Anything for love (AK), p30 pg49 NOTE - Page 4

I just read the first two parts, and I must say, you have done a great job! The story is really interesting and I love your writing style. 👏

The way the 10 year old Zaib interjects his own comments here and there reminds me of "A Series of Unfortunate Events." The author of that does the same thing...as the narrator, he constantly explains what's going on and sometimes talks about his own situation as well.

So far I like Zaib's characters...he seems like a fun guy. I have a theory about what might happen...but I'm not gonna say it. Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 waiting for more thx great part

thankyou for reading and appreciating

glad u liked it

continue reading and enjoying.

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome, I liked it 😃

hey thanx. I read ur ff and i really like it so im glad u liked mine too.

Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

awww loved it! i liked the Writing in black where you sort of explained stuff that was really good! 👏 I love Anagd-Zaib relationship its really sweet! Although i hope its Angad & Kripa together lol 😛 cont soon x

thankyou for appreciating Puja. I didnt have the style in my mind when i first thought about it but when i began writing the idea just popped so i decided to use it. im glad it clicked.

dont worry its not always going to be Angad and Zaib 😛 😛

Kripa is going to be a very important person for both of them.

wel continue reading and enjoying.

Originally posted by: deeya123

i think zeb and kripa both will fall in luv but she will end getin married to angad.well thats only a guess.
nice part.

Hey deeya u seem to read my mind. 😆 😃

thankyou for reading and appreciating

continue reading and enjoying.

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

I just read the first two parts, and I must say, you have done a great job! The story is really interesting and I love your writing style. 👏

The way the 10 year old Zaib interjects his own comments here and there reminds me of "A Series of Unfortunate Events." The author of that does the same thing...as the narrator, he constantly explains what's going on and sometimes talks about his own situation as well.

So far I like Zaib's characters...he seems like a fun guy. I have a theory about what might happen...but I'm not gonna say it. Can't wait to read more!

thanx for reading and appreciating.

interesting observation. I havent read that story but im glad u liked the style i wrote it in. it was just an attempt and i cant believe everyone liked it.

I am trying to do that too. I'm using the 10 yr old Zaib to narrate all the behind the scene stuff basicly.

hey im open for suggestions u know so if u do have theories so pls go ahead an share them with me. it might even be much better than what i ahve in mind.

wel continue reading and appreciating.

grt part..but i hope this doesn't lead to a love trianagle...cont. soon

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part..but i hope this doesn't lead to a love trianagle...cont. soon

thanks

well i cant say anything right now but theres no fun without any twists right?

well contune reading and enjoying. 😃 😃

nice part...
but what's kripa's relationship with the family????
conitnue soon

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

nice part...
but what's kripa's relationship with the family????
conitnue soon

thanx

that would be revealed in the further parts.