it!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys……this is a nice story based on the meeting of Veer and his Ladylove……it goes like this……😳

MC is a princess and in her palace there is a minister who was once caught in a robbery and so he is ordered to leave the palace……but accidentally he meets a blacksmith Veer……and comes to know that his friend is a Prince and he gets an opportunity to befriend them……now what happens is……MC comes to know about this and she disguises herself as a Village girl and then the romance starts……In a house where MC is doing some work sitting ( dressed in a Ghagra Choli and Dupatta on her head covering her face so as to avoid revealing her identity ) and Dharam , Veer and that Minister goes to the same house to rest……Coincidentally!!!!!😛

Veer : Its so nice to relax here with the sweet smell of the flowers……

Dharam : And yes , Veer……we've got a nice and a trustworthy friend too!!!!!

Veer : Ya……thatz right!!!!!

MC : But you can't trust anyone blindly……without actually knowing who that person is!!!!

Veer : ……Excuse me ……but who are you to talk in between us????

MC : Wow……U seem to be asking this question to the owner itself!!!!!

Veer : Alright……I'm sorry……but plz……can u tell me ur name or show me ur face……

Without further replying……she gets up and heads forward but Veer is determined and he holds her hand……

Veer : I won't let you go without seeing ur face……( Actually her way of speaking and arguing made him her Deewaana……)

MC : Sorry……but we're not allowed to show our face to any stranger……( angrily )

Veer : But I wanna see ……( he demands….)😉

MC : Nooo……I CAN'T!!!!!!.....( Shouting )

Veer : OK……then at least lemme know ur name……

MC : But what are you going to do with my name……this happens to be our first and last meeting!!!!!

Veer : I dun care about that……Plzzzzz……lemme know ur name!!!!!

Dharam and Minister are enjoying the scene like an audience

MC : I said I can't……( she pushes him back and runs away ……and Veer is now in dilemma )

Dharam : Ahem……Ahem……and may I ask what was all that?????

Veer : I too dunno……why was I getting attracted towards her……but I'm sure we'll meet again and then I won't leave her……😳

At night……

Dharam and Veer are sleeping since it had started raining and they had to spend that night there itself……

The minister comes to murder Dharam with his sword and then……

MC : Stop!!!!!.......and she hurts him……

Both Dharam and Veer get up and are amazed!!!!!

MC : He was trying to kill both of you and I stopped him……shall I kill him????

Dharam Veer : No……leave him there itself……we'll take care of him……

MC : OK……my job is done now……I must leave……

Veer holds her hand and this time slightly tight……

MC : Leave me……I said!!!!

Veer : No……don't you remember what I said……I won't leave you without knowing ur name and seeing ur face……

And suddenly the dupatta falls down and he comes to face her……Veer is like completely mesmerized in her beauty……

Veer : ( Trying to propose her……but asks……)……how did you know about this man???

MC : Hez a minister in my palace……

Dharam : PALACE????!!!!!

MC : Yeah……Palace……I'm a Princess of so and so place and my name is -------

Veer : Wow……what a Beautiful name……I LOVE YOU , ------……I wanna marry you……I LOVE YOU , MY SWEETHEART!!!!!!😍

Alright guys……this is the basics of my story……if u wanna continue u can do and suggest too……I hope u all liked it and do reply guys……it took me sooooo…… long to think of some stuff like this ……Plz do comment !!!!!!😃

Note - Those who wanna take a glimpse of the story ....can have a look at the following pages.... Pg - 1,6,7,10,16,18,20. 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i would like it to be continued
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wwwwwwwwwowow omg if this happens in DV i m sure its gona be a super super hit!!!! gd imagenation hunny!! yeh sum1 plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmm nice work Nandu... 👏 but veer is RT k n hes prince i guess....n dharam is blacksmith.... 😕
temme if m wronge 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Hey guys……this is a nice story based on the meeting of Veer and his Ladylove……it goes like this……😳

MC is a princess and in her palace there is a minister who was once caught in a robbery and so he is ordered to leave the palace……but accidentally he meets a blacksmith Veer……and comes to know that his friend is a Prince and he gets an opportunity to befriend them……now what happens is……MC comes to know about this and she disguises herself as a Village girl and then the romance starts……In a house where MC is doing some work sitting ( dressed in a Ghagra Choli and Dupatta on her head covering her face so as to avoid revealing her identity ) and Dharam , Veer and that Minister goes to the same house to rest……Coincidentally!!!!!😛

Veer : Its so nice to relax here with the sweet smell of the flowers……

Dharam : And yes , Veer……we've got a nice and a trustworthy friend too!!!!!

