A story I created......Plzzz do read it!! - Page 12

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

read the next twinnes
it's d same written dear...

i didn't know there wuz more.....😆
wow....our ideas are ssoooo alike😆 😆 ...i luved ur continuation😉 ...it wuz great👏 .... and soo wuz nandini's👏 ....is there more.... 😉 😆 😆
ps: sry ishita...i know there's not suppose to be any chatting...but i dun want to hurt anyone's feelings by not commenting there fantastic work 😭 😭
twin(vice)😳

no one continued...pleezzz do...i wanna read more.....u guys are soo talented.... 😳

yep dear twinnies..
Thnks for ur intrest 😛
we know that but have to find some time to write it
nandini has her exams going on
& i had some work 😭
don't waorry we'll continue .........
as soon as possible dear. 😳

hey evey1 iz doing a great job but i really like the story so please continue to cultivate the story more

Originally posted by: minal45

hey evey1 iz doing a great job but i really like the story so please continue to cultivate the story more

yeh thnks for appreciating the work 😳

i will post the next 2moro 😳 wait till then 😆

Herez the next part.... 😛
Recap : MC says that she'd surely like to visit the mela.... 😳

Contd :
Both MC and BF are on their horses....still in his thoughts....(Background Song...Mela Dilon Ka Aata Hai....Rashi,do chk it!!!) 😆
There in the mela...
Dharam : Kya tumhe lagta hai ki woh aayegi?
Veer : (Determined)Haan,woh zaroor aayegi,use aana hi padega!!! 😳
Dharam : ....aur agar woh nahin aayi...toh..?
At that moment,MC arrives but she doesn't see DharamVeer...
Veer : (With raised eyebrows... 😆 )...Dekha???
Dharam : Haan bhai,dekh liya....use bhi aurrr tumhe bhi!!!!
Veer was staring,staring and staring at her.... 😳
Dharam : Ab sirf dekhte hi rahoge ya kuch karoge bhi??
Veer : Kya karoon....jab woh mere saamne aati hai....mera Dil Garden Garden Ho Jaata Hai!!! 😆
BF : Yahaan aake kitna accha lag raha hai...hum dono akele.....
MC : Akele kahaan...itne saare log toh hain...
Veer : Arre yaar....woh Bandar kaun hai jo meri----ke peeche pada hai??? 😡
Dharam : Pata nahin...shaayad uska PREMI....(he says teasingly).. 😆
Veer : Tum chup hi raho toh behtar hoga... 😡 ...aur waise bhi us Bandar ko aur bhi bandariyaan mil jaayengi is mele mein.... 😆
BF : Woh dekhiye....Choodiwala!!!
MC : Hume nahin chahiye...(Searching for Veer)
BF : Par....par kyun???Aapko toh choodiyaan pasand hain na??
MC : Haan...Magar hume nahin chahiye....
BF : Kya aap kisi ko dhoondh rahi hain???
MC : Ummm....Nahin....Nahin toh!!!Bhala main kisi ko kyun dhoondhne lagi??? 😊
Veer has an idea!!!He sends a man to divert their attention and he dresses up like a Choodiwala.... 😳 ....so that he can atleast touch her.... 😛 ...and hez successful!!!! 😃
To be continued....

nice part nandini! keep posting 👏

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Herez the next part.... 😛
Recap : MC says that she'd surely like to visit the mela.... 😳

Contd :
Both MC and BF are on their horses....still in his thoughts....(Background Song...Mela Dilon Ka Aata Hai....Rashi,do chk it!!!) 😆 (yup good dear😛.)😆
There in the mela...
Dharam : Kya tumhe lagta hai ki woh aayegi?
Veer : (Determined)Haan,woh zaroor aayegi,use aana hi padega!!! 😳
Dharam : ....aur agar woh nahin aayi...toh..?
At that moment,MC arrives but she doesn't see DharamVeer...
Veer : (With raised eyebrows... 😆 )...Dekha???
Dharam : Haan bhai,dekh liya....use bhi aurrr tumhe bhi!!!!
Veer was staring,staring and staring at her.... 😳
Dharam : Ab sirf dekhte hi rahoge ya kuch karoge bhi??
Veer : Kya karoon....jab woh mere saamne aati hai....mera Dil Garden Garden Ho Jaata Hai!!! 😆 (lol garden garden...a song..Tujhe dekha to yeh janna sanam pyar hota hai dewanna sanam..)😆
BF : Yahaan aake kitna accha lag raha hai...hum dono akele.....
MC : Akele kahaan...itne saare log toh hain...
Veer : Arre yaar....woh Bandar kaun hai jo meri----ke peeche pada hai??? 😡
Dharam : Pata nahin...shaayad uska PREMI....(he says teasingly).. 😆
Veer : Tum chup hi raho toh behtar hoga... 😡 ...aur waise bhi us Bandar ko aur bhi bandariyaan mil jaayengi is mele mein.... 😆
BF : Woh dekhiye....Choodiwala!!!
MC : Hume nahin chahiye...(Searching for Veer)
BF : Par....par kyun???Aapko toh choodiyaan pasand hain na??
MC : Haan...Magar hume nahin chahiye....
BF : Kya aap kisi ko dhoondh rahi hain???
MC : Ummm....Nahin....Nahin toh!!!Bhala main kisi ko kyun dhoondhne lagi??? 😊
Veer has an idea!!!He sends a man to divert their attention and he dresses up like a Choodiwala.... 😳 ....so that he can atleast touch her.... 😛 ...and hez successful!!!! 😃
To be continued....

wow nandu good one... 😳 👏

WOW rashi and nandini..u both r great 👏
Lovedd all the parts..dey r just awesomee !!!! 😃 Rock on u guys 😛
Plz continuee...

Thanx for appreciating,guys!!! 😛