Veer : Ya……thatz right!!!!!

MC : But you can't trust anyone blindly……without actually knowing who that person is!!!!

Veer : ……Excuse me ……but who are you to talk in between us????

MC : Wow……U seem to be asking this question to the owner itself!!!!!

Veer : Alright……I'm sorry……but plz……can u tell me ur name or show me ur face……

Without further replying……she gets up and heads forward but Veer is determined and he holds her hand……

Veer : I won't let you go without seeing ur face……( Actually her way of speaking and arguing made him her Deewaana……)

MC : Sorry……but we're not allowed to show our face to any stranger……( angrily )

Veer : But I wanna see ……( he demands….)😉

MC : Nooo……I CAN'T!!!!!!.....( Shouting )

Veer : OK……then at least lemme know ur name……

MC : But what are you going to do with my name……this happens to be our first and last meeting!!!!!

Veer : I dun care about that……Plzzzzz……lemme know ur name!!!!!

Dharam and Minister are enjoying the scene like an audience

MC : I said I can't……( she pushes him back and runs away ……and Veer is now in dilemma )

Dharam : Ahem……Ahem……and may I ask what was all that?????

Veer : I too dunno……why was I getting attracted towards her……but I'm sure we'll meet again and then I won't leave her……😳

At night……

Dharam and Veer are sleeping since it had started raining and they had to spend that night there itself……

The minister comes to murder Dharam with his sword and then……

MC : Stop!!!!!.......and she hurts him……

Both Dharam and Veer get up and are amazed!!!!!

MC : He was trying to kill both of you and I stopped him……shall I kill him????

Dharam Veer : No……leave him there itself……we'll take care of him……

MC : OK……my job is done now……I must leave……

Veer holds her hand and this time slightly tight……

MC : Leave me……I said!!!!

Veer : No……don't you remember what I said……I won't leave you without knowing ur name and seeing ur face……

And suddenly the dupatta falls down and he comes to face her……Veer is like completely mesmerized in her beauty……

Veer : ( Trying to propose her……but asks……)……how did you know about this man???

MC : Hez a minister in my palace……

Dharam : PALACE????!!!!!

MC : Yeah……Palace……I'm a Princess of so and so place and my name is -------

Veer : Wow……what a Beautiful name……I LOVE YOU , ------……I wanna marry you……I LOVE YOU , MY SWEETHEART!!!!!!😍

Alright guys……this is the basics of my story……if u wanna continue u can do and suggest too……I hope u all liked it and do reply guys……it took me sooooo…… long to think of some stuff like this ……Plz do comment !!!!!!😃

mmm gd choice of raining but dont u think sagars would use their new weather styl LIGHTNING!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i will continue

MC: kiya? pyar? 😕 tumse pyar karna to duur ki baat hai hum to tumhe jante bhi nahi?

veer: to jaan jao

mc: is 😳 😳 cuz she finds veer cute and likes him to inside 😉

dharam: veer hume jana hoga subhe taak hume ---- gaw mien hona hoga...

mc: alivda(wth a upset face)

veer: khabi alvida na kehna hum phir milenge 😉

mc: is shy and smiles 😊

dharam: chale?

veer: chalo 😭

as soon as they go mcs chunari gets stuck to veers clothes 😃 shes trying to get it out but veer is just staren at her beauty 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz still continue w/the story i like it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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GUd......both of ya NAndu n MUska weldun 👏
Nandini Bhat thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well done,Muska... 👏 ....and Thanx for appreciating,guys!!!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey Nandu veer is prince or blacksmith......

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